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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by tommynico(m): 8:32am On Feb 25, 2017
.*clears throat* ehm....mrs chumzy, i just want to make a note about this magnificent piece you'v got going and believe me when i say i really appreciate all the effort you put at seeing it complete and perfect. You see, i'm a silent observer and as such a ghost reader, i don't say much except when required so pls, for every next time that i would be seeing your name appear on this thread it must be with an episode or update of the story; you can call me greedy or selfish, it still doesn't matter to me as long as i get what i want....so here's the deal, you get to update at least 3 times a day, long updates. I knw it won't be easy but i trust u can find a way around the twist, after this you get a pay rise, you can see it's a win-win for the both of us...thank's ma'am, am ur biggest fan. You can go back to your office nw, tnx...............


Na play i dey play oo mama chumzypinky b4 ur e-fighters go cum scatter me...u too much. grin

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Re: Red Ashes by VeeGeeCee(f): 8:34am On Feb 25, 2017
grin
when will dis KAINENE ever learn? Why is she pretending or will i say forming?
She just keeps hurting NATHAN the more sha..
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:48am On Feb 25, 2017
@chumzypinky, there is nothing like a naturally born dada but you can have natural locs. Your hair turn to locs when you do not comb it. Babies who have dada do because either their scalp is too sensitive for combing or their carer do not comb their hair.

I think you should edit that sentence on the first page. Great work!

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Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 8:56am On Feb 25, 2017
You need to make some research first before you conclude. Ladies who are affected have deeper issues. Also, it is not peculiar to women alone. There are men in similar relationships.


xaviercasmir:
thats why some men treats ladies like a trash. Upon all the sign that shows that he does not love you as much as you do. You still say that you love him. when he sees the one he truly love,he will leave as asap.
NICE WORK AND KEEP IT UP
Re: Red Ashes by yettielicious(f): 9:19am On Feb 25, 2017
congratulations chumzypinky for the front page..... nice story u got here
Re: Red Ashes by tboy194(m): 9:26am On Feb 25, 2017
How I wish the eBook of this story is available, I would have save myself this suspense. I swear I done taya. E be like say make aunty chumzy dey update every 5mins
Re: Red Ashes by Shittaakeem(m): 9:27am On Feb 25, 2017
mummy chumzy I want at least 3 long updates a day. PS your story is on FP again. Pls improve on your updates. I know its not easy.
Thanks
Re: Red Ashes by charytea(f): 9:28am On Feb 25, 2017
I think Nene has the right to be vêxed. After all Nathan said to her? Of course i will do same considering the fact that he told her hE was in another relationship.. Even after she went to him, he still diđnt đeêm it fit to forgive her. Let him go abeg...
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 9:31am On Feb 25, 2017
Finally ur story hit FP.. congratulation tew u chumzypinky... cc: angelinastto, babsopey, obimgbo, donkross, rachealfst, yungtemy
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 9:33am On Feb 25, 2017
Lankyannie i mentioned u in one story nd u ignored it... no pee
Re: Red Ashes by sexy377: 10:05am On Feb 25, 2017
front page tins o i joined nairaland cos of dis story great work
Re: Red Ashes by gracienekky: 10:35am On Feb 25, 2017
loving this...more update, ma'am. smileyloving this...more update, ma'am.
Re: Red Ashes by angelliza(f): 10:46am On Feb 25, 2017
Keep the good work going Ma. God will continue to elevate u
Re: Red Ashes by gtin(m): 11:17am On Feb 25, 2017
Somebody help me tell Nene that Nathan needs to knw abt the baby
Re: Red Ashes by Missclare1(f): 11:24am On Feb 25, 2017
Congrats on hitting Front page.more grease to your elbow.
Re: Red Ashes by Paradise163(f): 11:46am On Feb 25, 2017
I think this is the third time this story is getting to front page. Kudos Chumpzy

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Re: Red Ashes by Georgeisco2007: 12:03pm On Feb 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:

Tank 4 d nyc words Xavier, kip followin 4 more. More updates cum up in d evnin. Pls, invite ur friends

We are here oooo live. Nice write-up
Re: Red Ashes by Lankyannie(f): 12:20pm On Feb 25, 2017
CHOI!!i made it oooo,i finally caught up wid una on dz brain scatterin tori.so Angelinestto and Creeza,una gt moind 2dey eat dz sweet nd delicious tori widout invitn me abi?efen jagugu88li nd hadampson wey me tot say dm be ma pari no efen invitatn me join.kosi wahala shaa.4doin dz angelinestto,i hereby sentence u 2 1week imprisonement in za oza room wid who eva dt changes ur oil often,as 4u creeza,u musto gv us update on slave in dy soul b4 i swear 4u ni.no nid 2dish out punishment 4 jagugu nd hadampson cus dia case dy sambisa already.moi new found chumzypinky,dz ur tori no gree mk i rest since yestaftanun,d tori swt gan nd ur head gt pulenty oil join.biko more brain 2wia eva dz ur designers brain kame frm,jst wonna appreciate u nw,wil do surveyn nd reviewn later.abeg chop small kizz frm me nd no let papa bomboy knw abeg.wishn u a safe delivery dear.biko do dy do nd gv us more update,congrat 4makin d front page.
Re: Red Ashes by wizsolzy(m): 12:25pm On Feb 25, 2017
i just dey look nene from tear tear curtian...she won still form too undecided undecided undecided undecided
Re: Red Ashes by Hadampson(m): 12:26pm On Feb 25, 2017
Lankyannie:
CHOI!i made it oooo,i finally caught up wid una on dz brain scatterin tori.so Angelinestto and Creeza,una gt moind 2dey eat dz sweet nd delicious tori widout invitn me abi?efen jagugu88li nd hadampson wey me tot say dm be ma pari no efen invitatn me join.kosi wahala shaa.4doin dz angelinestto,i hereby sentence u 2 1week imprisonement in za oza room wid who eva dt changes ur oil often,as 4u creeza,u musto gv us update on slave in dy soul b4 i swear 4u ni.no nid 2dish out punishment 4 jagugu nd hadampson cus dia case dy sambisa already.moi new found chumzypinky,dz ur tori no gree mk i rest since yestaftanun,d tori swt gan nd ur head gt pulenty oil join.biko more brain 2wia eva dz ur designers brain kame frm,jst wonna appreciate u nw,wil do surveyn nd reviewn later.abeg chop small kizz frm me nd no let papa bomboy knw abeg.wishn u a safe delivery dear.biko do dy do nd gv us more update,congrat 4makin d front page.
No vexing on ur padi nah. biko it sliped off my mind

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 12:37pm On Feb 25, 2017
Lankyannie:
....
tanx dear. I luv u chop kiss
Re: Red Ashes by harunablezin(f): 12:55pm On Feb 25, 2017
abeg make Una do come back jor
Re: Red Ashes by talk2saintify(m): 1:25pm On Feb 25, 2017
Chumzypinky:
.


I continued 'few weeks ago, you were shouting and calling me all sorts of names, telling me it was completely over. Same few weeks ago, you were telling me you never mingled with rude personalities and also few weeks ago, you turned down my offer of friendship and said there was someone else in your life. Thats the someone else' i pointed at Myra 'what are you doing here? Why did you come here? Do you have a problem sticking to your own rules. Please and please, Nathan. I am begging you for the last time, dont even come close to me again. You warned me the first time and i'm warning you the second time. Whatever we had in the past is something called - Past Tense. Our Tense is in the Past, thats why its called Past Tense. Past. Not Present Participle. And i dont remember the two of us being friends, because last time i checked, i had a rude personality, very rude that i didnt deserve to be friends with pleasant personalities such as yours. Why you came here, i dont know. If its Kaka you came here to greet, just a simple wave from that side would have solved us the whole stress of getting to see each other's ugly faces, right?'



TBC


such a foolish girl angry angry angry

am naw hating this girl seh..
nonsense angry angry

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Re: Red Ashes by roseval(f): 1:40pm On Feb 25, 2017
Imagine shakara frm kainene ooo!!!, chumzy just fire on d tori jare. Kudos 😘👏👍
Re: Red Ashes by motawlahnee(f): 3:22pm On Feb 25, 2017
daretodiffer:
@chumzypinky, there is nothing like a naturally born dada but you can have natural locs. Your hair turn to locs when you do not comb it. Babies who have dada do because either their scalp is too sensitive for combing or their carer do not comb their hair.

I think you should edit that sentence on the first page. Great work!


I beg to differ. My younger brother is a naturally born dada..... do your research and get your facts right.

Mummy Pinky to sure..... Kudos to you
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 3:25pm On Feb 25, 2017
motawlahnee:



I beg to differ. My younger brother is a naturally born dada..... do your research and get your facts right.

Mummy Pinky to sure..... Kudos to you
i surprise too oo. because my cousin was a naturally born dada

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Re: Red Ashes by Hestywhyt(f): 3:59pm On Feb 25, 2017
motawlahnee:



I beg to differ. My younger brother is a naturally born dada..... do your research and get your facts right.

Mummy Pinky to sure..... Kudos to you
Same wit my kid bro....

Weldone Ma Pinky

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Re: Red Ashes by psalmskiddy(m): 4:21pm On Feb 25, 2017
:followinggP
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 4:42pm On Feb 25, 2017
Hestywhyt:

Same wit my kid bro....

Weldone Ma Pinky
eh-hen. Some people, if u like comb dis hair from now to the end of d world, d dada will still form, but maybe dats how her own is sha...
Re: Red Ashes by heemah(f): 6:57pm On Feb 25, 2017
Like seriously I don't understand you people insulting Nene. Were u expecting her to welcome him with open arms? Seriously we females need to learn to respect ourselves! Its how u present yourself that people will address u. After all she did just to win his heart back, the guy turned her down, so u are still expecting her to feel grateful that he came with his supposed girlfriend to meet her? Abeggy!
Also, I'm in support of her not telling Nathan about her pregnancy. The guy will fink she is trying to tie him down with that.
Where's fam24?

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Re: Red Ashes by SirGoldEjike(m): 7:32pm On Feb 25, 2017
This Story is Epic!!, Mummy P well done ma,
Re: Red Ashes by estluv(f): 7:35pm On Feb 25, 2017
Am liking Nene now,DAT is d best thing for her to do...some guys does not knw d power of love!!!

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