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CHAPTER 28


today makes it complete six weeks I was adopted and held in captivity. i haven't taken my bath neither have I had a change of clothes. osarenwienda always report to duty everyday to tell me how slowly and painfully my death was going to be. I have cried a river of tears but nothing changed,I have prayed but it looked like heavens shut their doors against me. the pain and torment was too much that I was giving up and was praying for God to console my mum if anything should happen to me at anytime and for him to keep Sarah a live for me. but in life never give up and never doubts God's ability to answer prayers. just when I was about giving up something happen and confusion set in. at first i thought i was going to be violated but god use it as a stepping stone to make name for him self.

itsegy and his gang member who happens to be the gang leader were sitting inside the room where I was kept gambling and smoking away their life. from the look of things the gang leader was losing money. while itsegy was happy making all manner of noise. I was sitted and singing sorrowful song about my life and its journey to it present situation.

********some of the lyrics of my song*************

where will I go
what will i do
when the world seems to be against me.
who will I tell
who will know how I feel
when everything seems hopeless for me.

I was deep into my song when the gang leader screamed at me. will you shut up you bitc**h,do you think here is a church. he left his sit and walked towards me with this mean look. he came to where i sat and squat in front of me and smiled. I knew something dirty was going his mind because of the way he smiled at me. he held my shirt and tore it exposing my youthful and beautiful but body.

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CHAPTER 29

i wanted so much to scream but my throat was dried. Tears had long stopped flowing my eyes as they had shielded so much so they are tired of shielding more. Even the strength to fight him off was no longer there. I was just empty and defenceless left at his mercy. He pushed me and I falled hard to the ground as I watched him make a move to get on top of me. For me I wasn't shocked cause I had already surrendered to anything fate had in store for me here. So rape was least of my worries now.

ME: please stop this. Am sorry if I was disturbing you with my song.
GANGLEADER: no! I like that you are having fun.Why cant I join you and have fun.(pulled his shirt & made to come to me)
ME: (now crying even though tears refused coming out) please don't do this to me, I beg you in the name of God.
ITSEZGY: ( just when he was almost unto me, itsezgy became my saving grace. Held his arm and pulled him back.) Capoo I sure say madam no go like wethin you wan do now.
GANGLEADER: (turned to him angrily) and who you come be to tell me wetin madam go like and wetin she no go like. Come oo!! Na because me and you Don dey shine teeth you no come know how to pay your ASALAM MALECU
ITSEZGY: Capoo no be like that.
GANGLEADER: then na like how. Before I close my eyes open am, you don disappear from this bunk.

He hesitated then slowly walked out. The gang leader came unto me and held me Down to the ground and tried to put his smelling mouth and lips on mine. I throw away my face and dodged his blackened lips. With a little strength I had I tried fighting him off and screaming on top of my voices.
ME : please stop this. I beg you in the names of everything you hold dear.
GANG LEADER: (let out a wicked type of laughter ) shut up,This small ashawo . I go Bleep this your fine toto today tire. He held the button of my trouser and pulled hard on it tearing them away with my trouser. I held the shred of my clothing to my body still trying to cover it. He kept pulling away the shreds from my body. I screamed and screamed but it fell on deaf ears. I pleaded and pleaded but her didnt pay any of my p
lead any attention. Just when my strength was giving way and he was almost having his way on me. ITSEZGY walked in with a kind of boldness And alacrity I had never seen in him before now. He pulled him of me with this mean look in his eyes.

ITSEZGY: capoo i no gree for this thing you wan do now cha chaa.
GANGLEADER: ( with and utmost surprise) wetin you do now now. You dey craze.
He punched his face and a tremble fight ensued. Immediately a little strength came again, I picked up my shreds of clothes that I could find and quietly open the door and ran out leaving the poor fools to fight till their heartfelt. I was outside but all I could see was bushes around me. The place I was held was no doubt an abandone warehouse. Without thinking I ran off not knowing where I was running to. All I wanted was to escape this captivity. To be a free person again. I ran and ran, even though my leg were weak and my strength was giving way. I had to push on. I had bearly ran a few kilometers away from my captor when like magic my strength gave way. I felled to the ground and started breathing fast. My eyes were dimming I tried to get up but it seem my leg were no long part of my body.was this diabolical was God trying to punish me for departing from the way I was brought up . I started crying again praying to God to have pity on this sinfully soul of my and save me. I had bearly finished the prayer when the once Sarah's car the one I was kidnapped in came driving in from a distance i knew it was either OSARENWEINDA or the other gangmember who left earlier to God knows where . I tried to get up and run into the Bush but my legs refused to carry me. I finally let out a prayer of frustration. Oh God if you can't forgive and save me this one time please take away my life. Am too tired to go back there and be tormented like this again let along continue living like this. I cried and cried as I watched the car approach to were I was. Please have mercy on poor me, see my suffering and take away my life now. I laid flat on the ground closed my eye cried and was waiting for my wishes to come through I no longer cared about anything, I was ready for the worst .I was still in my expectation of an answered prayer when the car came to my spot and applied an automatic brake and came to halt. My worst fear came through.

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CHAPTER 30

I was right it was been driven by OSARENWEINDA carrying the gang members.

OSARENWEINDA: ( She was surprised when she saw me as She walked up to were I laid) So you tink you can run away from me bit*ch.Where were this fool when this happened. Take her to the car she baked at the other gang members with her.
ME: (I continued crying )please OSARENWEINDA have mercy on me. Or just kill me now. I can't go on like this.
OSARENWEINDA: (let out the most wicked type of laughter I have ever heard) so you are now ready to leave fancy and take the easy way out. Nah death is a luxury I can't allow you to enjoy now. Take her back to the car.
ME: please have on poor me.!!
OSARENWEINDA: i warned gently to leave fancy but you refused and formed hard nut to crack, your friend even fought me,My brother took you side. Now where are they now to save you from my wrath. And by the way where are all those you hard talks"he would never love you the way he loved me huh.!!" I guess you can't talk bold again right. Stupid bit*ch (she baked) move it!!.

God works in a mysterious way. He answer prayer when you think all hope is gone and you have no one to turn to. He proved himself in my case again. I had lot my faith and any hope of making anything out of this life all I wanted was to give and die.
I was being dragged to the car when something terrific happened to me. I was about being thrown into the car when we heard voices. Freeze!!! Put your hands over your heads. And stand right where you are. Any funny movement you are down. I turned and waves of joy wash me ashore. I couldn't believe who I saw. Victor was standing in front. But I didn't see him like the victor who was wooing me but as a God and a messiah. The guys holding me left my hands and raised theirs to the air. I raced over to where victor stood and almost collapsed on him in attempt to embrace him. He caught me,removed his jacket and put it on my much exposed body then held me close to himself in an embrace. I lean my head on his shoulder as hot tears kept following forming from my eyes.

OSARENWEINDA: (walked up boldly to where the police men stood without even bothering to raise her hands) who are you guys and what are you doing here. Do you know this is a private property and as such I can charge you for trespassing.
POLICE MAN: ( pulled an I'D card from from his pocket ) am dectative Collins and you are under arrest for attempted murder, kidnapping and unlawful holding. You are advised to remain silent cause anything you do or say would be you against you In a law court.
OSARENWEINDA: ( pulled out her phone) this is bull shirt. I need to talk to my lawyer.

The police man took the phone away from her and cuffed her. One of the gang member tried to take off and run but was shot instantly. They cuffed the rest and moved them into the police van. I Joined victor in his as we drove to where I was held in captivity. It was traumatic for me going back there. ME: ( leaned my head on the the head rest in the car) what of Sarah.where is she.
VICTOR: she was shot.
ME: (turned with this sharp worried look on my face) oh my God. Where is she, how is is she, oh my God. Take me to here this minute.
VICTOR: ( put his other hand on my) relax she is getting better now. No need to get worked up. You have been through a lot in the past 3 months you have to cool down so not to have any mental, physiological or medical break down.

ME: ( relaxed a bit and spoke with a shaky weak voice) how did you find me.
VICTOR: ( let out a little smile) before I gave Sarah that car I had a car tracking device installed on it. I knew my sister like bit*ching around so I did it to watch her every move. when they called me about Sarah being shot. At first I thought it was robbers. So I started tracking the car to this location but after some days it disappeared on the raider. So I had no way to find you until Sarah woke up a few weeks ago to tell me everything that was going on. So I started watching osarenweinda closely, watching her every moves.

The police car came to an instant Halt and we stop right behind them. They signal us to remain right in the car. As they moved into the building in a full fronted assault. In a minute they were out carrying too bodies. We came down from the car. It was ITSEZGY and his gang leader. the police told us that they were both dead when they saw them. The place was scattered so they' might as well both committed homicide on each other. I was touched when I saw ITSEZGY. Truth be told he was dead now because of me, Just to protect me. I moved to where he laid squatted in front of him and whispered thank you. I knew the victor might have been surprise by my action and the police might think I was losing it, but i didn't care. ITSEZGY was my saviour in his own little way. I learned to like him even though I never under stood why a gentle and kind guy like him would be part of this ruthless gang of cultists.I got up as we got to leave this God forsaken place. Then Something bad happened.
I never knew why I was drawn to bad things and ill luck since I was a child. Anytime something good happens to me, another bad one comes up to spoil all the other good ones.
We were heading to the car when osarenweinda pulled a pistol from a police man's side. We were all startled so tried to negotiate with her. If I cant have have fancy no one would, Not even her. She shot at me and I fell. The little blood I had left in my body started rushing out. Instantly she was shot by the police men to avoid more homicides. Victor race over to where I laid And lifted me as he started racing over to his car with me in his hands. You could see traces of tears in his eyes no not you again. I looked up and saw his face. I could now see how much he loves me now. With my bloody shaky hand I touched his face. He dropped me on the passager side and screeched off on a full speed. I had already lost a lot of blood and was getting weak, my eyes were dimming, I could see my end near. I began thinking of my mum, crazy friend Sarah and all the crazy stuff we did and thing I never got to try. I turned my eyes and looked at Victor and felt sorry for him loving a complex girl like me.
ME: (with the last strength I had) thank you for all you have done for me and for caring for a poor girl like me.
VICTOR: ( turned to me,the tears in his eyes were now so visible) Thank me when you are well. For now stop talking and save your strength, you would need all of it
ME: (i could see my end near and could hear voices in my head so with a shaky and weaker voice) am too tiered, I don't think I would make it. Please thank Sarah for me. Tell her I love her so much.
VICTOR: ( held one of my hand with his. now tears was dropping from his eyes.I never seen any grown up cry like that in my who life ) shii, don't say that. You are gonna make it and you go back to school and you will see Sarah and tell her how much you love her.

I was blacking out but I could still hear his voice finally I lost it and became unconscious of all around me. I wasn't part of this world again as I breath my last.

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CHAPTER 31

I couldn't see clearly. My head aches like someone who has had the worst hangover. I gradually blinked my eyes. At first I thought I was in corridor of after life . I saw two people wearing white I couldn't make out who they were cause of my dizziness and shallow sight.they were talking but it sounded like they were whispering cause I couldn't her a thing and their voice were sounding as if they were far away in my head . I could hear the beeping of a machine, An oxygen mask was attached to my nose, a wire-like thread to my hand.Then it done on me that I wasn't in heaven and they weren't angels but health practitioners. One of them left leaving one behind who was touching me and doing I don't what on me and writing it down . I tried to move in attempt to remove the oxygen mask, I felt a Sharp pain by my side then I Groaned which attracted the attention of the nurse who had being touching me.

NURSE: (smiled) ooh you are awake, thank God. Let me call the doctor I would be back in few seconds.

She left I once again tried to get up but the pain was unbearable. What was happening to me. Have I become bedridden for life, I started remembering how I came to be here today. Tears started flowing from my eyes. If I couldn't walk again for life then what good was I been alive. My mum had suffered enough already so being a liability to her all my life was something I wouldn't want. I was in the mist of my thoughts when the nurse came back. She saw the tears in my eyes, she left her book on a small bed side stool near my bed.

NURSE: (held me in her arms) dear what is the problem. Why are you crying.
ME: (in a little shaky voice)what happened to me. Why can't I get up.
NURSE: you were rushed here unconscious. Some one shot you. You have been in coma for the past two weeks. We almost lost you cause you lost a lot of blood. You been here is a miracle, not everyone who lost the kind of blood you did lived to hear the story of what happened to them.so you should be thanking God not crying (pulled a handkerchief from her gown and wiped my face)
ME: (looked at her Face with more tears running down my face) would I walk again.
NURSE: ( she smiled) the bullet almost hit you spinal cord but stop just two meters to it.you were really Lucky so you definitely walk again. So wipe your tears I wouldn't want the doctor to walk in here and see this tears. He won't be happy about it.

Almost immediately the doctor came, I was surprised how such a handsome young guy who had Dreid lock on his hair could be the doctor. He was too young, and stylish for a doctor.
DOCTOR: (he smiled as he walked up to me) Good afternoon miss. You finally woke up. Thank God. How are you feeling
ME: (placed one palm on my forehead) I feel a server headache, am weak and dizzy.
DOCTOR: it is expected.you are a strong lady who went through a lot to keel the life she is having right now. (He took the nurse note and started writing while still talking to me) Anyway I would recommend you to some drugs be brought to you. If you relax and have a good bed rest you might be leaving here before the month runs out.

He gave the nurse back the not. Get her some aspin for the headache and when the drip is done start giving her this drugs every five hours. He left and she nurse looked at me and smiled before going to get me my aspin. I was feeling too dizzy so I slept off before she came back.
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Fancy: I can no longer be with you. Ever since I met you it been one trouble or the other.
ME: ( tears rolled down my face) Francis place please don't do this to me. Look at all I have been through but I don't regret meeting you because I love you.
FANCY: you love who?. don't ever love me. Your love brings nothing but bad luck. I can hardly get my song on the chart because I met you, Osarenweinda is dead today because I met you. My life have become miserable because I met you so don't ever let me hear you say you love me never again. Why am I even here talking to you.

He started walking out of the room. I went down on my knees, held one of his leg with tears overflowing from my eyes.
Please don't do this to me. I don't have a life without you in it. He forced his leg off my hold and started walking out. I wept and wept until someone touched me then I woke from my sleep and saw him sitting on the bed by my side.

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