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Poems For Review › Re: Dreaming In Braille by eldee(op): 11:22am On Jan 05, 2008
lol. . .thanks man, me self dey try learn that part.
Poems For Review › Dreaming In Braille by eldee(op): 10:50am On Jan 05, 2008
Dreaming In Braille
I crossed the thin line between love and hate
my thoughts i still try so hard to equate
from tis day i live the hermit's lone life
Through the dots i feel to stand all the sweet strife

To Cain my Abel breeds heavens wrath
but why must I in this trap be caught
a moment ago my plans were straight
but ever after she refused to wait

A Braille for my dreams i plead from you
blindness of my soul i zeal to cure
clouds over my bed i failed to clear
the last laugh i pleaded a wish too hard

For grace i prayed to vault this pit
hung at ten yards high now buried six feet
too late too bent to straighten this lane
the ends are the alpha I killed my Cain


This is my first ever posted poem and it's definitely nohing near good. It's just me representing heartbreak in a Shakesparean-mode monologue. I'll really appreciate criticism of any kind cus I'm tryin to improve in my floetry.
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 5:19am On Jan 05, 2008
Anyways you guys should settle everything on time, i'm already missin your puuurrrr!!! pics.
Poems For Review › Re: Original Love Poems by eldee(m): 5:14am On Jan 05, 2008
pearldrops:
they hate me cry
err. . .what's ur offence
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 4:10am On Jan 05, 2008
k, i just meant u guys were tite. . .u had his back when he got attacked nd stuffs lyk dat

so what happend, u know i'll really like to get banned. . . it's my new year resolution . . .lol
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 3:54am On Jan 05, 2008
@homegurl
lol. . .i just got bored with the same replies errtime, some pips didn't have to check ma profile before they posted comments.

how did ur romance wiv oga turn sour? who did u pick stuff with? runs to get pen and paper

@topic
those eyez
Poems For Review › Re: A leap into eternity by eldee(m): 3:27am On Jan 05, 2008
hola2ng:
I took just one step,i put my best foot forward
in my mind i thought i could make it,on my own
and on my own as i watched helplessly,i fell
the world that i held in my hands delicately,fell with me
it came crashing down heavily,rainfalls on rooftops

Looking into the distance to find the vague sunset
i saw the yellowish rays it cast upon the clouds
and the clouds in turn further drifted along
in my mind i wanted them to be closer and i thought
it would be nicer if you were here as well, just us
you and me against the weather,and the world too

I think that part got a little overly descriptive, it was almost turning into a novella

Leaning on the shoulder of time shortly after
it waited for me,although it waits for no one else
you got a potential blindfold there but u wasted it by revealing the suspense with weak layman's english
try- it waited for me, though from others it galloped away


i danced with the winds,just me in the cold breeze
just me against the sculptured world
I'm not really a good poet but know I really prefer when people critically breakdown my poems to make me better rather than just seeing the good parts. I've seen ur other poems and I feel ur really deep way of presenting simple things. that's a gift i'm tring to develop. Most of my poems are just what i write when i have that feelin and i'm neva able t stop myself from throwing them into the trashcan.
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 3:05am On Jan 05, 2008
@bunmi
you just registered yesterday and you know I changed my pic, ur online at 2am(UK time) are u . . . . . . . . huh?? abi ISP meji lowa ninu le yin ni?

@topic
ma homegurl
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 2:27am On Jan 05, 2008
@ib
lucky you, est wishes still, don't want may fave n/land baby sis flunkin AS. . .

@sly
lol. . .dint change it cuz the other ones were always comin out too big. . .but thanx man

@topic
barren
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 1:57am On Jan 05, 2008
@sly
u sure u saw the pic or u just assumed it was still the old one

@ib
anywayz good luck, u'll need extra if it was biology swear down.
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 1:33am On Jan 05, 2008
@ib
lol. . .eeya, my sis is doing AS too, wonder why they force you to celebrate christmas with exams on the 9th, all i have i have to say is'mobolowon'
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 1:08am On Jan 05, 2008
@ib
ssup sexy eyes, where u been? happy new year, missed u loads.  .   .

@topic
nice
Forum Games › Re: Reply Signatures. by eldee(m): 7:29pm On Jan 04, 2008
yeah that ws so frikkin funny
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 7:13pm On Jan 04, 2008
Abeg, help me say wassup to Fela and tell Tupac that I liked his last album.
Music/Radio › Re: Bolaji Vs ? by eldee(m): 11:43am On Jan 04, 2008
FLOWSHOW:
this nigga has the most inviting and most captivating topic
and now

why do this people always compare me to this punky

@everyone
I refuse to talk
Music/Radio › Re: Krs-one On Kanye West And 50 Cent by eldee(m): 7:31pm On Jan 03, 2008
You can't say hiphop died with them, what you just said is that means 'Pac And Biggie'. There were still ill rappers like DMX, Dre, Nas, Rakim and em lot. Go listen to the hiphop is dead track and understand. It died when people lost interest in the real rappers.

So nigga, who's your top ten?
Is it MC Shan? Is it MC Ren?


U dig?


What influenced my raps? Stick ups and killings
Kidnappings, project buildings, drug dealings
Criticize that, why is that?
Cuz Nas rap is compared to legitimized crap
Cuz we love to talk on ass we gettin'
Most intellectuals will only half listen


And this is where Hiphop died, Iit doesn't mean there's no more real rappers, it mens if Pac comes back, he can't sell five million.

Everybody sound the same, commercialize the game
Reminiscin' when it wasn't all business
If it got where it started


So, don't just say Hiphop is dead cuz everyone says it.
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 7:17pm On Jan 03, 2008
Nas (Ether) Ur thirty one in a karate class u twenty-nine and ur still a prodigy? just kiddin
Music/Radio › Re: Bolaji Vs ? by eldee(m): 7:12pm On Jan 03, 2008
IS IT ME OR DID ANYONE NOTICE THAT BOLAJI AND FLOWSHOW ARE THE SAME PERSON?
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Manchester United Fan thread: Forever Reds by eldee(m): 6:50pm On Jan 03, 2008
ok i understand you
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Manchester United Fan thread: Forever Reds by eldee(m): 6:36pm On Jan 03, 2008
Jackal:
@ Debosky,

Man Utd played Liverpool and they won . . .
We have also beaten Chelsea, Middlesboro, Aston Villa and Everton which we won. The only game we drew was Pompey so whats the fuss?
Loss of points is loss of points . . . . stop spewing fuckery about how hard or how tough these games are.
Every team will play 19 others at a point in the season so tape it shut.

@ A-40,

You are a pillock. . . . . .United has lost 3 away games and Arsenal has lost one. . . .Those are the kind of nonsense GAYnners spew.
A team that wins one game and loses the other is better than a team that drew in the 2 games. The name of the game is WINNING.
The last 2 games has nuthing to do with it because United didnt play at FULL-STRENGTH . . .
In the games we have lost, 2 or 3 IMPORTANT members of United's spine were missing, so work that out yourself.
[b]If United can beat Liverpool at Anfield, beat Chelsea at OT and were forced to a draw at the Emirates . . . .then they are the best in the land.[/b]Arsenal's 2 point advantage is as a result of the slow start we had in August when u were 5 points clear WITH A GAME IN HAND.
Chill now, I remember last seasn when we beat you guys home and away and drew wih Chelsea, you said it meant nothing
Music/Radio › Re: Krs-one On Kanye West And 50 Cent by eldee(m): 6:24pm On Jan 03, 2008
tosinadeda:
Dats just sum1s view,y shld it be a topic 4 discussion?
this is not like an election, it's more like if Al Gore says he wants Obama to win the elections, it's more than just one man's opinion, KRS-One is in the topfive list for many rappers.
Computers › Re: Whats Actually Wrong With Vista? by eldee(m): 5:28pm On Jan 03, 2008
@anusule
My My Sony Vaio laptop is Core 2 Duo, 1.666Ghz and 1gb memory and it's still fast even with the vista and 100GB HDD, i'm realy suprised with these comments
Forum Games › Re: Reply Signatures. by eldee(m): 5:12pm On Jan 03, 2008
i concur
Forum Games › Re: Look At The Person's Profile Above Yours & Make A Comment by eldee(m): 5:11pm On Jan 03, 2008
@toyin and ogre
ssup pple

@topic
is that the code for pluto
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Arsenal Fan Thread: For Gunners Only (Old) by eldee(m): 4:53pm On Jan 03, 2008
@Banderas
I've seen Eboue at one of 'em West-end clubs during preseason and he was not with the McLaren, maybe they were celebrating the new car. . . damn, just check out the doors.
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Arsenal Fan Thread: For Gunners Only (Old) by eldee(m): 10:25am On Jan 03, 2008
Damn, who owns that Maclaren, now I know why they play so well.
European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Arsenal Fan Thread: For Gunners Only (Old) by eldee(m): 10:19am On Jan 03, 2008
nnah, liverpool don't have that kind of consistency to win the league.
RVP should better get well ontime, Dudu in the wings is like having an extra striker in long balls.
Nairaland General › Re: Nairaland Members That Should Be Banned? by eldee(m): 10:07am On Jan 03, 2008
@toyin and busta
don't beef ussyman. the story is complicatd, i noticed that davidylan is actually really intelligent but there is one dude that uses 'davidylan.' notice the full stop. the guy's a sucker that goes about causing trouble because he knows it's easy to confuse pple.

@seun
jo, now. pleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaase!!!
Nairaland General › Re: Nairaland Admin Questions and Answers by eldee(m): 10:38am On Jan 02, 2008
Dude, I already sent an email to u for the change of username, just tell me if ur doing it or not.
Celebrities › Re: Who Is Prettier: Sasha Or Bouqui? by eldee(m): 10:18am On Jan 02, 2008
@princekay
Articulate, maybe but mature, hell no, Sasha does not go to award shows wearing three-quarter jeans and bowler hats. I saw Bouqi doin an interview after an award show on BEN and I was like 'Don't these dudes have a changing room?' Even in Eve's Ruff-Ryder days, she used to wear evening gowns to the grammy's

@topic
ur pic does not do sasha any justice

European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Arsenal Fan Thread: For Gunners Only (Old) by eldee(m): 9:19am On Jan 02, 2008
The last two matches by the Gunners has shown that the players have developed an unexpected PLAN B tactic which will get useful in away games. Although it is already proven by top analysts(Gary Lineker not Shearer) that Arsenal will beat you silly if you allow them to pass the ball arround your box, it is also worthy of note that with a striker like Eduardo, they can adapt to the Anti-Wenger long ball approach when they are not allowed to pass the ball arround. This shifts a little of the responsibility of creating assists away from Fabregas and Hleb to Clichy and Sagna and that rough style will be really useful when we face AC Milan in Fenruary, we really need to steal goals.

Myself and Wenger came together do our transfer season shopping plans, just see the list we came up with. . . grin grin grin

European Football (EPL, UEFA, La Liga) › Re: Manchester United Fan thread: Forever Reds by eldee(m): 3:56pm On Jan 01, 2008
As I said before, this is the wrong place to expose your stupidity, your problem is that you always want to show everyone what psychological depression has done to what is left of your life. It's official!!! there is no solution for your illness. . . this is a good as it gets for you . . .
LMAO!!!u . . . make me sad, sorry but ur depression is not communicable.

@millena
This is exactly what I was talking about, I respect your efforts towards peace, but it's so obvious that this dude doesn't have enough mental ability to compose himself. I went downstairs just to watch the Chelsea match and he started talking trash. No wonder no Manscum fan will want to be identified with him. . . I don't blame them, that's how I feel too when I see touts in Arsenal jerseys.

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