die sonic!:

this is probably gonna suck SO BE WARNED LMAO

you honestly think that i love you
i absolutely hate you, it's nothing new
why can't you see there's no you and me,
your stupid love is driving me to insanity

i hate the way you act and the way you behave
well least you'll stop when you lie still in your grave
maybe a quick and painful death i think
how about lots of iodine in your drink

but then again you don't deserve to die so nicely
i want you to suffer, that's my thought precisely
maybe i'll cut off all your fingers and toes
then i'll pour petrol all over your clothes

but not too long or you'll get high of the odour
25 years is a small price for your murder
and when i'm in my cell with an evil smile
at least i'll be out in a little while

but you wont have that joy because you will be dead
i hope you regret everything you said
if you had been nice to me maybe you'd be alive
being with you i probably would have sufficed

there lol well thts it i cudnt think of anything about 2 words into it to be honest so it probably wont make a lot of sense

See those word emboldened
That’s how I want it to be dude
I Love it to the fullest
They make me high to the fullest
Hmm another wizard in the block,
Hope You can deliver and not just talk
Bring in more gory rhymes
Let the witches be proud of a daring wizard
Not like the rest to condemn
So Welcome to the coven
This Is official from Poison Eva
Or simply call me Sheba

Ps. It doesn’t suck, not in the least

meeen, see this princesa of a witch
Gasping for breath, blood and leech

How I wish oreshade has the time
To scribble with chain saw on your bossom

Some painful lines of blood meshy poetry
To stop your gnashing teeth of fear and tyranny

How I wish I had the leisurely times
To stop you from feeding on maggoty worms

That you have suddenly become their god,


Have got two more tests next week before my exams, till then stay THIRSTY coward of the underworld,

princesa:

in my kingdom, i dont watch my back . . . . you should do the watching

i love nasty, i love bloody and am totally in its atmosphere
wrapped in its red lglistening hands
getting all the comfort cos i would rather be nowhere!
simply put am in the fullest of my elements

Now Dreams come true in Hades as far as they aint saintly
whateva you wanna do
how gory it feels
how wonderful it makes you feel
even if it on Queen Sheba . . . . me
i will be waitng, cladded in the deepest crimson red you've seen
a python by my both sides
holding a drink for you in the skull of a man
coo you with the sounds from gnashing of teeth in the outer cell
while my co hots gather around to make you the new fun
i shall help and rescue you but that doesent mean you are susceptible to them
cos watch out you might just be the next

You sure know how to bring out the beast in this surgeon . . . . Aahhwwoooooooooooo !!!!!

oreshade:

meeen, see this princesa of a witch
Gasping for breath, blood and leech

How I wish oreshade has the time
To scribble with chain saw on your bossom

Some painful lines of blood meshy poetry
To stop your gnashing teeth of fear and tyranny

How I wish I had the leisurely times
To stop you from feeding on maggoty worms

That you have suddenly become their god,


Have got two more tests next week before my exams, till then stay THIRSTY coward of the underworld,

Am not the coward of any world under or above
much less my own niche"underworld"
good to have a feel of you though
i thought u were gonna let some oda take ur place
be tru wit ur exams and come party with the witches

Krrush:

You sure know how to bring out the beast in this surgeon . . . . Aahhwwoooooooooooo !!!!!

uhmm am gonna have a new dear deer soon

hey bloody wizards and witches
work on your rhymes
we just getting bloods
without rhymes
how sweet it will be with rhymes
till am back again in bloody rhymes
keep rhyming please

hmmm
interesting
blood suckers!

oh St. Lucifer!
just like old times
Tbk and Ore

im not tbk or u have bloodstained eyes?

am always mis-spelling that
apoligise this instant for that
or i call the wrath of thunder on you

@ princesa, tkb and others
are you there, am back from my law tests
and will like to kill princesa before I kill my exams
hey friends and compatriots
come lets join hands
to stop the breath in this
blood sucker with ease,

expect my poems
and lets all make our poems
rhyme to give our love for poetry in peace

, TO MEMORIES THAT FADES,
Though this princesa of old
Queen of the underworld

Has sure forgotten her past
I crave to remind her like a pet

That lingered in her hands
While she breath her last

For I was there as she lay dead
With her scary blood-shot eyes

Crying for help while it popped
Out with meshy stream of blood

Dangling out of her eye-sockets
Clogged with crooked strings of veins

All looking so aweful so to dread
Like the stinky vomit of ugly pigs

As memories starts to fade

I remember so well at ease
How her bally fat head went red

As if an octopus had eight-tightened
Her neck and stopped all the blood

So that she went ripe and
Bulbous like the tomato stead

The sticky mucur from her nose
And the gushing slippery spittle from her lips

As the tkb spells thread
Her stone-blocked squinty ears

To memories that fades

This spirit from the underworld
Needs to be scenicly reminded

Of her gory past
So that

This path of hate
She lays tight

Her rhymes
Will shiver to dust
12.18am 18.02.08

hmm
my friend came back to party with me
giving such strong gory lines as this ;

oreshade:

, TO MEMORIES THAT FADES,
Though this princesa of old
Queen of the underworld

Has sure forgotten her past
I crave to remind her like a pet

That lingered in her hands
While she breath her last

For I was there as she lay dead
With her scary blood-shot eyes

Crying for help while it popped
Out with meshy stream of blood

Dangling out of her eye-sockets
Clogged with crooked strings of veins

All looking so aweful so to dread
Like the stinky vomit of ugly pigs

As memories starts to fade

I remember so well at ease
How her bally fat head went red

As if an octopus had eight-tightened
Her neck and stopped all the blood

So that she went ripe and
Bulbous like the tomato stead

The sticky mucur from her nose
And the gushing slippery spittle from her lips

As the tkb spells thread
Her stone-blocked squinty ears

To memories that fades

This spirit from the underworld
Needs to be scenicly reminded

Of her gory past
So that

This path of hate
She lays tight

Her rhymes
Will shiver to dust
12.18am 18.02.08

and i so much appreciate it, that you came back
but i wont be able to counter-react with you
something else came up
but i will drop some line from time to time
so that the memories of witches dont fade away
Up live witches forever more!!!

i go through the diary of my beloved
indeed what i read my mind couldnot
stomach, the pains, the woes, the shame,
tribulations my beloved encountered,

a charging sensation of wrath envelopes me
as i earnestly wished i was path of the past,
to get hold of my beloved tormentors
to pour out my hateful vengeance of blood for blood,

to watch listlessly as the every ounce of blood giving life
spills out of guts.
my life i envison in a blaze of furry,
getting hold of a sword, slowly piercing it into the heart
twisting it with strength and vigor,

as i watch truimphantly the life ebb away,
my wrath and quest for vengeance been satiate,
i fling the corpse into the field,
for the vultures and birds of the night to devour and savour . . . , . . . .

a tap on my shoulder
brings me back from my faraway thoughts
i smiled at my beloved, if only my beloved knew my
thoughts of darkness and wickedness.
satiated

@oreshade
hey lawyer, how you dey?
its good you came back o
i think the witch has resigned to fate. YOU WON!!!!!!!!

Princess
what has come over you?
you dont wanna rhyme bloody again?
how is u?
tell me wassup na. ur wings clipped?

AS SHE FLEW SO LOW
Dusky was the night
As she deeply depart
From the devil's sitte
Flowing rhymes so wit

And sonorously tight
Like the mildly tint
Sound of fiery flute
In the dreadful desert

Her eyes glowed
And her wings did
Spread like glossy bed
Of sea surface stead

Her face also radiated
Like the starlike diamond
Twinkling in the cloud
With shimmering rays to plead

So happy she was
With her bloody rhymes
Piercing every ears
That listened so close

Obsessed with her rhymes
She flew so low her wings
On the tkb llano grass
Where lay sharp pegs

Filled with oreshade rhymes
Waiting for princesa's flights
To come carefully close
So that it clips dead her wings

Lo and behold
As the lovely Lord
Would have it the blood
Of princesa splashed

From her curny heart
While her eyes went
Red and her face went
Dim like a forest in scary night

When she flew so low as if no sight
Over the tkb llano of rhymy pegs tilt
Her blood dripped so slow and quiet
Piercing her veins and tissue-soft

Skin of bloody rhymes
So that she stops
Those murderous
Lines that wets

Her throat with blood
Of friends and
Strangers Striving so hard
To live peacefully in this world
09.11pm 20.02.09

grrrrrrrin grrrrring the phone rang
He new what the call was
he ws tired of the life
but that life only he had
He dint even ask who was speaking

he only wanted to know who he would be visiting
never will he hold the worm breast of a woman
my dear will clinch to the cold butt of his gun
he had no reason not to go that night
But he had reasons not to come back

as he swept through the dirty streets of ojuelgba
he with a smile to you to get out of his way
geting o his destination
he was back to where it all began
he had arrived at 5 landlord house jakande estate

this was a job that had to be done
this was a job he would have done
but then some powers above vengeance live
the BEAUTY shade had was one of those,
with no funds he would have done the job
but the job was shade,
shades picture he had on the wall of his mind when ever he is getting it with the soaps in the bathroom, shade had to live and die.


@princa you are one ill moder 4kin poet,

@ area and other poets
Please let me help you
After reading your poem
I think what you need focus
On is your message first
And then your rhymes
For if that is not done right
You wouldn't have achieved what
You intend at the first place
And some will see it
As lack of creativity at most

The last stanza to your poem
Was supposed to be the revelatory part
Of your poem but then you confused it
I couldn't discern the gist of the poem

Was it that he didn't kill shade
Because of her beauty
Considering the fact you had
Said he wouldn't even be feel
The softness of a woman's breast
Anymore

Or is it that he killed her
All these questions still remain unanswered
Though I know you understand
Your poem and it kind of make sense
To you

You should make it coherent
So that it makes sense to us also
And as you can see though I do not
Intend to rhyme I kind of rhymed
Whilst giving you this advise

Write another bloody poem
And lets see it together
Keep it up

@ tkb
I'd say we won
For its a collective thing

@ princesa
You probably are working
On an explosive poem
To suck my blood with rhyme
My exams will start soon
So I wont be able to rhyme back
But when am through I'll be back
To rhyme you dead

@ nairaland poets
Do not let her canaine
Pierce your skin
So as to suck your blood
I'll be back soon
To kill her again
If she rises again

I really enjoy reading this thread. i really do. now where is Princessa to suck my blood

Hmmmm
I wonder why they say the witch retired
Or stayed behind to bring up more rhyme fire
Cos when she appeared as a guest
And saw the joyous dance of her deers
She felt the anger and urge to put them back to their crawling place
Back in hell where the fire blaze more than a furnace

Can you imagine the triumphant dance of these notorious elves
Tkb, Ore, a new guy, even Epi, but do stay clear cos I don’t deal with girlz
My meal is with the male groomz
Cos in their blood I get my main grooves
Starting from the pleasure of slicing their eyez bit by bit
To the protein to nourish my health from the sumptuous meal of their tasty meat
I would dance also to the rhythm of their pathetic pleas
And coil in pleasure to watch the Oscar winning film of their heart been ripped, piece by piece
They would know a witch never take defeat
Even if it is just an imaginative fixture of their hysteric dreamz
Cos it can never be easy to make me scream.

And girl I loved the picture you put
Though that aint me, am way more cool
Cos the queen Sheba I know the devil can die for
Aint that duckling from the coven third floor
But Let help me you a bit
Picture her in a red flowing, armless fitting top
Bloody sexy to the last whistle call
The kind that entice the men to their pleasure and their definite fall
Cos thatz what she standz for
Beauty and death wrapped up, nothing less but everything more

Now back to this Deers of mine
Here is the death for them stored in line
And this time am making it worth every blood-drop
So they would never be a rebirth of their gibberish, pathetic winnerz talk
Let me start with stabbing thru the carcass of their heart
Then tie them to the stake so they burn to ash
But wait! Not so fast!
Such a death is too quick and sharp
So not the pleasure I had for myself planned
I had better slide down their semi-burnt back
Then released them to the slave master for the further exciting pack
Hear their mercy shrills echo round the town
Their prides being damped by the slave master slash
While I watch from afar the pleasure from their ceaseless cries
I move to tilt up their once ego proud mouth
And with the utmost pleasure, pluck out their eyes with my bare hands
Cut out their earz with the bluntness of knives
And watch with joy as it satiates the hunger of my lovely catz
Back at their bloody face, my spit runs down with mucous and phlegm
And while they give up the last of their battered fate
My triumphant laugh echoes round the world wide plane
I have a paroxysm of satiated fun
Cos I have gotten them back to the floor
I step happily on their dead carcass
And order for it to be pieced and scattered
So while in death they would serve a purpose
To feed my adorable cat and his pet, the cockroach
All done, I go back to the warmth of my lover
Am sure you it’s Lucifer, Cos I love him like no other

Confessions of a witch
Jesus! This is insane
Am just a rhyming brat that let the fun lead her astray
But don’t hold this against me
Please the beauty of heaven, make me to see
All this I ask in the name of Jesus my king
Amen

Note too
Princesa is preparing for an exam
Don’t ask which, just bear it in mind
And please pray for me to pass
So I won’t be here always to rhyme
But that doesn’t mean I retire
So don’t let my thread expire
Thank you

thats all

@ princesa
Meeeen, that was fantastic
Quite creative and ingenious
With its dramatic taste astreak
And its rhyming lines

Psychologically, I think
You are soft girl that's in this
Just for poetry's sake
And nothing more thus you aren't a freak

Well nice to know that
wish you good luck in your exams
And wish me good luck also miss
With your dried blood stain face that lingers

Till we meet again precious pearl
STAY THIRSTY!!!

Pray and hope you pass your exam. Good luck dear


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princesa:

Note too
Princesa is preparing for an exam
Don’t ask which, just bear it in mind
And please pray for me to pass
So I won’t be here always to rhyme
But that doesn’t mean I retire
So don’t let my thread expire
Thank you

thats all

@ princesa
Olulu is looking for you in the thread: So you think you can rhyme,

@ epi
Wish me good luck also

oreshade:


@ epi
Wish me good luck also

Pardon my bad manners darling. I wish you all the best on your exams and hope your school year is full of enlightening experiences. And don't give the Profs any trouble the way I did

Best of luck!!!

epi:

Pray and hope you pass your exam. Good luck dear


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thanks, you are a darling

oreshade:

@ princesa
Meeeen, that was fantastic
Quite creative and ingenious
With its dramatic taste astreak
And its rhyming lines

Psychologically, I think
You are soft girl that's in this
Just for poetry's sake
And nothing more thus you aren't a freak

Well nice to know that
wish you good luck in your exams
And wish me good luck also miss
With your dried blood stain face that lingers

Till we meet again precious pearl
STAY THIRSTY!!!

thanks you know am not a freak
am just caught in the fun of it
and trust me to remain thirsty
or hear anyone call me defeated or retire
then i will spit venom with all fire

oreshade:

@ princesa
Olulu is looking for you in the thread: So you think you can rhyme,

i see it
but those people are just getting me confuse with their fight
but am loving it no less

If this is what you call rhyme
Then you won't see my dime
Can't you see why?
The thread is so dry,
This is not an attempt to deride
I would rather love to grind
to pieces all this amature rants
that makes me want to wet my pants

Before you send me to the gallow
Please, learn to swallow
The bitter pill of admonishment
To attain the real accomplishment.

Hump!
The audacity of a stray deer
You aint satisfied with what you see here?
Then shoo! Find urself a cave near
You so arrived when the witches got satiated
For queen Sheba just ate and rest in the coven of her love
Even at that, a bad aura have on you radiated
She’d rather starve than taste the Margot that on ur skin crawls enough
Your infested skin-meat will make the witches purge
And we don’t want another Syracuse surge
Yuck!

The words here connect with real human life
Be it bloody or on life pleasurable part
It’s the best touch to who we are
So U have no right to see it as crap
You and the infamous brash
If you are wise you would see the obvious line
And put in your mind the obvious fact

You either join the bloody pack
Or get the mess out
Not condemn the work of all and sundry
Cos your myopic eye thinks they are below ur standard

funny enuff, i've always admired this thread
tho' within its walls i always feared 2 tread!
so much blood-sucking and vampirism
but it doesn' t deserve ur unfair criticism
if u don't like it, walk on by
n for d babe who started it all, abeg u try!

@ maeden
Welcome damsel maeden precious
Love lust or bloody rhymes?

@ princesa
Still working on a pearly poem for you
But I should post it in the other thread
Been unable to come up with thick blood
Kinda busy with my exams too
And dont mind that myopic critic
If what is here is not poetry then lets ask
What is poetry?

princesa:

Hump!
The audacity of a stray deer
You aint satisfied with what you see here?
Then shoo! Find urself a cave near
You so arrived when the witches got satiated
For queen Sheba just ate and rest in the coven of her love
Even at that, a bad aura have on you radiated
She’d rather starve than taste the Margot that on ur skin crawls enough
Your infested skin-meat will make the witches purge
And we don’t want another Syracuse surge
Yuck!

The words here connect with real human life
Be it bloody or on life pleasurable part
It’s the best touch to who we are
So U have no right to see it as crap
You and the infamous brash
If you are wise you would see the obvious line
And put in your mind the obvious fact

You either join the bloody pack
Or get the mess out
Not condemn the work of all and sundry
Cos your myopic eye thinks they are below ur standard

Princesa, we dey quarrel?
Truly though, you deserve a laurel
Do i really deserve ur bashing?
Can't remember giving u any lashing

Getting bloody with rhymed poem?
How will he feel, i mean Don Moen?
A beautiful thread, hampered by so much blood sucking
Skin tearing and eye plucking

@ Maedan
Me? Unfair criticism?
I was talking about the bloody baptism
I will take your advice though
Walk on and not waste my precious dough

maedan:


funny enuff, i've always admired this thread
tho' within its walls i always feared 2 tread!
so much blood-sucking and vampirism
but it doesn' t deserve ur unfair criticism
if u don't like it, walk on by
n for d babe who started it all, abeg u try!

thanks my lady, you are welcomed as an onlooker

meexteriox:

Princesa, we dey quarrel?
Truly though, you deserve a laurel
Do i really deserve ur bashing?
Can't remember giving u any lashing

Getting bloody with rhymed poem?
How will he feel, i mean Don Moen?
A beautiful thread, hampered by so much blood sucking
Skin tearing and eye plucking

@ Maedan
Me? Unfair criticism?
I was talking about the bloody baptism
I will take your advice though
Walk on and not waste my precious dough

sorry if i was tough but you are also welcomed to drop by anyday

oreshade:

@ maeden
Welcome damsel maeden precious
Love lust or bloody rhymes?

@ princesa
Still working on a pearly poem for you
But I should post it in the other thread
Been unable to come up with thick blood
Kinda busy with my exams too
And dont mind that myopic critic
If what is here is not poetry then lets ask
What is poetry?

waiting patiently

@ oreshade,

welcome ke? i'm just showing respect!
i'm not so bloody as u'll expect
i like to read about them in the books
but not to get into their hooks
by "them" i mean the witches n wizards
they make me scared deep in my gizzard!

well thanks anyway, i appreciate the invite
but like princessa said, my eyes i can ignite
by looking in once in a while
but from all d blood, i'm running a mile!!!