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xxxtedyxxx:nice... but dude, where have you been? |
Have never written a poem before, neither am I better of when it comes to literature but I just got bored these days, since ASUU no wan let person get joy. But along the line I started writing for no reason and it ended up becoming something really good. I was able come up with a pretty good write up.. Trust me, I was amazed when I did it but I don't really know how other people would see it. That's why I came here to share it with you guys and know what you think. You can say whatever you want, bash me whatsoever or encourage me or compliment what I did and hey! they are all welcomed and appreciated.. here it is, remember it's my first time. Those know more about poetry might find some errors or whatsoever but it's fine so let's do this... * I heard the sound again * I won't respond because it'd be in vain * It sounded like a voice * It called my name in a pretty loud noise * Couldn't help it, i became paranoid * The distraction I tried to avoid * But I was only focused on her * We've been talking; she seems to have a good heart * I forgot what her name is * She told me before, you don't have to blame me * I kept staring at her eyes, couldn't listen to what she was saying * My heart was like an empty stage * It felt like we were locked up in a cage * Her beauty I couldn't resist * I tried to reach for her hands, she pulled me close and kissed me on my lips * I couldn't believe this * Oh, you wouldn't believe this * Her lips, soft as that of a baby * "I hope one day she'd be my lady " * I thought in my head * I smiled and lit up the room like wildfire * We became so free like birds on a wire * Though we were on the rooftop, it felt like an empire * She told me she loves me * Still surprised of what just happened, I couldn't talk * She held my left hand; looking at her straight into her eyes, a reflection of me I saw * As the wind blew her hair backwards, I became more nervous * We were still very young don't blame us * She held my other hand and said * "I want to tell u something important but am scared * I need to get this off my chest * I always knew you not like the rest * But I want to be your girl " * Immediately, I knew we were love birds * Before I could say anything, I got a tap on my back shoulder * I turned, it was no one but my brother who's 3 years older * He smiled at me and said "wake up" * In confusion I tried to know what he meant but before I could think, I found my self on the luxury bus heading from the bus stop to my mom's shop * I got so angry like a pot bubbling over on the stove. hope you enjoyed it, please share your thoughts |
Have never written a poem before, neither am I better of when it comes to literature but I just got bored these days, since ASUU no wan let person get joy. But along the line I started writing for no reason and it ended up becoming something really good. I was able come up with a pretty good write up.. Trust me, I was amazed when I did it but I don't really know how other people would see it. That's why I came here to share it with you guys and know what you think. You can say whatever you want, bash me whatsoever or encourage me or compliment what I did and hey! they are all welcomed and appreciated.. here it is, remember it's my first time. Those know more about poetry might find some errors or whatsoever but it's fine so let's do this... * I heard the sound again * I won't respond because it'd be in vain * It sounded like a voice * It called my name in a pretty loud noise * Couldn't help it, i became paranoid * The distraction I tried to avoid * But I was only focused on her * We've been talking; she seems to have a good heart * I forgot what her name is * She told me before, you don't have to blame me * I kept staring at her eyes, couldn't listen to what she was saying * My heart was like an empty stage * It felt like we were locked up in a cage * Her beauty I couldn't resist * I tried to reach for her hands, she pulled me close and kissed me on my lips * I couldn't believe this * Oh, you wouldn't believe this * Her lips, soft as that of a baby * "I hope one day she'd be my lady " * I thought in my head * I smiled and lit up the room like wildfire * We became so free like birds on a wire * Though we were on the rooftop, it felt like an empire * She told me she loves me * Still surprised of what just happened, I couldn't talk * She held my left hand; looking at her straight into her eyes, a reflection of me I saw * As the wind blew her hair backwards, I became more nervous * We were still very young don't blame us * She held my other hand and said * "I want to tell u something important but am scared * I need to get this off my chest * I always knew you not like the rest * But I want to be your girl " * Immediately, I knew we were love birds * Before I could say anything, I got a tap on my back shoulder * I turned, it was no one but my brother who's 3 years older * He smiled at me and said "wake up" * In confusion I tried to know what he meant but before I could think, I found my self on the luxury bus heading from the bus stop to my mom's shop * I got so angry like a pot bubbling over on the stove. hope you enjoyed it, please share your thoughts |
mhizesther:chai u don spoil finish I'd tell yur mom, you need serious Ass whopping! Naughty girl |
lemme cum N be going |
fair enough |
LordZero:u follow buhari go london?? ![]() |
preccy69:BTW this one wine is taking a selfie with you so, I need some ![]() |
if I bite ur nose eh preccy69: |
preccy69:how |
faruq37:lol too nice? You were trying too hard to impress her |
Oyindidi:yeah?? ?? ?? |
Oyindidi:me!me!! me!!! Initiate me too want to Join the color them gang Just got the gangs new hashtag, #ColorEmGang (if only it works like twitter and instagram ) ![]() Oya how do we do it? Where we starting from? ![]() |
Teeminjin:hey young lady! what's up with em nairaland boys? Abi one of them break ur heart? lemme not mention him sha ![]() |
SEEDORF441: hihihi gurls matter eh, even for heaven dem go still de drag the cutest angel ![]() |
Horlahmah:lol this one weak me! she will be back, just watch and relax |
Teeminjin:No! Don't worry his way more cuter than your bf ![]() |
SEEDORF441:LMAO, Aiya! Na the money u de give still land for the guy pocket. Well, if u no first no, now u do ![]() |
Freethought:lol was laughing out when reading this, but u lucky though |
eezeribe:...and some are not better when left unsaid. Share with us what happened, u can be saving someone from making such mistakes when u share it, you know. |
saaedlee:LMAO, how did that make u feel though ![]() |
oshe11:lai Mohamed |
Jazmiynne:lol Aiya ![]() |
obamabinladen:oh tell me in one way or the other , you guys FINALLY broke up ![]() |
obamabinladen:Aww poor her ! But u wicked sha why of all her shoes u pick the new one? Una fight ni ? |
obamabinladen:wondering what she did when she found out ![]() |
Splinz:don't start, ain't gah no time for this |
ikp120:use your mind Na, I meant woman Jor ![]() |
dude! 30 Naira? Oh, come on bro ikp120: |
Just wanted to know things we all do or have done for Love, how Embarrassed has it made you thinking back to the past and if you are still sacrificing alot in the name of Love do you think its worth it. Tell me what have you done for love. For me, i have the craziest things which are 1] Drive @ 2.00am in the Morning to see my EX - craziest, lol ![]() 2] Give my only Laptop for love 3] Spent my allowance on a woman 4] left school to be with a woman - silly 5] Slept in a car waiting for my woman to come back from hanging with d gurls ![]() 6] Risked my life a million times to travel just to see a man ( Night Bus runz) 7] Abandoned my friends to be with anyone i was with in the End, i am not with any of this people. when person love sha, mumu dey do am When i think back on this i laugh my head off. i am not glad i did it but i was really stupid! ;DConfession time everyone. ![]() |
Thanks bruv ![]() |
Mimzyy:...trying not to ![]() |
so let's do this...
I'd tell yur mom, you need serious Ass whopping!
Naughty girl
if I bite ur nose eh
all the text I sent her is the most craziest I've ever done....I regret everything... my apologies without being wrong, begging for her love....everything
