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First of all Centino, lighten will stuck and burn that exact passage where you wrote that Manchester city will decimate Chelsea.

EkopSparoAyara...I thank you.

I will be back here when I am done with the bottle in front of me.

Good evening ladies and gents!

He smiled...
Good job!!!

I read down every updates I have missed up to the last one...so far you are undoubtedly doing a nice job with your story line.

This story has a lot of marital,dating/relationship lesson in it which is something worth sitting up for.

Kimberlywest I am tempted to ask how you are doing but I had to concentrate on the story first... No reason to question you except perhaps two...:: Your description of the place things took place is zero...
Secondly be unpredictable you will pull the multitude in their thousands...
So far the interesting story got them all glued.

Indeed, you are good.

To the married,I say communicate.
Don't arrive to a conclusion based on assumption or on the following premise: This girl or guy say...your friend say..I saw you with so and so...

ASK HUBBY/WIFE. You can't be scared of him or her.

Ask...
Talk...
Speak...
Discuss..
Ask again...
Hide nothing whether shameful or not
And above all,be extremely patient and marry only who you can TALK unashamedly to ; for......

Marriage is a life time commitment.
He sigh..

How have you been Kimberlywest??

KimberlyWest:
You're welcome dear.
I pray nothing happens to him too he got me dreaming about having kids.

He smiled...

Your time will come.

He smiled...

Whosoever mastered the act of being unpredictable in most scenes of his or her would pull unthinkable and remarkable crowd.

Over to you Centino.
Great job!

Mama Akuna stealing the money is laughable!

Happy Sunday ladies and Gents.

Soar on centino!

KimberlyWest:
Had to read this comment like three times before attempting to reply.

Thank you so much for the encouragement so far, I sincerely appreciate.

Most of the episodes of Love Hiccups have been pulled down. The storyline is great and all that but you're more likely to find all kinds of errors in it than this one wrote it right after WAEC and right now, I'm in 200 level battling with Chemistry, physics and mathematics.

And yap, I've been told I really need to work on my description a lot.

Thanks for following. I appreciate.

Chemistry, Physics and Mathematics and yet you have time to entertain?

Hope you are not in anyway neglecting your studies... You still have two more years to go,you know? So,I am sure you know that you have concentrate more on your education and drop update only when you have that chance.

I see you have passion for writing.
An inbuilt something perhaps.
Summed perfectly a gift from the Almighty.

There is nothing like "We die here" in this 2019. We are all with you till the end.

Best wishes!!

EkopSparoAyara:
I was about beckoning on you to come over and chill here with me...Welcome man....

Seem like you know the lady here and what she is capable of, perhaps having witness her exploit with the pen/keyboard.

Given the brief updates so far,I doubt the audience would end up being disappointed.

EkopSparoAyara:
Welcome back bro.....Am glad you are back on your feet...Those chicken will come back in one way or other....

I missed your indepth analysis...Feels great to have you here..

You know that feeling..how do they put it self? when something de hungry you but you no fit chop am. Hehehe...

Indeed I am back my dear. Together we all can make this place lively as much as we enjoy the updates while souloho learns a things or two from critics.

Cheers man!

....And who is Kimberlywest?
Another wannabe writer or what??

The audacity in which she start the story.. hitting the right nerve with devastating accuracy made me conclude that we are not dealing with an amateur writer here or one of those first timer learning the rope LIT 101.

We are actually dealing with one who had been in the game for a while. To confirm my theory,I had to check her out and indeed she has a story to her name.

A story I have never read nor came across.

However,i intend to check that story out soon...for the plot here,the use and choice of words, the creative aspect of this very story proves beyond reasonable doubt that this is gonna be something awesomely beautiful,inspiring alluring and above all educative teaching a serious lesson and the first story..who knows, might be a little more above ordinary in the interesting aspect of it.

Well,I am not concluding yet...
Everything so far sounds and is still pointing and screaming ..."this one is capable "...." this one is the real deal"..."this one is something special" so I intend to critical follow this story and see where I could encourage vehemently or kick her ass.

Chucking...

Lady Kimberlywest....You are undoubtedly creating something special here so far and your efforts is highly appreciated and acknowledged.

Maintain the standard...
Give us some reasons why we won't get tired of your stories a thousand times.

All I can say so far is,"more critical description of the environment and event is needed".

Thanks you for entertaining freely!

....And I started the new year with a fever.
Watching in vain and salivating as my Chicken whose aroma didn't let me sleep well were being consumed by loved ones while I lost appetite because of the damn fever.

Glory to God,I am back!

To those who are still down,I say get well soon. Put on a positive attitude and fight off every sickness.
I say again...you won't fall sick again throughout the year.

To those health and strong,may you remain like that. The only changes I pray for you for is the change in your bank account balance...may it increase at a geometric rate.

Ladies and gents..
Happy new year and my warmest regards goes to you and your family and friends.

Souloho19...I continue to marvel as you do your things and watch keenly from a distance as you grow from strength to strength..the idea kept coming and the audience kept enjoying.

By the way,I hope you won't turn this interesting stories into those kind of stuffs done by Chinese which you and I knew that is is and can not be remotely possible.
And yea,I am referring to the exploit of the clever sparrow.

Chuckling...tone it down for we are dealing with a make belief here.

Meanwhile, I hope you are alright healthwise,creative wise etc?


EkopSparoAyara...thanks for looking out for me. I appreciate from a distance!

Emm...I hope all this,
Give us update ooooo..
Come and update ooo..
Thank you for the update...
Souloho19 update na..

Has stopped in 2018? This is 2019...let's talk more about the story...
What we think..
What we observe..
How we see each update...etc
It is more lively and fun that way and would give souloho time to relax or recharge his battery.

Best wishes ladies and gentlemen.

One word...
Brilliant!!!

Souloho19 the man who knew his soup and the exact time to add maggi or pepper.

....That awkward moment when you suddenly drop an update to please the ever demanding audience only to read it again and discovered that you erred here and there as in the direction you want the story to head.

Then trying to make a next update to fits or flows accurately with the already new direction is a huge work on its own...

You level of writing is extremely close to that of the kings or probably still up there with them...

so

Calm down dude and do your things majestically.
Soar on confidently also and ..
Grow from strength to strength for your story has already begun!

Ladies and gentlemen....wishing you all a great weekend ahead!

Shaking my head amusingly...
Yes I have been away like forever that a comment from me would suddenly seem like a review of the entire work starting from where I went MIA to this latest update.

You are doing something extraordinary beautiful here that my choice of words..my insinuations would be seem merely as an anticipated exaggeration.

Indeed you have mastered the rope.
The literacy giants who read your work would smile astonishingly...
The critics would read on with mouth agape..

And the fans..

Yea,they all would be held spell bound.

What then can I say??
One only have to go as far back to my previous comments.
Indeed I was not wrong about the writer..
You will continue to be recognized as your your creative ability becomes even more pronounced.

He nods..

I am proud of you!

Such an imagination...an extraordinary one!
A man on a mission..
Capable of giving the legends in the game a good run for their money.

Not in a million years would anyone have been able to predict that the real enemy lies within..Impossible!

No one probably saw it coming..
Traits of an exceptional writer at full display before our very eyes..hehe

But..

The man with an undivided attention fully focused solely on his objective while carrying the audience along quietly revealed the mystery surrounding the intrigue unopposed even by the meanest of critics probably due to the fact that the plot, scene click admirably can't go unnoticed.

Certainly not by me!

Such an exceptional level of creativity!
Indeed they are only a few out there.

Thank you souloho19.


However,this story still would not have been what it is without the audiences.. so I have this to say;

To those who we might have lost,We sympathies with the family..

To those who are down health wise or struggling with different challenges, God will indeed change your situation..

To those healthy and strong, may your situation never change and may it only get better...

Ladies and Gentlemen,welcome to the month of November.

The tactics of making the story unpredictable.... toying with the emotions of your audience with unthinkable devastation and undeniable accuracy... hehe.

Unquestionably the hallmark of an extraordinary writer..smh
I am quiet impressed.

I have reasons to believe that the couple would survive it especially Adran.

Thank you for the brilliant entertainment offered on a platter of gold.

I will stick with the story till the end.

Impressive!

Ignoring some errors here and there...
It was a story well narrated so far and i marvel impressively at the individual behind the keyboard striking it confidently.

Indeed the story has an infectious aura.

Another star is Born!

This is...
Inbuilt.. Inborn... Talent... Creativity... Art...
Above all an Unquestionable gift from the Almighty...
Your time of manifestation is here. Soon the world would recognize you.
Soar on!!!

Indeed this is gonna be a damn beautiful story if you keep to it as it is now.
Continue the good work Aaspot. I will be back!

May the world continue to celebrate you.
Happy birthday.

You improved everyday.
He nods... Ride on!

You have taken a giant stride in a very short time... you are not there yet but your last two updates convinced me beyond reasonable doubt that i undoubtedly have no doubt that you get there. The very top!

Your consistency in updating is spot on..
Your story is a beauty to behold..
Putting that very story in writing...not just in any writing but the ability to give the audience a clear picture of the unfolding eventing has taken a giant stride.

Yes..a vast improvement is worth commendation.

He smiled...

In, we have stepped into another September

And in yet another 30days we will embrace or contend with October

Often anxieties continue to mount in the succeeding November

All labouring to have a comfortable handle on the supposed year ending December

For many this is the time to minimize their slumber

Some will feel it's the season to heighten their hustle and scamper

Not a few might be given to losing their mien and temper

The cohort of the super-wealthy elites they'd love to be a member

Some will forget to be thankful they hadn't been around the vicinity of a bomber

But nothing is so sacrosanct about December

In the absence of beef and chicken you can make do with cucumber

Needless getting oneself burnt and consumed like an ember

Your wellbeing and sanity you must not dismember

Wealth is only for the living you ought to remember

May life's vicissitudes not make our vision and future somber

Almost always better to make sacrificial peace than to seek help in a lawyer's chamber

In life's convoluted scaffold, seek to be a focused climber

When they count the sane, the simple and the strong may you be in the number

Regardless of sway of fortunes, positive emotions you must muster semper

Ember from glory to glory.

_STAY INSPIRED_

**onahstanhon356***

Happy belated birthday dude..I just discover it right now.

May the world continue to celebrate you as your glories becomes even more pronounced by God.

Soar with pride!

Extraordinary brilliant that is all.

I would still get back to you no matter how long it may takes and no matter if I have read the story here to the end or not.

Stories like this is worth a space in my library.

The wait is justified.
Great job.

INDUSTRIALFAN:
I think on the nurse eish, it was stated that Chico said he recognized the signs of one who has been afflicted with 'dog spirit'(possessed) and seeing that the witch has been the playmaker, it wouldn't be difficult to see that Chisco isn't far from the truth. Nurse Josephine was bewitched.

Nodding quietly in agreement...

I just revisited the above phrase which I overlooked not out of ignorance but due to the humour.

Mama has reduced her to an easy lay.
She will give everyone.
The very moment she lust for Maya man,the easier it becomes for the evil one to use such a person.
No wonder the good book say, "whosoever look lustfully at a woman commit adultery with her in his heart".

An excellent lesson to whosoever choose to lay anything in skirt...and ladies who chase any long thing many a times for finanical gains.

Good job INDUSTRIALFAN..
Good job Centino.

Seem like the end is near...
Once the protagonist is render incapacitated, then it is almost as good as over.

Hehehe...

I have not been able to comment for a long time here because either I am itching to have an argument concerning the state of the nation and every pro and cons happening or I am many a times overwhelmed with laughter.

Now arguing intricately will derail this thread....

Laughing repeatedly would prevent me from analyzing this.

But...

I have one objection.
Having known who had sex with her,she then want more from that same person...Concerning this,i have this to say...either the nurse has been hypnotized or the ladies audience here would be in the best position to refute or acknowledge the above assertion.


Apart from that,i have few words for you...
Bravo bravo bravo Innocent.
In this style of writing that indirectly /directly discussing the state of the nation ranging from politics,religion,entertainment, soccer, domestic violence etc you are undoubtedly in a world of your own.

The teenagers would learn...
The youth would created opinions..
The adult would argue...
You will give every individual capable of reading something to talk about...
All in one,you got them lectured and entertained.

He nods...
Your work is outrageously commendable!!!

softy:
Live and let live bro. He has taken ur advice in good faith. This is a story for fun not for academic purpose.

This is how Hollywood started..... Not every post needs to be criticised. Thank you for all ur points.

Young zubi, kindly continue.

@honourable, no hard feelings though.

.......This is how Hollywood started.

Hey ,who told you that??

Let me tell you,it was NOT exactly like that or even closed to that..
And more over we are no longer living in the PAST.

He smiled....
This was episode 41,right
I have only commented TWICE!!!


I tell you this most solemnly, your "youngzubi kindly continue won't help him".

Let's assist him in becoming an extraordinary writer.

You are welcome!!!

If you know,you know!

Youngzubi:
sir the story is 100% fiction, that red agent part both his stunts and all that was just my way to bring in American and whitemen as whole,their way of action movie which our movie industry here in Nigeria is yet bring in

movie lovers i mean those who love action movies will understand what i mean

i love actions,with our imaginations i think we can actually make the impossible become possible

"fiction" yea! thats why it is called fiction,for it gives us the chance to express the extraordinary,once a story is not real then the readers should expect "beyond" the real life event,but" it shouldn't be over done,and thats where your point is directly pointing at,i gat that

nollywood need to upgrade
there need serious upgrading with powerful technologies
we'er sick and tired of a victim dying before bullet hit him or her


i really appreciate your kind gesture,please dont give up on your boy, i l'll try my best till you agree with my work,thank you very much sir

still your guy youngzubi

He nods...
May you continue to be a solution to your generation.

arrestdarrester:
Wow! High level of observation. The angle of view however provides a single perspective.

The Real Shadow is the hatchet man for some big boys up there in the State Security. The Safe must be very important to the Stakeholder(s) of it's content that t(he)y allowed Emenike hold unto one key while another key was held by a yet to be named fellow, or even Amunike while in Prison. This person holding the spare must have been keeping tabs on events unfolding and predicted that Rex would head for the safe if left with no choice. It is this same unnamed fellow that must have released the key to the Real Shadow.

About the ease with which the Real Shadow died. It is clear from his premature celebration after evading his pursuer, that he underestimated this pursuer. He is so used to being the predator that he forgot how to be a prey and live. He must have lost it for a minute. And in his trade a second can make the difference between life and death.

Also do not forget that the man who has nothing to lose is the most dangerous. All his instincts are awakened to cause collateral damage before he dies. The Real Shadow blamed his brother for his careless death while Bigelow blamed himself for his own brother's pyrrhic victory and death. And he vowed a revenge. His motivation was more real than the Real Shadow's.

Finally, the writer is African and the setting African. That voice that said "well done bro" to the hearing (imagined or real) of Bigelow before he left the scene of the encounter with the Real Shadow tells us his brother's spirit fought alongside himself. He had some sort of supernatural assistance if you'll allow me say that.

I acknowledge your perspective. But this is my perspective and I give it to you that Souloho19 alone knows the twist. An attempt by the writer to explain these observations could make the story appear banal.

Souloho19 should read our observations but keep the suspense. I'm not expecting an explanation as it is.

He smiled....

Indeed you are reading!

By the way,are you actually saying that the writer suddenly diverted to the supernatural?? Come on,this doesn't sound like a supernational story. I can tell you this based on pure visualization that they was actually no audio -able voice..it was merely his imagination. (hehehehe...)

The fact that you played the card of the possibility of the real shadow having another key got me smiling...Yeah,it could be true.

But...

The real shadow didn't lost his pursuer!
A special force commando who was hot on his tail in pursuit... whom he have been toying with due to the fact that his power bike is twice as faster than the vehicle he is driving...The same man who nearly got him killed if not for the bullet proof vest he was wearing suddenly disappeared from his tail before his very eyes(it is not like he didn't see him when he diverted)..So a highly trained assassin as he is would then take that for grant, huh? huh?

Overconfidence souloho19?
You mean someone who nearly got me killed on the first encounter,I would be over confident to face him again??
Killers doesn't do that....they thread with the uttermost caution and plan properly in the next encounter.

Well never mind.
arrestdarrester...Great contribution anyway!

Let's all enjoy the intrigue as it unfold.

Youngzubi stop messing up a nice plot with the impossible. I mean,you see how real everything is until you suddenly got to the secret agent side of the story...

*****the red guy fly up from wia im bin stand,for air he release multiple bullets within seconds all oga frank men from a to z full ground as the red guy land stand for ground gawwam!! with the two golden pistol for im hand*******



Unless they were few other people recruited by the said secret agent, it is quiet impossible for one person in the "open" to successful gun down to the head more than ten men all armed to the teeth and standing at different position...with just two pistol and with an undeniable accuracy.

Haba!!!!

This is over exaggeration.... even Jack baeur can't do this and neither can any special force soldier perform such stunts. It is not possible to shot many people down while in the air with just two pistol to the extent that by the time you land,you have successful killed them all with a bullet to the head. Haba nah!!!!

Wait,wait,wait a minutes...are you in a hurry to finish the story? Then you are making a mistake..a big one.

Why rush??
Calm down....
Give detail description that will get your audience nodding firmly in agreement.

Indeed you can do it...it is just a matter of time before you get it right.
Be rest assured that i will be on your neck every now and then until you give me no reason to object repeatedly.

Ride on!