Ol boy, talk wetin she commot before I vex o.

Wow! Wat a wöderful towy...nothinq to kip me busy on nairaland aqn sha...ehya!

badoooo...nyc one brodarly

Wonderful write up man! Great Story,i dey wait your new story ooo.What an end! Your suspense fit kill person o..

Nice write up bro..more ink to ur pen

If i hear say u finish d story there.. Ehn..
But y na. Wet Ife bring out abeg na?

Am gonna b d last 2 comment 2day.Congrate chistar.U kept ur promise.Bt u beta tell me wetin ife give u o.Cos e no go makes sense o

What did Ife bring out na? Ain't leaving here until you finish narrating your story.

Luk chister!!!!
If u think u cn just end d story like this u are a gunner o.
Cum and complete it, ur else...
Hmmm hmmm


i comment my reserve.

Chistar since u started iv bin a silient follower nd lover of ur story if u no show ba complete am smtin go happen o
Abi mk we watch out for part 2 as in all naija movies nd books
Talk o bros I wud kidnap u nd ur family ooooo I no de joke

Wowww. Thats wonderful, Good or will i say great ending, although it end in suspense.
I am guessing she brought out a Flower.
I will like us to end this wonderful story with
(Miley cyrus >>> We cant stop)

nice! Nice!! Nice!!!....you all no chister is strongheaded, he wont tell you what she brought out...lol

Nice piece and gr8 write up...twas captivating, thrilling and suspense filled.... looking forward to another one frm u soonest...paste da link here wen its ready

chistar wats dis nw? wat type of suspense is dis? i just op dis is d part 1 nd d end cos if it is,i will neva 4giv u 4 dis.

Babie Ghagha: chistar wats dis nw? wat type of suspense is dis? i just op dis is d part 1 nd d end cos if it is,i will neva 4giv u 4 dis.

dnt mind im z jokinq, dz jez d end of prt1 z cominq bck for part 2 or better stil d final of prt1...

Lmao nice story good work chistar.

To God Be The Glory

This wz a gr8 write up............it jxt reminded me of my days at FGC,Okposi!

Lol, una no go kill me with laff... eiyah, I wish I could tell you guys what the 'something' was but that would spoil the fun na abi don't you guys think so?.

4 dose of you expecting a new story, err... When I start one, you guys would be d first to know as I'll post the link here and dose of you who follow me would get first hand posts of my short stories that I plan to try out.(I hope it works out)

I really appreciate all the comments I've been getting, I really appreciate Ɣ'all, you guys make me wanna write more and more.

chistar01: Lol, una no go kill me with laff... eiyah, I wish I could tell you guys what the 'something' was but that would spoil the fun na abi don't you guys think so?.

4 dose of you expecting a new story, err... When I start one, you guys would be d first to know as I'll post the link here and dose of you who follow me would get first hand posts of my short stories that I plan to try out.(I hope it works out)

I really appreciate all the comments I've been getting, I really appreciate Ɣ'all, you guys make me wanna write type more and more.

Wat she brought out was a nuclear weapon dat killed all of em

Danpersie31:
My hrt joined 2geda wit 2cows,a car,4 weddings,and 500,000 naira

habatically! complete the money 1 million na, sell the cows and add the money join.


but me no dey fit keep heart well oh, so take back ur heart

Sanguine:

lol, yu ain't serious.

Danpersie31: Wat she brought out was a nuclear weapon dat killed all of em

nawa oh... Lmaoo

The End!

Wow! Nyc

Phew! Finally. You've achieved a feat and created a mark for yourself on literature section, 2 completed stories already and a large fan base of readers and followers, kudos dude, you should be proud of urself



as for the story, I've always wished i went to a boarding school because the stories that the boarders ever have to tell always intrigue me... But as it is, i wouldn't want my kids going to a boarding school still. Ironic hunh?

And...


#the phrase is actually the 'sixth sense' not 'the fifth sense'. We already have five natural senses and it is assumed that 'a sixth' sense helps people get insight, foresight, feelings or gut instincts of things than they should.


Welldone, i say again

Chistar why are you acting like this nah you didn't tell us what she brought out na wa ooo anyway nice story u've got here
Phew so this story don end

Vivy Gift: The End!

Wow! Nyc

thanks bae

princesa: Phew! Finally. You've achieved a feat and created a mark for yourself on literature section, 2 completed stories already and a large fan base of readers and followers, kudos dude, you should be proud of urself



as for the story, I've always wished i went to a boarding school because the stories that the boarders ever have to tell always intrigue me... But as it is, i wouldn't want my kids going to a boarding school still. Ironic hunh?

And...


#the phrase is actually the 'sixth sense' not 'the fifth sense'. We already have five natural senses and it is assumed that 'a sixth' sense helps people get insight, foresight, feelings or gut instincts of things than they should.


Welldone, i say again

about the sixth sense ish...thanks dear, I'll modify the post.

About the boarding school ish, I'll have loved my kids to go to one but boardings schools of nowadays are a shadow of itself already, talkless of years to come.

And having a large fan base and stuffs like that... No comment just know that my head is swelling at the moment, am waiting 4 ASUU to call of strike so that you can have the time to write a second story, am patiently waiting.

Cute bliss: Chistar why are you acting like this nah you didn't tell us what she brought out na wa ooo anyway nice story u've got here
Phew so this story don end

lol, that's the idea! Telling you guys would spoil my fun, I like to keep you guys in the dark. Thanks anyway, see ya wen I see ya.

The rock5555: Ghost mode activated

Da rock anoda badosky d only nutty pastor /preachers son..ogbeni mr man go $ complete yah wrk joor I'm waitin oo b4 I cal mr sikiru 4 u say na here u come hide..

Chistar my man me jst come ooo as per say as @ 1am now I jst finish readiny ur previous complicated life now hoping to see an amended life of chistar here, while simultaneously reading ur junior Badosky da ROCK555 whu giv us raw how it all hapen wtout mukina hiding any part of it on his own story..mehn u guys rock...anoder kudos to GLOWSCENE

princesa: Phew! Finally. You've achieved a feat and created a mark for yourself on literature section, 2 completed stories already and a large fan base of readers and followers, kudos dude, you should be proud of urself



as for the story, I've always wished i went to a boarding school because the stories that the boarders ever have to tell always intrigue me... But as it is, i wouldn't want my kids going to a boarding school still. Ironic hunh?

And...


#the phrase is actually the 'sixth sense' not 'the fifth sense'. We already have five natural senses and it is assumed that 'a sixth' sense helps people get insight, foresight, feelings or gut instincts of things than they should.


Welldone, i say again

this girl has a nice rapport with fellow writers.

I didn't know chistar didn't know that it should be '6th sense'.

I was thinking he was bringing out another meaning with '5th sense'.

Like I see people write '5th dimension'.

In my view this story was rushed.
Chistar lost his will to continue.
It seemed pointless.
This story had little ambition and focus unlike 'my complicated love story'.

The motive of this story i think is to throw light to why he was who he was at 'my complicated love story'.

I think princsa can bear me witness.

I beleive that what makes chistar outstanding is that he writes 'his true life story. Not fiction and fantasy.

Chistar portrayed true life as more romantic than many fantasies.

@olasha, thanks bro, I appreciate.

@chinedumo, hmmm, about d 6thsence thing, I really dnt know what I was thinking about but it was a pure error on my part.
Then about having no will to continue? Errr.. *scratches head* I'll get bac to u on dat, I'll be creating a blog next week and am going to feature this story again but am gonna re-write it and take it 4rm a different angle (its going to be based on the same Michael Odoh but pardon me when I say I'll have the 'will' dz time . Less I 4get, like Yemi wouls say, no story can be 100% true so there is a little fiction here and dere sha. Thanks all d same.

U must tell me d 'something'

chistar01: @olasha, thanks bro, I appreciate.

@chinedumo, hmmm, about d 6thsence thing, I really dnt know what I was thinking about but it was a pure error on my part.
Then about having no will to continue? Errr.. *scratches head* I'll get bac to u on dat, I'll be creating a blog next week and am going to feature this story again but am gonna re-write it and take it 4rm a different angle (its going to be based on the same Michael Odoh but pardon me when I say I'll have the 'will' dz time . Less I 4get, like Yemi wouls say, no story can be 100% true so there is a little fiction here and dere sha. Thanks all d same.

alright sir.

Remember. Don't try too hard to impress. Umuadas especially.
Enjoy your moment sir.