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Happy belated birthday dude, wishing you the very best as you grow from strength to strength.

WHOcarex:
Talabi go end up killing his children.

Mama Akuna spidersense go alert her

Obviously...
Challenging the woman without the backing of a supernatural being is akin to embarking on a suicide mission.

Of unparalleled significance is the feast of Easter
The ecclesiastical essence is a spiritual booster
On this frank historical event is Christianity driven
To all believers is now assured a space in heaven


It is the christians' greatest non-drama tragicomedy
The symbolism makes faithfuls sing salvation melody
Christ's resurrection was a confirmation of His divinity
And all Christians can make a claim to religious dignity


Easter is inarguably the greatest feast in Christendom
It's what established our path to our glorious kingdom
Since Christ liveth, all faithfuls shall share similar fate
In a time Christ & believers will dine on the same plate


God's superior wisdom we mortal souls cannot question
Regarding every knowledge He is an unparalleled bastion
But for God's hidden reason Jesus didn't need to be killed
Humans could have been saved without any blood spilled


In this life there is hardly anything like an absolute evil
By murdering Lord Jesus came the defeat of the devil
Judas Iscariot played a facilitatory part in our salvation
Would have wished he too enjoys eventual redemption


There's a crucial lesson we must all put in our thoughts
Vital resurrection should happen long before our deaths
Rising above our sins is just the smartest way to start
Our known viles & vices we should all decide to desert


The Lord Jesus Christ has indeed risen to die no more
He has given us the ticket to our glorious heavenly store
A sweet relief it is for everyone who'll choose to believe
It is the day that puts a seal on our collective reprieve


Amidst our pomp & celebrations should be a meditation
It's more of a restitution time than a period of exhibition
Our feasting should be devoid of waste & frank profanity
Spiritual meals more than food underpin true Christianity


May this Easter ease the challenges mauling our country
Grinding difficulties are taking our people to the laundry
Many are fast losing their inherent capabilities for coping
While some take their own lives,others resort to doping


To our merciful Jehovah be all the praises and reverence
His love stays unflinching despite our dense decadence
The symbolism of this season remains eternally reassuring
Beyond this precarious earth paradise is our home coming

_*INSPIRING EASTER TO EVERYONE*_

*#onahstan*

Mizsylviah... he sigh**


Your talent is no longer questionable neither it is still debatable where the intellectual are gathered.

Twice, I have seek to constructively embarrass you... twice you escape effortless with vast improvement in the next update... for that, taking into consideration that this is your first story here...,

I am undoubtedly proud of you!


A highly trained sniper... his first time in the war zone but he was unique,so unique to be selected,Unique and extremely dangerous..
He target the legs of the enemy in an open space from a reasonable distance rendering him immobile and then patiently wait as calmly as ever as if savouring or should I say enjoying the pain he has just inflicted on the said enemy..

Basically, soldiers are trained to help one another in battle, on seeing their colleagues down, one or two instinctively come out in the open to drag the injured man to safety...

Boom, that was the exact time that our sniper choose to stuck again, and again the area of target is the legs...or a part of your body leaving you very much alive but 90% immobile as to attract sympathy from your fellow soldiers...

With this singular act, he succeed easily in pulling most of them out and the end their lives, making victory certain for his team.

A handful of writers are like this soldier, and Mizsylviah just joined the league!

Look beyond the metaphor!
Happy Easter.

He smiled ***

You obviously have what it takes souloho19....Admirably your standard has not drop not even at -0.01% so far from story one "delayed diagnosis" to ongoing story three "hole in the wall".
He nods**You have undoubtedly been marked for greatness by the literacy god.

Back to the story***
...Circles with red marker or an "X" cancel means ELIMINATION...but with a "blue" it could mean something else... I maybe wrong through because this is just a story and not a matter of life and death as applicable in reality.. in a special force on a classified mission way above the thinking capacity of an ordinary soldiers.

I am with you till the end as you continue instigating different emotion from your audience with each episodes.

With great art work like this,not once, not twice,not even thrice but repeatedly and with relative EASE, I might as well in my opinion tag you the "BOAT" here in Nairaland at switching from explosive action to drama.

You have not lost it.
Ride on!

He was invisible to the assassins....Protected by a superior power probably from above--The ALMIGHTY

You have maintained the high standard so far and it is undeniably admirable.


Explosiveness...
Passion..
Emotion...
Kindness pays now or in the long run
Jealousy/envy leads to more destruction...
Untamed Anger lead to only one destination...
Above all...
The Existence of a supreme being!

Thank you for an explosive piece of art... FREE OF CHARGE!

May HE continue to give you greater reasons to glorify him everyday as you grow from strength to strength in the literacy world.

I keep on following even more attentively from a distance.

AryEmber:
Ofcourse it's absurd! But when the feminists here read the tale, they'll tell you how wrong you are to even think about that. You know, silly things like focus on the rape and nothingelse.

Will they do that??
Won't they be reasonable??

AryEmber:
You want them to say you are justifying rape abi?

Justifying rape
Why would they say that or think that??
That would be an outrageous exaggeration

Well, you know, a handful may probably think in that direction but I doubt everyone would.

As long as a few would take the same stand that I did, then I am perfectly OK. Not doubting the authentic of his narration but for a lesson to be learnt or a slight compassion be made concerning Edua issue and this, then it should be well narrated.

If the said girlfriend is.. say 18years +,she won't wait 30mins ALONE in a car and then come into the hotel room to "chill" when the said friend of the man is "bathing" in that same Hotel room. To your hearing, Isn't that absurd??

Let then assume the said girlfriend WAS an innocent teenager say 10-13 years + then we have a serious case and an exceptional comparison to the Edua issue!

....wait for him thirty minutes in the car? YOU MEAN THIRTY MINUTES how old was she then

Then follow him to chill inside the said friend hotel room because the said friend is bathing?? Is she ten or eleven years at that time??

I am tempted to believe you didn't summarize the issue properly.

As for your uncle, I feel nothing but shame for such a man.

A coward indeed.

A Professor started his class on a very serious Topic. The moment he turned towards the blackboard, one of the students whistled. He turned, looked at the class and asked the Whistler's name. No one answered.

The Professor peacefully kept the Pen in his pocket saying: "Lecture ends here. I'll tell you a story to utilise the remaining time".

Everyone became interested.

"Yesterday night I tried hard to sleep, but it was miles away from my eyes, so I thought I'd better get petrol in my car, which will save my time next morning and might induce sleep. After having my tank full, I started roaming in that area, enjoying the peace of a traffic free ride.

Suddenly, on the corner I saw a girl who was as young and beautiful as the clothes she was wearing. Must have been returning from a party. Out of courtesy, I turned my car towards her and asked if I may be of any help. She asked me if I could drop her to her home, she'll be very obliged, to which I agreed.

She sat in the front seat with me. We started talking, and to my amazement she was very intelligent, had control on many topics which many youngsters don't.

When we reached her address, she admitted my courteous nature and behavior and accepted that she had fallen in love with me.

I also admitted her intelligence and beauty and that I've also started liking her. I told her about my job as a professor in the university.

The girl asked my number, which I gave her willingly. Then she asked me a favor, to which i couldn't have denied naturally.

She said that her brother is a student in the same university, and asked me to take care of him, since we'll be in a long relationship now.

I asked the name of the student. She said that I'll recognise him with one of his very prominent quality, *He whistles a lot!*

All eyes in the classroom turned towards the boy who had whistled.

The professor said: *"I didn't buy my Ph. D in Psychology.. I earned it"


He earned it indeed.

BiadeFolar:
honourable356 sir, can I have your contact please?

07037163021 whatsapp only

Good start...
Your next story would definitely be better and may define what you are capable of with the bic or keyboard..

This is really a beautiful story... give it to a certain TiffanyJ..and she would make twist here and there ,then adjust few scenes here and there that would literally sweep the audience off their feet...

You have not gotten it right yet but you are close, I have every confidence, judging by your progress so far that you will definitely get it right soon and what a well written story it would be.

...And when you do...
I picture you looking back proudly and savouring the euphoria!

Today I celebrate your entrance...
May the literacy world both writers and readers also celebrate you too as you grow strength to strength!

What a lesson!!!
It is never too late to start doing good.

..The fear of DANGER is more DANGEROUS than DANGER itself.

The battle just began.

Thank you for educating your audience on the importance of helping others either in a delicate situation or in a small way.

Kind gestures are never easily forgotten unless we are dealing with the devil himself.

BiadeFolar:
Me am thinking Jide is the hot guy Kyla was drooling abou and her pregnancy symptoms are not unrelated to the one night thing they had buh like you said sir, there is an hidden truth in this exciting story.

Oh... that?? understood.

....And Centino continue to soar high with reckless abandon...

I read with great amusement as you entertain the crowd on a weekly basis..

A dude who strategically input the recent happenings in his country both positive or negative quiet effortless deserve an applause... a standing ovation if I may add.

This could earn you a living no doubt regardless how slow it comes.

Am I suprised, No,not at all....
Impressed, sure!
Do you believe me?? I don't think so!
Send me your WhatsApp number.
You deserve one month subscription.

BiadeFolar:
I hope the goon never find his way... but the pregnancies are in Jide's damn way!

Given the fact presented,I will say it is a fabricated pregnancy... get what I mean, the pregnancy is not his...but the lady in question is trying to impose it on him... probably a paid job by Kola.

There is always a hidden truth in every exciting stories.

Still maintaining the standard so far, mizslyviah... ,huh?
Climbing confidently the ladder only few would dare...
Just how far can you go??
Only time will tell.
Please keep the good work...

BiadeFolar:
He drugged her?

Yeah,purposely.
He probably thought, if I can't have her... neither will Jide since it has become obviously clear to him that it is Hide she want.

That is cowardice and betrayal.

Mizsylviah:
Thank you so much sir...... The story is done, just wanna make a final adjustment and it will be uploaded on Okadabooks.... You can conveniently purchase it when that is done.

Okadabooks?? I don't patronize books from there because I am at a lost on how it works and I am too stubborn to want to learn.

I always deal directly with the writer. That is what I have been doing so far...Either they spoon feed me by sending the story straight to either my email or whatsapp or we both forget it and move on.

The price of the book is always paid immediately through whatever means necessary the writer deem it fit which is either in monetary form through transfer or recharge cards.

So please after the final adjustment,endeavour to get back to me.
Thank you!

May you continue to be a solution to your generation!

olawaletimi:
GHENGHEN... Is like Kola knows already. if you know, you know.

Yeah... he suspects strongly... but he still refused to listen to that tiny voice!

The friendship would probably end... while the damsel might be confused whom to choose. She may choose Jide probably, while her friend fights her for Jide.

*Two friends betraying each other*

This story is tricky, epic, interesting with class.

Na you de write all these by yourself unaided??

A vast improvement from the previous updates so far...

Now sit back and watch the audience grow into a huge crowd... and grow restless.
Perhaps, you should read the update you just drop AGAIN while reading through comments and see what that head of yours is doing. A beauty to behold!

This one obviously instigate suspense.
Today, I acknowledge your talent... and
I will follow this keenly till the end.



**Meanwhile, if the story is done and dusted and you are just retyping it here announcing your entrance into the literacy world, then here I am... name your price,i need the full story if you don't mind! *
for I am absolutely convinced that this is gonna be one hell of a beautiful story!

Good Job!

A TRUE LIFE experience or rather an EXAGGERATED TRUE LIFE experience??

Which is it??

It is beautiful, isn't it??
A clear definition of budding talent.
Obviously you are not there yet, but undoubtedly you will get there... unless of course you lose interest along the way...

Back to the story...
You still got job to do.. you gotta make it sound real or very close to real... You know, something we are almost certain so happens in reality...You must take your time to describe everything vividly to obviously strike a nerve.

It does the magic..
It stir up wild imagination..
More importantly, it drew multitude and KEEP them.
Keep themhuh?
keep them doing what?? Well, your guess is as good as mine!

Cult related stories?? Many a time certainly ends on tragedy...,right?

I am following keenly from a distance!!
Best wishes.

I am absolutely convinced that you did your homework before embarking on this mission.

From episode one to this latest episode, you have maintained the high standard which is quiet admirable..

Inasmuch as I sometimes question the authenticity of some stories, I also know damn too well what it is like writing an amazing story, hence my acknowledgement and appreciation that seem like an update for almost every episodes I happen to read immediately....and I have no apologies for those who feel bored.

Back to the story...

Why is your next move almost easily predicted?? Admittedly, the audience didn't dictate the direction of the story BUT many reading almost certainly predict it...

No no you must be almost 100% unpredictable!?? One of the trademark qualities of an extraordinary writer.

Keep the audience anticipating.. and watch your work pull multitudes of people.

Suspense might be missing, but it is not yet time to dwell on that since we still have more updates to look forward to.

Don't settle for less...
Be better than the very best.
Yes, you can!!!

Souloho19 again??

You mean the same one who made a grand entrance into the literacy world many many months ago here on Nairaland with a bang

*A proven writer...
*An eloquent to the core..with the keyboard....
*An unpredictable master of suspense in his own right...
*Standing proudly among the literacy giants...
*Test and trusted to deliver an outrageous pieces of art...

Oh my God!!!!

I have practically ran out of adjective to describe the young man behind this very story.

Ladies and gentlemen..... I tell you this most solemnly...

Unless this is just a decoy, I can guarantee you undoubtedly that you are on for an interesting, intriguing ,exciting,exhilaring adventure... one that will..:

1. Keep you at the edge of your seat..

2. Eliminate hunger for hours..

3. Keep you anticipating..

4. Makes you refreshing this thread unashamedly..

5. And more amusing draw smiles from your face and fear on the face of some others.

There is still something even more special and beautiful thing...Guess what??


He is doing it for FREE *as for Now*
IT IS FREE!!!!!

May your Glories become even more pronounced by God as you embark on the task ahead.

Best wishes!!!!

I am trying hard not to laugh at comments here but unfortunately I am doing a poor job at it and couldn't resist the urge to throw a dig.

I thought the legendary Edua is recuperating from sickness...I am guessing some people assume she is all 100% better now and should be updating immediately due to the xoxo she sent every now and then in response to comments maintaining a cordial relationship with her fans.

The Hunger for more got many either wondering why she has not updated or complaining that she is abandoning the story. Hehehehehehe....

If I were her husband, I will see to it that she doesn't update a thing until she overcome every stumbling blocks... be it sickness, kids responsibilities,work if any etc especially if she just recovered from sickness.

Her story, no matter how highly captivating it is, is not the only story on Nairaland... and more over it is a FREE entertainment from her... I repeat free. To crown it all, I detect here that all her previous stories here online, even through this one is the first ever one I am following were all complete here before being sold. (I stand to be corrected)

Why am I even ranting this long??
Hey ladies and gents.. let her be!
Keep yourselves busy with other stories..
Or get busy with work/business/school and those who will sit for Jamb etc

I am convinced beyond reasonable doubt that she will complete this story no matter how long it may take.
Patience is valuable...
Have patience!!!!

Who thought this was an update??
Hehehehehe Happy Sunday!!!

Angelsss:
I am back, honourable356

What a pleasant surprise.. Where have you been all this while? Why did you excommunicated yourself No means to reach you...
This is not happening again... I will have none of it. Ping me on whatsapp please 07037163021
Welcome back Angelsss, Your absence was noticed indeed!!!
Mizsylviah, a legend just made a grand entrance here... You are game!

sonofANARCHY1 ...I have not read this story before but after careful investigations, it becomes clearly obvious that you are not the writer... I found the full story... the complete story under a female...

It baffles me how you could do such a thing... that I am. tempted to ask,

"HOW OLD ARE YOU"??

"DO THE WORD "PLAGIARISM" MEAN ANYTHING TO YOU"?

OR IS THIS A JOB OF A HACKER??

DO YOU EVEN KNOW THAT WHAT YOU DID IS A CRIME?

OR ARE YOU TRYING TO GET ON THE NERVE OF THE ORIGINAL WRITER?

A PRANK OR A PAYBACK??

What a shame... I find it highly outrageous and disgusting that you even have the audacity to post someone work that is already on Nairaland here again...

I am forced to ponder what manner of person are you??
A humiliation to your generation.

Shaking my head***


Marianneada ...I don't know if you are selling the story or if it is free for public consumption....contact me on my email please. honourable356@gmail.com
Thank you!

Akinwale14:
Chelsea try now,just that our coach no get sense that's why man u beat us now

"...Just that our coach no get sense" Who told you that??

You got dstv at home?? Good.

Watch the replay again or probably the highlight!

Then analyze it again.

Only chapter four so far and I find my self thinking of a certain Angelsss with a mischievous smile on my face..and almost drew an unfair conclusion,

Until...

I had to click on this Mizsylviah (Miss/Mrs Sylvia) to be sure it is not the legendary Angelsss. Sadly, there is a stumbling block: I never got the opportunity to see a picture of the said legend before she disappeared into oblivion with an unfinished masterpieces.

Strangle I thought she is the same person but with a new moniker "Mizsylviah" until I remembered that her name was actually Rose! You should see and read her stories.. Every of her update was a hit... a class of its own that kept the audience addicted.

As things stand here now, this new writer obviously is exactly on the same track..She is not yet at her level yet but she generates 100%same excitement and her sophisticated use of words set her apart from the said legend.

I will continue this adventure with you taking careful every details and descending devastatingly on you with an unthinkable accuracy if you derail for the pathway you have taken so far until you bring the story to a grand conclusion.

It is either criticism makes you outrageously better than you are now or it breaks you.

Be motivated!

I had to take my time to read your work very carefully,taking even the smallest details into consideration.(thinking quietly...)

Why do you write??

To teach a delicate lesson? or
Just for fun regardless of what your audience think??


This is unarguably a beautiful story as I read on and on... But,
Why do I feel that you RUSHING it?
Detail description must be given... you can't overlook it, you shouldn't. Or will there be flash back?? You must give details description of the event...i mean lay down a clear picture of how it happened..

Let's see... the Chief and his son were at akwanga Nasarawa state, right?
The hit men sent after her located her at Ibadan through her phone, it is understandable.. good!

But....

They suddenly were right behind her,probably same day following her every move... How did the made it to Ibadan that quickly?? Events must have taken place inbetween, why were they ignored?? Was it purposely left for the audience to figure it out? (Like how she got the car she was driving... how these assassins reached Ibadan in no time).You have done it alot in different episodes..

What I am saying here is.... in an attempt to be unpredictable, which is a hallmark of legendary writers..., You did a poor job in your detail description of the critical situation unfolding.

The audience are unarguably patient when reading an interesting story... They have all the time, they can wait but make no mistake about this, their appetite for more would be highly insatiable. That should not have been temptation for you to ignore the descriptive aspect to such masterclass.

Focus on that area...
I see you among the list of Nairaland literacy legends in time to come for you strike me like a man with Ideas.

Best wishes even as you embark on your second story one of this days!!!

Mizsylviah,huh?? Never hear of such name or any story attributed to that name since I registered here in Nairaland. So I have to assume that this is your FIRST...***mention notifications didn't alert me until I just clicked on it anyway today and found that I have been mentioned alot**

First two episodes.... it has that sparkle...that sparkle that screams "I am the real thing"

The storyline is seducing..
The style of writing is alluring..
The choice of words are crowd pulling...
Basically, this is going to stand out among the exceptional stories if you don't derail from the pathway you have taken so far in the first two updates.

I guess you did your homework well before writing this story for this looks like the real deal..
But it is just the beginning... so until then, show us what you are capable of.

You have my support!