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Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 4:49am On Jul 26, 2012
Cuddle wadup?
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 4:52am On Jul 26, 2012
My mind did a trip right there. My legs felt like
running off and my head felt like exploding.
My eyes were almost burning while my hands
just hung stiff on my side
She noticed all these and asked
“what is wrong”?
“ did I do something wrong”?

Then my voice came back to me and I got
control
“no I was just too pleased and I did not want
to interrupt you”
“the truth is that, I had felt that way since the
first day I saw you but I did not know how
it will make you feel hence, I was glad being
just friends but I would love that a lot”

She just smiled, came closer to me and
planted a kiss on my right cheek
Then she stepped back said “good night” and
walked into her house.
I watched her go into her house a million
times even though it happened only once.

I stood rooted to the ground right there and it
was like I had eyes were everywhere. Every
motion in her walk, every impact of her foot
on the ground which made her body bounce
was recorded by me and I realized that I did
not like this girl, I was in love with her.
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 6:17am On Jul 26, 2012
Bloody fcck!
A little bit of editing required but I love it Mynd!
I love that mind of yours kiss
Cindybabe that was platonic smiley
Re: The burning cold by Cuddlemii: 1:06pm On Jul 27, 2012
Mynd_44: Cuddle wadup?

I am good.
I am here
Keep up the good work!
Re: The burning cold by Tgirl4real(f): 7:57am On Sep 24, 2012
Hmmm...seems d writer is on recess tongue
Re: The burning cold by kikilove(f): 9:53am On Sep 24, 2012
Nice story am waiting 2 read more keep up d good work
Re: The burning cold by Luckygurl(f): 11:15am On Sep 25, 2012
SECONDED
Re: The burning cold by ijebabe: 3:55pm On Sep 25, 2012
I had forgotten about this thread.

Mynd, where are you angry
Don't make me call you Myndi
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 5:42pm On Sep 25, 2012
Yeah seriously, where is the author? He should be flogged.
Laziness is a bad thing omo
Re: The burning cold by Tgirl4real(f): 11:04am On Sep 26, 2012
How many strokes?? tongue
Re: The burning cold by greedie1(f): 11:10am On Sep 26, 2012
Hmmm....different and interesting.
More ink to ur pen mynd
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 1:52am On Sep 27, 2012
Tgirl4real: How many strokes?? tongue
A thousand
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:53am On Sep 27, 2012
Browsing with my phone sucks but its no excuse
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:56am On Sep 27, 2012
My sleep was sound that night.
Deep, dreamless and long and I
woke up with a big smile on my
face.
I was up earlier than usual. I went to
brush my mouth and went to the
sitting room because I saw the light
turned on there. I walked in half
expecting to see mum watching a
movie or reading a book but there
was no one there. I switched the
lights off and was about going to
bed when it came back on.

I almost jumped. I turned back and
looked around fast, there was no
one there but me. Looked at the
switch and saw that at the position
it was, the bulb was not supposed to
be on.
Some courage was summoned in me
as a thought came into me. The
switch must be faulty, which must
explain the bulb being left on in the
first when I heard it
It sounded like footsteps: steady and
regular. Quite and soft, they were
coming from my mum’s room and I
made for the room. She must be up
working again. I was at her door
when I heard it again: this time, they
came from the sitting room. But it
could not be from the sitting room, I
was there and the light was on. I
walked out and headed for my her
room and tried to open the door
when I saw a shadow move in the
sitting room.
I stopped moving. A part of me
wanted to walk back to the sitting
room while another part (the smart
part) was headed to my mum. I
almost saw another shadow with
the corner of my eyes in another
part and I ran for my mum’s room.

I stopped moving. A part of me
wanted to walk back to the sitting
room while another part (the smart
part) was headed to my mum. I
almost saw another shadow with
the corner of my eyes in another
part and I ran for my mum’s room.
I did not even knock as was the rule
between us when we entered one
another’s room. I just turned the
knob and pushed the door.
What I saw scarred me.

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Re: The burning cold by Nobody: 4:30pm On Sep 27, 2012
ooooooooohhhh! c'mon nah

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Re: The burning cold by vicky6: 5:57pm On Sep 27, 2012
nice Mynd dunno you cud write thought it was only "romance section" you knew cheesy

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Re: The burning cold by tellwsdom: 5:58pm On Sep 27, 2012
Wetin be this rubbish?? angry ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front?? angry
Re: The burning cold by illitrate(m): 5:58pm On Sep 27, 2012
reading is not one of my virtues. angry angry angry angry
Re: The burning cold by vicky6: 5:59pm On Sep 27, 2012
tellwsdom: Wetin be this rubbish?? angry ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front?? angry

lmao.. cheesy
Re: The burning cold by bbpreye(m): 6:03pm On Sep 27, 2012
GARRI: Too boring

Just too boring!
Rubbish!
Re: The burning cold by nikkyshyne(f): 6:10pm On Sep 27, 2012
Only read the last storyline. So Oga Mynd, what did you see?
Re: The burning cold by freecocoa(f): 6:11pm On Sep 27, 2012
OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself.

So tell us where you dey copy am from, i guess you wait for 11:45 to update because that's the time the owner of the story gives you asses to it abi?undecided

You wey i know for this forum no go fit write anything that lengthy cos you no fit read anything wey pass 2 paragraphs, na copy and paste you dey do, no lie tongue

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Re: The burning cold by nikkyshyne(f): 6:16pm On Sep 27, 2012
OMG freecocoa, I tot so too. Lol
Re: The burning cold by Booty4me: 6:16pm On Sep 27, 2012
tellwsdom: Wetin be this rubbish?? angry ...Shey if i read am finish, my evening food go disappear come my front?? angry
I swearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........ And he will be the First to criticize daily news for lengthy writup.. meanwhile this space is for sale
Re: The burning cold by tellwsdom: 6:20pm On Sep 27, 2012
Booty4me:
I swearrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr........ And he will be the First to criticize daily news for lengthy writup.. meanwhile this space is for sale

The space has been sold out to him sad sad...The money dey seun hand now sad
Re: The burning cold by greedie1(f): 6:24pm On Sep 27, 2012
freecocoa: OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself.

So tell us where you dey copy am from, i guess you wait for 11:45 to update because that's the time the owner of the story gives you asses to it abi?undecided

You wey i know for this forum no go fit write anything that lengthy cos you no fit read anything wey pass 2 paragraphs, na copy and paste you dey do, no lie tongue
. Lol
Re: The burning cold by freecocoa(f): 6:26pm On Sep 27, 2012
nikkyshyne: OMG freecocoa, I tot so too. Lol
My dear he can only f00l some people not someone like me that know him very well on here, i know better grin
Re: The burning cold by tpia5: 6:34pm On Sep 27, 2012
didnt read the write up but just wondering why it made front page.


does somebody have a crush on somebody?

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Re: The burning cold by Odinaka00(m): 6:35pm On Sep 27, 2012
[quote author=Sapphiredamsel]Too boring[/quote

Write yours na
Re: The burning cold by Odinaka00(m): 6:37pm On Sep 27, 2012
freecocoa: OP i didn't read your write up yet but from the few comments about it i know you didn't come up with it yourself.

So tell us where you dey copy am from, i guess you wait for 11:45 to update because that's the time the owner of the story gives you asses to it abi?undecided

You wey i know for this forum no go fit write anything that lengthy cos you no fit read anything wey pass 2 paragraphs, na copy and paste you dey do, no lie tongue

U̶̲̥̅̊ don finish dz guy o, walai
Re: The burning cold by Mynd44: 6:59pm On Sep 27, 2012
tpia@:
didnt read the write up but just wondering why it made front page.


does somebody have a crush on somebody?
Did you just say/type front page? OMG I will be charged for plagiarism.
Hahahahaha
Re: The burning cold by kariolality: 7:04pm On Sep 27, 2012
Who put this in the front Page=>Recycle Bin @Mods

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