Pls more comments before I'll continue.....pls guys don't make me ask nah.....haba. Just say something

nice one

A very nice story u v got hia

The story is on point BT we re already running out of patience. Finish your story abeg. Many people will loose interest if the story continues on a slow pace like this.

Hope Derek won't b their next target sha......So how come,who poisoned Mansa's food?

Hennyhorlah:
Hope Derek won't b their next target sha......So how come,who poisoned Mansa's food?

I hope so too.....but I'm suspecting someone shaaaa

Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 8


Derek had walked in on their conversation.

His mother quickly attempted to change the subject.

“Derek, Rita and I were just wondering who could be behind the food poisoning.” Mrs Bernard said.

Even though Derek wasn’t very sure what he heard, he knew his mom was lying.

“I will be in my room” Derek said and left them.

Mrs Bernard and Rita didn’t trust Derek.
They needed to be sure that he did not suspect anything.

“Do you think he heard everything? Rita asked.

“I can’t be too sure sure about that” answered Mrs Bernard Rita blamed her “You should have made us meet
some place other than your house…

Now, look what’s happening.” She said
“I thought he had gone out. But don’t worry, leave it to me.

He is my son, I know how to deal with him”

Mrs Bernard assured her.

“You better take care of it” Rita said.

“That reminds me… We need to be very careful with that Obed guy, I know he’s watching us from a distance.” Mrs Bernard said.

“Who is he, really?
The man is very weird, I have
never felt comfortable around him.” Rita said.

“I will try and find out where he lives when Mansa comes.” Mrs Bernard replied.

Just then, there was a knock at the door.
It was one of the church’s elders.

The ladies had to reschedule their meeting. Rita quickly departed leaving Mrs Bernard with the church elder.

Mrs Bernard was not pleased with the Elder’s visit.

She knew it had to do with the church’s money.

She welcomed him nicely and made him feel comfortable. Then she subtly enquired about his mission.

“Well my mission is simple, yet needs to be addressed. Over the last couple of months, we have noticed that there has been huge withdrawals from the church’s account.

Per our records, those withdrawals were made by you without consultation with the financial secretary.

Mrs Bernard, we need to discuss this issue before it comes to the notice of the board.” said the Elder.

You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 8

“Elder, so this is why you came all the way here. You could have just called me rather than go through all the trouble.

Anyway, it’s good that you’ve prompted
me though.

You see, before my husband died, may
his soul rest in peace, there was this church project he was building that he kept away from you.

He intended to surprise the congregation at the church’s
forthcoming 40th anniversary.

As his wife, I need to continue what he couldn’t finish.

Those withdrawals were made to support that project Elder.” Mrs
Bernard attempted to explain herself
“But madam, such things should be done at your own expense.

As far as I am concerned, the church has finished undertaking all of its developmental projects” The elder responded.

“Elder, I just told you it was meat as a surprise. At the right time, you will know what I’m talking about.

Would you please excuse me” Mrs Bernard said and went into her room.

After a while she came back with a white envelope containing money.

“Elder, I really appreciate your efforts and concern about this issue. Not all men can be this gracious.

Kindly take this as a token from me” Mrs Bernard said stretching out the money to him.

“Mrs. Bernard I’m afraid i can’t take this, the board needs to come in on this matter.” The Elder insisted.

“Of course the board will know. Who said anything about keeping it a secret?
This is just not the right time to involve them. You can’t reject N100,000
from me.

Just use for your transportation and
upkeep. I’m very much aware you need it ” said Mrs Bernard.

The Elder took the money and said
“Thank you. I will see what I can do to keep this away from the board for now.

I must take my leave ”
He shook hands with Mrs Bernard and went away.

She knew she had succeeded in shutting him up.

You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 8

Mansa and Mrs Lokko were still catching up.

Mansa was struggling to come to terms with the revelation that Rev. Bernard was actually her biological father.

“But mum, why didn’t he tell me all this when he adopted me?” Mansa asked.

“You still don’t get it my daughter, he was protecting you from his wife, Mansa.

You really don’t know what she is capable of.” Mrs Lokko said.

“It’s a lot to take in… It all feels like a dream. You’re actually my mother and I have been under my Father’s care all this while without knowing it” Mansa
said.

She couldn’t control the tears in her eyes. She was now beginning to accept the reality.

“Mansa, I thought Obed was with you, where is he?

Mrs Lokko asked.
” I thought I was meeting him here myself” Mansa answered.

Mrs Lokko sighed and said “Obed has revealed many things to me in the last few months.

Mansa..., there is more to your father’s death than you already know.”

“What is it that I don’t know mother? Tell Me” Mansa desperately asked.

“Who is Rita?
Mrs Lokko asked.

To be continued

At least 10 more comments before the next episode....lets discuss the story so far.

@ PanelB and Helical, don't just read, pls I need your comments

seedgreen:
@ PanelB and Helical, don't just read, pls I need your comments

you caught me on this one,though its PamelB but thanks for the mention. Your story is great and I'm still trying to believe the twists that's coming up in it. Keep it up

PamelB:
you caught me on this one,though its PamelB but thanks for the mention. Your story is great and I'm still trying to believe the twists that's coming up in it. Keep it up

thanks Dear.

Waiting for ur comments too @Queency11

seedgreen:
thanks Dear.

uwc.

Wow! Wow!
It seems Rita killed reverend
Hefelove my sweetheart come and see this wonderful piece

Rukkydelta:
Wow! Wow!

It seems Rita killed reverend

Hefelove my sweetheart come and see this wonderful piece

D film sweet ni make I dey watch sha


This film make sense sha and I think obed is the father he came back to fix things up. Just like that Mexican film Second Chance. Obed na Salvador.

please we need the rest of the story.you did à nice job

I'll continue but I need more people to comment.

Dat foolish woman killed her husband. Dem go kan reach church dey do like say na dem holy pass also with d useless usher too awon weyre

PLEASE FINISH THE STORY OH,GOT GOOSE PIMPLES ALL OVER MY BODY......

Op your making us lose interest jare....which kin comment you won't ....mk everybody way de for nairaland comment??..

Its when you finish the story you'll receive comment till your head swell and burst...please o come and update na...

Which one be you update one you look for 100 comments ...haba...I don vex

U doing a good job seedgreen, pls keep d story rolling in. Tnx

sashishalom:
Op your making us lose interest jare....which kin comment you won't ....mk everybody way de for nairaland comment??..

Its when you finish the story you'll receive comment till your head swell and burst...please o come and update na...

Which one be you update one you look for 100 comments ...haba...I don vex

lol.....no vex abeg.....I won't wait until the end ooooo. I need to know if I'm on point. Areas where I need to improve etc. I don't think asking for that is too much considering the efforts im putting. No vex again

seedgreen:
lol.....no vex abeg.....I won't wait until the end ooooo. I need to know if I'm on point. Areas where I need to improve etc. I don't think asking for that is too much considering the efforts im putting. No vex again

I noticed 2things
1) U post same update twice
2) If u are to d mention d name A u'll mention B instead

but nothing spoil sha

hefelove:


I noticed 2things
1) U post same update twice
2) If u are to d mention d name A u'll mention B instead

but nothing spoil sha

thanks bro. I'm ready with the next update now. Can I post it now or later this evening ?

Tears of A Bleeding Heart –
Season II Episode 9


“Who is Rita?
She is the main pivot in all of this”
Mrs Lokko... said.

“I don’t understand Mum. Rita is an usher at our church and she is very committed to her work,”

Mansa said.

“You won’t understand my daughter. Don’t worry, the
time will come and all will be revealed. For now, I’m
just happy my daughter has finally returned to me.
Look, let me take you home and show you around”
Mrs Lokko said.
They got ready and left the office.
Chris, on the other hand, had found a buyer for his
merchandise. He was required to supply N8,000,000
worth of drugs. That was higher than usual.
But he was up for it. He agreed to meet the person
to seal the deal. He was going to deliver the goods,
get his money and eventually pay Alice off.
He left Alice’s and went home to get ready for the
rendezvous.
He wasn’t aware Derek had been released.
Chris got a phone call just as he got home. It was
from the police headquarters where Derek was
supposed to have been held.
On Phone:
CID: “Mr Chris, Good day. ”
Chris: “Yeah, Good day, how may I help you?”
CID: “I just called to inform you that your brother
Derek was released this morning.”
Chris: “What! How could you do that? Who authorized
the release?”
CID: “We found no evidence against him. Besides,
the victim has not testified or made any formal
report.”
Chris: “No! no! you can’t let a criminal to be walking
around like that. What about the phone lines that
were cut, was that not enough?”
CID: “We are going to look into it but until then, he is
not our primary suspect. I will let keep you posted.
Bye.”
The CID hung up on him.
You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 9
Chris was not happy with this news. Apparently, he
was the one who made the police report and got
Derek arrested.
“I see you are not happy about my release, Chris. So
you actually made the report for me to be arrested,”
Derek said. He was standing at the door to his room.
Chris hadn’t noticed he was there listening to his
conversation.
Chris was surprised to see him. He knew he couldn’t
cover up anymore.
“What were you thinking of, Derek? You were
supposed to meet her and tell her your feelings, not
rape her!” Chris said.
“How could you, Chris? Despite all I’ve done for you?
Tell me, that handkerchief you gave me, was it really
from Mansa? And who was behind the phone lines
being cut off? I know I didn’t do that. Chris, did you
frame me up? Derek asked.
“You can think whatever you wanna think. I wonder
how Mansa will feel when she finds out you were the
one who put her into this mess. She didn’t believe
me when I told her you did it but she definitely will
find out soon enough.” Chris said and walked out on
him.
Derek was shocked. How could his own brother do
such a thing, considering all he had done for him in
the past.
However, what he was more concerned about was
how Mansa would take it when he confessed to her.
Mrs Bernard came out of her room when she heard
Chris’s voice. She looked like she was going out.
“I thought I heard Chris’s voice,” Mrs Bernard said.
“He is in his room” Derek answered with a bitter
tone. That was unusual of him. His mother noticed it.
“What is wrong with you boy?” she asked.
“Nothing” Derek answered with a straight face.
“Why are you giving me attitude young man?
Remember I am still you mother. I demand some
respect!” Mrs Bernard said.
Derek ignored her. He kept mute and just stared at
her as she talked.
From his actions, Mrs Bernard could tell that Derek
had really heard something from her conversation
with Rita earlier on. She wasn’t sure what exactly he’d
heard and now wasn’t the time to pursue it.
“Anyway, I’m going for a meeting. I will see you
when I get back” Mrs Bernard said.
“Should I drive you? Derek asked since he was the
one who usually did that when he was around, even
though they had a family driver.
“No, you need some rest. The driver will take me”
she said and left.
Derek instantly knew that she was up to something
and he intended to find out what. He quickly came
up with a plan.
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Mrs Lokko and Mansa had arrived at her house. The
house was so huge that you could easily miss your
way around.
The compound was large and had a lot of cars.
Indeed, Mrs Lokko was a very wealthy woman.
From the look on Mansa’s face, Mrs Lokko could tell
that she was amazed at what she saw. She smiled…
“Mansa, welcome to your home. This my house and
as a matter of fact, your house. All I have belongs to
you. God blessed me with all these after I ventured
into exportation of our home-made goods. Mansa
my daughter, I have built all this wealth for you to
take over some day” Mrs Bernard said
“Wow! That’s impressive. I am just happy to have
found you, mother. ” Mansa said
“Listen my daughter, nobody needs to know who you
are or even know of my existence. You will go back
and anytime you need something, just call me” Mrs
Lokko said.
“But why mother?” Mansa asked. She didn’t
understand what was going on. She had just found
her biological mother and she wanted to shout it out
on the rooftop.
“The more you know, the more I put you at risk.
Trust me, the right time will come” Mrs Lokko said.
You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 9
Meanwhile, Chris was getting ready to for his
rendezvous. He had agreed to meet with the buyer
within the next hour.
He dressed up and left the house without telling
anyone.
He arrived the meeting point 10 minutes early. No
one was in sight. It was an uncompleted building in
an isolated place… Secure enough for the kind of
business he had come to transact.
The time they had set for the meeting finally
came and the buyer still hadn’t arrived. Chris tried
calling his number but the phone was switched off.
He was getting uncomfortable. After a few minutes,
he heard footsteps approaching him.
He thought it was the buyer. He turned around and
to his amazement, there was Obed.
Before he could open his mouth to talk, a bunch of
policemen started coming out from their hideout.
Chris had been ambushed and now he was
surrounded.

To be continued…

seedgreen:
thanks bro. I'm ready with the next update now. Can I post it now or later this evening ?

go ahead na before some people will eat u raw here cos d story too sweet

nice job bro and I also think u should put some like ********************** before u start anoda scene

I no be writer o but it's what I noticed in other writers here on nairaland

Ride on bro... Am enjoying this

This story is very interesting, OP you be conform writer, more grease/vaseline to your elbow



This obed guy na Jagaban sha, see as d guy dey disappear like say im be ghost

Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 10

Before he could open his mouth to talk, a bunch of policemen started coming out from their hideout.

Chris had been ambushed and now he was surrounded.

“Obed, what’s the meaning of this? Chris asked.

“The law is just taking its course” Obed answered.

Chris was handcuffed, after they had retrieved the illegal drugs in his possession.

It was going to be very difficult for him to defend himself this time around… He had been caught right in the act.

They placed him under arrest and led him away, taking the illegal drugs as an evidence.

You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 10

Mrs Bernard was meeting with Rita at a restaurant out of town. A place where no one could find or trace them.

They both agreed they needed to be extremely careful and discreet now.

Rita got there first. She was upset that she had to wait a while before Mrs Bernard finally showed up.

“What took you so long? Rita snapped.
The relationship between the two women had gradually changed, ever since they became partners in crime.

Rita had virtually lost all the respect she had for Mrs Bernard.

“Sorry, Derek was a tough nut to crack” Mrs Bernard said.

“Do you think he knows anything? Rita asked.

“I can’t be too sure. Truth is I don’t trust him, but I know what to do. ” Mrs Bernard assured her.

“Ermmm, don’t you think this it’s high time you told him about me? He still has not noticed me… He just sees me like any other member of the church.” Rita asked.

“Not yet. You know I always keep my promise so trust me when I say I have a plan. He is my son. I know him very well, so don’t worry.” Mrs Bernard
said.

Apparently, Mrs Bernard had promised Rita that apart from her being paid for her services, she was going to make sure Derek married her.

Rita had been in love with Derek right from the time he returned from the US with Chris.

She had tried everything in her power to get noticed by him but Derek just never looked in her direction.

This was actually one of the reasons Rita was helping Mrs Bernard out with her schemes, aside the money she was earning.

“Mrs Bernard, May I ask you a question? Rita ventured.

” Sure, go ahead” Mrs Bernard said.
“At least you know why I’m helping you out, you know my intentions and everything.

But I don’t understand where you’re coming from. Why are you doing all these things? ” Rita asked.

Mrs Bernard was upset ” Young girl, don’t forget your boundaries!

You do what you are paid to do.

I do not expect you to ask questions….. ” She was interrupted by a phone call from an unknown number.

It was the police.
They were calling to inform her about Chris’ arrest.

She had to postpone all other matters to go attend to her son Chris.

It was amazing how Mrs Bernard handled this issue.

Derek was arrested right in her presence but she somehow never got round to visit him in jail until he was let out.

But with Chris, she immediately stopped what she was doing to go to the police station.

Chris had always been her favorite.

She has always treated him specially and seemingly preffered him over Derek.

You are Reading: Tears of A Bleeding
Heart – Season II Episode 10

Mansa on the other hand was returning from her new-found mother’s house.

Mrs Lokko had strictly warned Mansa not to reveal what she knew about
herself and her mother’s existence to anyone.

Mansa felt complete. For the very first time in a long while, she was happy.

She was happy that Derek and Chris are actually her siblings.

She was however worried about Obed. He was no where to be found.

She thought of him and the support had had given her in her time of need.

“What would have happened if Obed never came in her life?” She wondered.

She certainly would have remained in darkness.

She decided to go look for Obed.

She thought to go back to the house where Obed and herself had been
staying before her miscarriage.

She found it very difficult locating the place but after several hours of looking, she was successful.

To her surprise, there was a gate man at the place.

“Wow, Obed finally decided to get a gate man” She said to herself as she approached the house.

She was taken aback by the way the gate man welcomed her when he saw her. He acted like he knew her.

“Madam, welcome” said the gateman, all smiles.

“Thank you. I’m looking for your boss” Mansa said.

“I don’t understand you madam, you are my boss na.” said the gate man.

” You are very funny.” Mansa replied, waving him off.

“Please I’m looking for Obed, the man who lives here” She said.

The gate man looked confused…

“Madam, I am the only one that lives here oo. I lived here alone for the past three years until you showed up two weeks ago” the gate man said.

“How come I didn’t see you when I came? She asked.

“I had travelled to see my family in the North when you came. My son was very ill. That’s why you didn’t see me.

Your mother called me while I was away to tell me you were coming.

I came back three days after you arrived but I was instructed not to disturb
you so I stayed away from the main house.”

The gate man said.

” So you mean you were all along in this house and I never set my eyes on you? Mansa asked.

She was bewildered.

“Yes madam! Myself, I was surprised that you stayed indoors all that time”

The gate man replied.

“Anyway, the man I came here with, he is the one am looking for” Mansa asked again.

“Madam, you came here with someone? I didn’t see anybody oo” The gateman said.

Mansa found the situation very strange but again, the gate man was smelling of alcohol so Mansa didn’t take him seriously.

She just concluded he was drunk.

To be continued…

I don talk am say Obed na the Rev Father wich is Mansa''s parle. And I also suspected Rita at the hospital when he called Mrs Bernard that Mansa and Derek wer in the hospital wen they came to see Elvis wen he had accident. na their I dey suspect say she dey jealous

hefelove:
I don talk am say Obed na the Rev Father wich is Mansa''s parle. And I also suspected Rita at the hospital when he called Mrs Bernard that Mansa and Derek wer in the hospital wen they came to see Elvis wen he had accident. na their I dey suspect say she dey jealous

u r thoroughly following this story