I rate u 100 stars. The problem is only that u are too stingy with updates. Imagine just 2 episode a day ??
Why not 5 or atleast 3.
Welldone !!

DrRasheed:
I rate u 100 stars. The problem is only that u are too stingy with updates. Imagine just 2 episode a day ??
Why not 5 or atleast 3.
Welldone !!

Patience is the key brova

Update pls

Keep it up I dey feel u

nice story...abeg update quick quick make person get rest of mind...see as I dey refresh my fone steady

#keep# it up guy.so much Making sense

interesting

mr6ix:
nice story...abeg update quick quick make person get rest of mind...see as I dey refresh my fone steady

Guy all u nid na patience of cuz story wey swit na brain nd time cuk am xo plz wait ooo

Nice One Op.

[b][EPISODE 15

The next day, I told momma about my car,,,, that i don't want another car from Dad. But she wasn't happy about it. She doesn't like the idea of a girl spending for a guy,,, She advised me again telling me all sort of things. She said that, she'll also talk to Mirabel about it, to stop spending on me. She continued saying that, She can use her money to support your home when u get married if possible and not to be spending on me anyhow now. Telling me to wise up and be the man in the relationship and not otherwise. She added that she will be sending me extra money apart from my Dad's so that i won't depend on Mirabel. It was then she understands why i don't call home for money when I'm in school. She made me promise to be man enough like my Father.

I didn't enjoy her advise at first, but when i later think about it,,, she's absolutely right.

Later that day, I decided to call my Uncle the Engineer... But he didn't pick up, he could be busy or something.

I called Promise, we spoke for a while about  when we're resuming because the school has resumed already. She said she will resume next week, i told her i will be leaving home next tomorrow. She then changed her mind to resume in three days time.

I called Mirabel, and the following conversation ensued after the pleasantries...

Me: I shall be leaving home in two days time and u still haven't told me about the stuff u hid for me

Mirabel: (Laughs) Did u even try to find it at all?

Me: Well, i did tried

Mirabel: I doubt if u put in your best to find it,,, I know u. Check inside your old school bag u hung on the wall

Me: U came to my room?

Mirabel: Yep, Nancy gave me a tour

Me: So, she knew about the stuff?

Mirabel: Yep but not the content

Me: Okay, i will check it out after the call, So when are u going to school?

Mirabel: You're going next tomorrow right?

Me: Yep if nothing comes up

Mirabel: Okay, see u then

Me: Next tomorrow?

Mirabel: Yes

Me: Great, i miss u so much

Mirabel: I miss u too sweetie

After a little more chat, we ended the call. I went straight to my old school bag to fish out the stuff. I saw a parcel, i brought it out and sat on my bed to rip the wraps open ...

**Phone Rings**

I picked it up.

Me: Hello Sir

Uncle: How are u?  I saw your missed call

Me: I'm fine sir,,, I just called to hear from u

Uncle: Okay, I was busy supervising a building site. So how's everything, studies and all?

Me; All fine sir, but I'm at home still on break

Uncle: Okay, it's alright. Call me when u get back to school

Me: Okay, bye sir

Uncle: Okay, greet Naomi for me

That's what he calls Nancy, saying he don't like the name 'Nancy'

Me: I will sir and greet  Jonas and Justina for me

Uncle: They'll hear,,,,, take care ko

Me: Yes sir

Uncle: Alright

**Hangs up**

I ripped off the wraps, it was an iPad and a 4G SMILE wireless modem. Then i saw a piece of note that read....

"The small device is a 4G wireless modem containing 10gigabybe of data that u can be using without subscribing with your phone anymore. It will be renewed every month but u shouldn't worry about the subscription, it's in place to be renewed automatically and u will be getting 10gigabyte of data every month. The wireless password is ************ and please share with Nancy, it can cover the whole house. It's charger is in there, U charge it when the battery runs out.

The iPad is yours baby, go to the video folder and see something.
     
Bye for now my love"

Woah! Unlimited data for me,,,,  enough internet activities for me. My happiness faded a little when i remembered what Momma told me.

I switched on the iPad, and went straight to the video folder, there was only one video in it. I opened it and saw that it was the video tape of us kissing on campus. I was like what?!

I quickly placed a call on her and she picked up almost immediately

Me: Hello Mirabel

Mirabel: Hi sweetheart, I've been expecting your call

Me: Anything?

Mirabel: Not really, I believe U've seen the package?

Me: Yeah,,, Thanks sweetheart, i appreciate it big time but,,,, what's the video for?

Mirabel: U don't like it?

Me: No as in, I thought u and your cousin got rid of it all?

Mirabel: Yea, It's kinda romantic so i kept the last copy for myself  and u, but it seems u don't like it

Me: Not like that babe,,, its just that, u and your cous did a lot to get it off the internet and individual's devices, so what if it get leak again?

Mirabel: Who is going to leak it?  Me or u?

Me: Babe, U should understand that anything can happen,,, it's truly romantic, i know, and it can be a good memory of us being together but anything can happen dear

Mirabel: What can happen?

Me: If anyone apart from u and i get to know about it, then it's out

Mirabel: How can u be so sure?

Me: I watch a lot of movies babe

Mirabel: So, U are telling me that, Lola and Cynthia can't be trusted?

Me: What? They know about it?

Mirabel: Sure, it was even their idea to keep it and share to u as well

Me; Mirabel.....

Mirabel: What?

Me: Tell me, who specifically brought the idea?

Mirabel: Lola,,, why?

Chai oh!!

☆☆☆ TO BE CONTINUED ☆☆☆[/b]

high 5 guy..ur so gud

Nyc update bro

bro victor, i guess ur dream of u with a girl whose father beat u because u are dating his daughter is coming to pass

[b]EPISODE 17

The following morning, after our morning activities, i started getting ready to leave anything 11am. Momma arranged foodstuffs for me of which i declined the ones i don't like such as beans. I only collected small quality of it so i can prepare it with rice.

After much preparation, i left some few minutes past 11 and arrive my apartment about an hour later. Did i mentioned where i was schooling? OK, I was schooling at the University Of Abuja studying Business Administration.

I informed Mirabel of my arrival, she said she'll join me shortly. I also informed my Parents. My uncle told me to call him when i get to school but i don't want to,,,, I know he wants to give me money.

I was about doing some clean up before i discovered that the place is even tidier than the way i left it. I was surprised a little because i was relieved from doing the cleaning. So,,, who else could have done it if not my lovely Mirabel. But how??

*I quickly dialed her line*

Mirabel: Hello dear

Me: Sweetheart,,, how did u do it?

Mirabel: Do what?

Me: The house, its cleaned up

Mirabel; Oh yea,,,, I sent some cleaners with my guards to get it done. Hope they did well?

Me: Sure, they did great. Thanks dear,

Mirabel: Its okay... i think its my duty to clean for my boo especially when he's too lazy for house chores

Me: I'm not lazy

Mirabel: I know, that's why i said for house chores,,,, U re lazy on that

Me: No I'm not

Mirabel: Really?

Me: Yeah

Mirabel: Ok tell me, what do u do at your family house? And how often do u do your laundry?

Me: Well,,, there's nothing much to do there and Mother and Nancy takes care of the few ones

Mirabel: There u go,,,, there are some little things that u should be doing at home sweetheart

Me: But i mop the floor

Mirabel: After Nancy sweep the floor right? Why can't u sweep and mop alone?    Imagine, u started washing your own clothes just last year

Me: What? Who told u that?

Mirabel: Oops! Never mind, I will be with u shortly,,,,, and I'm coming with food. Not fried rice though, love u...

*Hangs up*

Chai! Nancy is a traitress! 

Few minutes later, I went to the gate to check who was horning,,,, The car doesn't look familiar but i know it was Mirabel, she got another ride for another semester,,, cool. She drove in, parked, and then alighted from the car were Cynthia, Mirabel and Lola.

But she didn't tell me that she'll be coming over with them,,,, Chaai Mirabel!

Cynthia: Hi Victor?

Me: Hello Cynthia,,, long time

Mirabel ran towards me and gave me a cool romantic hug,,, I lifted her up and turned her around romantically and we shared a cool kiss while i was still holding her before i dropped her to her feet.

Mirabel: I've missed u so much

Me: I miss u too...

Lola: Hello Vames **Smiling**

Me: Lola, how are u?  how'd u know that name?

Lola: Why don't u usher us in? instead of questioning us under this scorching sun **helping herself in**

Cynthia looked around then joined Lola

Mirabel: Let's go in na **pulling me**

Me: Wait

Mirabel: Why?

Me: I thought u were coming alone so we can talk alone

Mirabel: Yeah,,,, but they insisted on coming, that they would be bored at the lodge

Me: We have some serious issues to tackle,,,, so how can we get to talk privately?

Mirabel: Serious issues? what are u talking about?

Me: I will tell u everything when we get to talk

Mirabel: Okay uhmmm,,,, I will let them go while i spend the night here

Me: Ok good

Mirabel: Till then,,,, let's go in

Me: Wait....

Mirabel: What now? They're waiting for us

Me: **drawing her closer**  Do u know how much i've missed your kisses?

Mirabel: Not now Victor

Me: Come on...

Mirabel: I miss u too but now is not the right time,,, I thought we have some serious issues to tackle?

Me: Yeah... but my mind doesn't recognize the right time for kissing u,,, U should know that with u, every time is right...

She started blushing while i draw her and placed my lips on hers and she responded....

Lola: The food is getting cold,,, do u guys mind? **Went back in**

What will i do to this Lola sef??

Mirabel: Sorry dear, we're coming in now.....   Victor i'm going in now

We went in together, Mirabel served the food. I don't know why she's the one doing it while Cynthia and Lola were there. The food wasn't fried rice and the drink wasn't hollandia yoghurt but the food was irish potatoes with egg and fried chicken with some kind of spice I've never seen before,,,,, with one nice orange juice like that which i later discovered that it was imported.

Cynthia and Lola ate on their own, while Mirabel and I ate together but not in a romantic way because i wasn't comfortable with Lola's presence.

After eating,,,, she (Mirabel) took all the dishes to wash. Her humbleness surprised me a lot,,, how can she, being the leader of their friendship and the President's Daughter be be doing dishes for her friends?? I really can't understand why.

I helped her in the dishwashing of which she tried to decline but i superseded her. We wouldn't had completed the dishes without some cool kisses initiated by me.... we were yet interrupted by that Lola again!

Lola: **Clears throat**  Do u have korean movies in this house?  I'm bored

*This girl is annoyingly funny sha*

Mirabel: Lola, there's no Korean movie here

Lola: But he lives here, let him answer,,, he might have, who knows...

Me: Mirabel answered u correctly Lola,,,, I don't even watch Koreans

Lola: What? Why?? they're really good, U will love their movies just try it and see

Me: Okay,,, maybe I'll try it out some time

Lola: Yeah u should,,,, first u should try City hunter, Coffee prince, Playful kiss or Personal taste, Sea god or even Fugitive: Plan B it's awesome.

Me: Okay...

Lola: OMG! Please try as much as possible to watch Boys Before Flowers,,, I love the movie like crazy

Mirabel: Lola follow me let's talk

Lola: Talk about what?

Mirabel: Follow me

Lola: Okay, alright

Mirabel: I mean now**walks away**

Lola: I'm coming oh.....
Vames sweetheart,,, long time no see

I boldly brought out my phone from my pocket and start recording,,, I did it boldly so she won't notice my real motive.

Me: What do U want from me?

Lola: **laughs** Is that a question?

Me: Yes it is a question and i demand an answer

Lola: I don't need anything from U dear,,, wake up boo

Me: I don't understand

Mirabel: **cuts in from distance** Lola!!!

Lola: Hey I'm coming!    got to go handsome,,, your girlfriend needs my attention *she winked at me and left*

That's how the witch left without leaving any evidence for me to hold against her.

I didn't know what they talked about.... Later in the evening, Mirabel and I lay on the couch together waiting for Lola and Cynthia to get going but they seem to be very comfortable.

Mirabel: Don't u girls have any where to go? No party? No clubbing No dates and all?

Lola: Since when do u care about that? Or aren't u the one preaching change on us?

Mirabel: Ok now U have changed?

Lola: Errrmmmmm,,,, I just don't feel like going anywhere. We just arrive campus na, we'll rest for today

**58 minutes later**

Mirabel: U girls can go,,,, I will spend the night here.   Lola? Cynthia? Cynthia? Lola?! Lola wake up jare!  **Hitting them to wake**

Lola: **Sleepy** allow person to sleep na

Mirabel: U should go to the lodge then, before it gets too late.  Lola? Lola!

Lola is really a witch!

Mirabel: (Whispering to me) What should we do now?

Me: We'll leave them let them sleep here while we go inside the room

Mirabel: Okay....

We went inside the room, Mirabel had a shower. She told me to join her of which i jumped up to feet before she declared that she was only joking. I told her that i will only shower that night if only i join her,,, She told me to suit myself.

She came out after a few minutes

Mirabel: Its your turn

Me: Did we arrange for that?

Mirabel: Alright, go and shower

Me: I'm okay....

Mirabel: But u stinks

Me: I told u that, i won't shower if not with u,,,, so I'm keeping to my word

Mirabel: Okay,,,, but u will keep your distance oh,,, and we'll only talk

Me: (Seductively) Are u sure about that?

Mirabel: Hold it there, don't even think about it...

Me: Really?

Mirabel: I'm very serious (boldly)

Me: Okay,,, its alright, i didn't intend to do anything anyway

Mirabel: Says your mouth but can that thing down there attest to that? (Using her face to point at my private area that is nodding on its own)

Me: Hey stop looking at it,,,, it got mind on its own and its alive because of the available frequency

Mirabel: So I'm the frequency?

Me: Yes of course, its not my fault that its nodding like that. I can only control it as its master but can't stop it from nodding to available frequency. Its like that, so can we talk now?

Mirabel: Alright, what is it that u want to tell me about ?

Me: Its about your' fr......

**Knocks on the door twice then came in without waiting for permission**

Lola: I need to take a shower, sorry i had to wear this, can't find anything else to put on **walks into the bathroom**

She was wearing my shirt. I was stunned and speechless so was Mirabel.

She finally came out after spending almost 30 minutes in the bathroom. She laid on the floor

Lola: Goodnight guys,,,, woah the floor is so cool

I thought Mirabel was going to get angry and react, but she actually looks as if she wanted to laugh while i was burning inside of me

Before i could say 'Mi' the door opened without knocking

Cynthia: (Sleepy) So all of u camped here and left me all alone in the parlor,,,, msteeeww **She also laid on floor side by side with Lola**

Mirabel started laughing out,,, I looked at her with an angry face.


TO BE CONTINUED[/b]

winchi winchi lola ,mirabel outer eyes has fôs(blind)

Crazy friends

Tanks for the update but ur use of some words is wrong eg it is quantity and not quality of beans waiting for the nxt update

Heheheeeee... Iwo nikan tan...

I am beginning to suspect there's a conspiracy between these girls. Not yet sure of the position of Mirabel, but deeply convinced Lola is an important person in the conspiracy. The story line is good with some bit of suspense! But the writer should improve on his diction and use of some simple tenses and words. Misplaced atimes are the words his and he's, and some other like that should easily be edited before final posting.
You can equally get a good editor to help you make the storyline and the writeups perfect.
Regards.

Oga oo. .error mongers. .mchteeeew.. Mr Vamez keep rolling jawe

nice one bro,,,,, kip d good work rolling,,,,,, God bless u

Keep up the good work, bro. Try as much as possible to avoid abbreviation (using 'ur' instead of 'your'). Patiently waiting for your next update. Well done!!!

All these grammatical blunders should be consider as mistakes and no body is above that.
Carry on vames

Kip it up vames nd realy enjoyin dix...#Lolamustgo

Vict vames mokoe je...Carry on brother

This Lola na karishika oh.....

[b]EPISODE 18

During the night, I felt something rubbing my feet up to my leg,,, I quickly grabbed my phone and switched on the light to the direction only to see Lola smiling at me by this time of the night **What a witch** I adjusted and laid back, this time holding Mirabel very closely till i managed to sleep. I woke up the following morning feeling a slight headache but kept it to myself not telling Mirabel. I was alone in the room when i woke up,,, I went to check if they were still around, I got to the parlor and heard their voices in the kitchen. I went back inside to brush my teeth and had my bath as well. Of course I didn't feel good when Mirabel said I stinks last night.

Mirabel: Honey where are you?

Me: I'm in the bathroom

Mirabel: Ok hurry up' Breakfast is served

Me: Alright give me a minute

Mirabel: Or may I join you?

**She wants to trick me again, once bitten twice shy**

Me: No need for that, I will be done in a minute

Mirabel: Are you sure you don't want me to come?

Me: Yeah

Mirabel: Okay,,, I will be with the girls in the guest room

Me: Wait dear were you serious about joining me?

Mirabel: (Laughs) Of course not, enjoy your bath dear

*Hhmmmm,,,, bitten twice*

I had my bath, dressed up then went for breakfast. I got ready to leave, I told Mirabel to come back later in the day to talk on the matter at hand, She agreed to come before they left.  Home alone and you know what that means,,, thinking of what to do to while away time and other weird imaginations. First thing i tried to was to watch TV, I got bored and switched to video games before i realized something. That I have always wanted to use my laptop to surf the internet. Now I have the means with my Smile 4G wireless modem. I dashed to my room at once to get my laptop and wireless modem. I got them, switched them on, connected the laptop with the wireless modem and gained internet access in no time and i let out a satisfactory smile. I downloaded so many softwares that i have always wished to have in my system. They seized the power, I on the generator because I was so into the internet and can't leave it not even for a minute. I was so in to it that i didn't know when i passed lunch time, yet I didn't feel hungry but I'm actually hungry

**Phone Rings**

Me: Hello Promzy

Promise: Hi are you at home?

Me: Yeah, what's up?

Promise: I'm around, on my way to your place

Me: Okay,,, please do me a favour

Promise: What?

Me: Errmmmm,,, help pass by an eatery and buy me something to eat,,,, something simple like maybe meatpie and burger,,, don't worry about drink, I have some

Promise: I haven't even agreed yet and you're already telling me what to do

Me: I know you can't refuse me

Promise: Really? what if i don't have enough money with me??

Me: Please Promzy, I will pay you as soon you get here,,, I'm very hungry biko

Promise: Okay,,, I will get it

Me: Thanks dear

Promise: And what have you been doing that you couldn't get yourself something to eat?

Me: It's a long story

Promise: What's the long story on not having lunch again?

Me: *Laughs* You won't understand,,, get here first

Promise: Okay...

**Hangs Up**

I continued browsing and downloading till she arrived a couple of minutes later. She gave me a cool hug when i opened the gate for her before i ushered her in to the house.

Promise: The place is looking really good, who did it?

Me: What are you insinuating now?

Promise: Come on,,, you and know that you didn't do it

Me: And if i say i actually did it?

Promise: Then I'll say you're lying

Me: Please give my food, I don't know what you girls take me for

Promise: So who did it?

Me: Its Mirabel! Can I have my food now?

Promise: **Hands the package to me** By Mirabel, you mean she did it manually or automatically?

Me: How do you mean?

Promise: As in, if she did it with her hands or she brought people to do it?

Me: Okay it was automatically

Promise: So, what's the long story you talked about?

Me: **Chuckles** I was only exaggerating,,, just busy with the internet

Promise: I see,,, and who were you chatting with that kept you busy?

Me: Not chatting,,,, just surfing the internet and downloading from the clouds

Promise: Okay oh,,, too much Mb, so you are on subscription?

Me: Yap

Promise: How many Mb

Me: Promzy I want to eat oh please,,, care to join me?

Promise: Tell me jhoor

Me: It's 10Gb data plan

Promise: For how many months?

Me: For 30 days

Promise: Is it not too much? what would u be doing with it?

Me: It hasn't been up to a week, I have consumed about 3Gb

Promise: What? with this your phone?

Me: Yea and my laptop

Promise: Okay U connected your phone with your laptop,,, cool

Me: Not really, I'm using a wireless modem that can connect both of them and even more together. Look at it **Showing her the modem**

Promise: Woah,,,, its nice

Me: Yeah,,, I'm coming

I went in to get some drink, the one Mirabel brought yesterday with two glass cups.

Me: Let's eat

Promise: No thanks, I'm okay

Me: Not even a glass of juice?

Promise: Ok that will do

I offered her the juice while i helped myself,,, We gisted on so many things while eating till she finished her drink and boldly asked for more. While talking, a part of me wanted her to go so I could continue surfing the internet.

Me: Or should I connect you?

Promise: Yes oh,,, I need to do some things,,,, hope you won't mind if i download?

Me: I hope its not large files?

Promise: Yes

Me: Okay then

I connected her thinking i would be free to focus on the internet but I was wrong, She kept asking questions upon questions.

**Phone Rings**

Me: Hey dear

Mirabel: Hey,,,, where are you? I've been horning out here

Me: Really? sorry dear I didn't know, I'm coming out now

**Hangs UP**

I rushed to open the gate for her,,, She drove in

Me: I apologize sweetheart, I didn't know **Hugs her**

Mirabel: Its okay,,, and what have you been doing all day?

Me: Just been surfing the internet

Mirabel: And what did you have for lunch?

Me: Some snacks,,,, Promzy is even around

Mirabel: Inside now?

Me: Yeah

Mirabel: Why didn't you tell me?

Me: But I just did

Mirabel: How long has she been here?

Me: I think for over an hour now,,,, what's this about?

Mirabel: What do you mean by what's this about? She's my friend too and I miss her soooo much **Running inside** Promzy!!

I was like "pheeeeww" I let out a sigh of relieve.

TO BE CONTINUED[/b]

Off to get popcorn and fanta *fanta don cost these days o* Oga Vic,come join me.

nice update here .i think dey go still use mirabel head to play chess if case is not taken

still on the bit more update plzzzzzzz....

More please!!