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U were gone for about 3 good days,you are supposed to cheer us up with about 10 updates in succession

What is wrong with dis dude called Bluestarry?Almost a day and no update.After now,he will say he was at work or he went to pick his aunties or uncles at the airport.Pesin wey no get okada or keke or even motor not car.See if u knew u couldn't keep up,why did u start in the first instance...Mtcheew

Guy cum update dis tori na.We dey wait for u oh

Guy cum update dis tori na

Oya come and update pleaseeeeee

Morning don reach na

Bluestarry,cum and update o.Some guys are totally freaking out here...

Bluestarry:
you said everybody, you didnt specify. And pls we are derailing this thread. Any questions you can mail me.
Go back and read that chapter were i had the missed calls. I had called inem with m number before i slept..i wanted to be sure she was inem...she called to know who i was since i didnt talk..just read it again.

aiit bros

Oya sharply update again or i chop ur skull dat looks like that of 404

Bluestarry:
did i nyash everybody i saw? Lolssss....did i nyash captain? Or joe, rock, ella, inem, chioma etc..you said everybody

I mean pussies and nt guys and when i say pussies i.e those u really had a chance with.Did u really chat with Inem or Ella

Blue,u did nt ansa sum of my questions like hw did u get missed calls frm Inem when it was nt Adamu's sim u used.Seriously am confused

Lastly Bluestarry,u dnt nid comments for u to update.Since u are a great writer,ur works will speak for u.That is why davidflo rocks.He asks for no one's comment and even ignores sum acknowledgements.
#Imitate davidflo

Must u nyash everybody u see?Haa

I wana ask anoda question:Must it be every scene of the story that ur dick will be active.Seriously u nid God in ur life

Bluestarry:
guy your comment are funny o those question are the questions you readers must answer by yourselves, you dont expect me to exaggerate every point in the story... Seems you havent understood the story...i advice you to go back, take your time and read em.
Inem being in mrs sandra's house was a shock to me and still remains a mystery....cockcroach hitting me with a car was also a shock....remember i also asked myself the same question...where did he get the car?...maybe he borrowed or maybe he had a car..or maybe he wasnt really an okada man afterall...the readers have to fill in answer that blend up with the situation...
The job case am sure you never read that chapter well..mrs sandra said we should meet the next day remember?
The owner of the car were the thugs that kidnapped me or have you forgotten that also?
I made a mistake without including our drive to joe's, captain and rock apartment where they took their bags. Ill modify it when ive time. ..
Am sorry to say this but your questions are off point. The clothe he wears he came with it. Must i say he came with his money and atm?
The fate of the girls? Haaa! Dis question get as e dey o please you really need to re read the story again.. As for the topic, am the owner of the story and any title i think will blend with the body of the story that i choose for it.
Your comment are well obsereved. But next time try and space your letters i mean paragraphing. As for typos, well! They are bound to occur since no one is above mistakes and i hardly prove read before i post.
Anyways thanks for your time, thanks for the critism, thanks for the comment and thank for reading as well. Hope ive answered your questions?

About the job,u wrote that it was a Mönday and dat u would meet Mrs Sandra on Tuesday bt she also told u to resume on Wednesday or was dat also an error.
#Smh

Bluestarry,ur story lacks co-ordination.I dont get it when u misjudge character.Some questions for u,great Op.Like at the point when u said u got 13 missed calls from both Mrs Sandra and Inem.Inem?Hw was that possible,hw did she get ur digits even though u copied her contact.Anoda question:What was she doing in Mrs Sandra's mansion?Anoda 1,who gave Cockroach a car dat he used to hit u when he rides an okada?Anoda 1,where is the motorcycle?Did he sell it cos he left it behind in Akwa Ibom?Anoda 1 is u neva went for the job on that Wednesday Mrs Sandra told u to resume,instead u went about bleeping.Am confused.Anoda question is who owns the car u guys drove with to Calabar and hw did Joe get a travelling bag which u said was as big as a coffin and where did he get d money he is using to bleep and clothes he is wearing and lastly,what is d fate of the other girls like Aminat,Josephine,Peace,Happiness,Goodness,Ella,Ub and the rest.We havent bin hearing abt them This story is awesome.Great work even though sum guys say it is copy and paste work bt it doesnt fit with the topic.It should be sumtin like 'My Dirty Adventures caused by my uncontrollable dick' because dis story no longer revolves around the office anymore Anyway,ride on bro!Am with u on dis one,just reduce the typos and character misjudgement.Hope my comment was observed?

Just thinking about what is gonna happen next!










#Expectant!

[color=#000000][/color] Gosh,Bluestarry dont tell u are from Akwa Ibom.Abadie!!!