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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:23am On Jan 16, 2009
tkb, dont dare play smart with me angry
besides, dont wriggle much
the pain will be minimal that way grin


Jeyythunder
sorry that was bloody to me cheesy
i hope you rot in jail too grin
girls are such beautiful creatures wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 4:15pm On Jan 16, 2009
ON BEHALF OF TKB
princesa
with your quota
of bloody poetry atide
it seems to be me
I smell pride
dripping from your cunny pen
like the graceful sword
of knights at bay,

better you leave
tkb and comely dive
for preys that quiver
thirstily for viscious blood
princess karashika
if they even
preys at all,

dive tall and fall
for they await splashed
on concrete floor that head
of yours that pours fully
the rhyming poems of hate and pride…
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:31am On Jan 17, 2009
you could share some pain with him too
i dont mind atall
mr. saver smiley
yours coming up shortly wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 12:31pm On Jan 17, 2009
@Oreshade
thank u very much. may God always come to ur rescue
amen!

karishika
u cannot do anything to me
all ur bloodsucking skills cant work.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:09pm On Jan 17, 2009
for our little saviour grin

Them, in the Hades world
They are one proud goddess
Don’t let them hear those words
For With their grip you won’t know the essence
Of playing the divine god
To that soul who wronged
And reaped according to his work cheesy

But now you are in their clutch
Nothing shall save, not even a church
Oh! You will be dragged through Hades walls
Ripped through the heart like a human dog
Your screams shall be their song
Your pain be their fun
The blood oozing from your battered skin
Will be the wine on your death day
The surplus, stored in for the coronation day
Where another journey will be made by a queen
And on and on goes the death spree
The blood spill, the shrill bring
And you won’t do anything about it
Except have your dead carcass mixed for the concoction
And have male death spill for all generation
Now you know not to mess with the karashika queen
The poison ivy, the deadly queen of the coast
Cos she don’t do mercy, she brings death. cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:10pm On Jan 17, 2009
tkb417:

@Oreshade
thank u very much. may God always come to ur rescue
amen!
he's dead too

karishika
u cannot do anything to me
all ur bloodsucking skills cant work.

even your spirit is a tasty meal
keep running your carcass jaw
my dogs should me help me out here wink
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 2:29pm On Jan 17, 2009
even your spirit is a tasty meal
keep running your carcass jaw
my dogs should me help me out here

shut ur dirty mouth grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:55pm On Jan 17, 2009
that my dear,
is adding salt to the already salted stew angry
and stop smiling too, in Hades, smiling is a big offence even for spirits sad
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 3:07pm On Jan 17, 2009
whos ur dear?
someone u want to suck his blood? nope, im not ur dear
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:12pm On Jan 17, 2009
offcourse you aint my dear you are my deer so to speak wink
bring those juicy blood for me suck grin
hope you are on diet too sad
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 3:15pm On Jan 17, 2009
witch!!!!

u cant do jack u this fcking jezebel. besides, i buzzed ur damn ID on ur profile on YIM, blood suckers dont chat or what?
evil child
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:30pm On Jan 17, 2009
witches dont chat with their prey na
you should be oozing blood not chatting
or wriggling in pain not tryin to bribe a witch
be warned angry


p.s am at work cant chat, just add me we will chat when am online my yim tongue
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 3:34pm On Jan 17, 2009
added u already witch

at work too
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 8:30am On Jan 18, 2009
CORONACH TO PRINCESA
as the moon was looking

at mid night just after dusk
deep in the thick forest arch

I lay beneath the shrubs
to see well screams
of a nude witch with scars

dwindle in the hades
slowly slowly splinters
of ichor dawn the forest
and the life still lingers right

so she screams so fright
that her dreadful soul walks to the hades
but it sourfully lingers
ungone swaying aback

tkb again stands
over her and thrusts
repeatedly in her navel
a sharp rod to pull

her curly abdomen
so she cried with pain
as it curled itself out

with blood dripping
on the dusty sands

even then she wasn't dead

for she is a witch
tkb again thrusts

his blunt sword
by her nipples
to cut off

fountain of blood
pour on trees
and on tkb's face
wet and tough

but she still cries
for her vicious life
to walk away fast
like the cool comet
in the clear clouds

now flat her breasts lay

but tkb still
feared she could
live so he struck
right in her lips
of screams
the sword
which pierced
her neck
right
in
the soil
to hook
down
her life
and
her dreadful
screams,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 8:39am On Jan 18, 2009
the fifth stanza is a five line stanza,the second line ends of that stanza ends at 'soul', so pincesa stop screaming your rhyming lines of bloody poetry for you will soon bleed to death from the blunt sword of tkb while I watch and smile at the death of a witch, tkb have got your back fear not,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 8:33am On Jan 19, 2009
Oreshade
man, ure the best!!!

ill give u my sister if ure not married grin
thanks
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:24am On Jan 19, 2009
you are giving your sister to a dead man dude
but when did spirits and walking dead have choices

anyway Orehsade

oreshade:

CORONACH TO PRINCESA
as the moon was looking

at mid night just after dusk
deep in the thick forest arch

I lay beneath the shrubs
to see well screams
of a nude witch with scars

dwindle in the hades
slowly slowly splinters
of ichor dawn the forest
and the life still lingers right

so she screams so fright
that her dreadful soul walks to the hades
but it sourfully lingers
ungone swaying aback

tkb again stands
over her and thrusts
repeatedly in her navel
a sharp rod to pull

her curly abdomen
so she cried with pain
as it curled itself out


with blood dripping
on the dusty sands

even then she wasn't dead

for she is a witch
tkb again thrusts

his blunt sword
by her nipples
to cut off


fountain of blood
pour on trees
and on tkb's face
wet and tough


but she still cries
for her vicious life
to walk away fast
like the cool comet
in the clear clouds

now flat her breasts lay

but tkb still
feared she could
live so he struck
right in her lips
of screams
the sword
which pierced
her neck
right
in
the soil
to hook
down
her life
and
her dreadful
screams,
you are good wizard option
but too bad your blood tastes better as a prey tongue
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 10:27am On Jan 19, 2009
this is a sequel to your everlasting pain man

A witch never dies
Not because she’s eternal
Or that those axe piercing her heart
Aint worth the damage to make her die
But because she’s got more of her transposed on every one
And each day there is a harvest of soul
Not only in Syracuse but the world in whole angry

Now you’ve got the talent
Bloody red to the palette
A good wizard option
But never! You are better sucked on
Slit nipple, torn breast, blood oozing
Is a sweet-pain, fun better with its dozen
A witch might pluck her eyes
Just to add more blood to the game
While his (Tkb) axe cut through her heart
Her fellows clap to the pain
Don’t you get it? It’s a continuous ritual
Whether on her or on some prey, it’s so very mutual undecided

I see you a die hard one
This to them is a test to their effect
Cos now killing you won’t bring the game
No! Neither adds to the play
Not even initiation to Hades
Though you possess their in built trait
That is revenge, bloodiness, incessant hunger for avenge
We will never have an uncleanse mixed with the pure breed
So they have a better plan with you
Hold your breath, and wait for their return cool


how do you like them now
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 10:58am On Jan 19, 2009
I smell fear oh witch of the underworld, now that you do not want to die lets the public's opinion on who is dead in the both of us, i think that is a better way to die,though am going to the killer blow soon I do not want to take your screams of fear as a sign of you still living,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:04am On Jan 19, 2009
OH! YOU CAN EASILY TRANSFER YOUR EMOTION OF FEAR TO MOI grin
ITS ONLY NATURAL, ATLEAT A LAST CHANCE AT FEELING ON TOP OF THINGS
BUT ENJOY UR FREEDOM WHILE IT FUCKING LAST angry
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by tkb417(m): 11:54am On Jan 19, 2009
Oreshade
dont let that witch patronize u o
if u can kill her, pls do.

she scares me 4 real. im gonna enlist the support of some wizards in the house
farotika comes to mind (the in-house babalawo) grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 12:22pm On Jan 19, 2009
tkb417:

Oreshade
dont let that witch patronize u o
if u can kill her, pls do.

she scares me 4 real. im gonna enlist the support of some wizards in the house
farotika comes to mind (the in-house babalawo) grin
its actually the other way round
but i dont give a hoof of what he does or you do
and go call babalawo undecided
but best assured that we are in the same line,
but one might over-rule others cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by Epi: 6:26pm On Jan 19, 2009
"put the fucking ring on it or get killed"

@Princess

Well this is soo dayum funny that I shared it with family and friends. You are something else. T'was like, off the chair, on the floor, DWL grin grin grin grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 9:43am On Jan 20, 2009
if you mean my signature
ohwell, you know guyz for whom they are, if you dont take
very harsh action, they wont know you are serious and comply grin grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by oreshade(m): 9:32pm On Jan 20, 2009
DEAD SHE LAY
as dawn arose
the county oozed
and vultures swayed
of breakfast so early

i lingered to see
the nude witch
as she lay dead
in forest thick

with congealed
black-reddy blood
stagnant on path
of scars and pain

etched on her skin
like the tear of claws
from blood thirsty beast
so pale she looked

with eyes closed down
she lay frightly fallow
legs apart filled with
mucor and sticky pus

unlike the old days
she lay to hades
not on the gallow
but in the hands of tkb

with his blunt sword
to inflict sweetened pain
not the fast sharp death
of no vengeful recourse

there she lay dead I say
with no screams to reach
just the lifeless carcass
as a lesson to teach

other witches that wallow
in the dark groping for preys
to think of a day dead in forest
like logs maggots having to dine

on you while you say nohing,
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 11:19am On Jan 21, 2009
very bloody keep it up grin
but i wonder why u neva come with revenge but avenge undecided
yours up soon cool
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by olulu(m): 1:13pm On Jan 21, 2009
hmmmm, sum good shit here,

but, damn, scary
very scary.
shocked shocked shocked
and
too serious, too bloody, ,

walks off, looking nervously at his back

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Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 1:25pm On Jan 21, 2009
dont run join in the bloody fun grin
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by olulu(m): 1:47pm On Jan 21, 2009
am a lover,
not a fighter,
a thriller,
not a killer,

blood, smite. sword, suck. prey. . . . . . . . . .
damn
what happened to words like. . . . . . .
love, breasts, yansh, kiss, smooch, long tin

just send d sole surviving female to me
i will treat her right
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 2:05pm On Jan 21, 2009
sure,
the witch dnt mind suck . . . . . .on blood
or cuddle . . . . . your dried bone
or kiss . . . . in their numbers, the blood dripping from ur heart
but one thing,
the witches dont mix pleasure with pain angry
and if you want their protege . . . . surviving female
you pay with your blood and shrills cheesy
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by olulu(m): 3:05pm On Jan 21, 2009
ehen, haaaaaaa shocked shocked shocked shocked

thank u, don't mention.
Re: Lets Get Bloody With Rhymed Poems by princesa(f): 3:27pm On Jan 21, 2009
i wish i am sorry grin
but being possesed  cheesy in this thread only
am not smiley

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