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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by lazywealth(m): 3:26pm On Dec 24, 2008
When you like to make some sense
Then think about adsense
Not like a sense of rest
But like a sense of quest
When your reminiscence seems so tense
Like that of a sense of pretense
That is when you make the sense! grin

Adsense is all about sense
just like a vision in a lens
where the lens bring out the sense
it's like a sense of the best
Like a crest on the vest
That has the sense of the license
to make wealth from sense
now i'ts clear that adsense makes the essence! cool

Don't take position on the fence
Try today the place of adsense
For the financial difference
what a splendid experience
To make the sense with google adsense! cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by lazywealth(m): 3:29pm On Dec 24, 2008
When you like to make some sense
Then think about adsense
Not like a sense of rest
But like a sense of quest
When your reminiscence seems so tense
Like that of a sense of pretense
That is when you make the sense! Tongue

Adsense is all about sense
just like a vision in a lens
where the lens bring out the sense
it's like a sense of the best
Like a crest on the vest
That has the sense of the license
to make wealth from sense
now i'ts clear that adsense makes the essence! Cheesy

Don't take position on the fence
Try today the place of adsense
For the financial difference
what a splendid experience
To make the sense with google adsense!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by lazywealth(m): 3:31pm On Dec 24, 2008
When you like to make some sense
Then think about adsense
Not like a sense of rest
But like a sense of quest
When your reminiscence seems so tense
Like that of a sense of pretense
That is when you make the sense! shocked

Adsense is all about sense
just like a vision in a lens
where the lens bring out the sense
it's like a sense of the best
Like a crest on the vest
That has the sense of the license
to make wealth from sense
now i'ts clear that adsense makes the essence! cool

Don't take position on the fence
Try today the place of adsense
For the financial difference
what a splendid experience
To make the sense with google adsense! cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:47pm On Dec 24, 2008
you dint actually make sense
and the rhymes are so extraneous and confusing
plus you posted it more than once
and it aint bloody

@tbk
how does it feel to be devoured now by Poison Ivy grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 4:17pm On Dec 24, 2008
@tbk
how does it feel to be devoured now by Poison Ivy

say it english. devoured by who?
i dont wanna banter on ur thread o so leave me jeje.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:28pm On Dec 24, 2008
chickening out now aint you *quack-quack-quack* grin
obviously you want to ignore the poem i wrote on you
do as dude, and for the records you are free to type whateva u like
regardless cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 5:07pm On Dec 24, 2008
chickening out now aint you *quack-quack-quack*
obviously you want to ignore the poem i wrote on you
do as dude, and for the records you are free to type whateva u like
regardless
u don't know me gurlie, i do only those who can match me wit for wit, salvo 4 salvo
i don't do twerps. and if u want me in ur kingdom, kindly do it ladylike and imme respond accordignly.
was the poem underneath for me? wow
u blood sucking demon grin grin
i know what to do wink

but on a brighter note
i could have you for breakfast
skin you alive for my pleasure
dance to the shrills of your pain
suck every ounce of blood you have left
discard your cacass to my snakes and vultures
just for the pleasure of it
the horror of it
and the amusement it brings


so stay dude,
be my next plaything

i cannot die but live to declare the glory of the Lord in the land of the living u poof grin grin
gat few hours/mins to run along so let me see what uve gat u bloody princess Karishika smiley
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:11pm On Dec 24, 2008
i actuall dint want a battle with you
but you keep stalking me angry
anyways, pricesss karashika i like that cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 5:22pm On Dec 24, 2008
i actuall dint want a battle with you
but you keep stalking me
anyways, pricesss karashika i like that

battle with me? stalking u?
are u outta ur mind? how? where?
i find ur posts annoyingly amusing hence the 'aggro'
u spinhead shoulda known tht wasnt 'stalking' thats taking a piss outta u .But if u are too narrowminded to grasp that, then no probs
its ur world.

u love to talk sha, itz gud for ur profession grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:26pm On Dec 24, 2008
now if you would kindly leave, i need to attend to my customers
you are hopeless talkin to sad
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 5:40pm On Dec 24, 2008
now if you would kindly leave, i need to attend to my customers
you are hopeless talkin to
grin grin grin NO. u invited me and now im here
what are u selling? Blood?
olodo
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by akinsadeez(m): 2:02pm On Dec 28, 2008
He craved blood,
like a tsunami flood,
red blood,
played God,
(with)preys floored,

His enemies, he carved out,
knives out,snuffed out
the life,with one cut,
to the gut,

just before,
they begged for,
another chance,
last chance,
no; thanks
with raised hands,
red eyes,
he brought down,
the raised knife,
why;cuz he craved blood.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:23pm On Dec 29, 2008
nice poem
i need blood too cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Cayon(f): 8:47pm On Dec 29, 2008
princesa:

nice poem
i need blood too cheesy
grin grin grin And all along i thought i was the only crazy one on this forum

Peace
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 10:45pm On Dec 29, 2008
Cayon:

grin grin grin And all along i thought i was the only crazy one on this forum

Peace

Show us the blood stains on your knife, Cayon.

Give us a bloody rhyme
Even if jut one crimson line


Peace. Or, even in war-time!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by solaceguy(m): 10:16am On Dec 30, 2008
K
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by meexteriox(m): 1:11pm On Dec 30, 2008
Hi Princesca,
You still rememeber our first encounter?
Bloody rhymed poems?
Why not rhymes like Don Moen?
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:43pm On Dec 30, 2008
hi dude wink
i dnt actuall get ur question, why am rhyming bloody right?
well because i like that aspect of my life undecided
you should try it too
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Cayon(f): 12:51am On Jan 04, 2009
@Krrush

Am a lover not a fighter. I can write a love story/poem in a second. In fact I am writing a "love" story about my Phillipine friend in london - as told by her
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:34am On Jan 05, 2009
sure,
but you dont diversify?
too bad
give it a try oneday, who knows it might be your million dollar wink story
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 8:19am On Jan 06, 2009
whos getting bloody again this new year
abeg change the theme to sumfn else grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:39pm On Jan 06, 2009
why would i change the menu
come on join in the bloody fun cheesy
its never ending this year


whats for dinner
lara and i went to a luncheon
the host had some prosposal he brought on
but not without tasting my delicious meal he countered
lara looked at me with a knowing smile
i smiled, actually not knowing it had an intrinsic meaning to it
and voila! the host brought the steaming tray
that held our afternoon break
"ladies and gentleman, do the honours" he said
Lara opened hers, with a gluttonous smiledigged dip into its content
i opened mine, and my eyes couldnt stop bopping shocked shocked
fried tongues, roasted eyes, bloddy wine
minced meat, chopped with fine sauce
i had to throw up immediately and Lara wondered i was always a kill-joy
i excused myself and guess where i ended on a hospital bed
but now i feel so silly, cos it was only Goat meats and nothing more
atleast thats what she told me , i couldnt argue more
but i guess i will be a more complacent guest next time smiley




i would go with you tbk, what do you say
cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 7:11pm On Jan 06, 2009
u wanna go with me to where they serve human parts?
or is it ma parts u wanna use? shocked shocked

bloodywitch lipsrsealed
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:52pm On Jan 10, 2009
i have not been around to give you your bloody dose of medicine
am back now smiley

tkb417:

u want to go with me to where they serve human parts?
or is it ma parts u want to use? shocked shocked

bloodywitch lipsrsealed
you are just fronting cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 6:32pm On Jan 12, 2009
princesa
ahh, where did u go to? ur absence made this place boring. . .
at least u shlda told me u were leaving

so now that ure back, gimme some of ur bloody rhymes
i wanna read wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by djcrucifix(m): 9:22am On Jan 13, 2009
twinkle twinkle little star


how i wonder what you are


up above the world so high


like a diamond in the sky

that bloody enough? grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 10:28pm On Jan 13, 2009
I get it . .

You come dey wonder wetin you shack wey twinkle like shine-shine bobo (star). The thing come dey make you high you come dey see diamond in the sky like say na LSD - Lucy in the sky with diamonds.

Bloody good enough fer me grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by MaiSuya(m): 10:55pm On Jan 13, 2009
Black black black ship have you any wool?

yes i, yes. .
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:07pm On Jan 14, 2009
djcrucifix:

twinkle twinkle little star


how i wonder what you are


up above the world so high


like a diamond in the sky

that bloody enough? grin

very funny angry
Krrush:

I get it . .

You come dey wonder wetin you shack wey twinkle like shine-shine bobo (star). The thing come dey make you high you come dey see diamond in the sky like say na LSD - Lucy in the sky with diamonds.

Bloody good enough fer me grin
even you angry
Mai Suya:

Black black black ship have you any wool?

yes i, yes. .
you are next with the Queen of the coast angry angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:09pm On Jan 14, 2009
this is for Tbk

Back then in Syracuse
The Heinist gods paid her some due
Inflicting a blood thirsting wound
Destructive within even to those who nears its roots smiley

And on she spread the flu
Biting all, Building armies for the war
Luscious skin with tasty blood
Sucked to enrich her ever-parched taste
And stored to serve the wine on coronation day cheesy

Crowned the Queen of coast
She ventured beyond, landed in Africa
So many black, a variety rare as star
Oh well! ‘Tis good for the witch to experiment
She thought and called it a base embarassed

Three moons gone by
A feeling of death takes over our star
Africa had so much to offer
So much for death, so much for life
And innocent queen caught on the death flu
She tried, who knows, some Nigerian he
Those creeping fools with no good under their sleeves angry

The remedy is the sin
According to law of the Syracuse book
So they hunted in numbers
Every male fool that walked on the land
Now, take heed while you can
It’s so close like the air you breathe
More close ‘cos it’s in Nairaland grin

Know what she does?
She tears out their eyes
Stump out their hearts
And use their blood for her daily bathe
Then dry their carcass into powder for death concoction
Tbk I so pity you
For you are the next on the line
grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 6:27pm On Jan 14, 2009
shebi its tbk not me.

u cant kill me with all ur bloodsucking antics grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by jeythunder(m): 7:36pm On Jan 14, 2009
i'm not blood thirsty but:


Prologue
My life stinks! Nay, it is not good looking itself
Yet it gives me an ocean in the eyes
‘Tis a search through past vastly that reveals
Intransigence in mouth breath and sound
Act 1 scene 1
She sat close to the banking rivers
‘Tis true she had been sealed
But that glowing attraction stood in between
* * * * * * * * * * * * *
I lured her into dirty black
By killing her husband
So together we would dwell
Act 1 scene 2
That day involved judges
And men in co-operate black
Twenty-five years was my sentence
And on the stand, she received a judge
Nay, it is not true
What did she have to do?
I gave her freedom from her man
Kissed the ground oh my soul;
‘Tis true I done been used
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