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..Actually there are some handful of exceptional writers whose stage names I won't forget in a hurry because their stories 90 out of a 100 times hits a nerve... and I could read their stories again and again and again if it is still available and I am not busy or watching soccer during the week.

But...

I knew just THREE of them by their Real name... and.. well... you might as well guess correctly.. TiffanyJ is one of them.

Any yea, I have never met any of them.
Congratulations Comfort on your up coming wedding.
Great job moderator Divepen1

Like they say... every writers are unique in their own way. I can't agree more with this very assertion...

I read the whole story till the latest episode quietly for a long while and was highly impressed not just because of the intelligent choice and use of word nor the simplicity of those words but the highly educative lesson bar the sex scene in it.

Enter Larrysun..an unique writer defined by just one objective so far... "to educate the audience through story telling.

Never will I fail to appreciate a writer with an exceptional story whenever I read one.

Back to the story..
And Peter got caught, this is where the story would begins to get hot.. I guess things would never be the same again between both boys.

Trust is precious...
Guess what happens when trust is broken??


Well,we are about to find out!!!

Are you back finally??

Yea, yea I knew it is not that easy but taking this long probably made many forget it.

Create a pattern and follow it.

Your story is spot on!!!

Theblessedman are you alright ...healthwise? or you are probably so busy to be able to come up with updates..
Whatever the issue is.. know today that your efforts is far is appreciated obviously from a distance.

Best wishes!

Achron seem overly confident... I am beginning to wonder if Achron and Ruel are the same person...or Ruel probably be that quiet old man who went to summon the high priest.

I should observe quietly for I have never able to predict Apollux since I start reading this his story!

Wait wait a minute souloho19 hope you are not rushing the concluding Part??

Where is OLUCHI....
What has she been doing all this while?
I am sure she heard all the shouting, the struggles etc going on inside..

I trust you will do justice to that part..yes,, you must give life to every part of the story especially the above mentioned one.

Finally, a seventeen years old teenager successful defeat a violent and murderous rapist rendering his weapon of mass destruction highly ineffective forever...A punishment well deserved!

Wait.. wait.. Batholomew escaped again?? impossible!!!
I very much doubt that he will be able to ignore the terrible pain down there and concentrate on killing Joy or escaping. But with the keyboard or phone in front of souloho, anything is possible!

Lesson :
1. Never..i repeat never underestimate a woman a scorned woman for that matter.

2. 99(yea,i might be exaggerating) out of a 100 times, no sin goes unpunished.

Well done Souloho19...Never a dull moment reading your story!

Theblessedman?
Hehehehehe...

Even through he has not finished his ongoing story.. the first one for that matter, you can not just dispute the fact that he has that capacity to fill you with laughter with his mental thought..

Seeing him here just made me laugh.
Welcome back dude.

Take all the time you need out..
We are that patient.

donblazer10:
if it's nt an update it's nt making sense

Well, that is what you choose to believe in.

Now let's look at your comment for a moment... you wrote "nt" which I guess is your own short form of "not". You don't seem to have the time to type it fully...why then won't we appreciate the writer who takes time to type every words fully??

If the writer had chosen to write like you, none would be able to enjoy it.

Review the writer's work.... argue,debate,encourage,motivate...all these gives the writer respite or put plainly more time to "recharge his batteries".

Still don't get it??
I am done.

Honeydawealth:
anh anh.....why now D man was simply saying d truth!!

Truth doesn't matter to some...what matters is just the update.. any reviews or encouragement that exceed more that 50words is disgusting to some whether it is true or not... well said or not.

To them only updates matters..
How have you been Honeydawealth??

donblazer10:
mtcheew..I even think say na update sef.

***Smiles...why are YOU here Why are we here

Excuse me young man... we are not here JUST to READ...

or

To say "souloho19 come and update nah" or "I even think say na update sef?

Here, you..
Read,
Learn from the story.. and more importantly..
Review the narrator's work..
Encourage or motivate him with spoken words .

If you know the mental stress a writer goes through just to put numerous words together to create a master pieces that keeps you entertained, you will appreciate them, encourage them, and more importantly review their works which predictably would be even longer than what I wrote.

You are welcome!

Hehehehehe watch closely as I demonstrate..
You are good with this, really good. This priest is very much powerful more than I could have anticipated.
However something is still missing..
Apollux and souloho? Excellent collaboration.. Nice choice Apollux for Souloho is that good.

Here we are..
The end is near....
An extraordinary story... as we approach climax..

For someone who have only one story here to his name to come up with such master pieces is outrageously admirable.

I may not have the time to read every stories here but the ones I have read so far made me have the opinion that stories filled with action(the use of guns and knives), supernatural, magic, sex, accompanied with an excellent story lines sells more...

The Eze2000 ,the ironkurtan, the solomonbrown, the ghostwritter, the Apollux and many more confirmed that theory with their outrageous pieces of creativity.

But...
I suddenly stumbled across the other side of the equation... and got glued..


Fiyah proved that theory wrong... I battled with doubt!

TiffanyJ made my theory looks funny with her numerous master pieces... I battled with doubt.

Larrysun made my theory laughable.. I doubt yet again

Angelsss made a mockery of that same theory with her endless short stories that will keep you on the edge of your sit.. Yet, I still doubt.

Enter an unknown Souloho19...he came. with a combination at first.. it was a huge hit and then he came up again with this... and my theory changed..

Both sells..
What mattered most is the storyline and more importantly how the story is narrated.

If it is that easy and possible, I would love to share a bottle of wine with these ladies and gentlemen.

Thanks for the entertainment Souloho!

Souloho19..... I applaud you from a distance. Yeah... you are that good! Best wishes..

Every supernatural...
Magic..

Always makes a captivating stories and beautiful for the eyes to watch and the ear to hear if and only if it was accompanied with an EXTRAORDINARY storyline.

Enter a certain Apollux.
An exceptional writer in his own right..
Well versed in magic and supernatural stuffs ,swords and I won't be mistaken if I add guns too..

The possibility of what the human mind of a "born writer or a learned writer" can create is endless.

..Back to the story,
Seem Thrace is still missing something and I can't just place my hands on it. I believe he is more powerful than he might ever think or was made to believe but it is like he still does not know the full extent of his powers unlike the khaufir yet.. just a little detail.. exhaustion and fear in the face of danger might just do the trick and awaken him.

I maybe totally wrong about this but one thing I am sure of is that the story itself would end being more than interesting if there is any words like that.

Ride on dude, you have my undivided attention!

Every supernatural...
Magic..

Always makes a captivating stories and beautiful for the eyes to watch and the ear to hear if and only if it was accompanied with an EXTRAORDINARY storyline.

Enter a certain Apollux.
An exceptional writer in his own right..
Well versed in magic and supernatural stuffs ,swords and I won't be mistaken if I add guns too..

The possibility of what the human mind of a "born writer or a learned writer" can create is endless.

..Back to the story,
Seem Thrace is still missing something and I can't just place my hands on it. I believe he is more powerful than he might ever think or was made to believe but it is like he still does not know the full extent of his powers unlike the khaufir yet.. just a little detail.. exhaustion and fear in the face of danger might just do the trick and awaken him.

I maybe totally wrong about this but one thing I am sure of is that the story itself would end being more than interesting if there is any words like that.

Ride dude, you have my undivided attention!

Omaa1:
KimberlyWest!
You from Nsukka right?

Nsukka Then I just saw a sister here! Where in Nsukka if I may add? LGA? Town??

Get well soon. It shall be well with you even in the well.

Your 16 year old daughter in university is going back to the school after sallah break.

As a good mother you saw her off to the bus station and left after she had boarded the bus. After 3 hours you were told that the bus she boarded had an accident and no one survived.

As you are going crazy making arrangement to verify her death, you received a call from your daughter saying "mum I wasn't on that bus oooh my boyfriend insisted I spend a day in his house before I go to school"!

What will you do as a parent? How would you react?


Let's have your contribution on the story. Be very candid.

Happy Birthday dear Pamela... sorry it came late. may God continue to give you greater reasons to glorify HIM everyday.

cheers

souloho19 and Pamela B share the same birth date?? Wow... That is great or probably strange as both of them happen to be a writer here on nairaland.

May the world continue to celebrate with you guys as your glories becomes even more pronounced by God.

Xtra grace!!!

souloho19:
The shoe print Osi found:

The ease at which you strategically switch the public spot light back to Paul actually drew a smirk from my face, and it turned out to laughter in the comfort of my bedroom ....I couldn't hold it back.

Hallmark of a talented up coming writer.. a huge and undeniable potential indeed.

If we are to analyse Paul critically again, the speed at which he left the neighbouring village after chatting with Osi and return back to his own village to carry out the attempt rape on Joy, deserve an applause... should we now say he poses superhuman speed and strength??

Well, anything is possible,so they say...
I keep on observing keenly from a distance as things unfolds.. and the mystery revealed.

Good job!

Hehehehehehehe....

Toying with your audience emotion with an undeniable and devastating accuracy.

Leaving clues here and there...

Then flowing with the audiences comments(just like some comedians) .. making it possible for you to twist who the killer might be as easily as you left the clues... *smiles* a captivating talent indeed...

The possibility of what that head of yours could come with is endless. hehehehe..
However, Credit should go to your audience whose extraordinary comments, ideas,debate,argument,opinion, spurs you on and contributed in an unspeakable way to make you an extraordinary writer.


Well, well, back to the story at hand... the clues left were many to nail the European.
And moreover the activities of the European is not helping his cause either..
That brutal rape and murder of his wife NAILED him completely. it is not a coincidence and neither was there a copy cat.

A copy cat?? how did the said copy cat knew about the European secret?? Doesn't make sense...

Pastor Bath.?
How could he have murder okudili when he himself was at the vigil too... and I am guessing at the high table while Osi ministered.. But the wine incident makes him a suspect too. He could easily locate where the wine is but what rules him out concerning that clues was that, he too would have drank from that wine... unless ....well your guess is as good as mine.

The butcher
He is just one of the decoy or should I say a pawn threw in by the writer to make the debate of who the devil is longer and even more interesting and undoubtedly captivating.
I wonder how educated the butcher might be to be able to have perfect knowledge of that poison. How did he know where the wine was?? Remember the devil easily located that wine.

Paul??
I have effect evilly ruled out the wanna be kidnapper. He is just another pawn in this game. His incident with Amara doesn't in anyway portray him the devil... he did what he did to Amara publicly while Joy was inside... something the devil would never do.


Well, our best bet is the white man but pastor Bath. can't be ruled out totally.

But as things stand now, all directions point to the WHITE MAN.

An interesting story..
Like I said before, With souloho19 on the wheel, you are in for and an intriguing adventure.

Who has not entertained so far??
You??
I doubt.

Excellent.

UNBELIEVABLE!!!!!!!

I still can't resist the urge... the temptation to ask if this is a copied work or really the writer's undisputed creative imagination.

HORROR!!!!!!!
HORROR INDEED!!!!!!

This is not a story for teenagers..
or
The faint heart...

Obviously, the story line left very little room for constructive criticism which begged the question.. "is this actually the writer's creation "??

Intriguing and mind-blowing..
Indeed,not only romantic or sex filled stories, and action filled stories sells and held one spell bound but horror stories accompanied with an extraordinary storyline and suspense does the same too with an intimidating effect.
Even the supernatural does the magic too..
It has been proven here by the writer.

I repeat one more time again if this stuffs is actually coming from the writer's head, then I won't be exaggerating if I say I just come across a writer here on nairaland who i can confidently place in the same category of these male writers.. the souloho19..the ironkurtan.. the appolux,the Eze2000, and many more I can't accurately recall..or have not discovered.

However we all need to let go of these alluring anticipation of what happen next.. may this not happen, may he or she not die etc... I know.. you also know.. the anticipation is endless so is the temptations...ignore all that for a moment and focus on making the writer an even more better writer by criticizing him fiercely constructively and pointing out the impossible and errors...

We must object to make the writer an extraordinary horror story teller.

It is possible..
Who say it is not?
Certainly not me.

Ghostwritter, I will ride with you henceforth as you lead us all to part two.

Ladies and gentlemen, I was not bored!
Were you?

Excellent job.

crislyn:
I've never met such a weak character in my world, i don't know of others. Some girls are actually gullible but not to this Sophie's extent...you have a point.

This is coming from a lady, huh? Then I take it that such character appears once in a blue moon.

Thanks Lady Crislyn...
I hope to learn more from you ladies.

Angelsss:
Very sweet...thanks so much dear...I didn't forget u...I just forgot the numbers that followed ur name.
You just made a point. We should discuss on the characters more...
I am glad you all like the story...
I know you all expect Sophia to stand up for herself ...well...
what if this is based on a true life story?
what if they are very weak people like Sophia?

If such a weak ladies exist, then I have never come across one.
A junior sister ordering her elder sister in such a manner that she even cried makes me wonder if such a thing happens in a girl world.

But I tell you this most solemnly... this NEVER happens in a boys world unless they are fathered by different man or has different mother.

well, here in this story I just met a weak character in your imagination (smiles). Sophia is indeed a wuss now but I see her overcoming it and becomes confident... that is the direction your story is showing me at the moment which obviously is gonna make this story even more interesting.

I keep on watching from a distance as things unfold.

CRaIziee:
hmmm... Going with ur signature... I think I need an Iphone...

For a start though.. lol

....For a start?? You do have an expensive taste then but you know, Barbie would have asked for a Jeep?
Got the humour though...

Rose Akpabio aka Angelsss... *smiles*... I never got an invite but I happen to stumble upon it and ..

Was I surprised? Nay
Awed? Nay
Shocked? nay
Excited? Yea
Impressed? Yea
Entertained? Yea
Educative? Yea

Ladies and gentlemen, you are undoubtedly reading from the Queen of short stories here on Nairaland at the moment.

This is clearly not the work of an Amateur!!!

Ever read her previous stories? absolutely ALL were a HIT.
Her ability to construct words together were top notch..
Well, well I can't say more than these else some audience might thinks I am merely exaggerating or somehow related to her.

I am not in a strong position to Critically criticize this story having never had a sister or grew up with one.

But in a BOYS world, no matter how fond a senior is to his junior brother, no matter how much he loves the said junior, the said junior can't have the audacity to do what Sophia sister is doing and get away with it especially the last incident... IMPOSSIBLE!!!! or is it that apart from being more beautiful,she is also physically stronger than her elder sister for her to be this intimidated

Well like I said, I am not in the best position to ascertain such situations given my growing up from boy to man...

Well, well, it is a ladies things or guys that grew up surrounded by girls..


Comments like "Angelsss update nah",
Thanks for the updates... etc just make me laugh... what are audience for?? discuss, debate, argue constructively, criticism etc... these are what make the place lively, inspire the writer or motivate him or her.. more importantly EDUCATE him or her with the audience included.

sigh...

The Queen of short captivating stories... that is what I have come to know you for.

Never a dull moment reading her stories.

What a creative brain... I am with you!

Souloho19 again with another double awesome update.. I take it that he didn't proof read it before posting.. so all grammatical and mis-spelt errors should be outrightly ignored.

No matter the delay, it is just worth the wait..
The updates always achieve what it was sent to achieve...
Your appetite would be unquenchable..
You will desire for more and more..
Every update is a hit..
With souloho19 on the wheel, you are on for one hell of an adventurous ride.
It is 100% guaranteed!


Hey countrygirl.... you ever read his first work?? I am sure you have!
It was not one you can easily predict especially whenever he is in his flow if I can recall accurately ... so think outside the box for a moment. probably another character could be introduced.

But...

You could still be right through as all direction point to Steve the white man.. In my opinion, the drunkard is out of the equation(i could still be wrong, you know?)

However having read delay diagonised carefully.. enjoying the intruges , I refused to take the bait here..

I think we all need more clues....to know who the so called devil is.

Ladies and gentlemen.. enjoy the fun!

So Michael ,a man with no previous record of being a playboy in the past,a man who is not under any spell just changed to a demon over night with the first incident with his secretary??

...Have the audacity to not just bleeped his wife sister but impregnate her purposely, and his wife house help in the SAME house?? Meaning a once loving man who was not even cursed is not even ashamed of his actions,huh?

Hehehehehe ....i get it, I get it... it is just a story... a product of the writer creative imagination which is quiet admirable...

Along the line as the story unfolds, maybe just maybe there will be a flashback where a curse, a spell,etc was cast on Michael..
or a history of irrational behavior or sickness was attributed to Michael..

Because I tell you this, the excess in which the writer is painting Michael black is outrageously so hard to believe...it is excessive. And I am telling you all most solemnly, such thing doesn't happen to a sane man... it doesn't!!!

Kevin An established playboy as the story portrayed him... a friend of Michael... A friend oh oh he is more like a brother.... so why give up on Michael why fantasize about his wife...??He was banging Amara while moaning Clarie name...

In an offensive word,he put Amara in this situation... Yea, Amara was never like this until Kevin forced himself on her...He raped,flogged her!

He apologized ...but the damage had already been done...it can't just be erased and that could mentally change a woman.

Amara She need help.

Philip chasing after a married woman?? even when the going was good, he was still after her,dreaming after her...Back off dude, she is married...you could have waited for her to divorce because chasing her madly.

My review may end up being like an update if I continue.. which might bring frown from some audience here but I tell you this, it is an interesting story..very interesting ...

My only objections is the "make believe " part of it.

But believe it or not... the story is a hit.

A giant script writer in the making.. that is what you are!

I am both impressed and entertained!!!!