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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)
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Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 10:23pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
Ayoomolabake:she has a rude personality truly. Even her frnd confirms it. |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 10:27pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
mizchoc:all wat u said iz true bt if she stil luvz him, she wouldnt behave nonchanlantly in the car. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:31pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
smizel:There is no disputing the fact that she has a rude personality but he turning down her offer of friendship sure made her feel rejected. |
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 10:32pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
mizchoc:Pls tell them oo. Men be supporting each other's wrong doings. U know how many times Nene has tried to make amends and Nathan will walk out on her? Her initial orientation about men is different so u can't really blame her for her attitudes. They should just do and make up jaweee. Them be prolonging dia fight 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by dasilver20(f): 10:40pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
ikombe:Hmmm forming is part of lyf na 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 10:46pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
Ayoomolabake:hmm... It is true bt if she can handle dis issue going on btw them maturely, she shldnt have bring out her old self again wen nathan is trying to mend it. |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 10:49pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
Her initial orientation about men is different so u can't really blame her for her attitudes. They should just do and make up jaweee. Them be prolonging dia fight[/quote] nyc write up 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 10:52pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
madam chumzypinky, wetin happen naw. U dont drop updates lyk b4. |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 11:00pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
kellyoneinamill:Is it really possible for she to live without him, wen he is d father of her unborn child? Dnt u tink he has d ryt to knw abt d baby on the way? She is jst been selfish 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 11:02pm On Feb 21, 2017 |
gtin:bros, na true u talk. |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 12:19am On Feb 22, 2017 |
That chuks of a man really needs a serious brain switching to restore factory setting beating. As for Nathan and Kaniene, I just dey watch una two for 6D for one corner. Madam chumzypinky oya proceed. 2 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Red Ashes by everton4life(m): 12:58am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:cool |
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 3:50am On Feb 22, 2017 |
smizel: Oh. She should have showed him how much she loves him, and can't live without him ryt? Even when he claimed to have a new girlfriend and she's now a ex. Sorry, if your ex-girlfriend should be so nice to you, aren't you guys the same people who will want to make advantage of that, and play her or tell your girlfriend she wants to seduce you, she wants you back. Abeg, guys should learn to drop their ego, the world does not revolve around them 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 3:59am On Feb 22, 2017 |
smizel: Wow. If she can handle this issue..., I thought relationship is abt 2 people, so she's the to handle it maturely by begging or what? How is Nathan trying to mend it o, by pushing her away and coming whenever he feels like, cos he is the man in the relationship ryt? 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 4:04am On Feb 22, 2017 |
gtin: Very possible, do you need the statistics of single mothers in the world. Though, he deserves to know he's expecting a baby, even if it's through writing. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Kupaskeybaba(m): 6:55am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Nath need to b man up and stop play games wt nene's feeling. Wat else doz he want? Dey say mk u chop u say u no want ,dey say mak u trow am away u say smal meat stil dey der! I beg bro Nath man up an tak a stand 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 6:59am On Feb 22, 2017 |
fam24:Thank God we finally agreed on something 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21: 7:05am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Like play,like play....we don almost reach 100.....but y nowadayz story 4 nairaland dey long like dix,wen no b season film |
Re: Red Ashes by mizchoc(f): 8:32am On Feb 22, 2017 |
smizel: it doesn't work that way.... the fact that he's trying to show care for a few seconds in the car doesn't mean she shud just forget about all the trash he's done in past months.. people just have to stop thinking they can just walk in and out of pple's lives anytime and anyhow... this applies to real life situations too 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 9:04am On Feb 22, 2017 |
everton4life:so u quoted everything becus of 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:37am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Prettyhurts:i'm sorry dear, but i expect you to understand nah. Normally i'm supposed to update in d morning and in d night due to my work in the afternun, bt now hubby hardly allows me touch my phone again. Because for the morning update, i would have to wake up early for it, and because of dat, he seizes my phone, and in d nite, he wont allow me hold it, he says i need all d rest i can get. I'm sorry honey, but all this would soon be over. The story's coming to an end 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by BurnaKing21: 9:43am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: d time u take type dix would av been enough 4 an update @least........d way writers dey giv excuses ehn....i evn prefer 2 bliv lie mohammed 4 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 9:54am On Feb 22, 2017 |
gtin:Lol. Can you share your opinion abt how Kainene should have gone abt it? 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by fam24(f): 10:06am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Madam Chumzypinky, you won't see all the comments on the thread now with no regular update o. Later be threatening not to update if the comments did not reach so, so, so, page. And be monitoring those that are viewing, even before one reads, one must have comment, as if na every time one must have something to talk about. |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 10:22am On Feb 22, 2017 |
fam24:For me i dnt see any way arnd it, she shud hv told abt the baby now he has come to his senses nd gv him her new address for easy to his baby since she has moved on its dat simple |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:38am On Feb 22, 2017 |
JOLADE. Getting married to Kelvin was the happiest moment of my life. It was a small wedding, something my mother wasnt happy about. Infact, throughout the small get-together wedding ceremony, she wasnt cheerful at all and i knew it was the presence of Bidemi that made her come. All along, i never knew what love entailed. I finally knew what it felt like to love and recieve love in return. I finally understood that love doesnt judge you by your past. That love stands by you no matter the circumstances. The past few months had been interesting for me. I was due soon. Yes, maybe Kelvin and i rushed things but we had to. The first reason being our love and the second being the fact that the baby was soon to arrive. Mum wasnt happy. And i knew she wouldnt have agreed had it not been for Bidemi who was close to her heart. Bidemi had shown up few weeks ago. And though she hadnt stated her reason for suddenly coming back, Folake and i knew she was running away from her husband. She came with her kids also. Folake gave up a furnished apartment for us to reside in while Bidemi bought us a car. Folake used her connections as a senator's ex-wife to get Kelvin a job in a reputable company since he was a graduate. Qasa relocated to the states and i never saw her again. Even though i told Kelvin about the relationship between the both of us, i was glad she left my life for good. It was a month now since we got married. And even though i still thought of Nathan once in a while, i knew that whatever i felt towards him had long died. Kelvin was my everything now, my hero, my champion, my all. The man who stood by me throughout the most trying times of my life. 'honey?' his voice jerked me back to consciousness. I looked up as his hands circled my face from back. I smiled 'you're back? Welcome' 'what were you thinking about? I just stood here watching you for a while but you made no movement. I was scared you died while sitting' he joked. I smacked his hands playfully 'you're not serious. You know if i die, you'll suffer as well. And i will die with your child' i placed my hands on my stomach. 'please oo. Even if you must die, make sure you drop my child first' he came over to my front and squatted just before my bulging abdomen, then he kissed it 'how's my baby doing over there?' 'your baby is doing awesome' i replied. Then i suddenly felt like asking, the thought just came to me 'Kels, i just felt i should ask. If..thats when i finally give birth to this child. And...after him, i give birth to yours, i..will he be your first child or your biological one...' 'what are you saying now Jolade?' he cut in immediately 'do you think that when my own child comes, i'm going to bypass our first child for the second? Is that what you're saying?' 'Kels, its not...' 'Lade, please dont ever mention that again. I love you and i love our child as well. I could never, i repeat, i could never bypass the first for the second. I will love them both equally for they are both my children, Lade please dont mention that again' I just smiled. I thought i saw something in his eyes. Something i couldnt place, but i waved it off 'your food is in the kitchen, should i serve it?' He nodded and i stood up. I turned to leave when he grabbed my waist and pulled me to himself, he kissed me on my lips 'i love you Jolly. Never you doubt that, no matter what' I nodded and wrapped my hands around his neck 'i love you my darling' Our lips locked in another kiss. If only i knew... TBC 6 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by ElajRita(f): 10:40am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Dont mind them jare, take all the time you need, ur hubby is right you need all the rest you can get, if the storu like make e reach nxt year, nobody fit come ur house come beat you... |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:44am On Feb 22, 2017 |
BurnaKing21:rili? Is that what you think? Do you think its easy to type an update? Do u think its just about picking up ur fone and start typing anything dat comes to my head? I dont copy and paste from anywhere, i type directly from my head. Sometimes, when typing, i have to pause to try remembering some things so i dont mix things up. For example, when typing this last update, i had to rack my brain in order to remember the name of Jolade's sister who lives abroad. At first i tot it was Jennifer, Scholarsticar, Jane, i had to pause and it took me over fifteen minutes to finally remember it was Bidemi, it takes me thirty minutes if not more to type an update and u're telling me the tym i used to type dat 1 would have been enof for an update, what kind of a statement is that? |
Re: Red Ashes by Toshiba49ja(m): 10:50am On Feb 22, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: Dunoor mind him jhor Some guys ehn... Wot dey cannor du faa
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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:50am On Feb 22, 2017 |
fam24:sometimes, the way people talk gets me wondering if God actually gave everybody he created common sense. U see those times when i actually say i wont update till it gets to so and so page, i'm just using that as an excuse becos i know i wont be available at that particular time. So i'll use that to keep you guys busy till i'm less busy. That doesnt mean that when i'm less busy i wont type even if it hasnt gotten to that particular page. And even when i type names of people that are viewing without commenting, dos that mean that if dey dont comment, i'll kill dem? Or i'll stop updating? Or do you think my entire life is on nairaland? I'm a very jovial person but i'm also very temperemental, pls dont push me to say things i'm not supposed to say |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 10:52am On Feb 22, 2017 |
ElajRita:abi? Thank God people like Wizsolzy and Ikombe do not know my address |
Re: Red Ashes by Toshiba49ja(m): 10:53am On Feb 22, 2017 |
BurnaKing21: Blivin LIEMohammed ees up to u 1 Like
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