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Re: THE WEB by stuff46(m): 9:16am On Dec 10, 2014 |
ts woman eh, you never wan repent... dont worry candy go soon make make em nab you nice updates aunty candy na you get us |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 1:07pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy,you must be vanilla flavoured. Your story is way too sweet. Keep them coming. |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 1:14pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
"Good morning ma." Bolu greeted her mother-in-law on her knees. "Boluwatife, how are you my daughter? Mummy bolu, good morning ma." Dr Mrs Thomas greeted them as she ushered them into her palatable private sitting room. She had been helping with the therapy sessions free of charge and she was glad doing it. "Ekaaro ma. Thanks for your care ma, God will continue to bless you ma." Madam ty greeted in return. The sessions seemed to be yielding results at last. Dr Thomas had tried hypnosis during their last session and she made progress. She had to stop in order not to get forced information from her, one of the downsides of treating dissociative amnesia with Hypnosis. "So, how is Tobi?" She directed the question at madam ty. She was able to remember meeting Tobi and all about felele. The only hitch was remembering that she actually had twins and that Tobi was her son. "Tobi is fine, he's a good boy." She smiled. She had warmed up to Tobi's charms and she really was determined to remember giving birth to him. "Madam ty, like I told you earlier, you can't remember having Tobi. He was taken away from you by Mrs Seriki, at birth." Dr Thomas told her. Madam ty shook her head and sadly and said, "I took that woman like my sister, how could she have done that to me?" Dr Thomas held her hands in hers as she cried. The tears helped. Tobi and Bolu had taken her to Top one, even dressed her in the jeans and top she wore the day Ade proposed to her. So far, her progress was remarkable. On her score sheet, Dr Thomas rated her recovery sixty percent. "Madam ty, you are so lucky. You got your son back." She told her, "some people are not that lucky." She smiled through the tears and wiped her face with a kleenex. "I am lucky indeed." Bolu was not part of the session, she was in the kitchen helping the maid prepare lunch. Her phone rang, it was Tobi. "Hello, Tobiloba." She said playfully. "Bolu, how are you? Is my mother there?" He asked. He had never been happier in his life. He had even managed to start talking to Mrs Seriki. They were waiting for Madam ty to recover fully before meeting chief seriki officially. "Your mother is still having her session." "Hmmm...ok, I'll see you guys later...lest I forget, do you think bringing her to my office will help?" Bolu thought over Tobi's suggestion for some time, then she agreed. That was the only place they've not touched. Dr Thomas had suggested it earlier. Maybe even meeting Mrs Seriki wasn't a bad idea, she thought. "I'll discuss it with my mum in law." "Please do, sis. Talk to you later." They bade each other goodbye and they were both happy they could talk now without hating each other. All thanks to Dr Thomas and their mother's determination. *********************** 2 Likes |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 1:27pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
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Re: THE WEB by Uthman51(m): 1:48pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
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Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 1:58pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Uthman51 my bro, me no fit read your sign language na! |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 1:58pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
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Re: THE WEB by harjibolar10(m): 2:11pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Madam Candy!!!!! I'm lost in words, I don't know how to commend you anymore. Infact, you are a proffessional in this line, you are born to write thou. For sometimes now,(before Madam Ty was disorganised) I've been Contemplating on, may be madam TY has forgotten OGA EMMA or not, and may be you won't mention him again, Now, I'm flabbergasted on how you just introduced Oga Emma back to this story, I don't see it coming at all, I don't (for once) even think of it the ways you've come out to present oga Emma again. I can't wait to read the part where Mrs. Helen Seriki(the Hot tempered Oga, that's dating her own 'Sacked' employee's SON) and Pa Emmanuel Utomi(the gate keeper turn, THE DOCTOR'S FATHER) will meet once again ooo Sister Candyyyyyy!!!!, this story is so unpredictable, and you are A BomB(but not BH ooo) Ma'am, please let the great work continue.... I will follow you to the end of this story, even if it won't end in 20years to come.#wink Na your Back I dey gidigba Keep 'em Coming |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 2:31pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy,may your inspiration bank never run dry. Iseee! *pats her back softly with my royal sceptre* |
Re: THE WEB by sammyomotola: 2:40pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy caught me speechless Oga to feature again as big man not a old man O2tvseries is not better than u |
Re: THE WEB by Tobilastik(m): 4:33pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
it will be a sin if I refuse to comment on this great WORK!! miss/Mrs./mummy CANDY ....Nice work so far, ve been reading dz story since 9:30am ...more power to ur elbow! |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 4:33pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Guys, ur just reading na...no comments? Ok o, update coming after 30 comments lol. |
Re: THE WEB by Olaitan3784(f): 4:35pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Thumbs up 2 u candy,great story u've got |
Re: THE WEB by Calmdove(f): 4:44pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
candy:*lolzz God wil help us to finish it together,all thanks to candy for sharing with us dis interesting story* what a disgrace to mrs seriki 4 her dating oga emma son!! |
Re: THE WEB by bolajJP007: 5:15pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy, you are a world class storyteller. The twist and turns makes a story wonderful. It's so intriguing. Big up to you. Lots of love. |
Re: THE WEB by amiablejudy(f): 6:06pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Go Candy, Go Candy Go,'cheers on with smiles'.To say you are good is an understatement this is excellent o,magnificent o,insightful o and ooooooooo.Girl its a master piece and your consistency speaks volumes. Keep the great work on |
Re: THE WEB by harjibolar10(m): 6:10pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
candy: 30 kee!!! Come update jhoor |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 6:17pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy!!!, wow! I'm speechless, as in d twists in d story made me speechless. I so much luv it. Thanks 4 d updates. Keep it flowing. |
Re: THE WEB by xdunamis(m): 6:38pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Mrs seriki - this woman doesn't deserve to live till d end. Dr emma, maybe his part should be over in d story after bringing his dad. Temi is already lost, she need to find a way back in d story....just my thoughts though. Candy I must be sincere with you, 'The Web' is already a novel and i believe u shld work on publishing it. I'm honored, I mean, being able to read it here on nairaland without paying a dime. You are a great writer. |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 7:27pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
xdunamis:Thanks for your spirit lifting comment. I'm actually not killing any character, if not, mrs seriki for hear am lol. Trust me, Dr Emma's character was introduced for a reason. Purpose is almost served, then he fades. Temi still coming! Keep the comments coming, love u all. |
Re: THE WEB by sammyomotola: 7:29pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
xdunamis:That's what I told her, she is d best. |
Re: THE WEB by kingphilip(m): 7:37pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Jennimma:u No serious o |
Re: THE WEB by kingphilip(m): 7:40pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Wow candy always dishing candilicious updates since 1880 ride on dear will surely b here When u r done |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 7:51pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
kingphilip:O gini? |
Re: THE WEB by Rosytonia(f): 8:07pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Glad Madam Ty is getting beta. With the introduction of Pa Emma again, I hope she gets to meet him again as she always wished. Keep it coming Candy! More ink to ur pen. Am following religiously.... |
Re: THE WEB by Uthman51(m): 8:26pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
candy: It means well done ma'am |
Re: THE WEB by lenmafon: 8:29pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
thank you candy sweeti you are a born writer. hope you will publish this as a novel and hope u will pass this great talent to one of ur kids? cant wait to see helen cry out her eyes. |
Re: THE WEB by joliej(f): 9:05pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
Candy you're a prolific writer indeed. I love the twists and the unpredictive nature Of events . The suspence is scintillating. |
Re: THE WEB by QueenTolpatx(f): 9:17pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
candy: Hmmmm, candy u'v never let me down with the way the story always turn out............more ink 2 ur pen |
Re: THE WEB by yinksaid(m): 10:03pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
when you think u have an idea of where this story is playing to, another twist jst pump up into another direction with more suspense. I must see d end of this story... |
Re: THE WEB by MoriYanu(m): 10:29pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
nice update! can't wait to know the end of Mrs seriki oniranu! |
Re: THE WEB by Nobody: 10:55pm On Dec 10, 2014 |
it will be very bad and selfish of me if I don't drop dis comment today today. Cos I've been following this awesome piece for close to a month now FREE OF CHARGE...and I've never been disappointed. You're a prolific writer candy! the twist and turns are just in the right places.. Your last post ended with a mind blowing suspense dat no one could've written better! mehnnn tiri gbosa for you!!!! may ur ink and source of inspiration never run dry amen! 1 Like |
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