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Christianity Etc › Re: FROM FAITH TO Facts:collection Of My Thoughts, Experience & Sojourn In Religion by blessedvisky(m): 11:33pm On Aug 12, 2016
CHARLOE:
I bet 99% of xtians (including d troll image123) don't no this). This was a rude shock to me during my own research a few yrs ago.
Wow. I must be among the 1% then. Any award? I guess not.
Now among all those that dankol posted, how many of them are still relevant today?.
How many of them have been able influence the whole world up till this age like JESUS?.
How many of them were able to raise followers who were able to duplicate the things their master did?

Pls answer.
Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 10:26pm On Aug 11, 2016
skarlett:
Requote and it will be hidden tongue
You be mod?. shocked shocked shocked I'm sorry ma embarassed
Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 10:07pm On Aug 11, 2016
skarlett:
Interesting points but you didn't have to quote the entire episode na sad
Lol. Actually I had too. There is something called short term memory. That's what happens when you read a story like this. I'm sure you can't narrate the story 100% as bibijay has written it like a week from now. You'll have to re-release it.
The reason why I quoted the whole episode is so that I can quickly re-read the episode and criticise appropriately, rather than depending on what I remember from the episode to criticise.

Hope you understand.? Or should I quote again.?? grin
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Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 5:36pm On Aug 11, 2016
bibijay123:
Yea. we good now? grin
Sure we're we bad b4 huh
Phones › Re: Microsoft Cortana Is Available On Android For Download by blessedvisky(m): 5:34pm On Aug 11, 2016
Hmm
Politics › Re: Surajudeen Adekunbi Beats His Wife To Coma In Court - Naijapopular.com by blessedvisky(m):
And he is the No 3 citizen of ogún state OO. What a show of shame.
If I talk everything wey dey my mind, one man like that from ogun state will ban me forever grin so make I no talk am embarassed

FTC BTW. cool

Christianity Etc › Re: FROM FAITH TO Facts:collection Of My Thoughts, Experience & Sojourn In Religion by blessedvisky(m): 5:29pm On Aug 11, 2016
dankol:
Thank you boss. I do appreciate
No update?
Celebrities › Re: Singer Sade's Beautiful Transgender Daughter by blessedvisky(m): 5:24pm On Aug 11, 2016
Lalasticlala fynestboi seun come and see oo
Celebrities › Re: Singer Sade's Beautiful Transgender Daughter by blessedvisky(m): 5:21pm On Aug 11, 2016
How old is she sef?? see what freedom of expression Dan cause. Omo this one na full expression
Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 5:19pm On Aug 11, 2016
bibijay123:
ok if this was a fictional write up i might be able to answer the above questions but it is not so am also wondering the same thing. But really she just came to infect him. as for him not remembering her, remember ten years is a whole lot of time and a lady's appearance changes when weavon and make up get involved. As for readily going to bed with her, only a fool would do that shows he's one. Thanks tho grin
You didn't say anything about the post-exposure prophylaxis. Or will that be revealed as time goes on?
Celebrities › Re: Singer Sade's Beautiful Transgender Daughter by blessedvisky(m): 5:12pm On Aug 11, 2016
Hey God. To go USA Dan dey fear me. Make I no turn something else there. And one chick Abi duck dey kiss her fellow woman on top transgender thinz cry cry

Phones › Re: MTN Introduces New Data Borrowing Service Tagged " MTN Xtrabyte" by blessedvisky(m): 5:05pm On Aug 11, 2016
superfelix:
#55 for 10mb? emptyhen take your yeye plan and qo
Like this?. grin grin

Celebrities › Re: Throwback Photo Of Falz In Law School by blessedvisky(m): 5:00pm On Aug 11, 2016
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Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 4:00pm On Aug 11, 2016
bibijay123:
Chapter 7

Ifeoma

Dedicated to Skarlett and Jefferyjamez


My hands trembled as i pulled on my skin tight black number, it was an expensive little thing that doesn't leave much to the imagination. My b00bies were almost out of the dress, then i wore my make up with care, nothing must go wrong.

Ebere' s door was closed, i sighed in relief and slipped out of the house. I was almost at Ogba when i broke down in tears, i remembered my mother forcing my hand into a bowl of hot water, i remembered the numerous beatings i had gotten from her, i remembered Juliet, i was so happy when they took me in. They were like family to me but they had turned me out without a second thought.

" Madam " A dirty looking police man knocked on the glass of my door. " You are parked illegally "

I dapped at the tears on my face, careful not ruin my make up and continued with my journey.

" Good Morning ma". A short skinny guy threw open the gate.

" Morning, is Mr Jeff Wright at home?"

" Ah madam! he has gone to work o, but his office is at Opebi."

I beamed at him and i could have sworn his eyes turned shy. " Mind giving me the address?"

" No Problem ma. I used to be a gateman there before Oga transferred me here."

He wrote out the address and gave it to me.

" Thank you. How about Juliet?"

" She took her children to school. You know her husband' s family chased her away when he died.''

" Yes i know. Terrible family, maybe i should say hi to mommy, is she inside?"

" No She' s out of the country ".

" Thank you".

I drove back to Opebi Allen, i remembered the spot i had stood that night, long ago, he had walked to me and offered me a hundred thousand naira for a night. I had thought God sent him to me, as a solution to our problems. We needed the money badly, i couldn't let Ebere starve.

" N100 thousand without Condom. I hate condom" he had said.

" I don't want to get pregnant sir" i told him naively.

" Don't worry i will pull out. "

I didn't understand what he meant by pulling out but i guessed it meant he won't get me pregnant. He was so thin i remembered thinking " how could he be so thin if he has a hundred thousand naira to give away."


Jeff' s office wasn't hard to locate, his secretary was a little mousy girl, she ushered me in without informing her boss first.

" What is this?" He barked. " How could you just bring someone into my office without my permission"

" Sorry sir" she hurried out.

" Hello Jeff"

He looked at me and almost dropped on the floor. His gaze was fixed on my bosoms. This fish was hooked.

" Hi...........hi miss.......please have a seat" he stuttered out. " Have we met before?"

I sat down, deliberately widening my legs, his gaze dropped to my exposed thighs.

I gave a little laugh.

" Its me, your baby girl........Ify"

He turned ashen and lost his color.

" Ify.....baby......"

I smiled at him." I have missed you, i couldn't resist coming to see you.....baby are you married?"

I would have walked out immediately if he had answered with an affirmation. I couldn't put an innocent girl through hell.

" No, no am not married. Baby girl am sorry for_____"


Oh really? I didn't let the bastard finish" Baby all that was in the past. Am so hot for you, is there somewhere we could go?"

He stood up hastily, knocking off the files on his desk.

" Yes, yes baby. "

We went to a seedy motel in Ikeja, the sheet got tangled in no time.

" That was hot!" Jeff said panting. " Darling why are you dressing up?"

" I just remembered i had an appointment later today".

" Awww baby. Please stay nau"

" Some other time." I snapped at him.

" OK baby, ehen...I just remembered something ".

" What!?"

" Your dad..........he came the next day after ..........um....after you left "

" My dad?!"

" Yes, he kept coming every week to check if you had returned. He stopped coming five years ago."


My dad. I told myself i wasn't going to cry.

" Your mother too came back two weeks after you left. Why didn't you come back baby?"

I could have killed him right there and then if i wasn't certain he was also going to die.

" Where is.......my mother now?"

" She is still at your house. She kept asking questions about you especially after the boy died."

" Which boy?!" I shouted." Toby, my brother?"

" Yes, That's the name! He had an astmatic attack."

My knees gave out. I remembered his chubby cheeks. He had stood up to mom on several occasions trying to defend me. My baby brother.

" Sorry baby" he said lifting me up.


" Where is my dad now?"

" I have his number"

I got my dad' s contact from him, picking up my bag, I said, " Jeff you might want to run some medical tests........Yea i think you should"


" Why?"

I breezed past him towards the door. " One can never know what disease they could contract by an unprotected sex. Good luck!"

His eyes widened in shock, he turned pale." What do you mean?!" He shouted. " Ify! Ify!"


I drove down to Abiola gardens at Sectariat. Little things begins to matter when you know you are dying. A bird flying in the sky becomes a delight to watch, a little girl running around with the wind blowing through her hair makes you cherish life more. A beautiful couple walking by makes your heart squeeze with pain.


I sat down on the green grass, I offered to carry a young woman' s baby so she could eat. Lord knows am never going to hold mine. I closed my eyes imagining the cherub belonged to me. I gave a little boy a push on the swing after handing the baby back to the grateful mother. The little boy had been on the low swing, shouting, " mommy please come and push it" the mother had been more interested in the phone in her hand.

In the evening i drove home blasting sinach' s ' I know who i am'

" I know who God says i am, what he says i am , where he says am at, I know who I am!" I sang aloud . " I ........am holy, i ........ am righteous ooo...I am......beau..ti......ful....oooo"









TBC


Please i need a constructive criticism of the story and writing. If any angle is not clear to you let me know....... Thank you all!
Hmm, constructive criticism?.. Ìdk how to do that but I'll try.
1) one doesn't end up under the sheets with someone who caused you so much pain in about 3 hours. Even if she was willing, the guy should have suspected foul play naw. He raped her and got her kicked out of the house with no means of survival and he accepted "Please all that is in the past".?. Me no fit accept am OO. He should know she was gonna get back @ him somehow when she showed up uninvited in his office

Also, he couldn't remember the face of someone he once lavished with gifts and got raped and also got her kicked out...? ? Well, make-up is powerful sha

A build-up of max a week which lead to sex would have made more sense.

2) still related to point 1, that's a lot of info to find out just immediately after a hot session under the sheets. Does the guy have mouth diarrhoea?? Even at that the guy should have 'neared' her while telling her the info, not staying on d bed, coz it's sensitive info to deliver. For one trying to stop Ify from going, he should made a physical move, not just 'baby don't go now'


3)lastly, she should not have spoken about the danger of catching something after doing skinny. He can easily go for Post-Exposure Prophylaxis. It is believed that HIV is curable within the first 48-72 hours after a person contacts it. You can read up on post exposure prophylaxis. If Jeff is smart enough, he might walk out of it unscathed and Ify would have lost on both sides. She could have texted him or something after she is sure he has caught it.

4) Jeff and Ify should have exchanged numbers at least now. You made it seem she just came to infect him, daz all. She wasn't subtle at all.
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Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 8:56am On Aug 11, 2016
JeffreyJamez:
Why did the rapist have to named Jeff! cry
That's how Royver sef called his villain JJ.
What did I do to you people na!! cry
skarlett:
Lol but Ifeoma don suffer sha sad Please on behalf of I, me and myself let Ify have a happy ending if for nothing else but for being my namesake cry cry embarassed
Biko!
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Education › Re: Wale Ojoniyi And Mercy Ikwue Sex Scandal Video In Osun State University by blessedvisky(m): 8:37am On Aug 11, 2016
Booked
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 7:38am On Aug 11, 2016
HardMirror:
Is that inner withness God?
God/Jesus/Spirit of God.. .. .. Same difference
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 3:32am On Aug 11, 2016
When it comes to God speaking to people, the important thing is for Information to be passed across. How this happens is both dependent on God/Jesus/Holy Spirit and on the individual also.

In the Old Testament, we read of accounts of people who heard d voice of God eg are Samuel, Jeremiah.
Some saw visions, eg Moses, isaiah, ezekiel etc.

In the New testament, wmit seems the most direct way of God speaking to an individual is through visions, in line with Joel 2:28

Peter, Paul and John( all Apostles and pillars) of the church then all saw visions and they were written
Read Acts 10, Acts 16, the whole of Revelation.

I'll update this post later
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 3:23am On Aug 11, 2016
HardMirror:
Good
How does God speak to you wheb you are in a situation?
After I go and pray about the situation, I get an inward witness about what to do, more like a reinforced thought. Sometimes also, I get more information about some of the choices I could have made before making them. This has saved me from a lot of trouble and bad decisions.

Does that mean all my decisions have been spot on?? Of course not. Sometimes, I choose to act on my own desire and not pray. The results I get when I do this are lipsrsealed(not the best cry)
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 12:28am On Aug 11, 2016
HardMirror:
Hello
Welcome sir.
Do you hear from God?
He has already given me his word, and yes, anytime I need to make an important decision, I go to pray and I get answers
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 12:23am On Aug 11, 2016
thecatch:
I totally agree with op. If the holy spirit really exists then there should not be different doctrine among the christiandoom! What catholics believe is different from pentacostals, even among pentacostals churches they still have different doctrines! The holy spirit should have guided all of them in d same way y different doctrines? Abi no b d same God u people serve ni?
NOT ALL Christian denominations believe I d baptism of the Holy Spirit. How do u expect them to be guided by who dey don't believe in?. huh
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 12:19am On Aug 11, 2016
HardMirror:
Over 60 posts and no christian has the holy spirit so far. Seems I am right that the Holy Spirit does not exist. Christians are just like the lunatic on the street talking to himself. Hence the indirect answers, none is confident that God lives in him.
But you didn't ask any questions
Christianity Etc › Re: Imagine If God Talks To People As Claimed. Challenge To Christians by blessedvisky(m): 12:18am On Aug 11, 2016
This guy is something else
Literature › Re: Allen Avenue ( Story Of A Call Worker) by blessedvisky(m): 3:04pm On Aug 10, 2016
Me? Marry HIV+ patient? Ẹ no fit happen ó, except maybe the test was done during window period when it was still undetectable. A test then will show HIV-
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Crime › Re: 11-year-old Timea Shot Dead As She Came Home From First Day At School by blessedvisky(m): 2:50pm On Aug 10, 2016
America is so so messed up. Lots of psychos walking upandan looking normal.

RIP Lil Girl
Phones › Re: Unlimited Glo 48 Hour by blessedvisky(m): 2:50pm On Aug 10, 2016
onoerime:
I tried sending the 48hour to 200. Message sending keeps failing. Y?
Same herr
Pets › Re: Transformation Of A Sick And Abarndoned Dog.. by blessedvisky(m): 2:21am On Aug 10, 2016
Thank God for the vet. Or what does Seun feel?
Crime › Re: Man Accuses Police Of Killing His Brother In Rivers State by blessedvisky(m): 9:32pm On Aug 09, 2016
Ok
Phones › Re: Unlimited Chatting For One Year!!! by blessedvisky(m): 1:43am On Aug 09, 2016
Lalasticlala see this thread oo
Christianity Etc › Re: The Collisions Of The "Isms" by blessedvisky(m): 12:11am On Aug 09, 2016
AmenRa1:
[size=13pt]This Is How We Deal With Truth & Facts!! Just Cause Am An Atheist Doesn't Mean I Will Have To Lie About Things LIES Are One Of The Reason The World Is As It Is Now Mainly From Our Theist Friends, Well We Just Hope One Day It Stops!!![/size]
Hi it's me again. Remember what I told you in the other thread? ?
Well, I'll remind you if you've forgotten
OK then. So you know you're just gonna live a life filled with hate and frustration without any hope of salvation??
Can you see you've started displaying this?. No one accused you yet you started saying you don't lie. undecided. How do we even know that's not a lie in itself grin
Sports › Re: Rio 2016: The First Muslim-american Woman In Olympic To Wear A Hijab by blessedvisky(m): 12:05am On Aug 09, 2016
I smell Fp. Muslims reading this be like

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