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Literature / Re: Man Wey Dey Reason by nuwell(m): 5:56pm On May 14, 2013
Ishilove: Ichor. The whitish stuff you swallowed from the cockroach's crushed carcass is ichor. When you crush insects, the whitish stuff that oozes out is ichor, not cockroach shit.

"The meat was so delicious that i almost chew my tongue along with it"- CHEWED. You are using the first person narrative style, you are narrating what has already happened, so it is past. Hence you should use past tense.

A Mallam: 'mallam' in the context you have used it isn't a proper noun, so the first letter shouldnt be capitalised.

"300naira own" Brainbox answered.
"we fit taste am?" Brainbox asked"
- Brainbox Brainbox...do you see what I see? I'll tell you what I see: I see wrong repetition. Since it is the same character speaking, there is no need to separate the sentences into paragraphs. Try

"300naira own" Brainbox answered. "shey we fit taste am?" he asked further.


"his beard was longer and more bushy than that of Osama"- bushier

The surrounding was so dirty that, if the
population of the flies that flew around were
taken, it would amount to over One million.

The floor of the shop was also flooded with
what looked like Urine.


Since you're giving readers a description of the shop, the sentences should be in the same paragraph. Paragraphs are meant for different subject matters. The second paragraph is still describing the same shop, so there is no need for it to be seperated, hence it should be

"The surrounding was so dirty that, if the
population of the flies that flew around were
taken, it would amount to over One million.The floor of the shop was also flooded with what looked like Urine."

"Since the shop was clouded with stench of"-clouded/stench. Visual/olfactory. A place cannot be clouded with stench. Rather it can be clouded by smoke, mist, fog: we can visualise these elements. We can see then with out eyes. Stench on the other hand is olfactory, has to do with our sense of smell. We cannot SEE smell which the word 'clouded' connotes. Instead the place reeked with the stench. Stank, funked etc

"i saw a cockroach crawled towards my chair."- crawling

"soon my hands was infested with pepper" - I think you should change this word. 'Infested' brings to mind diseases and plagues sad. In addition, it should be 'my hands were, not was. 'Were' plural (hands), 'was' singular (hand)

So there you have it, flow, my observations, as you asked me to. wink grin

Hilarious narrative, by the way. You seem to be living an interesting life cheesy. You kind of remind me of sebonzakura kageyoshi, sans the pidgin and censored words tongue. Keep writing flow, you are getting there. And guy, you are one heck of a talented writer smiley

OMG! Na grammar class be dis wan so o! Abeg, abeg, abeg!If I hear say...
Literature / Re: Man Wey Dey Reason by nuwell(m): 5:45pm On May 14, 2013
...:p
Family / Re: Dirty Habits We Should Get Rid Of by nuwell(m): 5:15pm On May 12, 2013
esere826:

Tnx for that.
I left it out because i dont see much waste bins (if any at all)in lagos
if the government is able to provide such
then, yes, we should desist from throwing garbage on the floor

Ha! Even if the government created portable trash cans that one could strap to oneself, some people would still not desist. Its already such an ingrained habit for so many. People need to change within themselves first. It is well sha
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 2:33pm On May 12, 2013
naptu2: B-EAU-TIF-UL!

Seconded!

Oya, DanHumphrey, over to you.
Family / Re: Dirty Habits We Should Get Rid Of by nuwell(m): 1:21pm On May 12, 2013
I believe the act of disposing waste indiscriminately on the street, should be included in the list. People need to become more environment-friendly. The presence of the LAWMA street sweeper on Lagos streets, is not even a justification to litter the place. The cleanliness of a city is a civic duty.
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 1:29am On May 11, 2013
Ishilove:
You sound so much like naptu2 grin

I haven't even met him properly yet. Maybe you'd care to 'expantiate' on our similarities? (LOL). Is he a baritone, tenor, alto or soprano?
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 10:06pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
Don't tell me I write big English?? shocked
Izza lie!! shocked

cheesy

Can you walk in my shoes to get the sword?? smiley

I'm not sure what shoe size you wear but I think I can manage. And pls, you always sparking good englishes everytime.

I support DanHumphrey in his assessment but like him, I'll also thread carefully so as to avoid being bitten. My reserves will also be commented
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 8:28pm On May 10, 2013
esere826:

Samuru?
Is that a new kind of akamu?

grin
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 8:18pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
Incoginiwegi?? Choi, akukwo girama! cheesy cheesy

The sword...the sword...I live in interesting times, that's how come I have it grin

And yes,I am curious. I was waiting for you to further expantiate.

Expantiate...yeks, me sef can blow girama angry tongue

Well, it wouldn't be so bad to give you a taste of your own medicine. Afterall I've read accounts of the ordeals you have subjected others to with your narratives. The absurdity of the situation is that they become addicted to their suffering and rather beg, nay demand and whine for more....

Anyway, I feel that your opinion and that of all the others who have corroborated your 'interesting-face' perception is grossly understated...catch my drift?

I would like to visit one of those 'interesting' places where you've been, if I could lay my hands on an item such as that one you have there?
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 8:00pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
Lwmkmd!! You have a way with words, you know that?

Yep, I believed I once filed such a compliment a long time ago, in a dark recess of my cognition.
But you didn't answer the question about the sword and you're not curious as to why i differ in opinion about your face?
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 7:51pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
Wasimi Chronicles. Yes I did. smiley

Then I beg to differ. And how and where in the name of all that is sharp and destructive, did you get that sword?
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 7:46pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
What?

I thought you once said somewhere (can't remember where at the moment) that you have an 'interesting-looking' face?
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 7:21pm On May 10, 2013
Ishilove:
It is on my profile grin

shocked
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 2:16pm On May 10, 2013
mapet: For me this report was skewed...... It's negatively painting the LAGBUS Scheme. The positives far outweigh the challenges listed. Some of the stats listed there are false and questionable. It's is not true that only about 150 buses operate daily......

But that is only one of the allegations made. And definitely there are always two sides to any story. The article claims the Lagos State Government is aware of some of the challenges. It's over to them (if they are indeed) to come public with responses to some of these allegations.
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 10:32am On May 10, 2013
Bontee: This article is an eye opener and there was really lack of funding for the project with all the banks rejecting to fund the scheme except ecobank.

http://dailyindependentnig.com/2013/03/politics-of-lagbusbrt-management/

Hmmm...This is even more serious than I thought
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 10:11am On May 10, 2013
mapet: My brother, you have just "so oju abe nko" (hit the critical issue). I boarded the Blue BRT bus to work this morning and was apalled at the lack of care the management company pays to simple things. We don't expect Fashola to come from Alausa to help wash the bus, it was very dirty for starters. This is typical of workers where we're non-challant to some important things.

I think attending to low-lights like these are starters for the NURTW management. A simple N500 per bus per day at car-wash will not erode their profit.


Seriously o!
NYSC / Re: Four Corpers Docked For Noise Making by nuwell(m): 9:45am On May 10, 2013
What in the world? O le to yen ni?
sad angry
Investment / Re: Nigerian Stock Exchange Beginner's Guide by nuwell(m): 9:41am On May 10, 2013
Thanks for this thread, Ugodre. It's been very insightful
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 9:08am On May 10, 2013
Bontee:

Then it means they have used the wrong strategy of contracting the service by amount of passengers carried instead of the distance covered or scheduling over a certain time-frame at a fixed agreed amount. With this system then just kiss quality service goodbye as they the operators are at a liberty to maximize profit and no incentive to improve or develop the system.

Do you know how many years the contract is contracted and development targets set for the operators?.

My sentiments exactly! I don't know if there is any way to access a documentation of the original contract agreement with which Lagos State government began the scheme? Then, we will know if there were provisions made to prevent such issues as we are discussing. That is when we will know if the operators are in even wrong to carry on the way they are doing. If there's no such stipulation, then the government's attention needs to be drawn to it otherwise, we are at the mercy of the operators' profit drive. I however, believe this scheme would have been well thought out first. I am reluctant to believe the LSG would make such a major oversight
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 8:48am On May 10, 2013
temitope23: Even the picture of the brt bus you there is still okay compare to the company where i worked. The company's mode of operation is just like molue we were told to stop at each bus-stop to load with a ticketer in the bus. It is a serious offence if you don't load the bus to its maximum capacity.

You don't say!!! I hope people are reading this o!
This is exactly the kind of unwholesome management practice I suspected was being practised. So why will the driver or other staff refuse when people demand to board the buses despite being overcrowded already? undecided
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 7:57am On May 10, 2013
Bontee:

It is actually meant for anyone who wants to use it, i can decide to travel to Ghana by bus or airplane as the final choice lies with me in relation to my present circumstance. I agree with you that it was not meant to cater for everyone and should be in conjunction with the other operators or modes of transport. This is not a Lagos state versus them issue and we are discussing this thing here because we all desire for our transport system to be efficient.

The issue here is about proper management of the blue line, i have never used the ones colored red but their buses are far better and they are managed well with room for improvement. Please visit the Lagbus website and see for yourself. Anywhere in the world where routes or bus service are contracted to private individuals then you will have a low quality service and mismanaged system. The lagbus uses bus companies to operate the areas assigned to them and you can see the difference. Proper scheduling, route planning, bus numbering system, proper fare model, service contract usage, bus timetables and various delivery options.

The blueline is not working like the lagbus service and this same idea can be extended to the commercial operators without turning them to the brt system. During rush hours two to four buses can always drop and load at the same time instead of one bus at a time. In this case you have four points of entry and they all leave, then you have another set of two or three leaving at spaced intervals. Ticket sale and inspection can actually cause delay but there are strategies to overcome that like using electronic cards ( Lagbus does this ).

You can move one bus every ten minutes or move three buses every twelve minutes but at the end of one hour, the number of passengers moved by this two options are different. The blueline needs proper planing, improvement and adequate management to meet up to present challenges. Our problem has always been implementation and management since we do not lack ideas or introducing laudable initiatives.


I love solution-talkers like you, Bontee. We will make a difference.

No i have not considered that but thanks for the suggestion and i will see to it.
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 7:54am On May 10, 2013
Ishilove: @op. I love the way you write smiley

It was because of overcrowding that I stopped boarding molues, especially 'standing'. It ain't funny having your boobs squashed against the back of a stranger all in the name of 'standing'. Now the same trend has found its way to BRT.

Thank you very much, Ma. Coming from a Nairaland (and soon to be nationally and globally acclaimed) literary icon like you, it does sounds like a nomination for a Pulitzer.
wink

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Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 7:49am On May 10, 2013
temitope23:
The management should B??
Blame cos i still remember when i work with one of the brt company we were told to fill up the spaces so that we will be paid on time.

Are you serious? Please tell me more
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 4:36pm On May 09, 2013
Bontee:

This is all i can find for now but i think you will surely find something from them so just save them and study it later.

lagos brt system in worldbank
http://web.worldbank.org/WBSITE/EXTERNAL/NEWS/0,,contentMDK:23025996~menuPK:141311~pagePK:34370~piPK:34424~theSitePK:4607,00.html

reducing congestion strategy
http://luts.epfl.ch/

Simple introduction
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Public_transport_bus_service
http://www.reinventingtransport.org/2008/10/bus-systems-that-work.html

brt brazil model
http://www.urbanhabitat.org/node/344
http://www.pps.org/great_public_spaces/one?public_place_id=613

example of what lamata should be
http://www.hsl.fi/EN/Pages/default.aspx

How to set up and run brt
http://www.itdp.org/microsites/bus-rapid-transit-planning-guide/
http://www.nbrti.org/
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bus_rapid_transit

city examples
http://www.corvallisoregon.gov/index.aspx?page=167
http://bmetro.cob.us/routes Cclick on each route for more info )

service provider
http://www.goalsystems.com/index.php?option=com_content&view=article&id=164&Itemid=221&lang=en

comparing different models
http://www.bitre.gov.au/publications/1998/wp_039.aspx

Walahi, aboki na. Allah y'albarkache ka. God bless you, jare. Thanks for the links.
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 3:37pm On May 09, 2013
RiKKies001: It's the Blue-bus that are in sorry states. I understand the NURTW (Union guys)operates those. The LAGBUS (Red bus) are still very muck okay.

So I hear too. But it remains to be seen how the same trend won't spread before long.
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 3:25pm On May 09, 2013
pompori king: All dese long story for brt busOga go buy car jhor

undecided tongue

Thanks for patiently reading through, Sir. But we cannot keep quiet because we can afford vehicles and allow others who can't and must patronize the system go to blazes. I narrated this in the first person, but I believe it is the experience of many other voiceless people, many of whom I have stood in line with an listen to their griping.

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Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 3:01pm On May 09, 2013
Bontee:
@nu_well I will check for that later, UN or Worldbank has a comprehensive model but i will research later.

Thanks. Be expecting your response. I'll try to do some homework from here too
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 2:48pm On May 09, 2013
naptu2:

I've been alternating between politics section and the real world. How are you?

grin grin

That sounded as if you were implying that the Politics section could be a substitute for the Real World. I'm well and prospering, thank you
Nairaland / General / Re: Iyawo Nylon Bag Gist Thread. by nuwell(m): 2:40pm On May 09, 2013
naptu2: Our author will update the thread this afternoon (in a few hours time). Please stay tuned to this thread.

Oga, welcome o! it's been a while we saw you here. What have you been up to?
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 2:33pm On May 09, 2013
Bontee: The system has not been really managed well in my opinion, it is not different from the normal non BRT service if the operators are rendering their service based on per bus system.

The truth of the matter is that the implementation should have been from the angle of licensing routes, areas through tenure, time or days slots to existing bus or transport operators. That is how a transportation system works, you license it to companies, give them a service contract to follow with penalties and set targets for development or milestones to meet as the years passes by.

We have countless transport companies in Nigeria like ABC, Chisco, Young shall grow and all that. You license to them for three to five years and they bid for it again with other operators at the end of the contracted tenure. Through this system they will sit up or loose those contract to other operators in the system.

You can do the same for the none BRT system and trust me things will not be as choatic as we have it today. Then empower ( is it LAWMA OR LAMATA ) to do the route, scheduling and price planning. They should be the one to negotiate and award contracts to service operators.

Monitor them to follow the agreed contractual terms and to curb corruption the staffs of these service companies are fully contracted to the state or partially
.
I don't know what monitoring systems have been put in place for the BRT in Lagos. This alone could serve to correct some ills. As it is, it seems the operators are just left to their devices.

To me the lagos state government is just throwing her legs into stuff that is meant for private management.

Bro, you raised some interesting issues here that need to be investigated. Can you recommend any transport system model anywhere in the world that I can get info about to study. Thanks
Politics / Re: BRT - The Beginning of the End? by nuwell(m): 2:28pm On May 09, 2013
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