Make una still criticize my book I beg. I need to know where to improve, especially since I have chosen a competitive niche.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XF4FTT4
Thanks

bros1234:


Funny book. Looks like you are annoyed with Pastors.

Anyway, your book cover can be redone and made better. Also look into the title, maybe a bit more clearer. It seems too confusing for me to catch the message from the title.

The inside content seems very loaded. Seems you put in a great research on this.

Good luck.

Big Bros thanks for your review.
No gross with any pastor oooo. The subject is interpretation of the Law nothing personnel.
Where you referring to the sub-title?
Title is "Tithe & Offering" are you suggesting a change.
Thanks again for your time.

cheehummer:


I'm no expert, but I hate that cover

Are you able to tell what you would like to see different in the cover. Just a bit more specific in your criticism. Thanks.

All4good:

Are you able to tell what you would like to see different in the cover. Just a bit more specific in your criticism. Thanks.

Check best selling books in the same niche and follow their theme, color etc. This one looks tacky. Thanks

Bros 12345, how do you proof reads your work. Any idea on free proof and grammar checker?

AncientTimes:
Bros 12345, how do you proof reads your work. Any idea on free proof and grammar checker?

I use basic word correction and Grammerly

cheehummer:
Make una still criticize my book I beg. I need to know where to improve, especially since I have chosen a competitive niche.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XF4FTT4
Thanks

I think that everything about your book looks good. The design is cool and so on. I just haven't read it. But it should be a great book.

Blessings to your hustle

Good cover designs. Send your "author name" and title of the book. Contact me. hammersmithx@gmail.com.. Here are some of my cover designs.

Greatbeard:
Hello guys,

please how can I find my book on amazon without using the search box?

and where do I get the link directly to my book ?

please help, I'm just starting out.

There's no way to find your book without using the search bar for now Until your book begins to sell.

Use the search bar, locate your book and then if the book has started selling, you should see its rank below. There you will also see its rank in the category. You can then click the category and see its lined up in the number that is it ranked.

I hope this helps.

Blessings to your hustle

All4good:


Big Bros thanks for your review.
No gross with any pastor oooo. The subject is interpretation of the Law nothing personnel.
Where you referring to the sub-title?
Title is "Tithe & Offering" are you suggesting a change.
Thanks again for your time.

Yes. I meant that the subtitle is too jampacked. The Title, TITHES AND OFFERINGS is generalized, which is why you have a sub title. Its the subtitle that should say the aspect of tithes and offerings that you are talking about. But in this case, I feel its too jampacked.

All4good:
Hi people.
The book is live now. This is the link to the book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XVZ8W13
It will be available for free download from tomorrow, Tuesday 28th March. Kindly visit, download (FREE) and drop your 5 star reviews. I will appreciate that. Let’s keep the flag flying. Thanks.

Please if there are comments regarding improvements/ corrections please come back and drop them here. Your critic is highly welcomed.

@mk82, bros1234 and all I great you. May your day be blessed.

To the glory of God the book is already selling. Someone bought yesterday just before the free promo began today.
Am tempted to turn-off the promo but I dey follow my leader @mk82 who is of the view that sales spike after a promo.
Thanks to all contributors here who in one way or the other helped to nurture this breakthrough.

bros1234:


There's no way to find your book without using the search bar for now Until your book begins to sell.

Use the search bar, locate your book and then if the book has started selling, you should see its rank below. There you will also see its rank in the category. You can then click the category and see its lined up in the number that is it ranked.

I hope this helps.

Blessings to your hustle

That is partly true but not completely true. Once you have a paper, you can find your book using the search bar. The sale only determines the ranking of your book in the SEO

bros1234:


Yes. I meant that the subtitle is too jampacked. The Title, TITHES AND OFFERINGS is generalized, which is why you have a sub title. Its the subtitle that should say the aspect of tithes and offerings that you are talking about. But in this case, I feel its too jampacked.

You are spot-on with the observation regarding the subtitle. In fact the title was lost inside the sub-title. For now I dey suffer writers-block, so can't think of a resolution to that clustering.
However on the book cover, It appear clustered. So am thinking I am yet to better grasp how to twerk the settings on Kindle for a better appearance.

Will resolve it before I put up the final cover. Let me suck-in all the criticisms first then everything can be handle once. Thanks man

bros1234:


I think that everything about your book looks good. The design is cool and so on. I just haven't read it. But it should be a great book.

Blessings to your hustle

Tnx

bros1234:


I use basic word correction and Grammerly

Okay, thank you sir, I grammarly, do you use premium version or paid version?

bros1234:


I use basic word correction and Grammerly

Okay, thank you sir, for the grammarly, do you use premium version which is the paid one or free version.

How many times do you often go through your work using Microsoft Word before you use Grammarly.

AncientTimes:



That is partly true but not completely true. Once you have a paper, you can find your book using the search bar. The sale only determines the ranking of your book in the SEO

Re-read what I wrote

AncientTimes:


Okay, thank you sir, for the grammarly, do you use premium version which is the paid one or free version.

How many times do you often go through your work using Microsoft Word before you use Grammarly.

When I finish writing a book I proof read it as much as I can, then I stay away from it for 2 weeks and work on other titles. After the two weeks I come back to the book and proofread it and leave it for another one week. Then I publish it

bros1234:


When I finish writing a book I proof read it as much as I can, then I stay away from it for 2 weeks and work on other titles. After the two weeks I come back to the book and proofread it and leave it for another one week. Then I publish it

Okay That is a very good concept sir. But if you do it like that, can one still meet the target of two books per month. I was proof reading three times, but I noticed that there are still errors in my work. So I though to slow down a bit and give more details to proof reading more than just rushing to publish the book on Kindle.

bros1234:


There's no way to find your book without using the search bar for now Until your book begins to sell.

Use the search bar, locate your book and then if the book has started selling, you should see its rank below. There you will also see its rank in the category. You can then click the category and see its lined up in the number that is it ranked.

I hope this helps.

Blessings to your hustle

Thanks so much bros1234.
this really helped.
Amen to that.

AncientTimes:


Okay That is a very good concept sir. But if you do it like that, can one still meet the target of two books per month. I was proof reading three times, but I noticed that there are still errors in my work. So I though to slow down a bit and give more details to proof reading more than just rushing to publish the book on Kindle.

Bro. Don't be lazy like me. We should be talking about 5 books a month.

bros1234:


Bro. Don't be lazy like me. We should be talking about 5 books a month.

Hahahaha, five books a month, that is a tall order. My problem is time. With work and other things on my hands, it is not really issue. Almost two books per month.

Buying Payoneer funds Needed.
Contact me on WhatsApp if you have for sale

cheehummer:
Make una still criticize my book I beg. I need to know where to improve, especially since I have chosen a competitive niche.
https://www.amazon.com/dp/B06XF4FTT4
Thanks

Your book is wonderful, it captivated me already but you have some small careless mistakes in the prologue and first chapter which I am sure that if you relax and read well you will see them. Maybe the hurry to publish did not allow you to proof read well. For example, the place you have " relationship dynamic" should be relationship dynamics if you ask me. Again please go to that place you said that the guy called a famous actress on the phone. It sounded unreal because you did not give the actress a name enough to make her real. When one is reading and gets to that point,it makes one feel like they are reading a fake story. Of course it is not a real story but a novelist strives to bring reality alive in their fake stories. If I were you, I will say that he called so so so (name) one of the famous actresses who starred in so so movie. You understand?
Your language is a bit crude too with the f words and all but you know which market you want to appeal to. If it is the dirty-words loving adults that you are trying to draw in to become your fans then it's super. Parents may not allow their wards to read " f words " loaded novels. I love your cover, did you design it yourself? What did you use for the design?
Now hear this---You are about to explode baby, I can feel it. Your conception of that novel is wow!

Gentlegee40:


Your book is wonderful, it captivated me already but you have some small careless mistakes in the prologue and first chapter which I am sure that if you relax and read well you will see them. Maybe the hurry to publish did not allow you to proof read well. For example, the place you have " relationship dynamic" should be relationship dynamics if you ask me. Again please go to that place you said that the guy called a famous actress on the phone. It sounded unreal because you did not give the actress a name enough to make her real. When one is reading and gets to that point,it makes one feel like they are reading a fake story. Of course it is not a real story but a novelist strives to bring reality alive in their fake stories. If I were you, I will say that he called so so so (name) one of the famous actresses who starred in so so movie. You understand?
Your language is a bit crude too with the f words and all but you know which market you want to appeal to. If it is the dirty-words loving adults that you are trying to draw in to become your fans then it's super. Parents may not allow their wards to read " f words " loaded novels. I love your cover, did you design it yourself? What did you use for the design?
Now hear this---You are about to explode baby, I can feel it. Your conception of that novel is wow!

Wow, I wasn't expecting to hear this. Thanks really. This is my first book on amazon, more like an experiment really, and it went well to my observation. Yes, I realize it's crude and would be the last of its kind in will write. I have a big fantasy novel coming up and I have been taking care to develop the characters and scenes. Thanks.
I just might go back to this book when I'm done. Thanks again

Gurus in the house. I have an upcoming christian book and i am still confused on what bible version is best suited to use for quotes. KJV? NKJV? NIV? etc.

Your input and guidance is very much welcome here. Thank you

cc bros1234
ancienttimes

djlaqua91:
Gurus in the house. I have an upcoming christian book and i am still confused on what bible version is best suited to use for quotes. KJV? NKJV? NIV? etc.

Your input and guidance is very much welcome here. Thank you

cc bros1234
ancienttimes

Anyone will do. Just mention the version in brackets

bros1234:


Anyone will do. Just mention the version in brackets

Thanks boss

bros1234 really need to speak to you, email isn't working, do you mind sending me a whatsapp message 08073046647. would be really grateful

Hello bros 12345, when does Amazon pays for Kenp read. I noticed that they paid me for sales in the month of January but not for my Kenp read. I think also they did not pay me for sales recorded in other markets

phemmy03:
bros1234 really need to speak to you, email isn't working, do you mind sending me a whatsapp message 08073046647. would be really grateful

If you need to speak to me, you should reach out to me, not the other way round.

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