Nmaglit:
I don't knw y I love funmi mayb because she is real n homely


Nice one boyo

i just cant appreciate you enough for encouraging me on this story,
at least if not for any other person but u,i must finish this story

thanks dear,just watch out .u will be surprised at the twist that occurs towards the end of the story

Episode 22

Dayo had no chair in his room so funmi sat on the bed, she was still feeling the effect of the kiss,its not like she has not kissed before but this was different,

then a dim blue light came on as dayo changed the light,although she could hardly see but it was better .

"This is better "she said

Dayo was feeling really hard down his legs ,he was so hungry for her but needed to take things easy,
he moved to where he hanged the tv then switched it on,but reduced the volume to the lowest,he scrolled around the channels wandering where he could put it but later settled for a live football match that was being played,

then he turned on the home theatre system too,the sound of the rap song he last listened to with the player filled every corner of the room ,he quickly removed it and placed another CD which was a collection of old RnB songs,withing seconds the CD began to play and the first song that engulfed the whole room with its lyrics is " I WANT TO KNOW -BY JOE" .

"Wow "funmi said as she heard the song ,it was one of her favorites she quickly asked him to leave it,

dayo was happy she loved it, so he placed the song on auto replay,

he quickly put on the air conditioner before joining her on the bed,he noticed that she was now lying on the bed with her eyes closed ,he moved closer to her ,kissed her in the mouth,then She opened her eyes,her eyes were filled with desires,she was looking like she was under his spell,all her body craved for him,she felt like stopping herself but the hunger in her wouldnt let her.

Dayo kissed her forehead,then to her nose as she giggled, to her cheek,then to her neck,to her colar bone,he moved back up to kiss her in the mouth for about 3minutes before going again to her boobs,he tickled her nipple with his mouth through the cloth,she let out her first moan,she placed are hand on his head trying to stop him from driving her crazy but he wouldnt stop,


He went back up to kiss her mouth now,then parted her legs so he could rub her down part,as he placed his hand there she gave louder moan,her mind was racing seriously,then he returned to he boobs using his other hand to loose the button of her gown,

About 15minutes later they were both out of their cloths,dayo was so eager to insert his stuff,he was madly hard,but as he was about to insert it into her,she stopped him,he looked at her with a question eyes,then she dragged his head downwards like she wanted to kiss him then whispered into his ear saying

" its my first time"

Nmaglit

Episode 21


They continued talking for about 30minutes later, then dayo said to her

“ you have never even made attempt to know where I stay”

“hmmm, I feel there is still plenty of time for that” funmi said

Dayo quickly replied“ yeah, like now , we still gat plenty of time today to do that”

“ hmmmm, am already getting tired”she said


“ come on dear, we are not going to waste much time there, its just for you to know my place”


Funmi slowly nodded her head in agreement then as dayo called the waiter so he could pay him.


It was a short drive to dayo’s house, funmi couldn’t believe her eyes as she got down from the car,


“ how can a student be staying in such a place, I swear this could pass as one of the best hotel at my village”she thought to herself

“they both walked slowly into the apartment with their hands clawed together,


On entering the room it was dark as she couldn’t see, dayo made for the light switch and suddenly a bright light came on, he placed his hand on it and suddenly it changed again, several colors of light was now been displayed in the room, it looked amazing to funmi, she felt like she was inside one of those night clubs she sees in movies, she saw dayo moved close to her and quickly placed a passionate kiss on her mouth, she felt like melting as she felt his soft lips,she opened up to allow him explore her further, 3minutes later he released her and he could see that she was reluctant to let go as she was still holding her head in that position with her eyes closed, he had to cough before she adjusted herself, them she said

“ please off the light”

Dayo couldn’t believe his ears ,” did this girl just say I should put off the light, wow, lucky me “he thought he thought to himself

He quickly walked to the switch then put off the light completely,


“ did you put off the light?’ funmi asked wondering why he turned it off


“ that was what you said baby”dayo replied


“ no, I mean that club light , not everything”


Dayo was disappointed as he figured out that it wouldn’t be as easy has he thought.

Nmaglit:
Boyo welcome back on board

Am happy for funmi

one thing we hv to understand abt life no matter hw u look or what pple say abt you there is someone specially designed for YOU

thanks for following dear,i really appreciate ur comments nd encouragement,God bless you.
uv made my day

Episode 20

10 minutes later they were settled at a table with the waiter asking for their orders,they decided to take fish pepper soup and drink

After having a few drinks with plates of fish pepper soup, dayo said

“why did you do that?’

Funmi was confused “did what?”

“ am talking about why you turned you face when I was about…”

Funmi cuts in while letting out a small smile ”hmmm, dayo”

dayo was happy she smile, so he began to smile too

“come on say something”

“ nothing I just felt like"

“ you felt like turning me down,right?”

“ not that joor”

“ok then explain to me”


“dayo please let’s leave this issue now”

Dayo didn’t expect that she could be that soft,he thought she wouldn’t like to even hear about it, he questioned her further till she wasn’t able to come up with anything to defend herself again, he could see the lust in her eyes and he was determined to feed on it, he took a deep breath then said,

“funmi, why do you keep acting like you don’t understand what I have been trying to say,”

Funmi gave him a questioning look
Then dayo continued

” yes you do,you know that I have totally falling in love with you but you ignoring me, forgive me if I suck at asking a girl out ,I prefer using actions , which I have been trying to use but you ignoring it,….. I love you funmi”


Funmi was obviously blushing , who ever thought that a cute guy like dayo could fall in love with a girl like her,her tribal mark has always made her feel like an outcast among her course mates, some ignore her when she talks , while some stylishly mock her because of the mark,hot girls like lizzy obviously look down on her, that is why she’s got few friends and most times walk alone ,but everything has changed since she met dayo, she’s been getting attention from him and some other people in the class, she wasn’t sure of why they became friendly with her all of a sudden ,she is enjoying the attention and she’s not ready to let it go.

“ is that why you broke up with lizzy?” she finally asked

Dayo shook his head as he replied with a low voice “ yeah,you are the reason we broke up, you are my everything now funmi”

Funmi couldn’t speak , she just sat in the chair bushing and looking straight into dayo’s eyes with lust,

dayo looked around the bar and noticed that no one was looking at their direction, he leaped over the table that was between them and place a soft kiss on her lip.

good afternoon mrs explorer can u pls help me with this.

FATE AND FORTUNE
Dayo was determined to regain the trust and confidence of his dad after he was accused of not being worthy of inheriting his father’s accounting firm.

He needed help with his studies and had to break up with his beautiful but over emotional half cast girlfriend ‘lizzy’ when he became friends with a local but brilliant girl with tribal marks’ funmi’.

he developed a relationship with funmi after sometime and was happy he found her.

Unfortunately for him, he found out funmi was pregnant for him but that wasn’t really his problem, his main problem was that she was his cousin.
Written by
Busairi, uthman olalekan.

thank you

abdulyaro66:
WHERE IS BOYO?

Nmaglit:
Boyo hop u r ok just checking up on u n pls don't forget ur fans r waiting for update

kazuna:
Racheal is a typical 21st century woman (maybe a fake feminist).....dangerously connivin like some one said.

am sorry guys i didnt forget you guys.will be back soon
thanks for your understanding

Twinkle004:
Nice 1. U are really a talent, can't wait 2 read more stories 4rm u

thanks dear please check my profile to see more stories by me

sorry for the late update,bin a bit busy

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maybe its because my favorite artist is 2face.

Episode 19

The air in the room changed, dayo felt a bit embarrassed by what he did,he felt like turning back the hands of time,

“Shit I was too forward?’ he thought to himself


Funmi was confused she does not even know what to think, deep down in her mind she will be very happy to feel what his cute lips taste like, but no she can’t just let him have her like that, moreover she still needs more prove that he truly cares for her.


They got into the car some minutes later without talking to each other, funmi took a peep at him and she felt bad when she saw the little expression of disappointment on his face ,

“I hate to see him like this, I should have let him do it” she thought in her mind


Dayo hated the silence between them, he felt too embarrassed to talk ,which made him angry at himself,he felt he has spoilt the date before it even started, he tried to come up with a discussion but couldn’t think of any, and she wouldn’t break the silence either,

Finally he decided to put on the FM radio of his car, hoping that the music or topic of discussion will generate a topic for them,he placed his hand on the car stereo and turned it

“woooow” he shouted as the music filled the speakers of the car,

2FACE IDIBIA’S hit song titled “FEELING YOU “was the song that was being played,dayo sang along the lyrics till it got to the second verse, he tapped funmi gentle on the lap and asked her to listen to the lyrics as he sang along saying.


FEELINGS IS SOMETHING THAT YOU CANNOT HIDE,AS YOU CAN SEE MY GIRL YOU REALLY NEED TO SWALLOW YOUR PRIDE, LETS ROLL UP LIKE BURNY AND CLIDE , BE REST ASSURED THAT AM NOT TAKING YOU FOR A RIDE, ALRIGHT, AM FEELING YOU AS YOU FEELING ME TOO BABY BOO.


Funmi couldn’t hold back the laugh, she couldn’t hold back the way she felt as she heard those words, she slapped dayo on the shoulder playfully and also played with his beards

about 15minutes later, they got to a very cool and nice part of the town,


the environment was one of the best that funmi will ever see, she kept looking around the place like she was lust, she later realized that it was a hotel with a nice bar , she has never seen a place with a swimming pool that is as big as that before,

“where would she ever see it, in that her village” she let out a small laugh as she thought to her self .

Episode 18


Funmi picked the call on the second ring, as she told him that she was close to the second roll, he quickly rushed down to the seat to join her, just then the lecturer entered the class and the lectures began,.

They were quit for most of the time time in which the lecturer was explaining,they only discuss when he wasn’t .

the rest o the lectures lasted for like two hours before the lecture left the class, then dayo decided to use the opportunity to tell funmi what he has been thinking.

“wow, I am so tired right now” dayo said smiling at funmi

“ what makes you tired ?”

“nothing really, I just think my mind isn’t here”

“ funny , so where is you mind”

“ home, don’t feel like having lectures today”

“lazy boy” funmi tapped him on the lap before dayo continued

“ what’s your plan for the rest of the day after the lectures” he asked

“ well nothing much, I guess I will just go home to rest, I guess the lectures for today ends by 2pm isn’t it”

“yeah, it ends by 2pm” dayo paused for a while wondering how he could say it

“ hmmm, funmi there is something I want to request from you” he finally said

Funmi was curious as she looked into his eyes and said “ whats that, come ask now, you don’t need to make it sound so official ” she waited for dayo to talk as he said

“ I know you don’t really go out much but I will appreciate if you go out with me today”

“ go out? , what about your girl friend” funmi asked

She could see that little frown on he’s face as he said

“ well , we broke up but please don’t ask me why”

Funmi was shocked, she paused for a while before saying
” I guess that’s one thing I can’t do, you should be able to tell me what happened or aren’t we close enough?”

“ no now ,you getting it wrong, ok I promise to tell you when we get on our date”

“ date?, you didn’t tell me it’s a date”

Dayo laughed loud" ok I don’t mind what you tag it, just come with me “

They both laughed ,just then the next lecturer entered the class


Dayo drove his car as fast as he could , he new funmi would be waiting for him as she has called to ask where he was,he got to her house and hurriedly went in.
The smell of the nice perfume she was wearing filled the whole room, his head was spinning as he saw funmi in the best dress he has ever seen her in, it was a pink short dress that reveals a little of her lap,she also seem to be having a bigger bosom because she was putting on one of those push up bra,
Her make up was perfectly done as she looked more beautiful than he ever thought

“ wow, what a beauty “dayo thought in his mind


He didn’t realized when he moved closer to her, he drew her into his arms as she perfectly fit in, he looked into her eyes, both of then now looking into each other’s eyes in a lustful way, her breathing has obviously increased

“ you are beautiful” dayo whispered as he moved closer to place a kiss on her lip but to his surprise she turned her face as his lips landed on her cheek.

abefe99:
who said DAT or u tink DAT is interesting dis is d fifth time I will check maybe uve updated ride on dear God bless u

callmeomotee33:
Dont be disturbed.... I know many people are enjoying your stories, there are many more silent readers behind the scene too. Keep it up :[color=#770077][/color]

remiseyi:

Don't let it affect you... Just do your thing and find a way to enjoy your work without others' opinions

thanks guys,i promise not to disappoint you guys.

please watch out for what happened in the next episode, i really like it,i hope you do too.

Episode 17


he placed back the phone to he’s hear then said

” that’s exactly what I am talking about, you just a stupid Bimbo that only cares about herself"


“ you are going to regret this I swear” lizzy said with anger


Dayo was happy with the way things were going, he saw the opportunity and jumped at it, he doesn’t need anything more in he’s life than a woman like funmi ,he listened on as lizzy continued and ranting , she insulted and even caused him.

After about 10minutes of heated argument between them lizzy said,

“ you know what I am done with this relationship and don’t you dare come and beg me”

Dayo laughed uncontrollably for like some seconds before saying

“ wait , you actually think I will come and beg you right, of what benefit were you to me in the first place, I am tired of all your childish attitudes, your self centeredness and every other nonsense “ he paused for a while be he continued

“a break up is just perfect, that’s exactly what I want to hear from you, thanks for setting me free”

He heard the disconnect tone as he tried to speak on ,then he looked at the screen and saw that she has hanged up,

“ mtcheeew “ he hissed loudly before heading for his car, he got to the car and placed a call to funmi.

Dayo got to school the next day and hurriedly went in search of his friends, Daniel was about leaving a seat when he heard dayo’s voice

“ whats up dany” he watched has Daniel turned around

“ dayo , how far, you are late” he asked with a little frown on his face

Dayo was surprised ” what is this guy saying” he thought to himself

“ late how? “ he looked at his watch and said” or I am even 10minutes early”

Daniel looked at his watch with a curious look,” men my watch has stopped"

both he and dayo laughed and they made their way to the place were they are to sit, as they approach the sit dayo asked

“ where is emeka?”

Daniel thought for a while before answering, I think I saw him walked by with lizzy

“here they come” Daniel said as he turned around,

Dayo saw both of them coming and waited for them to come closer before saying

” brother how far,I dey come make I see person ”

he touched emeka by the shoulder and walked past them without saying a word to lizzy, although she ignored him too

Dayo brought out his phone , dialed funmi’s number then asked her where she was.

youngcity:
Nice story
Keep it rolling

Be sure you're not discouraged, there are few people who choose to be silent but they are equally following

ok thanks bro

aolumaxi:
boyo123 iyaf fall my Hand. didnt call me to join the train back. im here sha...... #kip up the good work sir

my brother no vex o .i think say i quote you join when i continue

Nmaglit:
Don't say that always believe in yourself and bee positive. As u move on people will stumble on it they will read and comment it was the name that atttracted me to this story. Nice work dear
Kkip it up

thanks dear.am really feeling ur encouragement .

Bornita:
nice update

Nmaglit:
Kip it coming
More strength to u

remiseyi:
Nice one boyo... More ink to your pen

Missmossy:
Long time no update boyo123, kindly vote Fynestboi for Mr Nairaland. Here is the link to vote - https://www.nairaland.com/3265483/mr-nairaland-contest-2016-semi-final
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PWEETYWIZZY:
Nice one, pls dnt kip us waitn 2 long and kindly tag me

thanks for the comments appreciate
but it seems people dont really like the story,because just same set of guys are commenting

Episode 16


Shit!, he has totally forgotten to call lizzy the whole day, he thought of what to tell her for a while before picking up the call

“hi dear” dayo said as he picked the call
“hello ‘ she replied with a low tone

“ hope you are fine,can you speak louder I can hardly hear you dear” dayo tried to sound like he cared

“ I am not fine at all” lizzy relied sharply


“ what do you mean dear” he asked
Lizzy paused for a while before saying”

I dialed your number some minutes ago and its say’s busy, who were you talking to”


Dayo was confused, he wasn’t expecting such questions from her so he asked


“ what are you talking about, I don’t seem to get you”


“ I said who was the girl you were talking to on the phone before you picked mine” lizzy asked in a more loud and angry tone.

dayo became furious, he tried to calm himself down as, while he said


“ do you mind if I call you back ,I am actually driving right now”


lizzy couldn’t take it as she shouted as tears run down her cheeks “ you dare not hang up on me , you cheating bastard’


the word bastard infuriated dayo, he spotted a shop beside the road where he could purchase airtime, he quickly swerved into a nearby spot to the shop and then looked at the phone ,he realized that she had hanged up since he didn’t reply for some minutes, he made he’s way to the shop and bought some cards ,he quickly loaded them and dialed lizzy’s number,he waited for the dialed tone and she picked on the second tone,


“ what the hell was that lizzy?” dayo asked


“how dare you say such word to me” dayo continued


Lizzy finally found her voice after crying a bit


“ you cheating bastard , how dare you cheat on me with that useless ,stinking , village girl?’


Dayo couldn’t take it anymore , he felt that time was right for him to tell her how he actually feel now, he needs to let her know that he doesn’t have feelings for her anymore and sooner or later he will still break her heart, he thought of what to say but couldn’t find the right words, he finally said

“ do you wanna know the truth?, yes I am seeing funmi, who ever told you that didn’t lie to you”

“ bastard!!!!” lizzy shouted into the phone

Dayo quickly removed the phone from his hear because of the resonance.

Episode 15
Dayo was happy as he drove his car home,everything his dad said was playing in his mind,all the praises and good word of encouragement made him feel like he just won a billion dollars,he felt proud of himself but couldn’t just it as he kept saying

“thank you funmi”

“thank you soooo much”

He was about to take a turn when he heard he’s phone ring, he manage to take the sharp turn as quickly as he could before looking at the screen, and there she was, the only girl he’s heart skips for now

“hello beautiful” he said as he picked the call

“ hi dayo,na woa you didn’t even call to say hello” funmi replied

“I am sorry honey, but guess what dear”

“ you funny ,you know am not good at that”

“just try now”

“ ok ok, you just bought a new gadget , because I know you like wasting money”

“ gadget ke, no jare, I was at dad’s place today and I was able to do the work he gave me”

“ wow , you mean dad tested you again today?”

“hmmm, yeah , actually I found some papers he was working on and I helped him to finish it up when he was tired”

“ hello, are you there?”

Dayo was expecting a reply from her but couldn’t hear her, there was a break in transmission between them, by the time she was audible again she said


“ oh God, my airtime has been exhausted “ funmi said


“ oh sorry dear, I will send you a recharge card now, when I find a spot to get one, but before then let me call you back”


Dayo hang up the phone ,then checked if he still has enough airtime to put a call through o funmi, but to he’s surprise he didn’t , so he decided to wait till he gets a recharge card before calling back.


He continued driving for few minutes before he’s phone began to ring again, before looking at the phone he took a guess that it could be funmi that called back but on looking the screen, who he saw surprised him.

Episode 14


The sound of dayo's voice brought his father back from he’s nap

"what did you say?" He asked

"I said i am trough with it" he's dad was confused

"Through? With what?" He continued to ask in a confused tone,

" just decided to help out with the work you were doing, here it is hope there is no mistake"

he's dad collected the papers with anger forming in he's mind

"this boy has messed up my work "

he thought to himself as he looked at the papers one after the other.

For like five minutes he kept staring at the papers and keep wondering where the fault is but couldn’t find any, finally he became impressed

" hold on, you actually did this" he’s dad asked,

dayo smiled then said" yes dad, please hope i didn't mess it up"he asked hoping that he didn't make any,

" yeah, not really boy just that you are suppose to sum it up at the end ,although you did a good job in analyzing the work, am impressed ,that's what i want from you boy ,that’s the kind of attitude I want you to exhibit",

The word impressed made him feel like he won a jackpot, he felt like jumping up to touch the ceiling that was all he care about, to hear his father praise him again, the dad kept looking at the papers while he shake his head in amazement simultaneously.

Lizzy was in the company of her friends in her posh hostel room, her roommate and a couple of friends were chatting loudly , she refused to join them in the discussion as she had her headphone on, she couldn’t help but think about dayo.


“He has changed, the love of my life has changed,he no longer calls or say I love you when he does, even after school he hurries home like he doesn’t really enjoy my company anymore” she thought to herself almost as she was close to tears.

“ I think I just have to ask him what the problem is, I know he is not cheating on me” she paused for a while , she adjusted herself on the bed

“ he dare not !”

She was about sleeping off as she continued to think when she noticed that the music in her ears as stopped and her phone was blinking, signaling that it was ringing, she stared at the phone wondering if she knew the number, the caller had to call the second time before she picked it

“ hello” she said

“ hello , am I speaking with lizzy” the caller replied

“ yeah,who am I speaking with please?” lizzy said in a low tone.

“ hahaha, lizzy can you see how stupid you are, so you can not even take good care of him and you were fighting and insulting me over him,mtcheeew, shame on you”

Lizzy was confused as she got up from the bed to sit then asked

“what are you talking about, who is this and who did I insult you over?”

“ oh , well I am sure you can’t remember, but let me just tell you,that stupid village girl with tribal mark has taken your boyfriend”


“ do you know who my boyfriend is” lizzy asked innocently


“ see this mumu o, is your boyfriend not dayo Philips, ode like you, see funmi ehn, ordinary funmi, that tribal mark girl has taken your boyfriend, if you doubt me ask him what he comes to do at bosko area every evening around 4.30 pm”.

PWEETYWIZZY:
Nice one, pls dnt kip us waitn 2 long and kindly tag me

PWEETYWIZZY:
Nice one, pls dnt kip us waitn 2 long and kindly tag me

Missmossy:
Long time no update boyo123, kindly vote Fynestboi for Mr Nairaland. Here is the link to vote - https://www.nairaland.com/3265483/mr-nairaland-contest-2016-semi-final
To vote simply type, I vote:
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Section8:
All those busybody gals wey be like dat racheal

remiseyi:
..[/i](. [i]Oluwaseun)

sorry for keeping you waiting guys

i'm really sorry for the late update,

Episode 13
It was Tuesday morning ,dayo struggled to get out of bed ,he looked at his watch and saw that it was 9:39am ,he's heart skipped as he thought he was late for class ,he quickly rushed to the bathroom to brush he's teeth, during the process of brushing he's teeth ,he remembered what he's course mate said the previous day
"oh today is even a public holiday"


he knew he had noting much to do so he picked up he's phone and dialled he's fathers number.


"good morning dad" he said as he heard he's fathers voice at the other end of the phone,

“morning dayo he's father said" dayo didn't wait much before saying

” hope you are not too stressed with work dad"


"not really, most of the work has been assigned to the staffs ,but have only got a few of them on my table"

then the sound of the wall clock in he's fathers office sounded.

"Dad don’t tell me you are in the office o" dayo asked


“Well i don’t have anything i am doing at home ,so it’s better for me to come and finish up this little work " dayo sighed


"i don’t know why you like stressing yourself this much, anyways that will save me the stress of going home,i will be in your office soon"


It was noon before dayo arrived at his fathers office ,he schools within the state so it was easy for him to travel from the town where he's school is located to the capital of the state where he lives ,and has his dads office.

"Good afternoon sir" dayo said has he walked into the office ,

he was a bit nervous ,the memory of what happened the last time he visited was rushing through he's mind ,

"Afternoon dayo ,what took you so long,?"he's father asked

"Don’t mind me ,i ran into a little traffic"
He looked at the desk and noticed that some papers were littered on it, without thinking too much he moved towards the table and began to pick up the papers

"Are you working on this papers dad?" He asked, he's father looked in he's direction and said

"yes jare, that's the file that brought me to work today ,i need to finish it up before going home" dayo smiled ,as he arrange the paper's

"You work like you don't even own the company, this things are meant to be done by your staffs" .

Just as he was picking up the papers he noticed that the calculation on the papers were familiar,

"wait i can do this now"he thought to himself ,he looked at he's dad then asked

"Are you through with this ones?"Without wasting time the father said

"no,i just need to rest a little i will continue with that later”

dayo saw the opportunity to impress his father ,he pulled out a chair ,sat on it then began to do the calculations, he was even more happy when he applied a formula that funmi once thought him.

He didn't hear anything from he's dad so he decided to take a peep at him,

" men see this man done sleep sha"

he said looking at he's fathers direction ,he shrugged then quickly rushed through the rest of the work .

VillageBoi:


Hello people.

The first thing you said is the answer - THERE IS NO DIFFERENCE!

On the scene headings I disagree - Both the Nollywood & Hollywood headings would be written as -

EXT. MAZI OKONKWO'S COMPOUND - DAY

Unless it is ABSOLUTELY crucial to the scene no one will write in the exact time - no one. In fact I can't even think of an instance where it would even be crucial. There are only TWO acceptable times in a scene heading - DAY & NIGHT. No matter what time a scene takes place all that is evident on screen is whether it is day or night.

However, the times of DAY can be written as -

EXT. - MORNING TEXAS LANDSCAPE - SUNRISE
(As in the screenplay for Django)

That is a 'modifier' and is used to make the 'time' a bit more specific. Additional ones can be DUSK, DAWN, LATER, AFTERNOON, EVENING, EARLY EVENING - even the year for example; if you are writing a film that has time travel - just to make it more specific

There possibly might be such in 'BACK TO THE FUTURE' (sorry I dont have that script at the moment) but I can imagine different scenes of the same location to be something like -

EXT. RAILWAY STATION, 1856 - DAY

or

EXT. RAILWAY STATION, 1985 - DUSK

Why would they possibly do that? In order to aid the production - each of those scenes would have a very, very different set dressing ( a pre-prod topic for a different day).

Also a new scene can start exactly where the previous scene ended and it doesn't even have to be written as a 'proper' scene heading. For example (taken from the script LOOPER) -

Old Joe is on top of him, with a heavy blow knocking the gun aside, and with an even heavier one swinging down on Joe’s head, a fist and then
THE CORN FIELD, HOURS LATER
Joe wakes. Blood caked on his face. Headphones beside him, still squawking French lessons. Sits up.

From the above sample; time has passed so it really is new scene BUT it is also a continuation.

To all newbie writers - the thing is something Skillet said before is absolutely correct -


He basically means to be able to 'break' the rules you have to actually 'know' the rules.

Additionally, in the defence of Skillet - things change all the time. Scriptwriting does evolve and there may be a time when writing in the 'clock time' ie 5.32pm was acceptable... but definitely not today.

However, if you want to write it in your headings - you are free to, no one will kill you for it. Normally if the audience has to know the time as it is super crucial to the story then it is put in the description - you INSERT a clock or watch that shows the time or in the DIALOGUE - an actor says it.

Far too much writing in a 'scene heading' makes it harder to READ. Script readers scim and skip a lot. In fact you guys should read the script for LOOPER - In so many scenes they didn't even bother with DAY or NIGHT just -

INT. JOE'S APARTMENT
INT. WAITING ROOM
INT. BORDELLO ENTRANCE
EXT. CORN FIELD

I'm thinking they did that to make the reading faster - no idea. My theory is if they wrote DAY four pages back then assume everything remains DAY until you hit the next 'time change' in another scene heading. Totally weird but I guess that's what they did.

are you a script writer? please take a look at my write ups

https://www.nairaland.com/2649223/one-night-stand

https://www.nairaland.com/2679136/bbw-big-bold-woman-short

i still have more stories that are not here on nairaland.

thanks will be expecting your reply

aolumaxi:
ok sir. the story is interesting nd we dnt wanna get bored checking for updates

bro i will definately tag u wen i upload a new episode.sorry about the delay its beyong my control.

aolumaxi:
boyo 123. be fast with ur update please

bro nox.i dont want to feed u crap thats y.nd nepa issures too

episode 12


Dayo was angry ”this nonsense Rachael has come to spoil his chance , now he has to start all over again” funmi refused to lay back on the bad as she insisted on they continuing with the lesson, but dayo was serious now , he demanded to know what happened before he could continue with the class,” funmi I can’t concentrate either, your condition is getting to me too, you don’t understand ,how can I be ok if you are not ”he said with a serious facial expression. funmi felt the goose pimples that covered her skin as dayo’s words magically worked on her, she couldn’t take his pestering anymore so she thought for a moment then said ”you don’t have to be like that dayo, I will be fine, it’s just a mild headache she lied, dayo refused to go on with the class as he insisted on she taking some drugs before he leave.


He was about getting up from the bed when his phone rang, he looked at the screen and surprisingly it was his dad,”good evening dad” he said with a low voice as he picked the call,he wasn’t expecting a call from his dad, he thought the man was still angry with him,he could remember the last time his dad called was few days after that incident at his office ,and that was to inform him that he was travelling out of the country for some business seminar, but since them he hadn’t called him, and he too never bordered to call, now hearing his dad’s voice made him wonder ,as he said” evening dayo, how are you?” dayo replied almost Immediately fine sir” but to his surprise his dad said “ dayo is this how irresponsible you have become? , you didn’t even border to call, you didn’t even care to know how my seminar was going” .



Dayo almost burst into laugh as he was surprised by his father’s words,” so this man even miss me” he thought to himself before saying “ am so sorry dad, it’s not what you think,I have been soo busy this days that I hardly have time for myself,but one thing I never forget is praying for you “ he knew the right words to used when it comes to dealing with his dad, the old man never jokes with prayer, so he had used that to calm him down, just like he had predicted the dad said” really? Thank you son , I never forget you in mine too.


So how have you been coping without money ?”dayo’s smile widened as he heard the word money,” I have just been trying to adjust to the situation” he’s dad replied “ what situation is that?” dayo smiled “ the situation of not disturbing you much for money” his dad interrupted him before he could finish the statement” young man do you have another father apart from me?”dayo smiled again” no dad” so what are you talking about, anyway check your account tomorrow I will send some money to you” dayo was so happy he quickly made a promise to go and visit him during the following week before hanging up

Episode 11


She continued hissing as she tries to explain somethings to him, Dayo kept asking her to tell him what was wrong but she shrugged, then when she couldn't take it anymore she stood up from the chair she was sitting and hurriedly moved to the bed, Dayo became excited as he felt that was a perfect opportunity for him to touch her, he waited for sometime as he kept asking her what was wrong, but she continued to keep mute, it was then that he stood up and moved to the bed to join her, he laid on the bed so could be facing her as he insisted on knowing what was wrong, yet she remained mute while Dayo hesitated for a while before moving closer to her , then like he knew what she wanted he wrapped his hand around her body,she quiver a bit but he held her steal, so she couldn’t moved but before he could make further moves , they heard a knock on the door.


Rachel was quit eager as she knocked on the door of the room, she wasn’t sure of what she could ask funmi, but she went ahead to knock on the door, she heard her voice on the second knock , as she said” hold on please” Rachel was beginning to feel suspicious as it took her few minutes to open the door,” na na wa o, where you sleeping “ she asked , funmi was a bit reluctant to respond as she held on to the door, hoping that she would just asked for whatever she wanted there,she stammered as she managed to reply”sorry Rachel, I was about to sleep”, Rachel took a step towards her , making her intention known that she wants to enter the room, funmi had no choice than leaving the leaving the door for her to go in.


Rachel was good at hiding the shock she felt as she walked into the room,so many thoughts went through her mind as she couldn’t believe she could find dayo in funmi’s room,not only that he was there in her room, but he was sitting right on her bed. “hello” she said as she tries to act like she wasn’t feeling anything, funmi tries to cut her visit short as she demanded what she wanted” Rachel , what brought you to my house today” ,Rachel looked shocked as she wasn’t expecting the question from her,she thought funmi wasn’t the rude type “ na wa, you didn’t even ask me to sit down” she asked jokingly , funmi was about to talk when dayo interrupted “ wait seems I have seen this face before”dayo asked , Bleep YOU!!!, Rachel thought in her mind “ yeah, she’s from our department “ funmi replied,” wow that’s great , how are you dear”dayo tries to be friendly but to his surprise , Rachel turned to look at him then made a loud hiss, she turned back to funmi then said” thought you will appreciate me coming to saying hello” she hissed again then left the room.

pachman:
Nice story but I though it was a short one.

its not finished bro.the story jst started