Why not finish this up man? Pls be fast.

Mr oga where u dai na

Nice one @Op. I'm really feeling this.

nicey....buh work on your spellings, grammar.....had to read that whole gateman-greeting-dennis line thrice.
and ur tenses,try and stick wid ur present continuous.
PS-gud job so far,u already v me on suspense...mayb ann wud b a setup frm d boss

Op, U are doing very great. Keep it up,abeg we dey wait 4 U ooo

OP, are u for real? Is ann the gateman or the boss, cos i think am high now...this star is really takin a toll on me

lrguru: OP, are u for real? Is ann the gateman or the boss, cos i think am high now...this star is really takin a toll on me

when you become sober, it will make sense

Anyways, nice story so far, but u made it clear at the beginnin that its short, but up till now, i haven't read about where dennis abi pen*s touch madam bwest, or am i here to read just 12+ fairy tale nollywood cartoon with no fvck,

c'mon OP, u can do better.

peleson: Why not finish this up man? Pls be fast.

relax i will do that today...

lrguru: Anyways, nice story so far, but u made it clear at the beginnin that its short, but up till now, i haven't read about where dennis abi pen*s touch madam bwest, or am i here to read just 12+ fairy tale nollywood cartoon with no fvck,

c'mon OP, u can do better.

u knw this is nt a sexuality story, it's a romace story and i dn't want it to be to move sexuality, so the sex scene will be minimal and vague...

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Dannyxy: u knw this is nt a sexuality story, it's a romace story and i dn't want it to be to move sexuality, so the sex scene will be minimal and vague...

ok sir, but whatever it is, just make it snappy, cos i love sexuality and it really makes my day.

Just make it minimal or however u put it, k.

U try jor...

more cigar to ur table, cos u need all the inspirations u can get...

sarbest001: Nice one @Op. I'm really feeling this.

no be u i wan quote jor...

Dennis came out of the shower and was about to go to sleep, when his phone started ringing. he picked the phone, it was wale his friend calling, so he answered the call.. wale was calling to tell him that he was in town and that he should come to sofa lounge so they could hang out a little... dennis looked at the time, it was 8:00PM, he was not one to go out anyhow, but he needed to talk to wale urgently, and there was also no harm in having a little fun he thought, he would just go there, spend about an hour and come back, he thought to himself again as he dressed up... "i need to be going, thanks for the advice bro" dennis said as he stood up to leave... "nawa 4 u oh, you are too uptight man, will a little fun kill you?, you came here about 30min ago and you are rushing to leave, relax a little joor" wale told him... "i told you about my boss, that lady is a saddist, i can't afford to be late for work, na sack letter be dat" dennis replied... "who is that lady? Who does she think is? Why can't i get someone like that for a boss?" wale asked rhetorically... "omo guy, she is the daughter to the owner of the company, the daughter to the famous chief bassey ettim" dennis said... "oh, that fine girl, isn't she too young for that position, nawa 4 dis rich men oh" wale replied... "i thought so too, but she is my boss and i have to do my best to impress her, i am not ready to loose this job.. well, see you later bro" dennis said as he gave wale a handshake and left...

Guy, i am considering changing the "short story thing", this story will probably end on the tenth page, make una no vex..

u must finish dis story today o

folly65: u must finish dis story today o

you want ME to rush it?, i want to make it longer so you can understand the characters and the storyline.. Atmost by saturday i will finish it, and i will also try to update frequently, dn't worry..

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thanks

lrguru:

ok sir, but whatever it is, just make it snappy, cos i love sexuality and it really makes my day.

Just make it minimal or however u put it, k.

U try jor...

more cigar to ur table, cos u need all the inspirations u can get...

i no dey smoke, i prefer wine

folly65: u must finish dis story today o

even if u no finish am 2day just stil update some more....or make i even vex come read everytin on saturday....

why cnt u strt and finish once? why cnt u strt and finish once?

Keep it up.
I love Romance
But Dennis and fine girls sha. I hope his Oga won't fire him.

This story is so so tyt. My guy ride on but I hate suspense !!! Any way to motivate u to finish up this story? Pls lunch this story to its conclusion asap!!

This story is so so tyt. My guy ride on but I hate suspense !!! Any way to motivate u to finish up this story? Pls lunch this story to its conclusion asap!!!

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When dennis got home, he decided to watch the highlights of the champion league game been shown on t.v before going to bed, he had just put on the t.v when he heard a knock on the door... He reduced the volume of the t.v, look at the time, it was 10pm, "who is knocking my door by this time" he asked himself, he had not brought any friend to his place before, so he wondered... He went to the door, looked at the time again, then it occured to him to ask who was knocking... "Who is there?" he asked, but there was no answer, "who is there?" he asked again... "hy dennis, it's ann" the person finally replied... "ann?, ann who?, oh ann, ann" he said pretending not to know the person at first, why was she looking for him at this ungodly hour, he thought himself as he opened the door... "hello, can i come in" she said, and walked past him, without waiting for him to invite her in... "you can enter, but i see you have done that already" he looked at her as she walked past him, he wondered what she came to do in his house at this time of the night, the worst part, she was wearing a short transparent nightie, he could practically see her naked body from it... His hormones were raging, he had not had se*x for a long time, he had sworn to celibacy, but he found himself having an erection. Was this girl trying to seduce him, he asked himself, well she was not going to succeed... "so how can i help you?, ann, hope no problem?" he asked asked her... "there is no problem, i just came to find out if your tap is running, because mine is not, i want to know if it is a general problem, if not, so i would call the plumber tomorrow" she said staring him, damn, she has seductive eyes, dennis thought to himself... "i just came back, let me check" he said, he went to the kitchen, opened the tap, it wasn't running... "i think it is a general problem, mine is not running too" he told her... "the problem might be from the pipe outside, lets go and check it out, let's see if it is something we can fix, if not we might go to work tomorrow smelling" she said sarcastically while walking out... "haha, no problem, i am right behind you" he replied following her...

joephil17: why cnt u strt and finish once? why cnt u strt and finish once?

bro, i will try to update frequently dn't worry, i can't spend 24 hours writting a story, you know.

Blazinraj01: Keep it up.
I love Romance
But Dennis and fine girls sha. I hope his Oga won't fire him.

you are welcome

peleson: This story is so so tyt. My guy ride on but I hate suspense !!! Any way to motivate u to finish up this story? Pls lunch this story to its conclusion asap!!

i love suspense

Dannylux: following

thanks bro

bros continue now...

Following bumper to bumper.


Nice one Danny.