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I'm back here, hoping and praying I get to see the end of this story.

kayo80:
Okay

It's been a long while, and finally I've gotten to the end of this. I will try and catch up to the rest. Kudos to you, and your amazing stories that captivates my mind. Respect to your own, cause it is filled with mind-blowing imagination.

I don come back... Thanks for the update Boss... Following this...

Now I'm up to date with this one. Bros Kayo80 abeg no forget say we dey here...

Respect to the Man. This is beautiful to the very end.... @Kayo80 it's been a long while.

LemuelIrabor:
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A nudge in the guts from my impossible seatmate and pal, the irrepressible Joseph Etuk was all it took to bring me back to base. And damn, it hurt.
“What, is this Frustrate-Martin-Till-He-Does-Something-He’ll-Regret day now?”, I spat angrily as I faced him.
Joe had been laughing at something he’d read in a piece of paper in his hand, but with the unrefined manner in which I reacted, his lips became taut with apprehension.
“Is anything the matter, Martin?”
I could tell Joe was mad at me, or at least so confused that he didn’t use his usual choice of words, preferring to call me directly by my given name. Who wouldn’t be?
I didn’t answer Joe’s question right away. I turned towards the front where Miss Alabi was answering the questions she’d written on the board as a classwork exercise. Why she even tried, I wondered.
Perhaps she..
“Martin, buddy, answer me,” Joe said as he shook my sleeve. His tone had changed from one of indignation to one of concern.
I shook my head pitifully. I was ruining my friendship with my present attittude.
“You won’t understand, man.”
“Try me.”
Joe refused to back off so easily. Maybe he thought he was finally getting somewhere.
I was just about to throw another temper tantrum at him, when the bell rang for a change of classes. As if on cue, everyone proceeded to dump their English texts and notes in their bag packs and slowly file out enroute the Physics laboratory. Miss Alabi was no where to be found. Apparently, she too had been waiting for the toll of the bell to take-off.
Joe grabbed my arm as I tried to join the line ahead in a bid to escape any more uncomfortable questionss from him.
Why is everyone stopping me in my tracks these days?
“Tell me, after Physics class. We good?”
OK, now Joe was beginning to sound like my father.
And before I could say another word, he disappeared into the exodus of final year students, moving to the Physics lab.
Oh, crap! Can this day just end already?

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I had to quote, forgot how to mention. I just reread the whole thing this night and I must say, I regret being a silent reader.

Heard the story is an ebook I would love to get a copy. I badly want to know what's up with the characters.

PS: I ship Marty and Tessy.

Love your choice of words funny puns, character and world building, it's more like you bring what you are to the world and let them see the you, you are.

This is awesome believe me, anyone who thinks otherwise can visit the place of damnation and stay there.

Honestly, this was one of the most beautiful stories I've read so far. it's been years since any sign of progress.

it's so sad that it's abandoned, I feel really sad. most times I reread it, to feel the thrill I felt the first time.

it's heartbreaking to see it come to an end like this. I know you're busy and all, everyone is aiming for something. Just so you know, I was touched by this awesome story and would love to read the whole thing.

More grease to your elbow bruv.

Bros Kayo80 it's been a while. Your biggest fan on nairaland is back. Had issues trying to remember my password, but I'm back and I've been writing. Hopefully you would teach me the ropes.

But please this masterpiece shouldn't go unfinished, I would love to read the end. More grease to your elbow and more blessings to your hard work.

I wish you completed this... I love this

Silver1996:
I intend continuing this story very soon sir..

Am seated... man waiting

Another one forgotten... Bro I would appreciate if you helped my curiosity... Been following this from the beginning...

And am back here waiting for this story to be completed... I love your work... It has inspired me to write something buh I need to clarify it before posting... Buh please don't leave me hanging on this one...
Your greatest Fan...
I.k

I was a ghost reader buh now am loving this.... The interview was awesome and funny... I really love the creativity that's added to make it spicy... I just don't know why some people don't understand it... Looking for more update, please don't disappoint...
Thanks... From concerned reader...
Asemark

Am back... These are one hell of an update... They are always awesome... I still have that problem of facing a large crowd ���

kayo80:
Chapter 4: My First Kiss: Part 1

I had my first kiss when I was 21 years old, during a party at the end first semester, year two. It was with a girl from my past called Dumebi. Dumedi and I had attended the same tutorial centre while preparing for Jamb a few years before I got into the university of Lagos. Actually she wasn’t really my friend at the time, her half sister was.

Dumebi was shy light skinned beauty that sat quietly at the front row of the class, and left as soon as the last class was over. Her half-sister, Ejiro on the other hand was an extrovert that was friendly with all the boys. Ejiro had a friend called Grace my friend Fola was crushing on back then, and Fola and I would always walk them home after classes. Even though I had my eye on Dumebi, I was always mostly with Ejiro to help my friend get some alone time with Grace, so I never really got a chance to talk to Dumebi.

Along the line, we found out Ejiro and Dumebi had an elder sister that was in the same university with my elder sister. Not only were they in the same school, they were best friends. We then started visiting Ejiro at home with the pretense of delivering messages from her sister without their parents thinking otherwise. And Grace’s parents were strict, but she was always allowed to visit her friend, Ejiro. They never knew the real persons she always went there to see was my friend, Fola- It was a well executed plan for a bunch of 16 year olds.

We started getting into school one an after the other, as time went on and the whole friendship fizzled away. One weekend during my visit home in my year 2, I drove my sister to the market and on our way back home, she said she wanted to make a quick stop at her friend’s house. She gave me directions, and I didn’t know where we were going to till we ended up at Dumebi’s house.

I turned off the car engine, and waited while my sister went into the house. She had told me she would be real quick, so I thought there was no use going in with her. Some seconds after she went in, the house gate swung open and I saw Dumebi step out. She looked here and there till she saw the red Benz and a big smile appeared on her face. Dumebi had blossomed like a flower. The blue tank top she had on clung to her busty upper body, and the white shots she was wearing exposed thick, fresh yellow laps. She was like a totally different person.

I was frozen in my seat just looking at her as she approached the car. She opened the front passenger door enthusiastically and got in with me. “Wow! Kunle, I can’t believe it. It’s been ages.” She said, so happy to see me.

“Yea, it’s really been a while. Wow!” I said, looking at her from top to bottom, still not believing how much she had changed; both physically and in her mannerisms.

She giggled a little at the way I starred at her and nudged me before saying, “Why didn’t you come in?”

“I thought…I thought you would be in school or something.” I said and cleared my throat.

“Well, I am in Law School now; Victoria Island law school. I just came home to get some things.”

“Oh! Okay.” I said as my mind travelled. I couldn’t believe she was already in law school.

“How is Lag? I know you have a lot of girlfriends right now.” She said and laughed lightly. I didn’t say anything back, and she went on to say, “Tony always tells me he sees you every now and then.”

“Yea. Our faculties aren’t too far apart.” I answered. Tony was her elder brother, but was also my friend from the neighbourhood. I was lost in thought for a second, thinking of what she had said about being in law school. It meant she had spent at least five years in the higher institution, and I was just on my second year.

I turned to look at her and I saw her staring at me, smiling so strangely. I thought she would look away but she kept the gaze, till I looked away. She laughed a little before saying, “It’s really funny.”

“What? What’s really funny?” I asked her with a curious look on my face.

“Nothing. Don’t worry.” She said and looked out the window.

“No way, you have to tell me.”

She was quiet for a few seconds before going on to say, “It’s funny that I used to have a huge crush for you back in the day.”

“Are you serious?” I said and looked at her intensely. “You had a crush for me? What about now?” I asked with a smile on my face.

“The crush has turned to Fanta.” She said and laughed.

I joined her in laughing after I got the joke. I almost didn’t catch her play on words. The car got quiet after we stopped laughing, and I asked her, “So I’m not fine again?”

“I didn’t say that o. I just said the crush has turned to Fanta.” She said and laughed a little again. Just then, my sister came out of the house with her sister. “Okay. I got to go now. I was actually cooking inside.” She said and tapped my shoulder before opening the car door. She was about to step out of the car when I grabbed her arm. “Wait. Let me have your phone number.” I had gotten a Nokia 1100 at the time, and I pulled the slim phone out of my jeans pocket and handed it over to her. After typing in her number and handing me back the phone, she leaned in slowly and for a second, I thought she was going to kiss me on the cheek. But she whispered in my ear “you’re still handsome” before getting out of the car.

I watched her walk away as I felt butterflies in my stomach. She stopped to greet my sister briefly and then turned around by her house gate to give me one last smile before she went out of sight.

My oga is back

kayo80:
Thanks. I really appreciate this comment.

I haven't forgotten this one yet oooooh... If you are talking your time, no problem

kayo80:
It finally got to front page...I thank you all.

We gat your back

Finally am the first to reply after an update ��� All the same you are welcome... I just hope this time you wouldn't go M.I
A ... And please don't rush it, take all the time you want in this world, thanks for the update... Kayo80...
Your biggest..

I hope this finds you in good health, Bro Kayo80 you have been an inspiration for me loved your works from the very first moment, Good bless your hand. Even though am still waiting for this story to be complete I want it not to be rushed...
from your biggest fan...

opparadise:
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You want to buy all a writer's book so I should dig my grave?
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Let me explain life to you:
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1. You are uncreative.
2. Go to Okadabook and buy them there and stop flaunting your borrowed wealth.
3. Nobody cares about you or your time and deadline.
4. You may try to argue, but I will snub you like you are non existent.
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Let me score you: 0/100.
Remark: Use your cash, buy a cow-rope, go to a nearby bush, hang yourself.

I just have to ask was he talking to you... Where you asked to comment..
Dude go get a life and Bleep off someone's back...

I could relate to the way he feels...

Not once have you failed in showing me that there is something beautiful in every writing...

Where was i even the first seat where taken...

How do you do it... what's your drive... Every piece you write is overwhelming... I just have one request teach me how you do it... The only thing I wrote correctly was my philosophies of life that I gathered... From past experience, books I read and lectures from people...

I need to tell you that it's hard to pick one chapter... So anyone that has more suspense would do... Love the update... Wishing it would come daily...���

You never cease to amaze me... This is wonderful...

Ohh!!! I feel this... Kunle and I are similar in some ways... Thanks for the update... Always appreciated...

kayo80:
Hello guys...I'm back; after just a week of retirement. lol. I guess I'm a WRITER...and a writer must write. Anyway, I was going to really take a break, but over the weekend, I met up with a girl I met here (Literature section), and while having drinks and Asun, I asked her to tell me a story. I do that a lot when I meet people in real life. Everyone has a story to tell, and truth is stranger than fiction. Anyway, after hesitating for a while, she started with a love story of when she was in school. Her whole stories all revolved around this one guy...a reserved guy that seemed to be loved by everyone. When i got home that night, the idea for this story was formed. So, thanks to that girl...she knows who she is. Also, thanks to olufemiwhit who urged me to be persistent with my writing here.


Unlike my other stories, which are written in third person narrative, this is written in first person point of view. It is a little different from my normal style, but it is still romance. I just wanted to be a bit versatile with this one. And this story is going to be a lot longer than my other works. I hope you enjoy it.

Finally... At least I never waited in vain

Can you imagine this girl too my position in commenting first....�� All the same Bros Kayo80 I still dey here...