Ishilove:
Both

Oahray: me too... Take a deep breath whenever you are upset. It helps.

Uniquexty: Holy Mary! HBG, i didnt ignore u pls. And i have editted my work. About the Mrs. Ajoke, lets just say she's a pot cover thats bigger than the main point. She could be assumed as one of those society ladies who run the home and control the husband. No wonder the husband didnt talk about her.

Foxy_Ultimate: That was fucckking unnecessary HBG....

I did not back out for your information, I asked for reshuffling. I did not even read Ishilove update before calling for it so relax.

Now, it was a nice thing that Unique came to my rescue but then calling me selfish was not nice.

The story I started just came up, if it looked selfish to you, then sorry.

But then... Reveisiting the past aint nice, so I will let it pass

Uniquexty: "Are you going to stand there all day staring at me or will you open your door wide and let me in?" Mrs. Bukola asked and Tope realised that he had actually been standing there staring at her.
"Do come in ma'am". He stepped aside and she came in. His eyes followed hers as she scanned through the room. Tope could not place the impression the room created on her face. He wasn't bothered. The reason for her visit bothered him.
"Nice place you got here" She complemented without smiles.
"Thanks ma. Please have a seat" He offered the only armed seat he had.
"There's no need for that. As you already know, frivolities has nothing in common with me, and so i will go straight to business." She made the obvious clear enough. Tope could feel his heart in his mouth.
"I know my husband produced two copies of that lab result. I also know you have copies of the two results. We will not have this discussion again if you hand in the copies of that result." Tope's legs felt weak. How the hell did this woman find out about this?
"Don't play dumb with me. Patience is not an item in my trash can. Let's not waste time over this."
"I really don't understand the result you are talking about." His voice was squeaky, and his eyes found the brown large envelopes lying helplessly on the table. He had intended checking them out after dinner.
"Do you mind if i take a look?." Mrs. Ajoke was referring to the envelope.

Uniquexty: What should i edit there? I think i have explained her appearance in the work. About how she got 2 knw d intern has d report, she could have planted an invisible security camera. If it will make d work ambigious, i could scrap it out. What do u think?

HumbledbYGrace: Sorryzn had to let it all out.

HumbledbYGrace: I think you shouls scrap her out. There are some lose ends and I can't pick up from that

My opinion

HumbledbYGrace: I think you shouls scrap her out. There are some lose ends and I can't pick up from that

My opinion

Foxy_Ultimate:

You are supposed to tie the lose end.... That's what this work is all about

Oahray: well, my opinion is, she does not have to if she does not want to. That's why it's her submission . I only have a prob with parts that directly conflicted with previous submissions. To her credit, she has corrected some of them.

As for this one you just pointed out, even if she doesn't edit it, there are many ways you can do so in your own submission. Writing is like painting, if you make a mistake, paint on top.

Oahray: well, my opinion is, she does not have to if she does not want to. That's why it's her submission . I only have a prob with parts that directly conflicted with previous submissions. To her credit, she has corrected some of them.

As for this one you just pointed out, even if she doesn't edit it, there are many ways you can do so in your own submission. Writing is like painting, if you make a mistake, paint on top.

Foxy_Ultimate:

You are supposed to tie the lose end.... That's what this work is all about

HumbledbYGrace: not where I come from, you don't put a brick ontop of a mud stone and the believe somehow, someway it will hold.

That Mrs should be explained or cut out! Simple, why make a fuss on things? When I introduce a chapter out of the blue, I always make a background introduction about that person. That's how I write so Oahray, your shots were given to me right?

HumbledbYGrace: like hell I would!

I pointed out my problem, aint doing that

Foxy_Ultimate:

Now I know why you alwayz clash with Larry... You fuss about lot of things. Work with what you have jor

"When the needed is not available, then the available becomes the needed"

You are very annoying walai... Over annoying

Foxy_Ultimate:

If lose ends are not left then how the hell is the work going to be interesting.

Tie it. Itz your fccking job

HumbledbYGrace: locate him abeg..I will send him a flight ticket. He needs to tell us what his Tenth generation is doing on facebook. Unless he had some sort of agreement with the dude/cheek, whateva it is. And Bukkydan should get here asap

frank3.16:


hi i am just seeing this... sorry i have been quite busy. but what can one do about the story being posted on facebook. i am very sad about this

HumbledbYGrace: stop quoting me like you are to post

The pot calling the cattle black?its my flipping job to make sure I continue from a clean slate.

If you don't like how I do things then tough because I aint going anywhere.

HumbledbYGrace: hmmmmmm...very calm and collected. I like, over to you

Ek is out.

HumbledbYGrace: not where I come from, you don't put a brick ontop of a mud stone and the believe somehow, someway it will hold.

That Mrs should be explained or cut out! Simple, why make a fuss on things? When I introduce a chapter out of the blue, I always make a background introduction about that person. That's how I write so Oahray, your shots were given to me right?

Foxy_Ultimate:

If lose ends are not left then how the hell is the work going to be interesting.

Tie it. Itz your fccking job

Foxy_Ultimate:

Everybody left a lose end... Everybody picked it up... Why is your case different?

frank3.16:


HBG pls do u have suggestion on how i can stop this from continuing? what i have seen has really spoilt my mood, i dont like it at all. i wish the story to be deleted from nairaland if possible, can u help?

HumbledbYGrace: at the moment I have nothing dear. Sorry hey

knockturnal: You guys are really funny, there is fire on the mointain and you guys have been bickering over irrelevant issues for over three pages. Seun even stepped in to ask how he could assist with the problem and all you guys could do was to ignore him and continue quarreling over nonsensical issues like bored market women.
Larry, you even allowed yourself to be drawn into it. Am a bit dissapointed I must say. You all should know how deadly piracy can be for any writter who nurses any aspiration to eat from his sweat. Thats The Problem On Ground! Not whether Unique's work should be deleted or edited.
Priorities, guys!
HBG, just 'man up' and do your own chapter. You already ran away from the responsibility once, the only plausable excuse you should be putting on the table now is the piracy thing not Unique's performance on the collabo.

@Unique, good job. I know you would have done better if you had more time and were probably on the roaster from the inception of the collabo.
@ Larry again, get a hold of your thread!

frank3.16:


perharps i shuld just report to the mod to delete the thread

HumbledbYGrace: my chapter is finished! Done in my memo. Its just a tiny thing I wanted her to fix, but ya'll are too blind to see what I am pointing at. I wonder how long I will suffer nepotism on Nairaland