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Re: Red Ashes by Nmaglit: 4:00pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Bomb blast for jolade |
Re: Red Ashes by ikombe: 4:04pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
preciousuweh:Why not Dem dey ask dat kinda question nowadays |
Re: Red Ashes by iamlynn(f): 4:04pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
serious gbege |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:05pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:17pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
kweke!!!! from whence cometh Kelvin's elder brother |
Re: Red Ashes by spixytinxy(f): 4:22pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
preciousuweh:cos he was d one dat found jolade wen she was raped, anyways let b watching sha |
Re: Red Ashes by mizchoc(f): 5:21pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
khalifahsparkles: he cometh from roaming around the earth, looking for Wu to destroy.. 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by mizchoc(f): 5:24pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
smizel: eh... dat one dey sha the truth is.. we all have our bad sides and Nene was a novice.. so cut her some slack ni |
Re: Red Ashes by Phunmmielurlar: 5:37pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Ahnahn,mummychumzy...I bin dey guess say 1 jolade don offend u badly b4 nd u r jus takin it out on our dear character.... isnor fair ooo. Jolade don 2 suffer nt 2 av `hapily evr after' Na....oya 4gv her Na,biko. Nvr saw dt Kelvin's twist coming! Me I dey patiently wait 4 where Nene go tell Nathan, ahbi Nathan go fnd out say Nene don gt belle o All in all,u r doin a gr8 job!!!....#stillifllw! |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 5:41pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Phunmmielurlar:tanx luv 2 Likes |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 7:40pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
mummy chumzypinky u are an exceptional writer woow keep it up ma. |
Re: Red Ashes by patriciakase(f): 9:50pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Yee!mogbe o |
Re: Red Ashes by ladyverere(f): 10:21pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Chisos!!! Well done Chumzy! None of us saw that coming. Real boko haram bomb. We were practically blindsided. God if it were me, I would murder those 2 brothers with my bare hands! Victor deserved to be castrated with a blunt fork. |
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 10:32pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
which kind life kelvin dey leave self ?
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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:45pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
firstking01 |
Re: Red Ashes by rachealfst(f): 10:47pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
Life is so unfair to Jolade, I really pity her. I'm just hoping she'll have every cause to smile again. To our lovely, talented writer, well done ma, more grace. 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by firstking01(m): 10:49pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
ojonemile:I'm here my gifty |
Re: Red Ashes by smizel(m): 11:04pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
mizchoc:u have jes spoken d truth |
Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 11:05pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
OMG These guys are criminals ooo Well-done ma'am |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 11:06pm On Feb 23, 2017 |
firstking01: firstking01: |
Re: Red Ashes by MozB: 12:56am On Feb 24, 2017 |
chai! This Jolade has suffered in this life. I almost thought kelvin was the best thing that happened to her o! So i can comfortably say her case is 'from frying pan to fire' Shaa God de |
Re: Red Ashes by felapikin(m): 2:29am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Jolade haff suffer I swear!
Kelvin's brother responsible for the pregnancy? I never hexpererit...
Nice job ma'am. |
Re: Red Ashes by firstking01(m): 6:53am On Feb 24, 2017 |
ojonemile:Goodmorning. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:54am On Feb 24, 2017 |
ladyverere:lol, madam, u neva cease to amaze me 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 8:58am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Lol, u guys are just blaming Kelvin too, have you guys forgotten that he stood for her when she had no one? He didnt just marry her because she was carrying another man's child, he married her because he loved her. He always loved her 1 Like |
Re: Red Ashes by siralabai(m): 9:03am On Feb 24, 2017 |
*Walahi* (in Malam Musa's voice) You're so mean to Jolade. Wetin she do to deserve this one na? Just make sure Kelvin is alright and able to reproduce o, otherwise Jolade is going to loose it. The trauma is too much. And send the greedy elder brother out. And please deal with Chuka ASAP o |
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 9:16am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Chumzypinky:No amount of love shud mak him arange her rape jst so she can look towards his direction |
Re: Red Ashes by BEAMBOR13(f): 9:23am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Kudos to you chumzypinky this story is so captivating, started reading from page 0 yesterday evening got to page 102 by 2am in the midnight, I no gree sleep cos of this story. |
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 9:37am On Feb 24, 2017 |
JOLADE. It felt as if my world had crashed. I didnt know when i let out a muffled scream. At that point, the brother's stopped talking and i knew they knew i was behind the curtains. I turned to run away but i missed my step and fell on the floor. I screamed. 'Lade! Lade!!' Kelvin screaming running to me 'are you alright? Get on your feet. What happened? How did you fall' he reached to help me up but i pushed him away. 'let me go you filthy bastard!' i slapped his hands away. Victor stood by the door, his hands akimbo. That was when tears started pouring out of my eyes. One look at me and they knew i'd heard everything they said. I saw Kelvin's shoulders slump 'Lade, its..its not what you think' 'really?' I couldnt help myself anymore 'Kelvin, so you knew your brother was the one who raped me that night and you never said a word about it right? So you married me to cover up your brother's sins' 'no...' 'no what? Who knows if you're not one of the three guys who raped me as well!' 'Jolade i can never do anything to hurt you. I love you so much' 'no wonder you were the one who rescued me that day. I should have known! I should have known that you had something to do with it! I should have known!' More tears dropped 'you ruined my life Kelvin' 'why put all the blame on Kelvin?' Victor spoke up 'are you afraid of confronting me?' I faced him 'i have no business with you' 'you do my dear. You're carrying my child' 'i was raped by three men so you would never know if it happens to be your child or not!' 'be quiet! I know its my child because i was the only one to release inside of you, understood?' his voice was hostile. 'Victor thats enough!' Kelvin spoke up 'why are you hellbent on ruining my life the more? I warned you about this reckless lifestyle of yours. I've always been covering your mess and taking responsibilities for your actions! Now look at what you've done to me now Vic. Why?' 'stop talking as if the both of you are not in it together!' i screamed 'you both planned everything' Then Victor laughed. 'Lade no' tears pooled in his eyes 'we didnt plan anything. If you'll calm down, i'm going to explain everything to you' I looked into eyes. And i knew that i was going to believe whatever he told me, even if he was lying. I shook my head. I shouldnt listen to whatever he had to say. He would only continue lying to me over and over again. No. 'i dont want to listen to whatever you have to say Kelvin' and i rushed into our room and locked the door. I fell on the bed and cried. And even when he kept knocking on the door for me to open, i refused. 'fine! If you dont want to open the door, then i'm going to tell you everything. Even if you dont want to listen, i'm still going to tell you' I wanted to cover my ears but i found myself sitting up and paying attention. ¤¤¤ Kelvin hung his back on his shoulders and eyed his brother who was busy wrapping his indian hemp 'good evening Vic' 'you're back' he said without looking up at him 'there's no food in this house oo. Hope you brought something from your big madam's house sha?' Kelvin felt disgusted. Would his elder brother ever be responsible? 'i didnt bring anything. There's garri in the kitchen, maybe you should manage that' 'you'd better be joking' Victor looked up at him now 'dem use garri do me? Do you think i'm going to soak garri all my life? I mean, what are you working for if you cant even provide food for us?' 'thats why you have to work bro. The responsibility is too much on me. Why not try to do something so you can assist me in taking care of the house?' 'you're very stupid! You know you're supposed to take care of me because you're my junior' Kelvin eyed his elder brother. He knew there was no point speaking too much. His elder brother would never learn 'okay, i'll buy indomie for you' 'now you're talking! Anyway, i wont be around tonight. My friends and i are going for a hunt' He became alarmed 'dont tell me you're going to rape someone else again?' 'its not rape. Its something called taking what rightfully belongs to you. God created women to give us rest down there' he took a drag from his wrap. Kelvin didnt say anything. He just went inside. His brother came back home at about 3am. 'i bleeped a very sophisticated girl today. You needed to see how hot she was' 'stop telling me disgusting stories about your orgies' 'the girl was beautiful really and i enjoyed her. Infact, i intentionally deposited my seed inside her. She needs to bear my child' He blinked 'what?' He felt this need to rescue the girl. He didnt know who she was but she needed his help 'where did you leave her?' 'the normal place. The uncompleted builing. Want to help her again? Well, you're free' he yawned and fell on the bed. Kelvin quickly wore his slippers and raced to where the uncompleted builing was situated. That was when he saw her. His heart shattered into a million pieces when he saw his Jolade. His Jolade. TBC 7 Likes 3 Shares |
Re: Red Ashes by Phunmmielurlar: 10:07am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Dis Victor na certified mad man o. Living off his younger brother
#who does dt Tnx n thumbs up 4 d update Gallantly n patiently waiting 4 more! *winks* |
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 10:27am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Chumzypinky: He's a partner to the crime. He should have told her the truth from the onset and reported his brother but he hid it. Love don't lie neither does it hurt. Jolade don suffer back to back from Nathan/Qasa/now Kelvin. Please pity her small. |
Re: Red Ashes by comelyJummy(f): 11:11am On Feb 24, 2017 |
Can't wait till when Jolade badluck will change to goodluck. |
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