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TheBlessedMAN:
thanx bro and u too.. Honourable356, i sight you o...

The blessedman... today is Saturday, right?
I had to read uninterrupted...

This story is indeed countless...
Twist here and there ...erotic Scene..betrayals et al
Your mental thought in some situations won't go unnoticed, it is indeed hilarious.

I was not just tempted to laugh... I actually laughed.


You are indeed toying with the imagination, and emotion of your audience.. and it is quiet admirable.

But..


Why not become unpredictable?
Must every encounter you have with a lady behind close door end up in sex especially when you resolved to be a changed man?

The audience read and read.... and then it came to where the son of thunder was alone with a lady in a room.. Your guess is as good as mine.. Yes, 90% of the audience has already brace up for an explicit sex scene.

Hey, prove them wrong!

And don't forget... too much of everything makes something boring.

Don't let them predict you..
Be unpredictable and make them all anticipate.

What a story... especially for a first timer.

It might not be a passion for you.. but the story shows you are capable of holding your on among the giants.

Stay focused!

Souloho comes again with a bang...
I can voucher for him, you won't be disappointed.

He proved it before and he will do so again.

Do you remember this...?
Freeeeeeeeeedom......

I do.

Show us what you are made of dude..
Ladies and gentlemen, you are in for one hell of a ride... Every seconds counts.
Watch out.

Your anticipation would be insatiable .

This is your first story here on nairaland,right?
I read it keenly taking even the smallest details into consideration...it is quiet entertaining..and alluring.

Tragedy, Love,pain,betrayal,malice..all in one
Not bad for a first timer..
Your potential is spot on,no doubt.

You yourself will be impressed when you one of these days take time to read every words that,that head of yours brought together. **he smiled **

Just one criticism.. as a writer, NEVER LET YOUR NEXT MOVE BE EASILY PREDICTED...!
No one should see it coming.. in doing so, you would have easily earn the attention to your worst critics who would unashamedly refresh this story always anticipating what happened next.

Basically, praise or criticism could influence a writer either positively or negatively, I wish this comment achieve the later.

May your sources of inspiration, motivation never runs dry.. Stay focus for your next story would be even better than this one even through this one has not ended yet.. I choose to believe this.

Meanwhile let me enjoy the ride... for this seem like it would probably have a happy ending.

Best wishes..!!!

TiffanyJ:
Thanks sir and amen. Do you reside in Akwa Ibom state? You look a lot like someone I know that resides there

You are full of imagination, you know??
Well like they say one or two people could bear strikingly resemblance to you and there might be a 1% chance that you might get to meet them.

Just maybe you probably have caught a glimpse of me somewhere but it is not Akwa Ibom because I don't reside there my dear and neither do I have a twins brother.

I am based in a military barrack in Makurdi..Benue state.

Good morning!

TiffanyJ:
Lol, to be candid with you, all of my stories are fiction. Pure imaginations. I began reading story books in primary school. By the time I get to junior secondary school, I knew I loved reading stories and I read a lot of foreign novels. One day I said to myself, 'I will be a writer some day'. It didn't happen until my final year at the university, ASUU went on a six months strike nd I got tired of sitting at home, doing nothing. That was when I wrote my first story, 'the reluctant bride'. Well, the rest are history.
Today, writing is a passion but I hate editing, that's why, my work are alwys full of errors. As for purchsing on okadbooks, I alwys advise readers to refill with air time. Its fast and easy. Bank transfers have their own side effects. In fact, you can credit your okadabooks with #200 air time.
My name is Comfort, Tiffany is my pen name.

Just pure imaginations??
Even through I have not read all your stories but believe it or not I have been quiet impressed with those that I have read so far.

You touched a nerve whenever you picked up that pen..
I have reasons to believe that many have been inspired by your stories...

What more can I say??

Comfort? a Comforter indeed? ? the name probably suit you...
Using stories to teach certain truths..
Using stories to positive influence the younger generations..
Using stories to stir up positive emotions..

Smh...

I may not have write a story myself but I know quite an outrageous talent when I see one...

Think it is easy for them despite the. passion, nay it is not.
But it is just a matter of time....when the ALMIGHTY ordained it, when HE decide it is time, I tell you this most solemnly..recognition will come and will millions will follows.


May you continue to be a solution to your generation.
Stay focus and be patient for I see you getting there!!!!

Tiffany J again?
It is a common knowledge that you are gift in the art of story telling... whether made up or true life stories...

Yeah,it is unfortunately that the story was stopped along the way and I understood why..

You already earn my admiration.
May I get your real name please?

As for purchasing the book.. I think bank mobile transfer would have save many slot of stress with that okada stuffs.

Best wishes!!!

Appolux?? Souloho19 StephenGee12
Incredible gift sons of a gun. Obviously I am convinced beyond reasonable doubt.
Still having some doubt? Read the "last gang standing" again!
These guys are extremely gift to an extent. Ride on as I watch with keen interest from a distance.

Bibi294:
SEVEN YEARS LATER
She ran to her grandmother in tears, ignoring the man who sat beside her.

"Mummy, I don't want to go to school anymore..." She had cried

"Why baby?" Pemisire placed the beautiful girl on her lap.

"My friends said I don't have a father..." She sneezed.

"Oh my dear, Dad is here..." Solo opened his hands wide inviting her into his arms. Toluwa had grew into a beautiful girl, beautiful like her mother and fearless like her father. She went into his arms relunctantly.

"Daddy!" She called slowly, looking up.

"Yes honey."

"Why am I not living with you and mummy?" She asked innocently.

"Because you have to stay with mother or don't you want to stay with her?" He replied with a big grin.

"I heard grandma telling big aunty that my parents are dead."

"No o... I am here joo." He smiled, Toluwa was difficult to deal with, she could talk you to death.

"But daddy..."

"...guess what?"

"Daddy, I...." She wanted to protest.

"We're spending the next vacation in Atlanta with mummy..." He announced, Toluwa was happy. She was going to spend time with her 'father' and his wife. Pemisire watched the kid as she reminded her of her first son, Gori Fatoyinbo. She had been taking care of her since the day death took her parents, Gori and Tiwa and she was happy she was growing fast, faster than she could imagine. All thanks to God and Solomon, who had been there for her since the tragic incident took place.

"Daddy."

"Yes." Solo answered.

"Do you know what my friends are calling me?" She asked smiling.

"What? Princess..."

"No."

"Queen."

"No."

"Then what?"

"Shadow." She was laughing. Pemisire Pedro and Solo were both shocked.

"Shadow ke?" They asked in unison.

"Do you know I always stalk all bullies and I report all bad teachers in my school? I fight for other..." She handed deranging her hair.

"See, Tolu, go inside..." Pemisire ordered.

"Why now?" She wanted to protest but the look on grandma's face spoke volumes to her. She stood to leave.

"I bought a new dress for you." Solo announced bringing out a green dress.

"I hate green colour..." She said irritatingly and left. Pemisire and Solo excahngwd glances. Toluwa was not a young girl, she was wiser than her age.

Gorilla's reincarnate


THE END

What a conclusion...
what a story...

Gori reincarnated indeed.

You are mouthed.
Respect..
Admiration.. and
Love..

You have earned it all.
Looking forward to your new story.
Don't disappoint..
Beat wishes!!!

Bibi294 drops another mindblowing update with a bang...

Who was not entertained? certainly not me!
Secrets revealed.. and things becomes even clearer as the suspense unfold.

It was an ordinary story made to look quiet extraordinary by the writer and that is... TALENT!!!

More and more of this, will see your stock raise..
Grant you more audience..
Recognition..
Fulfillments
positive imparts in the life of the young generations..
And millions in your account whether you are writing for fun or not.

Then...
You will acknowledge that your glory has become even pronounced by GOD.

Ride on...
Make us all proud.

Oh my God...

Apollux who
Is this another souloho or solomonbrown or ironkurtan??

Am I impressed? Certainly!
Surprised? Nay!

Only one sentence summarise this awesome story...

The writer is good...
His ability to make the story sound like reality is spot on... it reminds me of few of the list writer above.

This is potential...huge potential .. No doubt.

You have my attention and support.


Ride on!

Articulate and simple... even an illiterate would enjoy your story.

Should I say I was surprised?
Nah, I was not for I have long come to understand that NL poses outrageous potential both raw, refined and many yet to know what they are capable of with the bic or keyboard.

You have my attention.
Best wishes!

You have my respect!!

For...

You work is highly admirable.
I am at a lost for the perfect adjective to use in describing your unique ability with the pen/key board...

There is nothing else to say..
You did it!!!!

Your millions is on the way.

..His word were few,yet it sounds like a bombshell...
Like a young man confident in his own ability..,he said and I quote "Be rest assured, you won't be disappointed"!

And so far,I was not!!!


I have to admit plainly that NL boast a lot of talented writers with outrageous potential..
that I am no longer astonished anymore.


What more can I say??
Potential.. Potential... outrageous potentials..That is what this generation is blessed with.

" Freedommmmm......" I will remember this story for a long time.
Yeah,I was highly impressed...and couldn't stop smiling sheepishly at the writer choices of words..

Smh***It was impressive.
Obviously, the Op is about to draw the story to it conclusion.. It would be great injustice if I don't applauds his effort.

Good things must be acknowledged no matter who did it.
No matter the sources...
No matter the disability...

Souloho I am proud of you..
Inasmuch as I questioned whether such an outrageous pieces of work is actually coming from that head of yours, I couldn't help it but pray that your inspiration or sources of inspiration never runs dry!

Splendid..splendid!!!

I read down this story from part one to part two with great interest taking every details into consideration and ignoring typographical errors here and there...

I gave in to temptation and check the person whose brain created and composed such story...and had to admit plainly that I was impressed even through the story sounds much more like Yoruba movies

Bibi?
So far since I was here,the name doesn't ring a bell as a writer here on NL

But..

The moment I read the final chapter even through the story has not been concluded yet..

I find myself murmuring;

What an outrageous potential....
This is just the beginning of more captivating and action packed story from you.

You have my support!
Best wishes.

The self acclaimed son of sango was born today...

Just as children being a gift from God are celebrated when they are born, I declare that the world would celebrate with you as your glory becomes even more pronounced by GOD.

May the work of your hands continue to be appreciated!

Captivating and highly Intriguing.

Dude...you have earned my respect.

This would rival most foreign movies..

May you continue to be motivated and inspired until your glory become even more pronounced by God.


More of this will earn you recognition and millions whether you yearn for it or not.

Bar grammatical and typographical errors here and there,your story is spot on.

Best wishes!!!

SmartestPopQUEEN:
yhu don't know that for sure, do yhu? Dear, Yhu should first ask me why I don't have friends....trust me am a living witness

Smiles... I understand your point and there is no need asking you why you made the statement. The one closest to you knows where to stuck that would hurt you the most.

But there is just one objection...just as good and bad coexists, I am telling you this even more plainly, there are friends that you are yet to meet and would certain meet one of this days that would NEVER betray you no matter what...and no matter your situation.

When that happens, remember this very message.

SmartestPopQUEEN:
Thats one thing about fwendship...it always results in betrayal.....someone you dont trust can't betray yhu.

TBM what a nice update

"ALWAYS"?? You are wrong!

Impressive... really Impressive. welcome back dude!

Is this not the same author of the emotional story "ALONE" or are we looking at another person?

Either you are a highly emotional lady or you are addicted to emotional stuffs or your genetic gift creativity is only wired to create and stir up emotions or not,that I can't say until I know you personally but one thing for sure, I can't help it but acknowledge you again and again. Credit must be given to whom it is due!

For this reason,I have this to say and obviously I am not exaggerating...

Your talent is no longer in doubt.
May your ability with the bic or keyboard fetch you popularity and millions of naira one of these days whether you yearn for it or not.

Stay focused...you will surely get there!


***Meanwhile brace up for criticism as I follow intently now taking even the smallest details into consideration***.

Your story MUST appear REAL even to your strongest critics!

Have a great weekend.

All these actually came out from that head of yours This is not the first nor the second or third awesome stuffs you have done..
You genetic gift of creativity is spot on and highly appreciated.
I wish I knew you personally. Ride on.. Best wishes!!!!

It should have been the "SQUARE" OF 4 and not the "SQUARE ROOT " OF 4.

Modify it.

How did you come about this kind if story??
Is it from a novel or your genetic gift of creativity at work??

I am awed at the story...
The very first time I felt this way was when I read a story called "silent seduction" by fiyah.
I could not help it but fell in love with her and till this very day,I still remember that story like it was yesterday.

Fiyah can you hear me?? Your work is highly appreciated and your person loved.

Now this new dude doesn't seem like he is gonna disappoint...

What a story!
Actually it sounds foreign but I have a feeling that thus is gonna be a mind blowing blockbuster story...

Like I said before, I hope I am not disappointed.

You have my support!!!

Chumzypinky:
Sorry guys that i've been able to update or even come online. I put to bed on Monday Evening thats why i couldnt come.
As for those whom the wait irritated, i'm deeply sorry. I just have to care for myself and the new babies (for the lord blessed me with twins, a boucing baby boy and a girl), so i'm terribly sorry.

Congratulation!!!!

Obviously a gift from the Almighty.

May His name be glorified.