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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by SterlingTowers(m): 9:45pm On Sep 06, 2013
Another rare Goldrush

A blaze brilliant and soft I found in her gaze
Like a transport of sheep grazing on a sugarly verdure
Leaves one in maze such that unfaze
Brilliant supple and supine hue, soft and pure
Her beautiful aura, eon of plenitude pride of nosegay
There I found my soft eventide of gay
In a mood of rush of blush there I find
A gold rush such a rarity of a unknown kind.

Dedicated to Shekhina Goldrush
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 3:30am On Sep 07, 2013
princesa: @kagari...that's what am talking about! blood blood and more blood angry

@badmusace...you cut the fun, would have loved to know what happened in Wesley lane, painted in redsad

@firestar...you're wondering here? dnt let the vampires know you're lost lest they clamp on you grin

what more can i say...we have awakened the darksidecheesy

Lol! Was just warming up!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by badmusace(m): 3:34am On Sep 07, 2013
THE STREET ARTIST
Down the dark alley another comes his way,
'Aphroditis herself', of her physique, some will simply say.
But, tonight she would be another hapless victim-
Another sculpture of flesh remodelled by him.

Once she approaches where he lurks unseen,
His greatest work of art yet, shall soon begin.
He will commence this hellish deed
By softening first her facial features with squirts of acid;

Then her tongue will he chew off like gum,
To keep her forcibly mum;
With his pen knife will he then inscribe on her face,
A work of abstract, highlighted by her blood's trace.

Now which man shall desire her to taste?
When all she holds dear, has he ravished in waste;
She would now simply be a jagged piece of art,
Admired only by those who has his stone like heart

And if the officers of law, come barging at his door,
He would simply claim the deed; for
A street artist simply is he,
Proud of his (latest) greatest piece, which is she!

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 8:45am On Sep 07, 2013
yipee! badmusace finally brought in the game
I could feel the heart wrenching pain
spilling off her guts
And I do hope the pen knife was blunt
so that every stroke was worth the thrust...
hehehe....the darkside reigns againangry


and Mr. sterling, we don't dedicate poems here, we tear out flesh and rip out hearts in pieces angry


#you guyz have awakened my alter ego embarassed
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by ayd91(m): 9:41am On Sep 07, 2013
WHAT HAVE I DONE!!!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 12:01pm On Sep 07, 2013
[b]
THE RIOT FOR SOUL

Birds of heavenly flight roam the air
With spear-like feathers and cotton hair
Stabbing each other amid the burning skies
As usual, the gods and darkness shut its eyes
Each smiting strong swing with feathered sword
Alas! This aerial chaos would damn the world -
Tears of violence rains poisonous blood;
Under the above flows in rickety flood

Angels battles earth's innocent demon
For who owns that special soul; its uncommon
To be absent from an 'eagle's eyes' and still abstain
From sin - thus envy rocks both gods war train
Accouterments and arsenals of captivity was launched
Gods above and below both sucker punched
Each other; damnation and falling spirits loiters
With damaged wings and melted metals

Fear envelop mortals as they poke
Their ways off the streams of flood and smoke
Capped with hope, yet thunderous roars quakes their hearts
Who would lead us through the blissful paths?
Or...Silence! let us all pray
Pray? The gods have turned us preys
Look up mate! The gods have gone astray!!
Like a prayer of an atheist they cuddled their frays


[/b]

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by firestar(f): 3:47pm On Sep 07, 2013
princesa: @kagari...that's what am talking about! blood blood and more blood angry

@badmusace...you cut the fun, would have loved to know what happened in Wesley lane, painted in redsad

@firestar...you're wondering here? dnt let the vampires know you're lost lest they clamp on you grin

what more can i say...we have awakened the darksidecheesy

An alter ego
Her name be Atlantis
Terra egged her rival
And made her sneeze
Waters sky-high ensued
Made coastlands swollen
With blood and water
Terra's turf was deluged.
...

Spin them a tale.

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Kaycee7(m): 6:16pm On Sep 07, 2013
firestar:

An alter ego
Her name be Atlantis
Terra egged her rival
And made her sneeze
Waters sky-high ensued
Made coastlands swollen
With blood and water
Terra's turf was deluged.
...

Spin them a tale.
Your poems don't rhyme, you know?
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:07pm On Sep 07, 2013
Nice Tim...its seems to be about war of the Lords/armageddon or something like that...good!


but...


you ain't rhyming bloody enough yet for me, you're yet to toll the line of the blood initiate.

I ain't feeling the raw passion and hunger for blood in the lines, badmusace has brought in the game, let me see you try some...


blood blood and more blood angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 9:11pm On Sep 07, 2013
princesa: Nice Tim...its seems to be about war of the Lords/armageddon or something like that...good!


but...


you ain't rhyming bloody enough yet for me, you're yet to toll the line of the blood initiate.

I ain't feeling the raw passion and hunger for blood in the lines, badmusace has brought in the game, let me see you try some...


blood blood and more blood angry
Seriously, if I toe that path, you might find it difficult to sleep. I'm trying to be fair here.
Dark poetry is what I have mastered from the first day I fell in love with poetry

I've decided not to write on such anymore
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:20pm On Sep 07, 2013
Now am tingling with fright...
just drop a piece of your dark poetry, and lets get a feel of bloody you can be!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by kennikazi(m): 4:51pm On Sep 09, 2013
they are two people
but answer the same name
and own the same body
one makes love to his girlfriend
whiles the other fvckes her
and on that faithful stormy night
he also got to drink her blood...

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Kaycee7(m): 4:19pm On Sep 11, 2013
Why is no one rhyming? I thought this thread was about rhymed poems.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Tolite22(m): 9:40pm On Oct 03, 2013
Black art speaks straight to my heart
Blood, tears, and things like that
Dark poetry is a hard and lonely road
I love it because
It defies race and timezones

I can see you started this thread since 2008
Lo, today, I come knocking at your gate
Princesca,
Timpaker,
I now know you by name
Very soon, you shall all do the same.

I see you all are baying for blood.
When I start,
I shall not spare the rod.
I will not pierce you with big words
I will not curse you with my tongue
My weapons against you shall be
Rum, rhyme and song.

May your words be fair and without sin
Let the dark poetry games begin!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:00pm On Oct 03, 2013
The dark side lives again!
For Tolite wants to start the blood-reign
With red rain pouring from the ryhming gate
And look ho! He even wants a playmate -
someone to pierce hearts and rip out souls in part
So Kaycee, why don't you take up my path
Lets see you rhyme in bloody demon style
And I'd be by the sideline clapping my head out
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Tolite22(m): 1:17pm On Oct 04, 2013
Those who live on the sidelines
Never make the headlines
It's time to stop playing big Sis
And throw your hat in the ring.
Bring on Kaycee
Bring on Hades
Bring on the blood gang and let's see!

How do you like your blood?
Warm, boiling or red hot?
Do you get a rush
When it from the veins gush?
Will your heart stop
When I come to stomp and romp?

I'm a vampire
Your blood rush takes me high and higher
I'll suck it slow until you quiver and tire.
Princesa,
If you think you'll remain the umpire
You're a damn good liar!

*demonic laughter* cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Kaycee7(m): 2:43pm On Oct 04, 2013
They call the beast
To say the least
Awake from his slumber
He wants to know the number
Of those who dare
To call upon fear.

He moves to the light
But finds it too bright
To venture out in the wild
Awaiting conditions mild
He reflects upon his prey
And they better pray
That he does not succeed
When he eventually proceeds.

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:08pm On Oct 04, 2013
Tolite22:
Those who live on the sidelines
Never make the headlines
It's time to stop playing big Sis
And throw your hat in the ring.
Bring on Kaycee
Bring on Hades
Bring on the blood gang and let's see!

How do you like your blood?
Warm, boiling or red hot?
Do you get a rush
When it from the veins gush?
Will your heart stop
When I come to stomp and romp?

I'm a vampire
Your blood rush takes me high and higher
I'll suck it slow until you quiver and tire.
Princesa,
If you think you'll remain the umpire
You're a damn good liar!

*demonic laughter* cheesy
hmm, someone is bent on igniting lost fire
I wonder why you wont let a witch retire
blood and claws are no more the spark?
Or Maybe I've lost the fury of the demon shark -
Wrenching, groanings, ripping and piercing
are no more to me than subdued yearnings
Can't i indeed watch from the sidelines?
I had my time, now's ur turn to shine.

But...
still the darkside lovingly calls
that metallic taste wets my soul
But i must stand, or less i fall
And make a slip to the red roller coaster roll.
Nostalgic.



#attitudeblood angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:14pm On Oct 04, 2013
You guyz are killing me cheesy
kaycee and tolite!

I hope we have prey that would come lurking round angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Tolite22(m): 3:25pm On Oct 04, 2013
Awww, I'm scared
My face has turned red
Finally, he speaks.
Here comes the beast
To my banquet and my feast.

What flavour is your hide?
How much meat is in your side?
How long can you last?
Wait for me to make some heat
To tender and boil your meat
For this high and glorious feast.

Here comes the beast
I pray he never retreats.
When the lights go dim
I shall be waiting at the back seat
I want to strike you with my fist
I want to watch you while you scream
I want to watch you whine and bleed.

As you have said,
I shall wait and pray
While I await you
My prey.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Tolite22(m): 3:37pm On Oct 04, 2013
princesa:
hmm, someone is bent on igniting lost fire
I wonder why you wont let a witch retire
blood and claws are no more the spark?
Or Maybe I've lost the fury of the demon shark -
Wrenching, groanings, ripping and piercing
are no more to me than subdued yearnings
Can't i indeed watch from the sidelines?
I had my time, now's ur turn to shine.

But...
still the darkside lovingly calls
that metallic taste wets my soul
But i must stand, or less i fall
And make a slip to the red roller coaster roll.
Nostalgic.



#attitudeblood angry

A witch never retires
Her bad deeds always backfire
Why would you want to all your blood lust subdue
When you have not paid the devil his due?

You.
It's time to stay true
To our rituals, songs and the full moon
The word is out
May your ego not head south
These words are true
I have a bounty on you!

This is not the time
To watch from the sidelines
It's the time to write
Of your dark feelings inside
The time is almost right
An end is in sight.

Fight!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Nobody: 5:47pm On Oct 04, 2013
I walked myself upon this thread
And now I stand and speak
I speak this psalm
Very earnestly
Of God's reality

Quit your yabbing humanity
And stand in awe of Almighty
Who reaches out in reality
With bouts of love and divinity
And great works, yea great works
Of strength and power and might

Stop your Sin mankind
Let his love reign in hearts

The word is known
Over ages past
Of a great and terrible war.
Mankind unites together
With ammunition and fire
To Fight against God's rule,
Against his kingdom and power

Mankind unites together against God.
I sing this great skald song

Not in this age you say?
This can't be true you cry?
Reality bears witness against you.

Stop your sin mankind!!!
Gods children shout outloud
Embrace God's love they say
Escape the wrath to come
Your sin speaks against you
Says the lord Ever true
Escape the wrath to come!


Very soon the time will come
The time of anger and wrath
Escape the wrath to come
Escape the wrath to come

Yea God's wrath shall pour
Terrible in it's hour
Against man's lawless deeds
Those days of blood and fire
Of harsh reality
Escape the wrath to come
Escape the wrath to come

Choose you this day
Whom you shall serve
God in his love and power?
Or sin in its black mire?
Remember God is strong

Choose Jesus his great saviour
Or pay in full for what you've done
In sin and lawless deeds.
Escape the wrath to come.

This is not about fear.
It's plain reality.
God loves you with all certainty
He made a way with fervency
Jesus calls out so earnestly
Escape the wrath to come

Choose you this day
Whom thou shalt serve
As for me and my house
We'll serve the Lord
And sing to him in great skald song

Listen clearly humanity
Escape the wrath to come!
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 6:18pm On Oct 04, 2013
^Aye! A prey is come, bearing gospel news
And Shall we make him pay the dues,
or watch him tread so loose?
Tolite, you seek blood for your thirst
Now the preacher comes with kingdom zest
Bring ye out your clubs, claws and broom
For now is the time to kick out the gloom
Blood, deep red, full and holy
Now flows through the witches' coven
Drink till your eyes are popping
Drink till your stomachs are churning
For The dark side finally rules again
Roll out the drums and beat me that melody of pain.

angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Nobody: 7:16pm On Oct 04, 2013
princesa: ^Aye! A prey is come, bearing gospel news
And Shall we make him pay the dues,
or watch him tread so loose?
Tolite, you seek blood for your thirst
Now the preacher comes with kingdom zest
Bring ye out your clubs, claws and broom
For now is the time to kick out the gloom
Blood, deep red, full and holy
Now flows through the witches' coven
Drink till your eyes are popping
Drink till your stomachs are churning
For The dark side finally rules again
Roll out the drums and beat me that melody of pain.

angry
shocked angry

I'll be back. cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:31pm On Oct 04, 2013
We are waiting angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Nobody: 11:00pm On Oct 04, 2013
^^^^I'm really sorry
But this thread is too bloody
And I'm greatly misunderstood

Although these words
Come from my head
Sometimes another path they take


I will these words to come
From deep within my heart
Inspired by God's word.

For when this source I use
Mens heart are blessed and good

I will not sing of blood and lust
I'll sing of reality

Yea. Reality might be bloody
Reality is just and lovely
By Gods great love I stand and speak
Of his reality.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:18pm On Oct 04, 2013
where is tolite? Don't let this prey go unscathed! angry

you dared to come in,
sit tight and face the music angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Nobody: 11:23pm On Oct 04, 2013
princesa: where is tolite? Don't let this prey go unscathed! angry

you dared to come in,
sit tight and face the music angry
angry
You're way too ruthless
For a princess angry
It seems I'll go unscathed. cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 10:16pm On Oct 05, 2013
Life's juice flows freely on the road
As two metallic monsters moans madly
A high-priced gaffe plundered his soul dead-cold

Bursted brain and iron butchered body met Mr. Scold
Squeezed in the metallic monster; overly -
Life's juice flows freely on the road

Frightened voice bonged as danger unfold
Onlookers wished he trance to the grave properly
A high- priced gaffe plundered his soul dead-cold

His body floats in his blood ; he thought he was bold
But then his soul creep out from his body quickly
Life's juice flows freely on the road

If he had listened to the warning earlier told
Death wouldn't frolic with his mishap of agony, when really
A high-priced gaffe plundered his soul dead-cold

Then the rain came, so did scavengers capering like a toad
Like 'no coffin no grave' dismembered meats lays cruelly
As life's juice flows freely on the road
A high-priced gaffe plundered his soul dead-cold



Form of poetry==> villanelle
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Kaycee7(m): 11:35pm On Oct 05, 2013
The beast stops in his tracks
Someone not of the pack
The pack he had in mind
Former prey out of mind
He turns in search
Of a promising catch

He finds his new target
Quicker than expected
Wasting not a moment
He pounces without comment
Sinking claws into skin
He feels a taste akin
To a bit of sweet
He savours the meat

He rips more flesh
Intending to make a mess
He revels in the pain
Of his prey. His main
Intent taking a side seat
In his mind. More meat
His prey's flesh. The prey
who's heart with strength frail
Beats faintly silently curses
The day he took without cause
Provoked the beast.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by timpaker(m): 8:16am On Oct 06, 2013
[b]
I am mad
Very very mad
My shrine is empty
I know my sacrifice are plenty
But I can't find them
Nothing in my realm
From my kitchen of sacrifice
Down to the forest edifice; what a surprise! shocked shocked

The gods must eat
Its favourites are red kolanut and virgin-meat
So like Abraham, a man whose story I heard
I brought out my son and chopped off his head
The sight was interesting, I saw him walk headless
Before succumbing to the throes of death; breathless -
To appease in class, I poured his blood in a tea cup
I drank & spat, danced & chanted in lingo from atop angry angry

It spoke mute, I heard It, its tacitunity amazes me;
Should I cut off the heart and the privates and put it by the tree?
It never replied - I picked up the bong
Change in my birthday suit and began a sing-song
I cleared the bowel, & the rib cage spiced my music
I hit both the bong and a melodious rib with more aesthetic
Amass came the houseflies, they twirled & danced in the open
A thunderous roar was heard - the gods have spoken
But I'm still mad
Very very mad undecided undecided undecided
[/b]
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Giddyprance(m): 9:05am On Oct 06, 2013
You sent me to hell
And i'm back with a story to tell
I don't need a bell
To ring the hate locked in my shell
I'm back for blood And now,I'd act like there's no God
I'd have love to give u an option
On how to pattern ur destruction
But I can leave u no choice
Cos I'll first whip out your voice
Then, I'd pluck out ur eyes
And take it as burger with ice
I love to eat a lot And ur fingers look like carrot
So,fingers and toes,I'd slice
And add them up as spice
Then,you'd bath in acid mixed wf water
Be sure it would make u cool and fresher
And to clear you out like a bug
I'll feed you to my hungry dog
But I'll try to retain the blood
As paint for my new Ford
I'll also retain the spinal cord
With wool on it,it'll be my cotton bud
Just as a reminder
Of the death of the murderer
That killed my son in a fire
And tried to end my career.
Hehehe...jst learning..*winks* 

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