Lyoncrescent:
This story is unique . Your immagination is excellent. If you can finish this story, I will rate it alongside royvers the day the world ended as one of the most imaginative stories I've ever read either on nairaland or anywhere else. Keep up the good work.

What an honour that will be to be placed side-to-side with one of literature's finest. I still look up to many of them such as Larrysun, foxyflow, tiffanyj and many more gurus. I still learn from them. we will both see the end to the story.
Again I say thank you.

officialdiam:
You r a talented writer @ghostwriter....

thank you and God bless you.

queenitee:
Mehn, this story is getting hotter.
Kimberlywest, kimkardashain, Evajael, Mhizgap, Ladysuperb, Hadampson, Yungeez, stephengee12, Emperor380, Jane1234f, Adesina12 don't lemme enjoy this alone

open the door wider let them come inside...bar man, customers don come.

DeraLoveth:
Second time am commenting on nairaland....my 1st comment was on Bloodline...and now..urs...wat can I say...u re very gud at wat u do...keep on d awesome work...d sky z ur starting point....*thumbs up*

you remind me of one of my strict professor in unilorin. (Prof. Saliu) if he commends positively on ur work (project/seminar/thesis/presentation) then be asured it's acceptable anywhere in the world...thanks a lot sweetheart.

Babysuccess02:
Ghostwritter, u ar one of my best writter on nairaland cox of ur style of writing. Plus i love ur stories so very much. More data to ur phone.

now i'm moved to tears...wish I can hug you tight. These are the kind of words than keeps me going. Edumaré bless you.

ebonyfaf:
Wow, i'm marveled at your style of writing! Keep up the good work and please don't forget to send the next update.

I will dear...(blow kisses)

LordOfSamosa:
Baba carry on, May your Dick never lack puszy

thanks my guy...my babe is presently seeing to that...I wish you same thing...Edumaré bless u.

adontcare:
Dis story is very interesting. Wow. Tnx for d update

you are welcome dear, that's why people like us were created...so to entertain you.

Damibiz:
Who so ever is in charge of that Roll call shd do the needful nd include Damibiz name there b4..,nd to the write men,u re killing it...more ink to yar pen

thanks my guy...Edumaré bless you.

Za ghost...your guy loyal oh...

ghostwritter:
thanks my guy...Edumaré bless you.

ghostwritter:

now i'm moved to tears...wish I can hug you tight. These are the kind of words than keeps me going. Edumaré bless you.

Tnx alot nd God bless u too

queenitee:
Mehn, this story is getting hotter.
Kimberlywest, kimkardashain, Evajael, Mhizgap, Ladysuperb, Hadampson, Yungeez, stephengee12, Emperor380, Jane1234f, Adesina12 don't lemme enjoy this alone

O baby m here, jst cum nd sit on my laps so dat d tori will b vry much enjoyable.

yungeez:

O baby m here, jst cum nd sit on my laps so dat d tori will b vry much enjoyable.

No problem

Nice one Ghostwritter...can't keep my mind off the storiesNice one Ghostwritter...can't keep my mind off the storiesNice one Ghostwritter...can't keep my mind off the stories

I love this story die,i wish you keep it rolling sir.

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CHAPTER FOUR

THE FALLEN

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“…an enormous red dragon…His tail swept a third of the stars out of the sky and flung them to the earth…the great dragon was hurled down—that ancient serpent called the devil, or Satan, who leads the whole world astray. He was hurled to the earth and his angels with him” (Revelation 12:3–9).
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They say pride comes before down-fall and so was it in heaven as soon as the first man Adam was given life. Lucifer was known as the ‘shining one’ or ‘star of the morning’. He had been the wisest and most beautiful of all God’s created being that was originally placed in a position of authority over the cherubim surrounding the throne of God. He was blinded with pride and felt man do not deserve to be bowed for but rather treated as the dust he truly was.



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Superb!

Mehn u did a solid on that update.... More like a movie.

This is just wow, the description is vivid. It looks like a movie, no looks like I was there when all these were happening.

Thank you for the update

Nice update

Wow nice

ghost writter with a double t. Am ur number one fan ... Continue ....i ave all this wicked badass story on my mind ..bt udeh pen it down . I cant ...ddntt knww hwto

Too lit an update. the first part was the bomb. keep up the good work.

oh Mehn, this is just too awesome, for someone to be this imaginative and could pen it down in a way we could all imagine also.. bros, I hail o, we need more, pullease. thanks

So Captivity And Creativity Write-up, Welldone U're Really Doing A Gr8 Work Here,

I doff my hat 4 d writer of dis wonderful story

Ghostwriter u are too much ride on bro don't keep us waiting on the next update

make una submit attendance ooo lecturer Don dey para for me ooo. call ya friends wey never mark con do so now ooo before lecturer comes for another class ooo

Ha ha ha... attendance marked. We dey ground dey wait for update

felt like i was seeing a movie. wow