Thanks krone.. Noted!

pls whats should a Opener have and closers have..cause i can't really note the diff between 'em in bars i read...any explanation will help..

is there any specific syllabic limit a line must contain??

SuperSauce:
is there any specific syllabic limit a line must contain??

the more syllables, the dopër your written would look. i dönt rate any written that is not more than 2 syllables....

Ksslib:
Thanks krone.. Noted!

the number of syllables that you are rhyming must allign & must be at least 2.

check this example....

•People reckon Coog is so ill/Since my venom shook the roaches/Your soul... i have paid for...Heaven took the proceeds/Persia's prince levitates with sorcery and NL stood to notice/My magical text would send Sid to Aro ....like he read the 7th book of Moses/

6-syllable rhyme scheme.

•venom shook the roaches
•heaven took the proceeds
•NL stood to notice
•7th book of moses.

•I brought 10 psycho-killers from Herzegovina/Your girl won't be spared... I'd let hollows in her.....while she's reading an encyclopaedia/then have the news wrapped around her head like Ken Saro Wiwa/

5-syllable rhyme scheme

•10 psycho-killers
•let hollows in her
•encyclopaedia
•ken saro wiwa

coogar:


the more syllables, the dopër your written would look. i dönt rate any written that is not more than 2 syllables....



the number of syllables that you are rhyming must allign & must be at least 2.

check this example....



6-syllable rhyme scheme.

•venom shook the roaches
•heaven took the proceeds
•NL stood to notice
•7th book of moses.



5-syllable rhyme scheme

•10 psycho-killers
•let hollows in her
•encyclopaedia
•ken saro wiwa

alright...thanks bro

SuperSauce:
pls whats should a Opener have and closers have..cause i can't really note the diff between 'em in bars i read...any explanation will help..

it must contain crazy multies, bad flow, ffucking d0pe metaphor, wordplay & a breath taking personal punch

coogar:


the more syllables, the dopër your written would look. i dönt rate any written that is not more than 2 syllables....



the number of syllables that you are rhyming must allign & must be at least 2.

check this example....



6-syllable rhyme scheme.

•venom shook the roaches
•heaven took the proceeds
•NL stood to notice
•7th book of moses.



5-syllable rhyme scheme

•10 psycho-killers
•let hollows in her
•encyclopaedia
•ken saro wiwa

Noted! Thanks!

teddybiyasi:



it must contain crazy multies, bad flow, ffucking d0pe metaphor, wordplay & a breath taking personal punch

okies..thanks tho

Nobody's got ideas to share?

Wordplay( how to use them to fit in both context)

Punchlines(how to come about them)?

Metaphors(how to create them)?

rhymes(perfect multisyllabic rhyming )?

Any Tips About Writing Fillers?

ELYMAXiimus:


i noticed that some of us don't even know the basics of rap as a whole.
And those of us who know one or two things, nd those who almost know it all, still need to learn more, cos NO ONE KNOWS IT ALL.
So here's the thing,
if you think you've got a knowledge of RAP which is LACKING here, nd you wish for us to know about it, feel free to lecture us .
As this will improve the standard of everything here. Sometimes i see some verdicts, nd i'm like ................... Is this dude for real?
Trust me, sometimes it's not d1ckriding. It's as a result of an insufficient knowledge of the crits...

It will also help the newbies coming in to adapt fast.....

So, wadelse?

Bring it on, folks

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a comment about someone's lesson should be in the chatroom...

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hmm nice..

"Being Dope" is not the ability to pen dope bars,its the ability to recognise the wack bars you think of and refrain from spitting it.

Hope this helps some newbees

Joshuabase:
"Being Dope" is not the ability to pen dope bars,its the ability to recognise the wack bars you think of and refrain from spitting it.

Hope this helps some newbees

When you have the ability to pen "dope" bars it already means you have the ability to refrain from using generic lines

kr0ne:

When you have the ability to pen "dope" bars it already means you have the ability to refrain from using generic lines

First off I don't recognise the Sob/
Secondly,hope the above wasn't a sub/

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Joshuabase:
"Being Dope" is not the ability to pen dope bars,its the ability to recognise the wack bars you think of and refrain from spitting it.

Hope this helps some newbees

so Joshuabase, you have seen my battles. ..what do I do wrongly?

Lmaooooooooopooooooooooooooooooooooooo

bars, kini?

sinizia:


Alright. So basically a multi-syllabic rhymming involves rhymming for long, say have like 4 rhymes before ending with a punchline?

Also, can you point out with an example what is methaphor/similies? I know the rest, and i can drop multi-syllabic rhymming, i just felt like i might need those bars for the tournament proper. But i'll try to drop something tight, and see how I'm rated.

I don't want to derail flow for rank so i am redirecting you here
This was created for learning purposes, we should bring it back to life.
Read up on what has already been discussed...and if you have questions on what you have read or questions that haven't been touched yet, feel free to ask. Tag names when you do