Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 10:23am On Nov 21, 2018 |
Roadto2019: Mtcheew. Don't start what you can't finish. awwwan you are such a cute baby,no wonder your words are so childish.Tell you what i can tolerate kids like you muah  |
Literature › Re: Stranded-by Ogunnawo Mathews by JULI3BAE: 4:29pm On Oct 29, 2018 |
ENJOYING THIS THANKS FOR THE UPDATE WAITING FOR MORE |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 4:23pm On Oct 29, 2018 |
Deckline: She is not the owner of the story. She copies and pastes. She reproduced another author's work and changed the title and characters. Its obvious the real owner of the story has blocked her so no way to continue her copied updates. Don't ask me how i know. Just know that i know. This Op is the worst member on this literature forum. Her own na to open her slippers brezz on her useless dp. Nonsense! Come on guys this is a story we have been reading and enjoying from the start,even though updates are always slow and short,i really don't mind if its copied and pasted here cus she made it possible for me to know about this interesting piece PS she takes her time ans wastes her MB to post here for us,i know a lot of stories that still remains incomplete here on Nairaland but using harsh words on the writers wont make them update, so instead of the insults keep encouraging them and look for something else to read or better still try writing and see how easy it is, put yourselves in their shoes okay. these people have got a life too, don't make someone feel bad because you feel disappointed and have got too much free time.PEACE OUT  1 Like |
Literature › Re: Stranded-by Ogunnawo Mathews by JULI3BAE: 2:52pm On Oct 26, 2018 |
hardeygbolar: . Ok bro,i would soon we are still waiting please |
Literature › Re: Showers Of Mercy - True Life Story by JULI3BAE: 4:29pm On Aug 01, 2018 |
awwwan so sweet |
Literature › Re: Deadly Missions by JULI3BAE: 3:31pm On Jul 25, 2018 |
SilverSpoonEnt: I've repaired the system... the issue is that I'm a pcm and I'm going to camp tomorrow... i can't take my system to camp... so until i leave camp sha... I'm very sorry, not my fault but circumstances... awwwn no p though |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 8:43am On Jul 19, 2018 |
yummy i want moooore |
Literature › Re: The Devil In The Suit by JULI3BAE: 5:11pm On Jul 18, 2018 |
pls i would love to meet an update tomorrow morning am begging suspense can be a murderer you know? 1 Like 1 Share |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 9:06am On Jul 18, 2018 |
tracyberry: I will update soon. on d hot seat already o |
Romance › Re: Man Slaps His Girlfriend For Wanting To Fry Four Eggs For Herself (Pic) by JULI3BAE: 8:51am On Jul 18, 2018 |
from the story its obvious the guy has got anger issues or he was angry at the girl for something else earlier because i know he could have addressed the issue in a different and better way that wont amount to all these,for all we know she could have been planning to share but i wasn't there so what do i know,his eggs, their relationship, their business  |
Literature › Re: "No Pleasure For Dead Girls" A Story By Mancrimes.. by JULI3BAE: 1:15pm On Jul 17, 2018 |
pls i cant find the story o jt comments here,somebody help  |
Literature › Re: Deadly Missions by JULI3BAE: 11:12am On Jul 17, 2018 |
SilverSpoonEnt: meaning of this? Silverspoon just ignore that Earnest20 cus i jt read a story which he labeled rubbish,he is jt seeking for attention at the detriment of anyone feeling bad |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 10:57am On Jul 17, 2018 |
ernesty20: Rubbish Story Ernesty20 i hope u will stop reading the rubbish story tho it baffles me how some people never see any good in the work of others |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 10:54am On Jul 17, 2018 |
tracyberry: Okay T BABY JUST KEEP DOING YOUR THING JARE,AM ENJOYING IT |
Literature › Re: Deadly Missions by JULI3BAE: 10:19am On Jul 16, 2018 |
SilverSpoonEnt: i'm on a very tight schedule this week... that's why the update is so late... i will try my possible best sha... thanks jare its not easy |
Literature › Re: Don't Laugh Me, Love Me ( A Short Story) by JULI3BAE: 2:20pm On Jul 13, 2018 |
interesting 1 Like |
Literature › Re: My Baby Mama By Victoria Ezekiel by JULI3BAE: 1:59pm On Jul 13, 2018 |
oya o next update pls |
Literature › Re: A Night That Destroyed Me.....sex Story by JULI3BAE: 1:34pm On Jul 13, 2018 |
pls update o its jt getting interesting |
Literature › Re: Red Night (true Life Story) by JULI3BAE: 10:06am On Jul 13, 2018 |
I have cleared some chapters because of plagiarism. I want to protect my stories.
But if you need the full story, You can always make your request known here plus your valid email address.
Thanks. Mohbaby plz i need it o,bukkygilpin3@gmail.com tnks |
Literature › Re: Red Night (true Life Story) by JULI3BAE: 9:47am On Jul 13, 2018 |
9.
I shoved the door open and entered my room. My taste buds were juicy already. I couldn’t wait to start eating. I settled down on my mattress and dug the first spoon into my mouth. I munched on it carefully. It tasted better than the other meals I had bought at Milk&Honey.
“Maybe because someone else paid for me” I said to myself and beamed. Feeling like a super victor.
I packed the remaining two plates into the fridge. That would serve as my food for like two days.
I unplugged my phone from the socket and was amazed it was 98% charged. I was surprised NEPA had brought light while I was gone for my phone to have charged to that extent. I launched into my whatsapp and check few messages. I replied the few I could. I strolled down to the number that had texted me three days ago.
‘Gala guy’ I giggled as I laughed at the name I used to save his number. I tapped on my keyboard and punched in some messages. I read them again to be sure they were perfect for someone like him.
'Hey gala guy, or should I call you a thief'
‘Am happy I paid you back 2day hmm? u think u are a game player right? I have showed you dis evening I am the game master’
‘I hope u weren’t too stranded. You shouldn’t b though. I luv ur suit by d way'
‘And wen am I gettin my tab and my foodstuffs back (that’s if you haven’t even finished dem’
After reading it and satisfied, I sent it and was amazed he was online as the messages were quickly delivered and ticked blue (signifying they’ve been read)
“So this guy hasn’t left his phone since the time I left that place. Chai! Maybe he’s even a yahoo guy sef. He looked rich na’ I said to myself as I fetched myself a glass of water from the dispenser.
Then the online status beneath his name changed to ‘typing’ Gala guy: what suit are you talking about? What do you mean by you showing me this evening you are a game master?, are you high on weed or something?’
Me: Stop all dis crap, just come out wit it nd tell me how u nearly cried.
Gala guy: Look babe, I don’t understand you. Me: Weren’t you the guy I saw now now at Milk&Honey. Didn’t you pay?
I typed, careful not to shorten any word again since he also didn’t shorten his words.
‘Why is he even being formal online?’ I thought, narrowing my eyes in distaste.
Gala guy: Lol, You saw another person. I am not even in Ilorin now. I am in Lagos and won’t be back till weekend, that’s even why you haven’t collected your stuffs yet. So what guy? What! What have I done to an innocent person?
‘Maybe he’s pretending jur. He wants to swag up as a guy.’ I scoffed and gave a lopsided laughter.
Me: Stop pretending. Egoism won’t get you anywhere I replied and waited for his response.
‘Has he gone offline? I need his response to be double sure I didn’t play an innocent soul fa’ I said to myself in a typical Ilorin accent most students schooling in Kwara imbibed.
My feet tapped discrepantly against the floor as I went to get another glass of water. I came back to check my phone. He was already typing.
Gala guy: Young lady, am driving right now, so you’ve got to be fast. What guy are you talking about?
‘What! This guy is damn serious. What has he made me do?’ I almost screamed out loud enough for the whole hostel to gather at my door.
I decided to stop the online ‘saga’ and call him, at least, to be very sure. I dialed his number and waited for it to be picked. Light rippled like disturbed water from the window as I paced to and fro my room, waiting for the call to be picked. ‘Hello, is that the gala guy?’ I spoke into the mouthpiece when it was eventually picked.
‘Sorry? I am Femi by name! Why did you call again after I had told you I was driving?’
I rolled my eyes and thought of something to say. I experienced some stages of emotions raging from uncertainty to anger and then fear.
‘Look, jokes apart. I saw you at Milk&Honey restaurant this evening and…’
‘Me?’ I was interrupted by his voice which apparently itched to yell at me to go on.
‘Yes you. I mean the guy at your present dp’ I scoffed silently and chewed at my bottom lip as I thought of his next possible response.
‘Oh yes, I was there’ That was what I had expected him to say but was shocked to my bones when he gave his response.
‘Jeez. That wasn’t me. That was Kenny. My best friend. Well, you saw him and so what?’ My heart beat erratically against my chest as I trembled and dreaded coming out with what I had done. The situation was like a little girl scared to confess to her mom she stole some chocolate candies from the fridge. I bit my lower lips and contemplated if I should tell him about or not.
‘See, I thought the guy was you so I bought three packs of food and told the waiter that attended to me he would pay for the packs since I thought it was you and I.. See, just apologize to him for me okay? And get me my bag and tab ASAP!’ I spoke fast like I had memorized those lines. A dark cloud hovered over my head, souring my mood instantly.
‘What? How could you be so cruel? And how am I even supposed to get you your bag and this so called tab?’
‘Since you got my phone number without any stress, getting my address shouldn’t be difficult for you.’ I elicited a yelp in response and cut the call.
‘How could I have done to an innocent person?’ My heart lurched into my throat as I took in a feeling of guilt.
‘Besides, it was wrong for me to do that as a law student. What if it wasn’t successful and I had been caught?’ I shuddered against an internal cold when an image of me being detained in a cell crossed my mind.
I sat disgruntled upon the worn quilt of my bed. My phone rang out loud. I picked it angrily as I was determined to pour out my anger on him.
‘Femi or whatever you are called, you should be thinking of getting my stuffs across to me and not…’
‘Hello? Its Krishi’ Came a voice, smooth and lithe.
10.
I glanced vehemently at the array of clothing spread upon the mattress, the dissonant pile of fabrics mocking me where it rested. It seemed the clothing were ignoring my inability to make a decision, even after an hour of staring hopelessly at my outfits of choice.
I smacked some balls of chin-chin into my mouth and savoured the delicious taste. They were the only thing that could satisfy my cravings for fried snacks to munch on. I was tired of just staring at my clothes without knowing what to wear for the date.
Yeah, surprised?
Krishi had actually called to apologize and ask for a makeup date. It wasn’t like there was a break up or anything but he said he just wanted to make up for the embarrassment he had caused me at his house on his birthday. He also said it was an absolute necessity due to the fact that his family hadn’t been happy with him and had insisted he made up with her before forgiving him for treating ‘a poor girl’ like a nobody. The better news was that he had requested for my account number and had transferred fifty thousand naira for the balance of the work I had done to the faces of both mother and daughter. I was actually expecting twenty thousand though. I was more than happy because I would be able to settle all my debts, buy beautiful clothes I had always wanted to buy and of course send some money to my sister in Lagos. Ademide.
The date was the next night and I was preparing for what to wear.
‘I just hope this guy doesn’t mean anything more than a makeup date o, me I don’t even have time for any guy and I don’t want to get married and tie myself down to any man. I just want to be a single mother’ I thought as showers of water dripped down my body as I took a cold bathe in my bathroom. I changed into a light short top and pink pajamas. I packed my hair into my hairnet and cleaned my face with my facial wipes. I was always careful of sleeping with my makeup on.
‘It’s not advisable’ so they say.
I moved the dresses on my bed and hung them on my plastic chair. I laid on my bed and thought of how the following night would be.
‘How will I face him, what will we talk about, what, what and what questions kept finding their ways into my heart. I shoved aside the unanswered questions and heaved a sigh. I turned on my side and slowly closed my eyes. My brain was muddled with sleep.
*
The alarm rang through into my brains, I cursed within and managed to stand up. I stretched my hands and rubbed my eyes. It was cold.
I switched off the annoying alarm. It was just 6:00am. I parted the window blinds to see an empty street.
‘Typical Ilorin city’ I muttered. It was unlike Lagos whereby at 6:00am, hundreds of heads would troop in and out of the street in search of what to eat and how to make ends meet. Those ‘psycho’ drivers would already be blaring their horn like their lives depended on it; petty traders would already be out arranging their stocks and calling on anyone who cared to listen to patronize them.
‘Crazy Lagos, the city of madness’ I laughed.
In no time, I was already set to go to the PS(Permanent site) campus. I got to school around 7:52am. My first lecture was to start by 8:00am so I wasn’t late. I got to the lecture hall and settled down. Some students were already in class. Some gisting, some buried into their books reading and some just freestyling.
I shivered as the effect of the morning cold blew in greatly. I rubbed my knuckles gently as if that would chase away the cold. My body numbed with cold. I just rolled my eyes and kept looking like a red raccoon.
Suddenly,heavy torrents of rain poured out from the already dark clouds. I shrieked as I wrapped my body with my arms and shivered. Then, my mind went to the date again. No doubt I was anxious like a teenage girl going on a date with her new boyfriend.
Seriously?
11. I gestured to my shimmering dark skin and beautiful rippling emerald chiffon dress that flowed to my legs and left my shoulders bare. The light gold coloured fabric was smooth under my fingers; it felt like pure silk against my skin, giving me an hourglass shape. My breasts were pushed up against each other, making them look a little fuller than usual. I showed no cleavage though but I looked elegant. I wouldn’t want ‘an arrogant redhead’ to look down on me by wearing something too plain and simple.
Sometimes, you’ve got to look classy even if you are not. I mean, show some class and earn some respect. You would almost jump out of your skin with glee when you’ve got those feelings of all eyes being on you.
My make up added a pleasant touch to the ensemble. I concealed my nose and most importantly, my lips so they looked medium sized and finely shaped. My clutch was caramel like and very beautiful. My hair was extremely curled neatly to the side. I felt pretty and whatnot.
I gave myself one last look at the mirror and I knew I was good to go to one of the best hotels in the city of Ilorin.
*
The wind caressed my hair as I made my way inside the restaurant of the hotel. I could tell I felt like slipping and falling as eyes turned to look at the person who had those shoes clicking against the tiled floor. I breathed in three times and just continued taking tentative steps to nowhere in particular. I nearly choked as I struggled to keep balance so as not to wobble down and earn myself a public disgrace.
‘That crazy nervousness you get on first dates’ I uttered indistinctly with a low voice.
And then, I saw him already sitting down and ordering his meal. The waitress left and he looked up and then I asked myself for the umpteenth time if I was actually ready. ‘Moh, It’s never too late to make a u turn and flee’ said a velvet thought under my breathe as I caught his gaze. His glittering eyes swept down my physique. His lips curled upwards, flashing his teeth in a smile.
‘Is this the same mean Krishi guy?’ I asked myself as I eventually got to the seat, facing that same Krishi. His face was mouth watering; he had a perfect chiseled shaped jaw that made me drool at that spot, his Adam’s apple bobbed up seductively as he gulped. He was staring at me with dark predatory eyes.
Humour etched into his expression, his eyebrows rose as he offered me a seat. He ordered for one more glass of wine. ‘Why hadn’t he order for two? Dint he know I was coming?’ I muttered silently as I drilled into his eyes and drinking his aromatic cologne.
‘Hey, am glad you made it’ He finally said, raising his brows which were elegantly arched.
‘Yeah’
‘Am really sorry for the other day, I didn’t mean to be rude, I was just pissed at my mother for…’ His minty breathes brushed past my cheekbones, fanning them lightly. There was something deliciously canal about him. A shuddered breathe escaped my lips and I managed to speak.
‘You don’t have to explain for the second time, it’s cool’ ‘And happy birthday in arrears’ I said and smiled at the handsome young man before me. He was very cute with well groomed hair, beards and moustache. He had lovely set of teeth and a great height. He looked amazing and was capable of sweeping every lady off her feet. Just that, he was mannerless, rude and arrogant.
What a waste!
‘Thank you.’
‘So, what would you like to have?’ He asked. His voice was a legion of sinister voices.
A chuckle rasped past my lips when I remembered my vow not to get married. I was just drooling over for nothing, I knew it.
‘Just a bowl of salad’ I said as I gulped nervously my glass of wine.
‘Salad?’ he asked, raising an eyebrow.
‘Yeah, salad’
‘I love salads too, infact, that’s my favourite’
‘Wow, that means we share the same favourite’ I smiled and he smiled back. Then I smiled again and it was returned with a wink.
We talked from food to family to business to life generally. We talked almost about everything. I just didn’t tell him I had lost my mom. I also noticed he didn’t ask me about my relationship life neither did he talk about his. I was glad he also didn’t ask about my religion or church palava. I just listened to him talk while I pouted my lips and crossed my arms, offering some statements and cracking a few jokes where necessary. He was actually the chatty type.
He was a banker. Working at First bank in Ilorin. He had been working at Ibadan but was moved by his branch to come head a department in the bank’s branch in Ilorin. I was surprised when I got to know he didn’t live with his parents. Well, It was expected, what grown man at twenty-six would live with his parent.
‘You are very beautiful Moh right?’
I nodded and popped my lips.
‘I love the smokey eye effect you have going on there. It makes your eyes pop out, it looks kind of natural and erotic. Well, if that makes any sense’ He smiled lopsidedly, clasping his hands together in a way that seemed funny and made me laugh.
I was enjoying the date. It was a mixture of nerves and excitement.
‘So how old are you? You know my age already and I don’t know yours, that’s not fair’ He said in a manner that could draw pity and he sure earned gales of laughter from me.
I was about answering the question when a sharp pain pierced my heart.
That only meant a simple thing and that was something I was allergic to as an asthmatic patient.
*To be continued tomorrow.* from chp6 u skipped 7&8 and continued from nine and now from chp11 u av skipped to 14 am not understanding again o  |
Literature › Re: Renata "The Vengeful Girl" by JULI3BAE: 9:25am On Jul 13, 2018 |
we are waiting o |
Literature › Re: Deadly Missions by JULI3BAE: 9:17am On Jul 13, 2018 |
SilverSpoonEnt: end abi wetin you talk? we're just getting started... the current suspense is still a child's play compared to what is to come... X Regency is still playing with Notis, not started a bit of their mission... Addin is not yet at his best... he's good but doesn't have what it takes yet to kill Jetar (me sef, I'm praying he survives)... just read on, and enjoy...
i wish i could have much time to focus on the story so the updates will be so frequent... but the time no dey... wawu i cant wait o |
Literature › Re: Deadly Missions by JULI3BAE: 8:51am On Jul 13, 2018 |
SilverSpoonEnt: abeg, where are Akinwale14 favyo JULI3BAE ... right here bro,still behind u all d way and keep feeding us from ur silverspoon we are enjoying d meal  |
Literature › Re: Hatred by JULI3BAE: 5:17pm On Jul 11, 2018 |
i don't truth that Lara her friend at all o |
Literature › Re: Showers Of Mercy - True Life Story by JULI3BAE: 5:09pm On Jul 11, 2018 |
Bibi294 plz na  |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 11:50am On Jul 11, 2018 |
babe pls dont let the update take time |
Literature › Re: Chronicles Of Tracy by JULI3BAE: 3:59pm On Jul 10, 2018 |
the waiting is not an easy something o chai smh |
Literature › Re: The New Girl by JULI3BAE: 12:57pm On Jul 05, 2018 |
poor Susan she has fallen into the wrong hands and i think its Daniels sis that saw them |
Literature › Re: Blood For Blood:a Tale Of Treachery by JULI3BAE: 10:08am On Jul 05, 2018 |
Nostradamus: no way is this going to be completed.the thread is dead and greg himself don deactivate him account. ah, so dat is how d story ended smh, thanks anyway for letting me know |
Literature › Re: The Last Smile. by JULI3BAE: 8:52am On Jul 04, 2018 |
superb, a very nice piece |
Literature › Re: Showers Of Mercy - True Life Story by JULI3BAE: 8:38am On Jul 04, 2018 |
donkelz: I can understand how frustrating it is, that people ghost your story and even copy to their blogs, however, remember it's a forum, not everyone will/can comment. Most of those who will tell you sorry are doing so out of scorn, stop being too emotional with your audience, I expect you're writing because it's a passion and not to please anyone. I've followed all your stories, as well as souloho's, you're one of the best writers in NL and if you think you don't have a large audience/following, pause for a week and see the outcry you'll cause. pls o pause ke,u wanna starve me? 1 Like |
Literature › Re: Blood For Blood:a Tale Of Treachery by JULI3BAE: 4:47pm On Jul 03, 2018 |
Greg pls keep the updates rolling in |