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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 4:34pm On Feb 12, 2009 |
die sonic!: See those word emboldened That’s how I want it to be dude I Love it to the fullest They make me high to the fullest Hmm another wizard in the block, Hope You can deliver and not just talk Bring in more gory rhymes Let the witches be proud of a daring wizard Not like the rest to condemn So Welcome to the coven This Is official from Poison Eva Or simply call me Sheba Ps. It doesn’t suck, not in the least |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 10:38pm On Feb 12, 2009 |
meeen, see this princesa of a witch Gasping for breath, blood and leech How I wish oreshade has the time To scribble with chain saw on your bossom Some painful lines of blood meshy poetry To stop your gnashing teeth of fear and tyranny How I wish I had the leisurely times To stop you from feeding on maggoty worms That you have suddenly become their god, Have got two more tests next week before my exams, till then stay THIRSTY coward of the underworld, |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Krrush(m): 11:31pm On Feb 12, 2009 |
princesa: You sure know how to bring out the beast in this surgeon . . . . Aahhwwoooooooooooo !!!!! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:18am On Feb 13, 2009 |
oreshade:Am not the coward of any world under or above much less my own niche"underworld" good to have a feel of you though i thought u were gonna let some oda take ur place be tru wit ur exams and come party with the witches Krrush:uhmm am gonna have a new |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 11:03am On Feb 13, 2009 |
hey bloody wizards and witches work on your rhymes we just getting bloods without rhymes how sweet it will be with rhymes till am back again in bloody rhymes keep rhyming please |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 12:10pm On Feb 13, 2009 |
hmmm interesting blood suckers! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:20pm On Feb 13, 2009 |
oh St. Lucifer! just like old times Tbk and Ore |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 2:57pm On Feb 13, 2009 |
im not tbk or u have bloodstained eyes? |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 5:22pm On Feb 13, 2009 |
am always mis-spelling that apoligise this instant for that or i call the wrath of thunder on you |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 6:23pm On Feb 17, 2009 |
@ princesa, tkb and others are you there, am back from my law tests and will like to kill princesa before I kill my exams hey friends and compatriots come lets join hands to stop the breath in this blood sucker with ease, expect my poems and lets all make our poems rhyme to give our love for poetry in peace |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 12:42am On Feb 18, 2009 |
, TO MEMORIES THAT FADES, Though this princesa of old Queen of the underworld Has sure forgotten her past I crave to remind her like a pet That lingered in her hands While she breath her last For I was there as she lay dead With her scary blood-shot eyes Crying for help while it popped Out with meshy stream of blood Dangling out of her eye-sockets Clogged with crooked strings of veins All looking so aweful so to dread Like the stinky vomit of ugly pigs As memories starts to fade I remember so well at ease How her bally fat head went red As if an octopus had eight-tightened Her neck and stopped all the blood So that she went ripe and Bulbous like the tomato stead The sticky mucur from her nose And the gushing slippery spittle from her lips As the tkb spells thread Her stone-blocked squinty ears To memories that fades This spirit from the underworld Needs to be scenicly reminded Of her gory past So that This path of hate She lays tight Her rhymes Will shiver to dust 12.18am 18.02.08 |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:25pm On Feb 18, 2009 |
hmm my friend came back to party with me giving such strong gory lines as this ; oreshade:and i so much appreciate it, that you came back but i wont be able to counter-react with you something else came up but i will drop some line from time to time so that the memories of witches dont fade away Up live witches forever more!!! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by clemcykul(f): 5:36pm On Feb 18, 2009 |
i go through the diary of my beloved indeed what i read my mind couldnot stomach, the pains, the woes, the shame, tribulations my beloved encountered, a charging sensation of wrath envelopes me as i earnestly wished i was path of the past, to get hold of my beloved tormentors to pour out my hateful vengeance of blood for blood, to watch listlessly as the every ounce of blood giving life spills out of guts. my life i envison in a blaze of furry, getting hold of a sword, slowly piercing it into the heart twisting it with strength and vigor, as i watch truimphantly the life ebb away, my wrath and quest for vengeance been satiate, i fling the corpse into the field, for the vultures and birds of the night to devour and savour . . . , . . . . a tap on my shoulder brings me back from my faraway thoughts i smiled at my beloved, if only my beloved knew my thoughts of darkness and wickedness. satiated |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 10:40am On Feb 19, 2009 |
@oreshade hey lawyer, how you dey? its good you came back o i think the witch has resigned to fate. YOU WON!!!!!!!! Princess what has come over you? you dont wanna rhyme bloody again? how is u? tell me wassup na. ur wings clipped? |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 10:09pm On Feb 20, 2009 |
AS SHE FLEW SO LOW Dusky was the night As she deeply depart From the devil's sitte Flowing rhymes so wit And sonorously tight Like the mildly tint Sound of fiery flute In the dreadful desert Her eyes glowed And her wings did Spread like glossy bed Of sea surface stead Her face also radiated Like the starlike diamond Twinkling in the cloud With shimmering rays to plead So happy she was With her bloody rhymes Piercing every ears That listened so close Obsessed with her rhymes She flew so low her wings On the tkb llano grass Where lay sharp pegs Filled with oreshade rhymes Waiting for princesa's flights To come carefully close So that it clips dead her wings Lo and behold As the lovely Lord Would have it the blood Of princesa splashed From her curny heart While her eyes went Red and her face went Dim like a forest in scary night When she flew so low as if no sight Over the tkb llano of rhymy pegs tilt Her blood dripped so slow and quiet Piercing her veins and tissue-soft Skin of bloody rhymes So that she stops Those murderous Lines that wets Her throat with blood Of friends and Strangers Striving so hard To live peacefully in this world 09.11pm 20.02.09 |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by area(m): 10:44pm On Feb 20, 2009 |
grrrrrrrin grrrrring the phone rang He new what the call was he ws tired of the life but that life only he had He dint even ask who was speaking he only wanted to know who he would be visiting never will he hold the worm breast of a woman my dear will clinch to the cold butt of his gun he had no reason not to go that night But he had reasons not to come back as he swept through the dirty streets of ojuelgba he with a smile to you to get out of his way geting o his destination he was back to where it all began he had arrived at 5 landlord house jakande estate this was a job that had to be done this was a job he would have done but then some powers above vengeance live the BEAUTY shade had was one of those, with no funds he would have done the job but the job was shade, shades picture he had on the wall of his mind when ever he is getting it with the soaps in the bathroom, shade had to live and die. @princa you are one ill moder 4kin poet, |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 11:30pm On Feb 20, 2009 |
@ area and other poets Please let me help you After reading your poem I think what you need focus On is your message first And then your rhymes For if that is not done right You wouldn't have achieved what You intend at the first place And some will see it As lack of creativity at most The last stanza to your poem Was supposed to be the revelatory part Of your poem but then you confused it I couldn't discern the gist of the poem Was it that he didn't kill shade Because of her beauty Considering the fact you had Said he wouldn't even be feel The softness of a woman's breast Anymore Or is it that he killed her All these questions still remain unanswered Though I know you understand Your poem and it kind of make sense To you You should make it coherent So that it makes sense to us also And as you can see though I do not Intend to rhyme I kind of rhymed Whilst giving you this advise Write another bloody poem And lets see it together Keep it up |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 9:24pm On Feb 21, 2009 |
@ tkb I'd say we won For its a collective thing @ princesa You probably are working On an explosive poem To suck my blood with rhyme My exams will start soon So I wont be able to rhyme back But when am through I'll be back To rhyme you dead @ nairaland poets Do not let her canaine Pierce your skin So as to suck your blood I'll be back soon To kill her again If she rises again |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Epi: 12:26am On Feb 22, 2009 |
I really enjoy reading this thread. i really do. now where is Princessa to suck my blood
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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:42am On Feb 23, 2009 |
Hmmmm I wonder why they say the witch retired Or stayed behind to bring up more rhyme fire Cos when she appeared as a guest And saw the joyous dance of her deers She felt the anger and urge to put them back to their crawling place Back in hell where the fire blaze more than a furnace Can you imagine the triumphant dance of these notorious elves Tkb, Ore, a new guy, even Epi, but do stay clear cos I don’t deal with girlz My meal is with the male groomz Cos in their blood I get my main grooves Starting from the pleasure of slicing their eyez bit by bit To the protein to nourish my health from the sumptuous meal of their tasty meat I would dance also to the rhythm of their pathetic pleas And coil in pleasure to watch the Oscar winning film of their heart been ripped, piece by piece They would know a witch never take defeat Even if it is just an imaginative fixture of their hysteric dreamz Cos it can never be easy to make me scream. And girl I loved the picture you put Though that aint me, am way more cool Cos the queen Sheba I know the devil can die for Aint that duckling from the coven third floor But Let help me you a bit Picture her in a red flowing, armless fitting top Bloody sexy to the last whistle call The kind that entice the men to their pleasure and their definite fall Cos thatz what she standz for Beauty and death wrapped up, nothing less but everything more Now back to this Deers of mine Here is the death for them stored in line And this time am making it worth every blood-drop So they would never be a rebirth of their gibberish, pathetic winnerz talk Let me start with stabbing thru the carcass of their heart Then tie them to the stake so they burn to ash But wait! Not so fast! Such a death is too quick and sharp So not the pleasure I had for myself planned I had better slide down their semi-burnt back Then released them to the slave master for the further exciting pack Hear their mercy shrills echo round the town Their prides being damped by the slave master slash While I watch from afar the pleasure from their ceaseless cries I move to tilt up their once ego proud mouth And with the utmost pleasure, pluck out their eyes with my bare hands Cut out their earz with the bluntness of knives And watch with joy as it satiates the hunger of my lovely catz Back at their bloody face, my spit runs down with mucous and phlegm And while they give up the last of their battered fate My triumphant laugh echoes round the world wide plane I have a paroxysm of satiated fun Cos I have gotten them back to the floor I step happily on their dead carcass And order for it to be pieced and scattered So while in death they would serve a purpose To feed my adorable cat and his pet, the cockroach All done, I go back to the warmth of my lover Am sure you it’s Lucifer, Cos I love him like no other Confessions of a witch Jesus! This is insane Am just a rhyming brat that let the fun lead her astray But don’t hold this against me Please the beauty of heaven, make me to see All this I ask in the name of Jesus my king Amen Note too Princesa is preparing for an exam Don’t ask which, just bear it in mind And please pray for me to pass So I won’t be here always to rhyme But that doesn’t mean I retire So don’t let my thread expire Thank you thats all |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 3:54pm On Feb 23, 2009 |
@ princesa Meeeen, that was fantastic Quite creative and ingenious With its dramatic taste astreak And its rhyming lines Psychologically, I think You are soft girl that's in this Just for poetry's sake And nothing more thus you aren't a freak Well nice to know that wish you good luck in your exams And wish me good luck also miss With your dried blood stain face that lingers Till we meet again precious pearl STAY THIRSTY!!! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Epi: 4:09pm On Feb 23, 2009 |
Pray and hope you pass your exam. Good luck dear 1 love princesa: |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 4:47pm On Feb 23, 2009 |
@ princesa Olulu is looking for you in the thread: So you think you can rhyme, @ epi Wish me good luck also |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Epi: 11:18pm On Feb 23, 2009 |
oreshade: Pardon my bad manners darling. I wish you all the best on your exams and hope your school year is full of enlightening experiences. And don't give the Profs any trouble the way I did Best of luck!!! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 12:35pm On Feb 24, 2009 |
epi: thanks, you are a darling oreshade: thanks you know am not a freak am just caught in the fun of it and trust me to remain thirsty or hear anyone call me defeated or retire then i will spit venom with all fire oreshade:i see it but those people are just getting me confuse with their fight but am loving it no less |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by meexteriox(m): 1:38pm On Feb 24, 2009 |
If this is what you call rhyme Then you won't see my dime Can't you see why? The thread is so dry, This is not an attempt to deride I would rather love to grind to pieces all this amature rants that makes me want to wet my pants Before you send me to the gallow Please, learn to swallow The bitter pill of admonishment To attain the real accomplishment. |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:50pm On Feb 24, 2009 |
Hump! The audacity of a stray deer You aint satisfied with what you see here? Then shoo! Find urself a cave near You so arrived when the witches got satiated For queen Sheba just ate and rest in the coven of her love Even at that, a bad aura have on you radiated She’d rather starve than taste the Margot that on ur skin crawls enough Your infested skin-meat will make the witches purge And we don’t want another Syracuse surge Yuck! The words here connect with real human life Be it bloody or on life pleasurable part It’s the best touch to who we are So U have no right to see it as crap You and the infamous brash If you are wise you would see the obvious line And put in your mind the obvious fact You either join the bloody pack Or get the mess out Not condemn the work of all and sundry Cos your myopic eye thinks they are below ur standard |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by maedan(f): 6:55pm On Feb 24, 2009 |
funny enuff, i've always admired this thread tho' within its walls i always feared 2 tread! so much blood-sucking and vampirism but it doesn' t deserve ur unfair criticism if u don't like it, walk on by n for d babe who started it all, abeg u try! |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 10:31pm On Feb 24, 2009 |
@ maeden Welcome damsel maeden precious Love lust or bloody rhymes? @ princesa Still working on a pearly poem for you But I should post it in the other thread Been unable to come up with thick blood Kinda busy with my exams too And dont mind that myopic critic If what is here is not poetry then lets ask What is poetry? |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by meexteriox(m): 9:20am On Feb 25, 2009 |
princesa: Princesa, we dey quarrel? Truly though, you deserve a laurel Do i really deserve ur bashing? Can't remember giving u any lashing Getting bloody with rhymed poem? How will he feel, i mean Don Moen? A beautiful thread, hampered by so much blood sucking Skin tearing and eye plucking @ Maedan Me? Unfair criticism? I was talking about the bloody baptism I will take your advice though Walk on and not waste my precious dough |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:36am On Feb 25, 2009 |
maedan:thanks my lady, you are welcomed as an onlooker meexteriox:sorry if i was tough but you are also welcomed to drop by anyday oreshade:waiting patiently |
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by maedan(f): 3:10am On Feb 26, 2009 |
@ oreshade, welcome ke? i'm just showing respect! i'm not so bloody as u'll expect i like to read about them in the books but not to get into their hooks by "them" i mean the witches n wizards they make me scared deep in my gizzard! well thanks anyway, i appreciate the invite but like princessa said, my eyes i can ignite by looking in once in a while but from all d blood, i'm running a mile!!! |
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