queenofhearts: "No wonder she had only slept with three guys all her life. "

So every gal that's not rigid when it comes to sex
Must ve slept with more than 3guys?

queenofhearts: "No wonder she had only slept with three guys all her life. "

So every gal that's not rigid when it comes to sex
Must ve slept with more than 3guys?

yertyr: Mazi...U're a gud writer no doubt, u have talent.But I must say this...u're not there. Firstly, if u're observant, u wud knw that ur fans are only interested in ur sex scenes nothing more.mazi, u're not painting pictures while writing. U lack that ability to describe anything in ur writing not even the sex venue and the characters- we don't know how ur room look lyk, how esther looks lyk, d hostel u stayed in nysc, how chifawu is, how rita is.... How can we effectively be glued to u. Ur writing is just plain. Secondly... I felt u didn't actually deliver during the whole HIV issue, it was hasty like something u just added to the story, read that part again and u might get what I mean. There are many others but I wudn't lyk to bore u... Strong points however is ur versatility- I studied mech engr and when u quoted chatelier and newton's laws I was impressed... U didn't stop there u showd u're gud also in the medical field.dat caught me..keep it up...one of the great attributes of a writer is knowledge(u're loaded with it)... U're only lacking in the pattern and style u deliver it. I'm also a writer but pressing business conspire to keep me from pasting my works... I hope to seeing u read them when I do.

Mimicole: I dnt entirely agree wt u,even tho I get why u said wat u said, I thnk Mazi has toned down his descriptive prowess in ds sequel.

I wnt blame him cs d period of ppa is actually a long time as opposed to d short time in camp which he took day aftr day. I'm still spellbound BTW

Mazi_Omenuko: Nice poem Foxy, very touching.

But there is a Poetry sub-section in this Literature section. Why not start the poem there, then invite us over there to come and critique as you've been doing.

This is the third poem on my thread; would really love that you stop, please.

Did I mention that the poem was great? It was soo touching!

Foxy_Ultimate:

I will stop if you say so, I don't want what happened in the previous thread to repeat itself. If you want me to take it off, just say it and I will do it immediately.

maishot:
Duh

Mazi_Omenuko: Thanks mimicole and crave4 for the input, you really saw the work the way I'm doing it. I took time to describe events, places and people at the previous thread. I enjoy the critics because they make my work better. I will try and implore more descriptive adjectives this time around.

@foxy, no dear, just don't start another one.

@faithfuldon, thanks for your input, despite your busy schedule. I appreciate.

swtdarling: mazi,i dey your back gidigbam.if i were u,i wud slap chiafwu!.wot nonsense!!!.

moneybag4411: I'm a 2013 batch A corper,just came back from camp and i must say,i had my own escapades too....Now,i have 11 full months of PPA things and im trying to get as much inspiration as i can frome this thread....Mazi,wit everyone of ur updates,my FORM is getting hotter...infact,if our housegirl is not careful,i will start from her ooo...i dey talk my own now..

Foxy_Ultimate:

Mazi.... May the gods of Boko Haram shorten your dick if this is the only update we will get for the day.



**Goes into inner room tying red wrapper to bring out smoky calabash**

missade: @Mazi...see ur influence o! I don't even know what to say, u've got d broda in heat
Tut tut..
Its all ur fault

ITbomb:
You that is not rigid, tell us your experiences.
How many have you slept with?

komek:

Slap her for what na?

The only thing that will make me sad is that Mazi cud not sleep with Chifawu.

Cos if iam in his shoe, I will later calm Chifawu down and even show her the original result, then promise her the whole love she needs . After getting enof of her, I will let her go and disgrace her like she did to me too.

001solar: Nice bravo! bravo !

crave4stan:

you wan tell me say body no dey do you somehow when you dey read this s*xually explicit content? Abeg relax joor!