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matifizzy:
I WISH YOU ACTUALLY KNOW WHAT YOU ARE SAYING, EXACTLY WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO EVERY WOMAN THAT MARRIES A MAN DEY NEVER ACTUALLY LOVE, AND FOR THE ONCE THAT LOVES THERE SPOUSE, IF YOU DONT CONTINUALLY SHOW IT IT WILL DIE AND YOU START SEEKING SOLACE IN THE FUNNY MALE FRIEND OF YOURS, MY DEAR , ITS GODS GRACE O, TO REMAIN FOCUS

Excuse me for a moment... You actually assumed that I don't know what I am saying, huh?? Smh...

Ife don't love boma, yet she married him... Why? Not for love BUT what she would stand to gain. She got raped by Yinka's cousin.. How did it happen?? We were not told but I am sure she played a part to make it possible.

Now she is married to a man who loves her so much but who she doesn't love... A reasonable woman would weight her options.. Divorce your husband and then what?? No man would want to marry a girl that his own brother is sleeping with or his close cousin is sleeping with unless he was not aware. So what is her end game??

Unless she starts loving boma, she would lose out.

In response to your last statement, I will ask you... What is LOVE?? The one I know is not something you get tired of at all.. It increases... It gets better in each passing day inasmuch as quarrels, misunderstanding would arise.

Anyway, the bottom line here is marry who you love, respect and adore.

"WAS".... a kleptomaniac, right??
WAS.... WAS..
That WAS in the past. Who the hell doesn't have a past??

Come on, we are good then!! Nice story dear.

Gracito:
And to think Boma loves her so much. She just doesn't deserve him at all

At all, at all.

Gracito:
Nice one. I'm scared for Ego, Ife is one heartless, jealous and greedy lady. I fear that one of the protagonists might die as a result of her jealousy. Angelsss, after you na you abeg

..... Then Ife would die!!!

As the story I stumbled upon few days ago goes, it all points to her being rejected on both sides..
By Yinka and.
By Boma...

That serves her right!
But seriously, the manner in which she cheat on her husband is so obvious... It no longer happens that way nowadays. Married women are now wiser and 99 out of 100 wouldn't be stupid enough to put their self in a LOSE-LOSE situation.

cho25bc:
*Ghost mode deactivated*

Well! Well! Well! What else can I say? AWESOME!

I'm disappointed dat d story is yet to be completed.I came across dis piece 3 weeks ago,went 2 part one,demolished it and ran back here 2 part 2. I must confess dat I'm hyper-impressed with dis story.

I commend ur dialogue prowess, (d use of right words at d right time), d way u weave each characters together,d twists and turns, and d suspense is amazing. Ur style of minute by minute detail of every scenes,settings and locations is exceptional.I see d evidence of thriller movie addict in u through ur dexterity. I also love d surprises,d means through which d shocking revelations are being unfolded. D whole plot is mind-blowing. I can see dat u did a thorough research on firearms,US lifestyle,drug lords mode of operations,and high tech innovations.

I will comment on d key actors in dis movie (pls permit me to call dis piece a movie becos dat's d perspective I have abt it), den say something regarding d whole plot.

I'll start with Suzzane. I love her combination of beauty,brain, young age and bravery. I also love her attitude towards sex n men (although u didn't tell us whether she's still a virgin or not,lol). She come across like some1 who is focused,self-disciplined and possesses high self-control. However, I'm not comfortable with her new found love for blood,violence and murder. Althugh we can say dat she's justified in a way becos she only kills d bad guys, but when she's done killing all d bad guys,she might get bored and start killing d gud guys as well. I prefer her former timid personality to dis her present brutal nature. I don't know why I keep having d feeling dat she may be related by blood 2 d Sosai lineage, due 2 d way she was quick 2 pick up violence from Eric, unlike her other siblings, daniel and Victoria. Op, u are yet 2 tell us about her paternity. One more thing, u didn't tell us much abt her educational background, other than she was in junior high school when Eric came into d Philips home.

Eric- Inspite of d violent genes running in his veins, he has a heart. He's very compassionate and loves his people,always willing to keep dem alive at all costs. I also love his self-control charcteristics, just like Suzzane, he doesn't spend his time screwing hoes around. No wonder he's more powerful than Alex, becos he usually expends his energy on mental n physical trainings other than pussy banging,something that his counterparts always do. Dat is why only Lisa was romantically connected 2 him throughout dis story. No wonder she's helplessly in love with him. I wouldn't mind dating such a guy myself (winks). No need 4 bodyguards or fear of harrassment from psychopaths. However, his rude n arrogant behaviour often puts me off. Also d way he kills his enemies is too extreme.he's a fanatic butcher. Abeg Op,make him go easy on diz guys sometimes too na,haba! (A bullet or 2 d brain is enough).

Nina- my second best female actress in dis film (Diana is my 1st in d female category.I just love her maturity). She's brave and strong willed. She's a MAN trapped in a WOMAN's body becos no REAL woman will possess dat kind of character n strength. But she's arrogant n domineering, always bossing everyone around. She's also selfish. A keen observer of dis film will agree with me dat all she ever did in d whole plot centered around her own interests alone, even at d expense of other people's lives.I won't cite instances becos dere were many. How can she say dat she'd rather lose her father than her son? D old brute also deserves 2 live na.

Alex- I like his idea of resolving issues thru negotiation before introducing violence. Alex is also respectful, unlike his rude brother. But his unquenchable thirst for women is repulsive,maybe he's trying 2 compensate himself 4 all those times he was a feeble boy. But something is not clear to me Op. How did he escape his attempted suicide on d rooftop of his High school? U shielded dat part. All u said was dat Nina was dere 2 take him away frm d place n later replaced him with Eric 2 weeks after his disappearance. Pls clarify dat aspect very well 4 me.

Esther is a true definition of a mother and a wife material, bt she too dey pass her boundary sometimes. An instance was whr she wanted 2 beat up Nina when she saw how d latter inflicted injuries on Eric. What was she thinking?lol.

Chris is a genius. Rogers was a loyal friend.

My best characters so far are Cantona (Sosai himself). Dante (I just love dis guy,forget dat he's a bad guy). He's articulate and smart.Too bad he died easily. Earnest is my hero,always putting every1 first before himself. Lisa is also a good girl but vulnerable. These are d few personae dat interest me most.

I have reservations on d way Eric conquered Dante. It's too superficial and unrealistic. How can such a strong professional assasin sudenly turn 2 a puppy in d presence of Eric,all becos d latter's energy was boosted due 2 d threat 2 his mother's life? What kind of adreline can make things so easy 4 him while dealing with some1 his mother referred 2 as 'Eric's nemesis', considering d way you vividly described d latter as a ruthless murderer,a professional hitman who was even feared by Eric's superiors in battlefield. He was referred 2 as d best of d bests. Dis is a guy who blew up a hospital at age 8 when Eric was freshly born. D fact dat Eric was a born killer does not make him insurmountable by any opponent. In d thriller movies dat I usually watch, both d protagonist n d villain will be equal match to d end. They will have equal advantage in d physical combat, inflict d same degree of injuries on each other. Occasionally, Dante shud have d upper hand in d battle, even totally subdueing Eric at one point. Den when he must av thot dat he has won d fight (maybe Eric will pretend dat he's dead), he'll relax and perhaps turn his back on his supposed dead opponent, when all of a sudden Eric will leap 2 his feet and dive powerfully at him, catching him off-guard. Dis can lead 2 him being pushed and thrown out of d window,killing him finally. Pls if u are going 2 publish dis story, review dat part and also other similar parts. His hardened nature shouldn't make him immune 2 defeats as u painted him. He's also human,not an alien.

Dere some loopholes in d write-up,many unanswered questions, nevertheless, dis indeed is outstanding.

Pls be mindful of ur grammatical errors. Some Instances are 'informations/infos' instead of 'information/info'. Information does not av a plural. Another instance is 'lifes' instead of 'lives', 'and' instead of 'an' (most times I'm always left confused abt what u were trying 2 say). Also stick 2 one tense, preferrably past tense,instead of mixing dem 2gether.

Nobody is perfect. I'm not an expert in English language myself. We all just dey try.

All in all, I'll score u 95/100.

I'll state dis clearly. Dis piece of work is worth millions both in local and foreign currencies. Don't just write 4 NL literature section or other blogs alone 4 free,research on motion-pictures, especially in America who can buy dis story and turn it into a movie. Don't allow ur talent 2 waste. Pls don't ignore dis advice. And dis also goes out 2 all story-writers on dis forum. Make money wit ur talents. Try 2 publish ur stories, den adapt dem into scripts 4 filmmakers 2 purchase dem. Chimanda Adichie's epic novel, half of a yellow sun was turned 2 an afro-hollywood blockbuster. Lord of the rings, Star wars, Harry Potter and d likes were also written by people like u and me. We all know d outcome of diz movies 2day.Showcase ur talents 2 d world while u smile 2 d bank.

I admire ur sense of responsibility and devotion 2 ur family, always dere 2 help with d baby's care. Ur wife is a lucky woman,I envy am o. I pray 2 have ur type of man when I'm ready 2 get married(lol). Keep it up. May God continually bless ur home,but I want 2 ask,are u base in Nigeria or China?

I've never written such a long review on any story on dis section before,dat is 2 tell u hw captivating ur work is (abeg,no let ur head swell o, lol). I wrote dis comment early yesterday morning bt mistaken pressed d 'back button' while tryinng to edit it, hence all d texts were erased.I had 2 start all over again. Dat is how desperate I am 2 lend my voice 2 ur laudable work.

Finally, come finish dis story sharperly jare make man pikin rest from suspense. God bless u

for a moment when I login, I thought this was an update.. Hehehe. I was wrong! I went through it, and it was an interesting review.. Thought of pointing out a thing or two especially concerning Eric, Alex, Suzanne and dante..

But since the writer answered her, I think there is no need again except a little chip here and there..

1. Never underestimate your enemy or friends.. Do that and it is the beginning of your downfall. I can always relate with this and I want to believe that this is probably what happened between Eric and Dante. The elements of surprises is really a formidable weapon in combat. Dante was best of the best as the old man puts it, even though the writer didn't go into detail of what dante can do other than what he did as a boy and what Nina said about his that he leaves no witness but the old man is in no position to make that judgement having not seen first hand what his grandson can do .. Even Nina has not witnessed it. That he was beaten easily by Eric was not surprising given the fact that he already let his guard down.

2. Alex?? The dude has not discovered his full potential yet at all... The screwing around and talkative aside, I want to believe he is more powerful and intelligent than we are made to believe... Like for instance Eric had noted, he took his talkative part from his grandmom, Right? We fail to understand that the nun is really full of Brain... She think fast and if not for her, Eric probably would have died. Simply put, Alex is an untapped killing machine.

3. Finally I agree with the writer concerning Suzanne... Spending almost all you time with a body builder,a thief, a footballer, a soldier, a tennis player etc... we have 80% chance that you will eventually end up being one too.

Hehehehe... I wonder when the next update would come.
Happy Sunday ma!

Oh my God... This story may rival merlin.

You are good... You are really good that I am forced to ask if all this is a product of your own imagination or you got it somewhere else..?

Captivating and mind-blowing.

The Sosai reincarnated.
I doubt that grandpa and grandma are still suprised after what they have witnessed first hand on what their grandson Eric is capable of.

The Sosai himself confirmed this when he witness the boldness of Eric when they first met. His words were blunt and clear... "the young man reminds me very much of myself" he said to Bernard.


But..

At that time, he mistook Eric boldness for arrogance. He never believed anyone has the same ability as himself during his hey days.

And for a moment, he thought he was right when dante dealt seriously with Eric not realising Eric was merely putting up a show... Hehehehehehehe.

Now in the helicopter, he knows better.

Eric.... Grandpa
Alex.... Grandma
Nina .... Probably a combination of grandpa and grandma .

Words fails me to describe how interesting this story is.
Oh my God....

PamelB:
Thank u sir

you are welcome my dear. Have a great weekend

So this story actually happened in Nigeria? Enugu my state of origin to be blunt, huh?

For a moment, I thought it was a mixture of true life story and fiction... Especially two of my brothers dating the same lady at different time interval with each one of them very much aware of what is going on... And then one of the brother ends up marrying the other one ex..

However, anything is possible but I seriously thought that only white does this..

The emotional aspect of this story is top notch...

Pamela, right
It seem you are writing story for the first time..* I am guessing *.
But, this is..
Captivating...
Intriguing...
Emotional...
Entertaining...

Above all, I am impressed.

My people, the girl is good, really good.

This is a friction, right?? This is gonna be a romantic one or probably a mixture or romance and action.

BUT....

For the story to make sense to those who might have grew up in a military barrack, or a military man himself, then it is important you know the ranks...

Let me go straight to the point... Henry is probably a second lieutenant, a lieutenant or possibly a captain... These are young officers that are in the early stages of their military careers.

Lieutenant GENERAL?? No no no... This is a very very senior officer.. Almost at the peak of his career.


You will do well to cancel that "GENERAL" in the story.

Nice work dude.

Need oral motivation

I have a very few words for you..

You are indeed one hell of a writer if you actually imagine all this captivating stuffs you have been feeding the public with.

A marvelous stuff to behold.

So the dude Eric was actually putting up a show for his grandpa, grandma, and girlfriend on purpose... Making dante thinking he subdue him easily. What a monster... An element of surprises is indeed a formidable weapon in combat.

The writer is good... Really good.

Finally, the end. What can I say?? The boy is good... You are good. A happy ending..

I said it earlier when I finished reading few episode of this story... This is one he'll of a writer..
Ignoring the little errors here and there, this story is intriguing, captivating, interesting, held the readers spell bound and really unpredictable! I am tempted to ask,... Is this some kind of true life story or purely an imagination of the writer?? I am IMPRESSED!

This is interesting... Good job!

TiffanyJ:
This is a series arranged like this;
The reluctant bride
A man to call her own
Deceitful couple. And finally
Captor of mt heart.

If you really wanna understand the last, you need to follow the storied. Unfortunately, I had to delete some parts because of plagiarist. They will soon be available for you to buy as e books

I am new here... And I also noticed that you removed most of the stories. When will the ebook be ready. I need the books... You are good!

This story is unbelievable... I think we are looking at one hell of a writer. I just started reading this story YESTERDAY, Sadly I couldn't finish the story because alot of pages have been removed. Please how do I get it?? Can you please send it to me?? Thanks alot

I don't know who the lady is. But i wish I knew her personally. The lady is good.. I mean her story is good, so good ignoring the little error here and there. It Seem like reality that I am tempted to ask if this is purely from the writers' imagination or someone true life story.

... She actually made up such stories herself?? This is one hell of a writer. I love her already. More inspiration... Best wishes!!!

... She actually made up such stories herself?? This is one hell of a writer.
I love her already.
More inspiration...
Best wishes!!!

*Interesting*

ironkurtain:
The lady of the house bought a pallet or perhaps a bridge of chicken.....or whatever S.I unit for measuring numerous chicken and she is ready to rip my arms off if i dont stop typing. I promise to make it worth the wait this weekend. Atleast you all now know what to expect. Take care.

Heheehehehehehehehehehehe I can relate with this... Say hello to the lady of the house for me. And hey take your time... I trust you will make it worthwhile... We can wait. Cheers!

Smilies...that is what I did on reading this story. You are good, you know?
You will get even better no doubt. May God continue to Inspire you.
Smilies...

Eze2000:
lol, man have mercy on me!
I got a thousand people saying exactly what u are saying....'let me know when part 2 is out!"
A thousand people! My phone don crash 2 times already this month due to d load had to rush and buy another....a 4th hand one at that!

Pick a platform and follow...Facebook, twinter, linkedin, or my blog

all my activities always pop up on all of them.

and please I hope u did remember to leave a review for me on d site where u got? would appreciate that so much

Thank you, sir.

Nods.... I have read this very story twice today. Apart from the typographical errors, it is really captivating. The word "captivating" won't be the fair word to use if this very work is recreated into video where every actors/actress interpret their roles perfect. You are good and I am sure you will get better with the right motivation.

Being new here, Reading what your creative mind could create.. I was stimulated to check you and found there is another story before this one. But I don't know how to get the complete story. I think I will need your help... Ride on bro!!

Eze2000:
Visit the book page on my blog [link below] and you will find direct links to the book pages of all the web sores where the book has been published. Because it free, you can download from anywhere.
I have not customized my blog yet so direct downloads are not possible for now but it will be soon.







http://kingezesblog..com.ng/2016/07/dirty-diamonds-of-boko-haram-in-2015.html

Thank you.

got it now... Finished reading part one. You are one he'll of a writer. Kept it up and let me know when part two is out! My name is Eze chidi philip

Interesting!!! How do I get the full story?

Let him take all the time he need. I find the story really captivating and it would be even more captivating watching it like a film if the actors and actress interpret their roles well.
Writting such a film that capture the readers imagination is not as easy as it seem couple with family attention.
Either way, this story would end one day and every readers would relaxed fulfilled. Writer, I admire your genetic gift of creativity and may such gift fetch you wealth and recognition in due time. Impressive!!!

This is gonna get really interesting. I acknowledge your creative imagination. Ride on!!

Ruthless.... She didn't hesitate!