Flakins:
are the results out? Who won?

lekkxydinho:
Thank You To Everyone That Voted In The Just Concluded Voting. To God Be The Glory, Our Amazing Writer Won The Award. All Thanks To Your Vote.

We Pray God Continue To Improve The Wisdom Of Our Amiable Writer.

Dessydemmy:
no one mention dessydemmy all the while.

lekkxydinho:
Thank You To Everyone That Voted In The Just Concluded Voting. To God Be The Glory, Our Amazing Writer Won The Award. All Thanks To Your Vote.

We Pray God Continue To Improve The Wisdom Of Our Amiable Writer.

Evathyst:
I've been reading this story for more close to a week, and I must say it's a wonderful piece. If only our Nollywood script writers can be half as good as this. Perhaps, we would have been churning out good movies and the the usual 'Police & Thief' or 'King & Queen' which has dominated our screens.

As wonderful as the story seem, permit me to point out a few observations;

1- In terms of grammar, I'll say the writer still has a lot to improve on. For example he kept using the word 'Most' before a superlative form of adjective. e.g Most happiest, most loveliest. This shouldn't be.

Also, simple grammatical blunders like; 'Did not spoke' kept recurring. OP, please take note.


2- Whilst the story was originally meant to revolve around sex, violence and betrayal. The writer has done very little to strike a balance among the 3. On certain episodes, it's only sex. On the other, it's betrayal alone.

3- Although the writer has a unique style, but his use of imaginary soliloquy needs improvement.

4- The writer sometimes doesn't introduce characters properly before throwing them into his updates. This will make the story center on Darous alone, thereby robbing him of the ingredients necessary to spice the story.


5- The writer's manner of introducing surprises seems very predictable. For example, whenever he's doing or saying something secretive, you just know there will be someone behind listening.


These are a few of the observations I have noticed so far. Like a fine wine, I'm sure the OP will get better with time. Lest I forget, a very big congrats on the award for the month of June. Many better things to follow.

Evathyst:
I've been reading this story for more close to a week, and I must say it's a wonderful piece. If only our Nollywood script writers can be half as good as this. Perhaps, we would have been churning out good movies and the the usual 'Police & Thief' or 'King & Queen' which has dominated our screens.

As wonderful as the story seem, permit me to point out a few observations;

1- In terms of grammar, I'll say the writer still has a lot to improve on. For example he kept using the word 'Most' before a superlative form of adjective. e.g Most happiest, most loveliest. This shouldn't be.

Also, simple grammatical blunders like; 'Did not spoke' kept recurring. OP, please take note.


2- Whilst the story was originally meant to revolve around sex, violence and betrayal. The writer has done very little to strike a balance among the 3. On certain episodes, it's only sex. On the other, it's betrayal alone.

3- Although the writer has a unique style, but his use of imaginary soliloquy needs improvement.

4- The writer sometimes doesn't introduce characters properly before throwing them into his updates. This will make the story center on Darous alone, thereby robbing him of the ingredients necessary to spice the story.


5- The writer's manner of introducing surprises seems very predictable. For example, whenever he's doing or saying something secretive, you just know there will be someone behind listening.


These are a few of the observations I have noticed so far. Like a fine wine, I'm sure the OP will get better with time. Lest I forget, a very big congrats on the award for the month of June. Many better things to follow.

Evathyst:
I've been reading this story for more close to a week, and I must say it's a wonderful piece. If only our Nollywood script writers can be half as good as this. Perhaps, we would have been churning out good movies and the the usual 'Police & Thief' or 'King & Queen' which has dominated our screens.

As wonderful as the story seem, permit me to point out a few observations;

1- In terms of grammar, I'll say the writer still has a lot to improve on. For example he kept using the word 'Most' before a superlative form of adjective. e.g Most happiest, most loveliest. This shouldn't be.

Also, simple grammatical blunders like; 'Did not spoke' kept recurring. OP, please take note.


2- Whilst the story was originally meant to revolve around sex, violence and betrayal. The writer has done very little to strike a balance among the 3. On certain episodes, it's only sex. On the other, it's betrayal alone.

3- Although the writer has a unique style, but his use of imaginary soliloquy needs improvement.

4- The writer sometimes doesn't introduce characters properly before throwing them into his updates. This will make the story center on Darous alone, thereby robbing him of the ingredients necessary to spice the story.


5- The writer's manner of introducing surprises seems very predictable. For example, whenever he's doing or saying something secretive, you just know there will be someone behind listening.


These are a few of the observations I have noticed so far. Like a fine wine, I'm sure the OP will get better with time. Lest I forget, a very big congrats on the award for the month of June. Many better things to follow.

brunxy:
people wey too read book like u dey crase ni cos una too dey take everything like exam...na una kind dey make life hard gan.!..My observation. ;Dpeople wey too read book like u dey crase ni cos una too dey take everything like exam...na una kind dey make life hard gan.!..My observation.

brunxy:
people wey too read book like u dey crase ni cos una too dey take everything like exam...na una kind dey make life hard gan.!..My observation. ;Dpeople wey too read book like u dey crase ni cos una too dey take everything like exam...na una kind dey make life hard gan.!..My observation.

jjbest123:
Sugaarh honey.... Time to rest

Sugaarh:
Lol i slept off I'm just getting started

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