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linpok: Nice. Update! Bt how com Zainab slapped Jummy,den d stori turned to where jummy was tryna enquire about how she got a swollen face

I guess you missed the time periods i added before each paragraph. 9:30PM 10:00PM.

EPISODE 32 A.

10:00 PM. Thursday.

With all the energy she could gather, Zainab gave Jummy a deafening slap. It was so loud that the neighbors at the extreme end of the street heard it and became scared, hoping it wasn't what they thought it was.

"Are you high on cheap drugs?!" Zainab yelled at Jummy who was totally confused and now counting the stars only her could see. "Jumoke, what's wrong with you? Are you that desperate?" Zainab asked.

Jummy couldn't find the right words to reply Zainab with so she kept quiet, glaring at Zainab, the slap had been surprisingly very painful.

"Jummy, I rushed into marriage with Richard and you saw where we ended up. Your case is even worse, not only do you want to rush it, you want to get into it for the wrong reasons." Zainab moved closer to Jummy, held her hands and looked into her eyes.

"Jummy, don't do this," she said sympathetically.

* * * * *

9:30PM. 30 MINUTES AGO.

"Any problem here?" Henry asked as he had gotten closer to Zainab, he spotted Taofeek before he walked into his house and thought it might be trouble, so he decided to come and be Zainab's knight in a shining armor.

Zainab turned to Henry and with a fake smile she said, "non at all, I'm sure you've met Jummy, this is my brother, Taofeek. Taofeek this is my friend, Henry."

Both men stretched forwards their hands and shook it, "nice meeting you." They both said in unison and just smiled back at each other in response. Taofeek had a warm smile on his face but Henry gave him a cold stare which some how said: "Nigga, you ain't welcome here."

By the time they retracted their hands, Henry turned to Zainab and asked in a low tone, so low only Zainab could hear, "You never told me you have any siblings."

"You never asked," Zainab replied.

Henry shrugged, she had a good point and he had no reply to fire back so he turned to the small pack of people and literally screamed, "okay, I think I'll be going to my house now," he paused and turned to Taofeek, "nice to meet you, hope you going to stay long, because I wouldn't mind knowing some of those secrets Zainab would never tell me." A warm laughter followed and even Jummy who hadn't really been in a good mood smiled a little.

"I really don't know, but let's see how it goes," Taofeek replied with a grin and watched Henry walk back to his gate and enter his house.

As soon as Henry was gone, Taofeek started grinning at Zainab so hard it made her uncomfortable.

"What?!" Zainab asked.

"Nothing, you didn't tell me you now have a personal security guard or is he the new boyfriend?" Taofeek replied and his grin grew wider.

Zainab smiled and changed the topic, "okay then, let's go in, I hope you are spending the night here? Its already too late to go to an hotel and its rather stupid considering I have a free guest room."

"Okay, if you say so." Taofeek replied, he knew Zainab just avoided the question.

Zainab looked at Jummy and saw the swollen eyes once again, and concluded Jummy obviously had some gists for her. She opened the gate and let Jummy and Taofeek walk into the house while she drove her car into the compound.

By the time she had successfully parked the car and walked into the house, Jummy and Taofeek were already sitting in the palor in total silence. For her brother, it was a normal thing since he wasn't much of a talker just like Zainab but It was really unusual for Jummy to keep quiet for so long and Zainab noticed it.

"Errr... The guest room is over there... The second door by your left," Zainab said to her brother trying to take things easy and be in charge of the situation.

Her brother smiled and walked to the room as Zainab directed, pulling a small trolley bag along with him.

As soon as the brother was out of sight, she walked to the couch where Jummy was sitted and dropped her handbag on the floor.

"So what's up?" Zainab asked.

"Nothing much," Jummy replied, "how was work today?"

"Apart from discovering Henry now worked at TOP, my day was just casual. Enhen, that reminds me, aren't you meant to be at China now or something like that?" Zainab asked.

"Yes, I am but the trip got cancelled."

"Is that why your eyes are swollen? Don't tell me you cried over it." Zainab said in a mocking tone, "let me guess, you were hoping to travel to Dubai afterwards to shop right?"

Jummy smiled, "you think everyone is like you? Shopping at every opportunity you get."

"So why is your eyes swollen?" Zainab asked grinning, "did you finally fight with that Mrs Ogbonaya at your work place and she ended up beating you up?"

Jummy looked at Zainab and she was sure Zainab grin would fade once she told her what was troubling her.

"You are killing me with suspense, what's wrong with you na?" Zainab replied sounding impatient.

"Its John." Jummy finally said.

"John? What about him?"

"Its a long story..." Jummy replied, still trying to decide if it was such a good idea to tell Zainab about it.

"Well, you had better start gisting me now before it gets to my bed time." Zainab replied and braced herself for the 'long story'.

TO BE CONTINUED by 6PM.

PS: Click here - http://sochistar./2013/11/21/b•i•t•c•h-jummys-delima-i-episiode-32/ to read the full episode on my blog now!!!.

Morning guys, hope you didn't miss me too much? . Err, I've gotten a new job that's time consuming so maybe I'll have to cut down the weekly update to maybe three times weekly,n I don't know which days I'll be posting but just watch and see.

Enjoy today's episode of bitch and as usual, the full episode is already here > http://sochistar./2013/11/21/b•i•t•c•h-jummys-delima-i-episiode-32/ on my blog, so click if you can't wait for 6PM.

@Raregem - you have a valid point, but who knows, I might just twist issues a little bit in a way that would make you change your thoughts .

@eni gurl - lol, I see you babes... Where have you been na?

@Babie - you couldn't have said it any better

@temizy - don't mind the John guy jhur, I'll treat his Bleep ups.

@daniel - thanks.

@pwetty olly - thanks b. The ebook isn't out yet and its meant to be completed this weekend but considering I haven't had much time to spare and I want the ebook to be close to perfect, it might take a little longer than that.

@d ella luv - hmmmm... Help? You think?

@fobit- u don't have to wait too long.

@felipe - how do I cope? Errr... Let's just say all glory be to God for giving me the brain and strength. At times I type all night so that you guys can wake up and see a new episode. But it could be pretty easy attimes when i have the ideas all planned out in my head, thankfully I have a smart phone which I can type with anytime and anywhere even if I'm not on my system.

@Mhelena - hmmm... I see...

Chukwudi the stronger... Hmmmm... Funny and nice, I can only imagine how Mr A face would be like when Chuks show up at his house perfectly sane. And by the way, is there any particular reason why you keep on using asterisk on Mr A**** name, are we gonna find out why later or do you just want us to replace the asterisk with any letters of our choice?

Chuksemi: Really, are homosexuals born the way they are? Or is it a psychological issue?

I wonder too

Clemzy16: ^^ I'll would have loved to contribute to this issue on ground but i'll either be derailing or be an oversabi. So i comment my reserve. Please let us just move on with the story.

sure, the story would move on , ur point of view is welcomed nah, as a matter of fact, I insist u say ur mind as long as it has to do with the issue on ground

Ms Spaqs: This one that Zainab keeps thinking abt Boniface .In the part A of the story you wrote John instead of samuel in the 29th paragraph

thanks 4 pointing dat out, I corrected it in the raw copy but the stress of correctn it here is a long story lazy me.

kingphilip: Since she's sensing a long nyt ahead hope we too wont be experiencing a long time for update ahead

btw nyc story tho chilling off and waiting for the nxt update

I'll try my best to update as usual.

SO judging from the tonnes of coments and emails I've received, I think I did justice to the follow up , guess it was worth the wait.

And b4 I 4get, @clemzy, u once said something about not seeing the babes in total control yet, well look deeper, one of dem has started showing her real colour, the other is still in the "fallen" period.

Ohibenemma: 1 - The million naira answer is YES! Firstly, your John and Samuel characters are simply warped and need help.

2- Secondly, character Jummy is weakness personified to even consider such a pride laden offer. Is she so poor?

3 - Finally, your attempt at justifying them is kinda sickening. Including the twist in your story shows versatility,

4 - but justifying it shows moral ineptitude.

5 - Now, are you gay or bisexual?

6- You should know that your morality also comes to bear on your readers.

7 - Jummy may not be very pretty, but your initial accounts have shown that she gets a fair share of male attention.

8 - she's comfortable and shouldn't be TOO desperate for financial comfort from a ... Sexual orientation is 80% a matter of choice. Some became so through succumbing to temptation - maybe from their hostel mates, etc, others by experimentation...but all choose to lay it at nature's feet.

9 - Many have been cured of their NATURAL DISEASES by PSYCHOLOGISTS! So spin another yarn! I've been enjoying the story for what it is,

10 - but I feel when it comes to such controversial issues, the author should either maintain a moral ground or TOTALLY leave the debate for the fans.

1 - if I'm right! John and Samuel should be blamed? Okay, cool.
2 - You are thinking from a direct point of view and not from "Jummy's" point of view, she admits its crazy to even consider the offer but anyone in her shoes would have done the same.

3 & 4 - Lol, justify? Please don't get me wrong. I'm not trying to justify any of my character's action, I'm just trying to make sure you guys (d readers) view it from all angles that's why I raised that arguement.

5 - nope, am as straight as I can be .

6 - well, my readers should know I'm very blunt and open minded. I really don't care if two guys strip naked in a room as long as they do it when I can't see them and definitely not in my room. What I'm simply trying to say is I'm indifferent about the situation. Religiously, its totally wrong and as a Christian, I believe they would go to "hell" but who am I to judge?

7 - I'll talk more about this on the next episode.

8 - you underestimate the power of money, money isn't everything but it sure makes the world go round. Who wouldn't like to have more than enough money to spend just by doing nothing or very little work? She is human you know?

9 - this homosexual thing is a pyschological issue? Hmmm, that's an angle I haven't really viewed it from, I'll make a research on it.

10- hmmm, I try my best to leave all the "arguments" to the readers, and I still do, I just try to make sure the argument is a solid one and all cards have been turned.

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Thanks 4 your comment, it sure worked me up a lot and opened my eyes to some angles of the plot that needs to be worked on. I'll be expecting more sir.

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She tried to hold back the tears at first but couldn't anymore as she bursted out wailing. Her feet felt so weak and couldn't carry the weight of her body any longer so she slumped with a loud thud and cried so violently with all her soul that if tears could change everything back to normal, her tears would have.

She was crying because she had just watched the best thing in her life turn into her worst nightmare all in a few minutes, she was crying because she had been fooled by John so easily, she was crying because no one had warned her, she was crying because she had been so blinded that she didn't think of anything fishy when John said no to sex, she was crying because she saw nothing wrong with two fully grown men living in one house and only one did all the hustling, but most of all she was crying because she was ashamed of herself that she was even considering John's offer.

It seemed like a good deal. She would finally give her nagging mum the grand child she wanted, she would be called a "MRS" and no longer "MISS," she won't have to keep up with the who GNP drama anymore with Stephen and Mrs Ogbanaya playing with her like a toy. And to top it all, she would have more money than she could spend, it was indeed a great deal that most ladies would jump into without any hesitation.

John squatted close to her and said, "you don't have to give me a reply now, go home and think about it but you have to reply me before the week runs out so I'll know if I should still buy the engagement ring." With that, John stood up and walked out of the room.

Samuel stood up and walked to the door, before he walked out of he room, he turned to Jummy, "you might have noticed I don't really like you, I even told John to go after that your friend but he was more attracted to you, should I give you an advice?"

With her eyes clouded with tears, Jummy looked up at Samuel inquisitively, "take the deal, John can have the present Miss Nigeria if he want with the snap of a finger, but he chose you which means you are truly special to him. As he said, what we both have is just a beneficial sexual relationship, nothing more."

Samuel walked out of the room too leaving Jummy all alone, the deal seemed more attractive now.

She cried for an extra hour and with a huge effort, she called for a cab, she could risk driving in her situation.

The cab came some minutes later and she gave the driver Zainab's address. She needed to talk to someone and Zainab was the only one that crossed her mind.

* * * * *

As Zainab cruised pass the huge platform the which had "WELCOME TO FESTAC" written above it, she began to wonder why Henry hadn't dropped yet.

The journey hadn't been so much fun as Henry hadn't spoken much and Zainab wasn't much of a talker neither, that was why she and Jummy made a good team because Jummy did all the talking for her.

She looked at Henry and then turned back to face the road, but then she glanced at Henry again and back at the road, she wasn't to ask him why he hadn't dropped but just didn't.

Henry who had been silently observing her finally asked, "am I that cute?" He smiled.

"Huh?" Zainab exclaimed, who is deceiving this one? She thought.

"You have been staring at me for quite a long while now, am I that attractive to look at?"

Zainab laughed, "you don't really want me to answer that."

Henry joined her laughing, "you are a case. Anyway, how your day by the way?"

"Hectic as usual, but I survived. How about yours, I read the report you wrote and I guess you day went pretty smooth, right?"

"Yes, but not entirely though," Henry replied and switched on a sober look.

"What went wrong?" Zainab asked.

"I was kinda hoping you would hang around all through the day, but you barely spent a minute."

"Oh! My work is basically to supervise and take notes. I still wonder why they call me a director since all sections has a sub-director already. So when I saw you had it all covered, I didn't thing it was necessary I hanged around.

"And at the end of the day, you take all the glory," Henry sighed and added, "a typical case of Monkey work baboon chop."

Zainab giggled, "and if things don't go well, I take all the blame."

Henry just smiled and kept quiet.

Zainab sighted her bus stop just at the end of the road and became worried once more, "aren't you going to drop? I've almost gotten home."

"Yes, I am, don't worry about me, I've got it all covered." He grinned.

"Okay oh, Mr I've-got-it-all-covered," she teased and the both laughed.

As Zainab cruised into the road her house was on, her head lamp caught a glimpse of a figure at her gate, she had long fired the former security guard so she wondered who that could possibly be. She kept her thoughts to herself and cruised closer to the her gate.

Just as she was about to drive pass the house before hers, Henry spoke, "I'll drop here."

"Sorry?" She asked like she didn't hear what he said.

"I said you should stop here."

"Why? Do you live here?" She asked looking confused.

"Yea, for now though. This is a TOP official house and since I'm now on their payroll, the gave it to me to live in. Its a coincidence that we are now neighbors." Henry winked.

Zainab just smiled and parked the car, she knew it was more than a mere coincidence, but she couldn't complain, she knew all of this was just Henry's way of getting her attention and she liked his method... Creative.

She drove to her gate and stepped out of her car to go and open the gate when she saw who had been standing at her gate all along, it was someone who she least expected, "Toafeek!" She exclaimed, "what are you doing here?"

Toafeek grinned, "is that how you greet your elder brother you haven't seen in years?"

Zainab felt something was wrong because experience had taught her that august visitors never really brought good news with them. Before Zainab could reply a cab pulled up beside her car at the front of her house and Jummy stepped out of it. Her eyes were swollen and she looked like a mess. Zainab knew something was wrong somewhere.

"Any problem here?" Henry asked as he had gotten closer to Zainab, he spotted Toafeek before he walked into his house and thought it might be trouble, so he decided to come and be Zainab's knight in a shining armor.

Zainab looked at Jummy, then back at Toafeek before staring at Henry, she could sense a long night ahead.

TO BE CONTINUED

Ishilove: 1 - Asides that, this story is the first that has been able to grip my undivided attention in my Nairaland experience. Good job Royver, keep it up. I am salivating for more.

2 - You stated that Obi would have been roughly Chuks height if he wasn't confined to a wheelchair. What height is that? You didn't state it. We don't even have the minutest detail of the physical aspect of the protagonist. Is he dark? Fair? Musclebound? Chubby? Lean? Does he have any distinctive feature?

3 - I am also wondering; Chuks was born with a gift. He sees the good, the bad and the ugly. I am guessing his age should be between 25-27, so in other words, that is close to three decades of supernatural experiences. This means he is no rookie. I am surprised that he was not able to grasp or sense the evil sorrounding the chief. The man ought to be giving off the stench of evil in waves.

4 - I am surprised also that he was not able to see or perceive the invisible guards for what they really are: DEMONS. This is someone who can see into a person's aura. This is someone who can see into the spirit realm. He saw the abracadabra being performed by the pastor, he saw the vulture on the chorister's head, he 'casts out' demons, heck, he even has a guardian angel. At what times does this guardian angel appear? How does he communicate with this angel? Where was this angel when the chief placed the demon of madness on the protagonist? Chuks sees things for what they really are, so how could a highly demonised chief pass through his radar?? A man like chief who is involved in blood rituals and commands demons will have a lot going on for him in the spirit. A vairiety of marks, symbols, stains etc


5 - Good job!!

1 & 5 - I totally agree with you.

2 - I agree he hasn't done justice to the description but at the same time I think he should do too much, I believe the key to a great description is to just give a "guideline" and let the readers fill in the blank spaces. #justSaying.

3 & 4 - We know that Mr A is definetely an evil man who got his riches and "powers" through an evil mean,s there is every probablity that he somehow has a power that kind of made Chuks not to be entirely able to tell the difference between the things he "saw" and reality.

[quote author=Foxy_Flow]Seriously, I hate it when I am referred to as FLOXY....

Wetin dey do you self [/quote]lol, you own na just "FLOXY" and na once in a while so Ɣ you dey vex?
I get called "chister" "cheater" "christar" "chista" "chestar" and all sort of names that make me wonder weither people can't see the bold brown coloured "CHISTAR" that is written above every comment I make on NL. it could be annoying attimes, but what can I do?

WOW! I can see a lot of angry people, you all seem to have forgotten this is exactly how life truly is in the sence that things doesn't always go the way we planed.

Jummy is obviously ashamed of herself that she is even considering the deal, but come to think of it, is the deal such a bad one? Jummy isn't that attractive looking and is aging fastly, so the probablity to get a suitor as "good" as John is rare. Before you judge her, put yourself in her shoe.

Then as for John, is it his fault that he is attracted to males as well as female? I hate to say this but I think being bisexual, homosexual, gay or whatever you want to call it isn't a case of choice because I don't think anyone in his right senses would want to be created abnormally. He obviously loves Jummy as he had showed in the past and as he said, he was eventually going to tell Jummy about his "situation". So the 100 million naira question is this - is there anyone we can actually blame and why exactly?

Ruby is back!!! Yay!!

I guess all I've got to say is - it was fun while it lasted . By the way, I like your username, I think it says a lot "Mysterious" "miss. Terious."

With so much hate, I wonder how many likes you'll have if u start a likes thread . Funny enough I hate more than half of the things u hate too ... U 4got one very important "hate" though... Hate of oversabi

chade: Oh my goosh..........i feel lyk slappin remorse into dis john of a person

, me too!

WOW

Danpersie31: #whisting#chistar my long lost broda hw na?welcome

lol, lost ke? I've just been busy on my new story jhur... I see u sha.[quote author=Foxy_Flow]This thread no get decorum at all oo...

E dey pull traffic sha so you no go see Mynd for here...

You guys are eating up the pages and The Rock aint even updating... [/quote]oga! Calm down na , the guy is just starting the thread and its too early to judge its organization. We, his readers are just excited to see that he has decided to continue this nice story .

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@rock- BTW, my idea of rag day is quite different from your discription, but I think urs is better and more fun . *anticipating d next post*

EPISODE 31A

The day was over and the TOP building was getting more scanty by the second and people left for their homes in their numbers.

Zainab was done directing the last show of the day, it was a fashion show so she actually did more of the directing than just standing back and watch as the director in charge of fashion shows did his work.

Zainab had always been a survivor and a "strong" lady who never let anyone push her around and thus her parents and siblings had long stopped worrying about her well being because they knew she was always just fine by herself. As she wrote a report on how the day went, thoughts of her family crossed her mind and she instantly made a mental note on that spot to travel to Canada and see her family the first chance she got, she had no idea why she they crossed her mind but she sure liked the fact that it did.

Finally, after thirty long minutes of transferring excerpts from her notes into the report sheet, she finally gave a sigh of relief as she tapped on the send button on her computer screen and waited for the "YOUR EMAIL HAS BEEN SENT" alert that came up immediately after the message had been delivered. Zainab wondered why she couldn't just write the report down and on her way out, drop it at the management office rather than email it to them, but rules were rules and TOP sure had their ways of doing things.

Zainab stood up from her chair and with the speed of light, she picked up her handbag and stormed out of the building heading straight to the car park, by this time, the building was so empty that the little drops of water which came from the water dispenser which hadn't been locked properly could be heard from someone like Zainab who was at a really considerable distance from it.

She had gotten to the car park and was about to enter her car when she was startled by a "hey! Zain," she turned back, expecting to see E.A who was the only person who used to call her that but to her greatest surprise it wasn't E.A but Henry.

"Henry!" She exclaimed in surprise, "what are you still doing here by this time of the day?"

Henry grinned, "I'm a grown man, I don't have a curfew anymore and besides, I wanted to see the most beautiful lady on earth before she left."

Zainab sighed, "let me give you a tip, flattery annoys me, so please stop it."

"Do you have a mirror?" Henry asked.

"What does that have to with what we are talking about now?" Zainab asked looking perplexed.

"Everything. I doubt you have a mirror because if you did, you would have seen yourself and know I'm not flattering you."

Zainab hated flattery but that line got to her and she could feeling her cheeks get red, "aren't you going home?" She quickly asked in an attempt to change the topic.

"Oh! Yea, that brings me to the second reason why I was waiting for you. I was hoping you would give me a lift?" Henry asked.

Zainab smiled, "sure, no problem. Hop in!"

Henry gave her a charming smile and went round the car to the seat beside the driver's seat to seat down, she entered the car and switched it on, before she zoomed off, she asked, "where do you stay?"

"Don't worry, when we get to where I'll stop, I'll let you know." Henry said, he still had the proud grin on his face and he was starting to look more like Boniface, or so Zainab thought.

She drove out of the car park.

* * * * *

There is usually this period just before someone faints where he or she sees two stars and a red comical devil with horns and a garden fork.

As Jummy saw this abomination, she started seeing the stars and the Devil but before she could actually faint, the voice of John snapped her back to reality.

"Jummy! What are you doing here?!" He ask frantically. "I thought you are on your way to China?!"

A thousand possible responses ran through Jummy's head but non of them seemed suitable for the occasion so she just stared at John and Samuel who had sat down on the bed still naked in silence.

"I... I... Didn't want you to find out like this." John added as he saw Jummy had no plans of saying anything.

Jummy was startled by that statement, "what do you mean?!" She asked. She knew what it meant but just had to ask.

John stared at Jummy for a few seconds before walking to the bed side table where a bottle of brandy and two glasses were, he filled one cup and turned to Samuel, "do you care for a drink?" Samuel shook his head to signify no so John took a sip from the glass cup. With the glass cup in his hand, he walked to the other side of the bed and picked up two boxers, he threw one to Samuel and wore the other, Samuel did the same and wore his boxers too.

John then went to sit beside Samuel and pecked him right in the presence of Jummy who was boiling with rage now.

"Well, as you can see, I'm bisexual." John started. "I was born this way and I've gotten used to it, Samuel is purely homosexual though and he doesn't mind me dating and screwing the opposite sex."

Jummy stared at him with rage and if her eyes were guns, John would have been long dead. She couldn't believe her eyes and ears. She had expected a lot of of apologizes and John chasing her, literally rolling on the floor and begging her with a good explanation but here he was, speaking calmly like two guys being naked in a room is a normal thing.

"Please, don't get it all twisted. I love you, I really do and would love to marry you someday, what I and John have is just a beneficial sexual relationship, I have urges that needs to be satisfied you know?"

"John, what's wrong with you?" Jummy said sympathetically, something told her John was either high or possessed by some very powerful marine spirits.

"See, don't take this to another level oh," John said slightly raising his voice, "my mum is disturbing me over marriage and grand children issues and I plan on giving her what she want, I could have picked any girl on the street to marry but I didn't want to live with someone I didn't have anything for. So when you came around and l fell in love with you, I knew you were the one for me." John stood up and poured some of the brandy into the second cup, he picked it up and went towards Jummy and offered it to her, she took it but didn't drink it. "Jummy, I know you love me and I love you too, we can have a happy marriage, you won't even have to work again because I'll give you a weekly allowance that's more than twice your monthly salary at GNP, and also I'll be the best husband you've ever had, I was even going to propose to you when you came back from your trip."

Jummy could hear the voice of her mum in her head, her mum was as usual, asking her for grand kids.

Jummy took a sip of the drink, "you have to promise to end whatever you have with Samuel or any other guy right now!" She said, she couldn't believe she just said that but what other option did she have.

John suddenly started laughing, "that's where we might have a problem. I can't stop even if I wanted to. You'll have to take me like this, as you might have seen, I'm pretty good in bed so you won't even notice and difference between me and a straight guy. The only thing I can promise is, Samuel would be the only guy and just so you know, you can go ahead and date other guys even while we are married, I wouldn't mind as long as you still remain my wife."

Jummy took another sip of the drink and wanted to say something but instead, she felt her eyes get suddenly moist and she knew she was about to start crying.

TO BE CONTINUED BY 6PM.

Ps- Click >> http://sochistar./2013/11/19/b•i•t•c•h-the-deal-episode-31/ to read the complete episode on my blog now! (Episode 31B)

sebak: Chistar hv been a silent reader sinz all dis while, ryt 4m complicated love story to dis present one. U r an intelligent writer and I love ur line of writing along wit d suspense. More idea to ur brain, Pls drop smtin soon.

Thanks bro, I appreciate.

felipemadero: Succintly following!!!
Can I ask u a question pls?

please go ahead

Winnie1950: Haba. Chistar it's not fair o. How can u turn john into a gay man? And i have already fallen for him o. My heart is broken. * sobs*

lol.. Sorry dear.

I HOPE U ALL MISSED ME.

I didn't post yesterday bcause I didn't have much time and I wanted the update to be perfect, I hope I did a good job.


NEW UPDATE IN A BIT.

CHISTAR IS HERE.

ladyfeli: Ur schedule is tyt i knw. Bt plz drop sth no mata hw short as lng as it covas jummy's reaction 2 ha l8est discovery. *bein shufflin btw dis tread n ur blog since sat*

hmmmm... Thanks for being patient and understanding that my schedule its tight. I'm aware a lot of people are waiting for the follow up and that's why I don't want to rush it. You won't have to wait too long though, I'm typing currently and maybe wud post it tomorrow at most

Temitope Daniel: 9c one bro! I've been silent all ds while.. More upd8s Oga chistar

hmmm... thanks, just for the record, I follow your story too... *Silently* .

Uthman51: =========>>silent follower<<========

noted

linpok: Dis is a welcome development man! Nice one

thanks bro.

ARareGem: Then John met Jesus and he was delivered from the spirit of homo.sexuality. Amen!

Chistar, why nau? Poor Jummy. The babe don dey old. Chistar, consider Jummy nau.

Still interesting to read.....

lol, no vex oh!

Ms Spaqs: You dont like heels ke if you are *coughs* Petite like me you'll learn 2 love it

<< am I the only one who gets this?

Clemzy16: Ok, Noted.

By the way, i've started a new story, the link is below my signature. I'm expecting you there. @soCHISTAR

yes sir ! At your service.

fobit: I have been a silent reader all this while but it will be unfair not to comment at dis point.i have read your other stories and i must confess that you are awesome and talented.i love the suspense and twist in your story.keep it up

thanks! .

Daniel2802: Hmmm weekend strike.

lol, more like weekend break. I don't want to overwork myself so I don't get blocked again.

[quote author=Eni~girl]Aww! Ma dear Jummy....John 4l ma hand biq tym.
#TeamJummy[/quote]don't mind him...

ladyfeli: *clearz throat*

lol, I'm not gonna ask u wat dat means.[quote author=nazie@diamond]Wow finally am here!!!!!christal U̶̲̥̅̊ re d bomb,I enjoy every bit of d story dat I want even drming of it when even am slipin!!!!!!!keep it up.[/quote]thanks dear, dreaming bout it? I'm officially blushing

DzTzl: whatha! *gasps* & faints!

lol!!!

Hmmm... *Following*, you seem to hate everything I hate too... Well, except the "PMS" and maybe the "ball" thing, I kinda love football . Just outta curiousity, how many chapters are left?

soul minister: I was really expecting that twist.

reason is because I've this mentality/thinking that most people that are in the army and same-sex secondary school turn out to be like that.

hmmm... Most? I disagree, I think "some" would be a better word 2 use.

april wise: Damn what a bleep,disappointment for jummy

eeeyah

Daniel2802: And she thought she had found the perfect guy.

kennybelle: Oh no, bad one for jummy againagain

Evad: watching John and Samuel in 3D

Angelsit: John y nw, Eeyah jummy sori its d work of d devil. I bin dey trip 4 u john ha but u don fall my hand

eeeyyaaahhhh

carexy: Am soooo luving dis,itz sooo intrestin.John a gay? Hmmm dats y he neva wanted to sleep wit her,cos itz vry rare 4 a guy to date a gal witout askin for sex. Abomination!

you think its rare? Hmmm... I guess I'm among the few "good" guys den

olasha1: Nice 1 bro thumbs up 4 u.more power to ur elbow

#bless

Clemzy16: What a SHOCKER....!!! I never saw that coming. Since his knows his status, he shouldn't bother marrying a woman, in the end Jummy would be the one to suffer.

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week don almost end. *anticipating mood activated*

oppz! THAT CAME OUT WRONG. I DIDN'T MEAN THIS WEEK ASIN TODAY, I ACTUALLY MEANT NEXT WEEK. Sorry for the error

Edipee: Hi Chistar, I'ave been silently following ur story untill dis last update. Why would John resist Jummy's move to be intimate with him only to go home and 'homo-fvck' his fren . Seriously, it hurts, but you've done a nice job. Thanks and keep it up.

thanks bro .

Morning guys. Its another weekend and my weekends are usually tight, I don't know if I'll be able to update, but if I do it would be on my blog and I'll drop a link here.

I'm off for now and I'll reply u all comments later on in the day. #bless.

And just for the record, School life E-book would be release this week.
PEACe.

EPISODE 30B

WEDNESDAY MORNING, 5:06AM.

The ridiculously loud sound of the bed-side alarm, blaring like a hysterical police siren woke Jummy up the next morning.

Without opening her eyes, she stretched hands to the bed-side table and pushed the alarm of the table so vigorously that it flew an incredible distance away from from its initial position. It immediately went quiet and it was certain that it had broken into pieces.

Jummy sighed, that was the third alarm she was buying this month and the previous two had all spoilt in the same pattern. She knew she needed to wake up early and her idea of early was 6 - 7AM, not the usual 5AM she seemed to be waking up more often nowadays, thus the alarm.

She stretched her arms and rolled on the bed only for her body to collide with someone else, then she recalled the whole event of the previous night with John, she smiled. They hadn't had sex persay, but what they did gave almost the same pleasure, John sure knew how to 'work' her.

She sat upright and picked up her white Blackberry 9780 in which the led was already blinking which only meant she had a message, she unlocked it and saw she had over six messages from BBM, thirty two from whatsapp, three from wechat and four emails, all in one night.

What's wrong with all this whatsapp people? Don't they sleep at night? Jummy lamented in frustration, there was no way she was going to read all those messages now, she went to her mail instead.

One of the mails was from Zainab who just wanted to check on her, Jummy guess Zainab must have pinged her and when she got no reply, she sent a mail, she quickly replied the mail telling Zainab a summary of everything that has been happening in her life, work had been tedious for both of them and they didn't have much time to hang out as often as before.

The next two were from a certain Bridget Handson, with the topic "Donations." Jummy smirked, she knew it was a scam message from all those hungry scammers who lacked new ideas. She read it anyway and noticed she was right as the message contained something about giving Jummy six million US dollars to donate to churches and orphanage because the supposed owner, Bridget Handson was about to pass on and wants to help people with her money before she died, Jummy deleted the message immediately.

The last mail was from Stephen, and it contained all the details of their trip that was that morning, Jummy quickly scanned the message and ran to the bathroom, she had almost forgotten she had to be at the airport by 6:30AM.

In less that thirty minutes, she was dressed and set to go, she dropped a note telling John where she was going and how sorry she was.

She went out of the house, entered her car and zoomed off to the airport.

* * * * * *

They both stared at each other in silence for a long minute in silence, they seemed to both be people of very few words as just the other day they did a similar thing over the phone. The competition of who would talk first. But this was a slightly different case.

"That question wasn't rhetorical," Zainab said as she noticed Henry obviously wasn't planning on answering her anytime soon.

"Err.. What question?" Henry asked, looking serious.

Zainab sighed. "are you stalking me?" She rephrased and summarised the previous question.

Henry bursted out loud into an uncontrollable laughter, his laughter was infectious and Zainab found herself laughing too even though she didn't really get what was so hilarious.

"Me? Stalking you?" Henry asked in a mocking tone. "I told you I was a writer the last time we saw, didn't I?"

"Yes you did, and you also said you were an hairdresser, you never said you were and actor too, so are you stalking me?"

"Well, apparently, I wrote this screenplay and Mr Tunde instructed that I directed the movie myself since no one else would understand the plot as the person who wrote it." Henry gave a proud grin the reminded Zainab about Barrister Boniface. "Just so you know, I'm not really acting any important role... Hell!" He exclaimed "I'm not even going to say a word."

Zainab wasn't convinced yet, "so why are you wearing an armour costume and I recall that you were swinging a sword when I walked into the studio."

"Its a war movie, and war movies need warriors and warrior are made up of people. I'm not taking any serious role, I'll just fight in the supposed war and I'll probably be one of those that would be killed." His tone was low, he didn't seem to excited about dying in his own movie.

Zainab smiled and gave a sigh of relief, she had been convinced, "so how long is this movie going to be shot?"

"Its meant to take three months, but considering the fact that we have been acting this movie since nine weeks before you came, I guess we have just three more weeks before we would be done with the blockbuster." Henry grinned.

Zainab went mute for a minute, thinking about something.

Just as if Henry had read her mind, he said, "so I guess this means we would be seeing a lot of each other for the next three weeks?"

Zainab didn't reply and looked away as Henry grinned in excitement.

"Ma'am, If that would be all, I'll like to return back to duty." He said in a mocking tone.

"You don't have to call me ma'am." Zainab replied.

Henry just winked and walked away leaving Zainab standing there, probably perplexed.

"Step two accomplished." Henry murmured inaudibly as he picked up his sword and continued swinging it.

* * * * *

John finally woke up around 9AM. He let out a record breaking yawn which lasted for almost two minutes then just as he closed his mouth, her farted and quickly grinned at the thought of Jummy hearing that or at worst, perceiving it.

He had expected a punch or instant reaction from Jummy who he thought was still by his side so he braced himself for whatever she had under her sleeves, but after a few seconds of waiting and nothing happened, he stretched his hands to Jummy's side of the bed and tapped it but felt no one, he quickly opened his eyes and looked at the bed side only to find out that he was the only one in the room.

"Jumoke!" He yelled, thinking she was somewhere in the house.

Getting no reply, he stood up and walked round the house in search of her, convinced she was definitely not in the house, he walked back to the room wondering where Jummy had gone so early.

He decided to call her and that was when he saw it. Lying comfortably on the table, with his phone placed on top to make sure it isn't blown away, was the note Jummy wrote.

Jummy wrote:

Hi John,
I don't know exactly how to say this that I won't sound unfair so I'll just be very blunt and direct.
I'm off to China for an important official meeting, recall the one I told you of yesterday on phone? Well the date was changed to today. I'm so sorry for leaving so early without even telling you about it. I wanted to tell you last night but we were having such a good time that I didn't want to spoil the moment.
I'm really sorry and I hope you forgive me. I'll try and call you when my flight land, please don't be mad at me, with love - Jummy.

He read it and with a great sigh of disappointment, he tore the letter and leaned back on the bed.

* * * * *

Jummy got to the airport on time and met with Stephen who was already there waiting.

Unfortunately for them, there was a delay due to bad weather conditions so they had to wait till the weather got better and became plane friendly.

The airport was cool due to the massive airconditorners that were placed at strategic places all over the airport and Jummy was feeling cold and felt the need of being cuddled, she kept her distance from Stephen to make sure she didn't even give him a hint.

Stephen noticed this weird behaviour of Jummy and decided to tease her a little.

He turned to his right and spotted a lady sitted all alone just two chairs away from his, he waved at her and she smiled back. She was obviously cold as she wrapped her arm round herself while wearing a thick fur coat.

"You cold?" Stephen asked her loudly, making sure Jummy could hear everything he was saying.

She nodded in approval.

"Do you believe in magic?". Stephen asked.

The lady was confused, she wondered what that question had got to do with her being cold, she shook her head in disapproval anyway.

"Well you should because I'm a magician. I can make you feel warm instantly if you want." He said with a grin.

She looked at him interested, and gave Stephen the go ahead nod, merely out of curiosity, she knew there was no way Stephen was a magician. She also needed the company.

"You have to do two thing for me first for the magic to work."

"What's that?" She finally asked, she had a nice voice and Stephen noticed this.

"Well, one is, I can't do magic without the person being close to me and two, I'll need your name." Stephen grinned widely.

Jummy who had been eavesdropping sighed in disgust, what a lame pickup line she thought.

The lady smiled and asked him to come over which he did, she turned to him and said, "You aren't really a magician, are you?"

Stephen shook his head to signify "NO," he was still grinning.

The lady giggled, "you men sure have your ways, I'm Amaka anyway."

"Hmmm, Amaka, that's my junior sister's name." Stephen lied, he had not sister at all, let alone a junior one.

"Really?" The lady asked sarcastically, she had heard that line before.

"Yea, and I'm Stephen. What are you doing here at the airport anyway?"

"I'm waiting for my flight."

"Where are you heading too?"

"That's too much info." She replied and winked at Stephen.

The conversation seemed to be getting more interesting and it annoyed Jummy, she stopped eavesdropping and picked her phone.

Zainab had replied her mail and Zainab also told her about Henry and their plans this weekend, she asked if Jummy could come with her to the date with Henry, bringing John of course.

Jummy loved the idea, a double date was something she had fantasised about severally but it seemed far-fetched as they never really had the time or the perfect guys... Now they did, or so she thought.

She knew her trip to China would make it impossible this weekend but there would be other times.

Stephen phone suddenly rang as he spoke to Amaka and after a few 'yes sir' and 'no sir,' he hung up and turned to Jummy, "the trip has been postponed till next week. I've just been told the Chinese investors are trying to concluded a project before embarking on ours."

"So what would have happened if we were on the plane already?"

"Well, we aren't on the plane. You can take the day off and resume work tomorrow, when I get more info about the trip, I'll let you know." Stephen said and turned back to Amaka, "so where are you from?" He asked.

Jummy picked her trolley and happily went out of the airport, she was going straight to John's house to apologise.

* * *

Jummy had considered calling John first but she knew he would probably not pick, so she decided to surprise him. Besides, what's the use of him giving her a spare key to his house if he didn't want her to pop in any time she felt like.

As she parked her car at the front of his house she smiled at the thought of eventually having that double date with John, alongside Zainab and Henry, she felt it would be nice.

She quickly stepped out of the car and walked straight into the compound, the gate man already knew her so he let her through without any complains.

She walked into the apartment and saw the sitting room was empty, she called John's name out twice and got no response so she assumed he wasn't home, she decided to go and freshen up at the bathroom in his bedroom.

She removed her jacket and threw it on the chair, she headed to the bedroom.

She heard weird sounds but the sound was too low for her to predict what was going on, she opened the door and got the shocker of her life.

John and Samuel were doing what made God destroy Sodom and Gomorah with brimstone and fire. Standing stark naked, Samuel bent over on all four while John slowly inserted and withdrew his private organ from Samuel's rare end.

They were both sweating and seemed to be enjoying every bit of it.

TO BE CONTINUED.

beckytunde: kai wahala dey ooooooo, nyc write up.kudos

thanks.

Smhart1: Thought as much

really?

Melancholy: Chistar, ironically u be bad guy,cos I just can't handle the way u dishing out this suspenseAt first i thought john was this good guy not knowing...oh my jummy take heart eh

lol... Flattering at its peak .

shollaire: OMG chistar! It's like you have a port in your brain through which you connect to ideas! If so be it, may your internal memory never get used up; and may Nepa never know the source of your knowledge. I can smell the beginning of a long story here.

you smelling right.

Mehlena: Lmao! Dat was great chistar. Weldone.

lol, apparently, you are the only one who finds this post funny

Mehlena: So sorry for the looong break...was trying to make a tough decision about whether to continue or nat, coupled with the fact dat i hav been busy, Anyway m back now.
#Easybuhfocus,odizeey and err1, thanks a lot i appreciate ur help. Update coming up shortly.
Thanks

yay!! My two favourite NL female writters are back @Ruby and Mehlena. Patiently await new updates 4rm u guys.