tunspear: [color=#770077][/color] I just start to dey read today... Sleep don carry me go.... I go continue later.... ... D story sweet o.... Page three..... Seven more to go....

thanks man, hurry and catch and train...
im waitin-

Teebegs: Nice 1.waitin 4 updates.keep prayin guy.

thanks man
just updated tho

Swaq.wiz:
Just loving it... Am following u bro keep it UPPP

thanks man

shebi we don enter FP?

Kip it burnin kiddie...daz d spirit

Wow!

I just found this thread. I'm quite disappointed and yes I await the next update.

Daniel2802: shebi we don enter FP?

na so o-

Oga jay make we use anoda update take celebrate na

Marieenkay: Kip it burnin kiddie...daz d spirit

kid momma ;-o
hw r u, never knw u were on Naira...
anyways thanks jawe

Rex Jeezy: I just found this thread. I'm quite disappointed and yes I await the next update.

awww
(sad face)

no p uve found it naw, next update is tonite or 2mao

Damex333: Oga jay make we use anoda update take celebrate na

mehn na true talk o ( f page spiirt)
no worry updates go dey come wella this time
;-))

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mehn na true talk o ( f page spiirt)
no worry updates go dey come wella this time
;-))[/quote.
Dat means u av bin starving us wit update b4 u made it 2 FP? Dat God u revealed ur secret ursef ... Congrat, hapy 4 u. U dserve it

powerful story line

powerful story line... moooooooorrrrre

Waz awt ov naira..4 a whyl,buh i had 2 open a new acct cus ov dis story...xo puh lease...do not kip me in suspens abeg

jayloyexten:

;-))
thnks bro,
i owe u lots u know (winks)

yea u owe me.

jayloyexten:

awww
(sad face)

no p uve found it naw, next update is tonite or 2mao

Thank God, waiting for the next update

followed silently from episode 1....bro u so mad on paper....u even got me scared a lil.....kudoz mahn at least in a while literature has gotten me thrilled.... thumbs up.......and as a calabar boy I will say mbok update fast fast nanga

im sorry i could not update as promised i had some exigent responsibilities from church, work and home concurrently.
im also running a carol nite tomorrow, i play d sax.

however i would not keep u long, the episode is almost ready,
expect it today,
thanks, with fidelity.

daverebranded: followed silently from episode 1....bro u so mad on paper....u even got me scared a lil.....kudoz mahn at least in a while literature has gotten me thrilled.... thumbs up.......and as a calabar boy I will say mbok update fast fast nanga

im glad to have u all these while, all these months ff, im grateful.
and i also feel excited to have revived the dying embers of literature to a fire in u.
thanks again.
updates comes soon.
i wunt keep u long.

Marieenkay: Waz awt ov naira..4 a whyl,buh i had 2 open a new acct cus ov dis story...xo puh lease...do not kip me in suspens abeg

oh thanks dear
wouldnt keep long...

Abithel: powerful story line... moooooooorrrrre

thanks...
sure ull get more... ;-))

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lollz...
thanks flozzy

am soo loving this story.. saw it yesterday and had been glued eversince..

am done oo,. its your turn to update bro

1stly I strongly commend ur creative n writing prowess...ur usage of figuratives, and I even saw some forms of rhymes n rhythms, in all nice Job. Bt on a corrective note, d spellns esp Suprise shud b note, being n been shud b differiated and sometx omissions observed actuali distorts sentence meaning. Bt in all I must give it up 4 U. Kudos.

jayloyexten:

awww
(sad face)

no p uve found it naw, next update is tonite or 2mao

[quote author=Rex Jeezy][/quote]

Oga Jay. . .lol. You dey mock me ni?

Abegi. . . .I wan see the update by this time tomorrow. "Succulent parts for libido excellence" Pastor Salami nor wan wise abi?

63

As I heard those subtle words of betrayal, it was as if my bile duct diverted into my heart; I could taste the horrible bitterness. How could he? How could the priest do this?

My body became as cold as those miserable bodies stored up in the mortuary. I did not know when my eyes became so clouded with tears that they poured out like a drum full of water. I tried to suppress the feelings, I tried to hold back the tears but keeping them back was as holding fire in my bosoms. So I allowed the tears to pour down I allowed them to flow as a zigzag stream up on till they kissed my neck in coldness and gathered around my head.

My face became swollen, I heard so many loud voices banging inside my head, ‘you are doomed, and this is the end!’
I did not know when I began shaking my head vigorously in refusal.

As I starred at the knife in the hand of the priest, my skin began to have a strange sensation. It was as if, a million flies were grazing the tip of my body hairs.
My skin was reacting to the touch of the knife, even before it ever came close.

Who would be the first person to die?

Suddenly-

‘Priest!’ Salami screamed as he froze in shock
‘Priest, I do not believe in ghosts!’

My tears dried as I watched the sudden drama.
All the other volturis turned right and left in shock starring at pastor Salami.

‘That girl…that girl’ he said pointing at Sandra that lay beneath me.

‘What about her?’ the priest questioned with a face of confusion.

‘It seems that all the other volturis that know about this girl is dead, what is happening? Who is she? She is not Sandra, you are the priest do not tell me that you do not know!’

‘How do you mean?’ the priest dropped the knife back into the bowl in a gesture to give him full attention.

‘Capon was the person that captured her, grasshopper was the person that brought her head to me, Solomon was the person that killed her, aside these people no body was aware of what happened that night’ he scratched his head.

‘That night? What happened that night; was there something you did not tell me?’
The priest asked curiously.
Suddenly a loud voice called out in aggression-
‘Oh you fool; the scale has just fallen off your eyes but not your brain. I am glad you know that you are the next to DIE, you will DIEEEE you will surely DIEEEEEE!’ Sandra yelled.

My heart jerked.

Everybody turned and faced her.
I could read their deepest thoughts. They wanted to rip off her flesh from her bones. However, there were uncertainties.
What if she is indeed a ghost? If our leader is scared, who are we to be bold?

There was pin drop silence. Nobody could utter a word, rather their eyes wandered confusedly, from left to right; from Salami to Sandra.

‘You see what I am saying, this girl is not a human being she is a demon!’
Salami said after a moment of shock.

(I have never seen a pastor that is so scared of demons, well that is between. ;-))

‘Tell me what happened; although I wish we had discussed it in the chambers and not have to bring irrelevant issues to scare young volturis’

‘Priest, there is no secrecy in this, our empire is tearing apart due to the exploits of this demon can you not see it. Is that not why we decided to rip of their flesh off this morning?’

‘What happened’ the priest asked again.

‘It all happened yesterday, or I wish capon is still alive’

‘But he is dead, so just continue’

‘It all started yesterday…’ he began.
‘Great volturis, please you can have your seats’
He waited for everybody to grab a seat before he continued.

‘Capon went out of the empire in the morning, after the strange call that the journey would be changed. You know that the bastard had a prize-giving ceremony to attend…’

I hoped Sandra was paying close attention, although I could not really understand her and her threat. Is she for real? Is she a demon or she is just acting?

He continued.
‘Capon just wanted to go out and so he did. However, when he came back he came with a girl.
‘He said that he had wooed her into his car and afterwards gave her a tranquilizer candy that made her sleep. That was how he sedated her and brought her in.’

‘It was strange of him, capon was not a womanizer, and probably his attempt to womanize caused his death.
When I probed into his strange act, he narrated to me on the phone that the girl was so beautiful and irresistible, tender and young.’

‘What do you want to do with her?’ I had asked him.

‘Oh, this cup shall not pass me by. I want to get into her. I want to penetrate her. It’s been long a woman made me this hard, this Hot. I want to have sex with her, oh mehn, I can’t even wait, my milk is almost dropping... ha-ha-ha
I love my sex-mates young and clean, just like her’

‘If you want to just have sex with her, why bring her to the empire, have you forgotten that our existence is clandestine?’

‘Oh not so president, I want to have her in full’

‘What do you mean by have her in full?’

‘I mean I want to consume everything about her staring from sex to her raw flesh, you know that she is so fresh, I mean so so fresh. Her skin is clean you would love it’

‘Hmmm, well what can I say?’

‘You can say bye, we will see later’

‘Capon, Capon, are you still there? Please wait’

‘Yes what is it president I am still here’

‘You said the girl’s skin is so fresh, isn’t it?’

‘Oh as fresh as the morning dew’

‘Hmmm-‘

‘Yeah’

‘Would you mind if I made a request’

‘Well let me see if it is grantable’ he said in-between laughter.

‘Okay to be precise, I will like to have the girl’s breasts and head, well, even if it is just one. You see, these days it is as if I am running out of sexual energy and motivation. I need libido strength you know’ (laughing)

‘Oh priest this is my territory, no trespass!’

‘I know, that is why it is a favor’

‘Well president, I am sorry to bounce you, but I need her breasts too. They are young and plump, as two soft puf-puffs, oh taste and see that the lord is good! Ha-ha-ha.
But I am sorry, I may spare her head, but to spare her breasts, I am sorry, that is not in my power to give’

‘Oh I wish you could just honor my request’

‘But I’m sorry that is all I can do’

‘I know and that is why I called it a wish’

(I really wanted it, although we have stock in the archives. You know there is something different in freshness. )

‘Yeah’

‘We shall see later today’

‘Yeah’



It was about nine PM yesterday when he called me back-
‘Oh president, the girl is so interesting, I bleeped and bleeped and bleeped, in fact she died in the process. Poor bi’ch, she was even a virgin’

‘Awww, not good’

‘Yeah, but not bad either’

‘Of course’ (chuckling)

‘Well her death is not a bad development because she would die after all. I will take out the parts I need and store her in the archives.’

‘Don’t forget our deal’

‘Deal sustained’
‘When I came in at midnight I at once ordered for her head, I wanted to have a tasty pepper stew, and crush some brain meat.
Capon sent grasshopper to get the head and he delivered. When I saw the head, I knew that Capon had not exaggerated anything. The girl was indeed beautiful.’

‘I took it home and my wife cooked it, we ate it this morning before coming, I even crushed her two eyes with my molar, my wife crushed her tongue, and that way we consumed the whole head in pepper stew.’

He gave a short pause.
‘Priest you would not believe that the girl I ate this morning is that girl lying there, I have never seen a cannibalized reincarnate before!’

‘See I even snapped her on my phone for record purpose’
He brought out his phone and showed the priest.
The priest nodded.

‘These days strange things happen’ the priest remarked.

‘No this is not just strange, this is evil’

‘Priest, I zipped her in the black bag which purifies the ballistic spirits she may be having while alive. You know the way it works, or priest what is happening to your powers are they beginning to fail, do you want to take a trip to India and reawake your powers?’

‘My power never diminishes or depreciates, if anything wrong happens we would probe into it. There is no power, no cult, no organization, that is stronger than volturis, and we cannot be intimidated!’
Now to everybody-
‘Or can we be intimidated?’

‘No, never, we cannot!’ they responded in unison

‘Before I make my decision is there any volturis with a suggestion or comment, we are brothers, and we need to take a common stand’ (priest)

Scorpion was the first person to shoot up his hands.
‘Thank you great priest.’ He began.
‘You have led us through hard times, through vale and heights, through caves through plains, through demons and powers that had tried to consume us.
You have predicted happenings with perfection, you have brought us thus far, we are grateful to you. You are such a gift to us’
He said as he bowed, other volturis followed.
The priest also bowed in appreciation.

‘I strongly agree with you that your powers have not failed and cannot fail, they remain with you up on till death’

‘Now concerning this strange development, I knew from the onset that these two
Creatures are nothing but demons! They have EVIL written all over their faces if you take a critical look. From the way the boy talks to the way his eyes open…’

Salami nodded. Why wouldn’t he? He had tasted of the sharpness of my mouth. ;-)

‘But I am of the opinion that we should not have discussed this in their presence, you know it sounds somehow…’ he tried to continue.

‘The deed has been done, we are asking for contribution on the deeds and not criticism of the way the deed was narrated to the audience’ the priest cut in

‘They are going to die after all’ the priest added

‘I laugh at your foolishness!’ Sandra blared ‘You fool you think you can kill me? I cannot die, only mortals can. Today, you shall die, before midnight; mark my words!’

‘Ahh!’ everybody reacted with shock.
The next moment they were all whispering something to a neighbor.

‘We cannot be intimidated, we have priest here. We cannot be intimidated!’
Scorpion rose, and others chanted after him.

Salami could not utter a word; his eyes were as dim as death.

‘This girl that is acting as a demon, what power does she even have? I strongly believe that she is only playing on us. She has a very sharp mouth and that is all, she is just a bloody mortal!’ Scorpion challenged.

‘You will die today!’ Sandra yelled.

‘Who are you to say that I will die today, are you my god?’

‘You god cleans my buttocks with his tongue!’

‘What?’ everybody shouted- Grumbling.

‘You are just blabbing, prove your power if you have one, prove it, fool!’

‘One more word from you and I will pick up that knife in the bowl and sink it into your chest’

‘You are impotent, a blabbing mortal that can do nothing!’

Suddenly the knife rose up from the bowl without hands and in the speed of light, it sunk into the side of his stomach.

‘Ahh!’ he wailed as he crashed on his knees.
‘Who the hell are you?’
Fresh blood began to spread around the wound.
The knife entered in completely, the only part left of it, was the handle.

‘You are only lucky that I did not sink it into your heart, you would have been a dead man by now’

‘Who taught you psycho kinesis?’ the priest asked curiously.

‘Its only you that have ever done it, and it was not as fast as this-’ Salami whispered to the priest, but I could read his lips.

‘No, this is not psycho kinesis; she has more than one spirit. She can separate them and do so many functions. In fact right now one of her agents are standing right beside you with a battle axe, I can see it with my spiritual eyes’

‘Jesus!’ the pastor said as he flinched in fear towards the priest.
When he caught the fearful eyes of other volturis, he kept calm.

‘Whhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaat do you want, o thou evil spirit sent from the pits of hell, what sacrifice did I not do?’
He screamed.

‘I am not evil; else I would have killed you a long time ago’

‘What do you want?’

‘Untie me first, this chain is annoying. And if you do not untie me and this boy atop me, I will snap out the chains and make you a hanger!’

‘Jesus!’ Salami muttered beneath his breadth.

‘Please untie her before she kills us all, I’ve never seen something like this’
A volturis suggested.

‘Would nobody attend to me, cant you see that I am bleeding?’ scorpion wailed in pains.

‘If anybody goes near that man, I will snap out his neck with my spiritual hands’
Sandra threatened.

‘ele yi o gidi gon, I said this one is strong!’ I heard a volturis whisper to a neighbor.

;-D