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The Ashes Of Love / Analysing Dialogue In Red Ashes By Chumzypinky / Hearts In Ashes (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Red Ashes by Angelinastto(f): 10:14am On Dec 27, 2016
I must say your is hilarious. Me lykit! And am chioma too ooo
Re: Red Ashes by Twinkle004(f): 10:17am On Dec 27, 2016
That is 1 hell of meeting your Father on the 1st day..Anyway Jude is not serious 4 hitting his son like dt..I just hope Jude won't die & Nathan would learn his lesson..thanks 4 d dedication, am honored
Re: Red Ashes by Winters22: 10:57am On Dec 27, 2016
that's one funny update....

so it has been revealed that Nathan loves his mum but the fault is the way she trained him in his formative years.
Re: Red Ashes by cherpret: 11:41am On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Cherpret
debdave
michelle55
faithomo001
Mrs chumzy.........
Re: Red Ashes by waliyarh01(f): 12:03pm On Dec 27, 2016
Hii ma'am, I really need to see you in private, (whispering) can you send the remaining parts to me? Me can't really wait o. Good job.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:04pm On Dec 27, 2016
Angelinastto:
I must say your is hilarious. Me lykit! And am chioma too ooo
Ar u kiddin me? U 2 Chioma?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:04pm On Dec 27, 2016
Twinkle004:
That is 1 hell of meeting your Father on the 1st day..Anyway Jude is not serious 4 hitting his son like dt..I just hope Jude won't die & Nathan would learn his lesson..thanks 4 d dedication, am honored
You're wlc luv
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:05pm On Dec 27, 2016
waliyarh01:
Hii ma'am, I really need to see you in private, (whispering) can you send the remaining parts to me? Me can't really wait o. Good job.
*also whispering* oya oya, send me ur email sharpaly
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:06pm On Dec 27, 2016
cherpret:

Mrs chumzy.........
Eh? Mrs Cherpret?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:06pm On Dec 27, 2016
Bolubennie
Judette
Eddyfrosh
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:07pm On Dec 27, 2016
JDAdeshina
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:08pm On Dec 27, 2016
Genius43
Haleemwale
Re: Red Ashes by haleemwale(m): 1:11pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Genius43

Haleemwale
[i][/i] great story mam, keep up d good work wink wink wink wink
Re: Red Ashes by bolubennie(m): 1:12pm On Dec 27, 2016
Have I ever placed a comment?... I don't think so. I must say, this is one of the best piece; one of the best piece? #Scratch that! ...This is the best piece I've ever read on NL. Miss Chumzy ooo, You are great! ...The last update got me laughing heels over head! I don't know what got me laughing doh but I can't help it.
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:23pm On Dec 27, 2016
Dedicated to Winters22 and Angelinastto.

KAINENE.

I dipped my hands into the suya paper and threw about three at once into my mouth.

'but you know you aint doing the right thing?' Kaka asked also chewing the suya.

'doing the right thing as in?'

'you shouldnt have left the house. Right now, your mother needs all the support she can get from you..' Kaka stated.

I saw MummyK listening with rapt attention.

Kaka continued 'your mum deserves to be happy BabyK. You shouldnt be doing this to her. Just think about what she must be passing through now? Do you think she's going to be happy pushing through with that wedding?'

I was about saying something when mummyK beat me to it 'in as much as i dont support Kainene, i also do not support Chioma. This man left her for several years. He didnt deem it fit to come back to her on time. He came over twenty years later. She had singlehandedly taken care of her daughter alone so the bond between she and her child should be strong. But all of a sudden, the man just comes back and whoom! You're ready to desert the child you've trained from childhood, just to be with him? Is that making sense? Ever since i've heard the story, i decided not to call her because i might just get angry and say things i'm not supposed to say to her. So its just better i remain calm and mind my business. You know me now, my vex na hot vex, e hot pass presidential seat oo'

I smiled 'i can never believe that my own mother could choose a man who abandoned her over me. Sometimes i think about it and it feels like i'm dreaming. This isnt my mum'

MummyK reached for my hands 'i'm always here for you my dear. But you should forgive your mum as well. She might have acted on the feeling called love. She would come around soon. And you will come around too. Sooner or later, you'll realise you cant live without your mum and your mum can equally not live without you. Just let her be happy. She's been on her own for so many years and maybe she just needs a companion for old age, you know you wont always be with her forever

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Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:25pm On Dec 27, 2016
bolubennie:
Have I ever placed a comment?... I don't think so. I must say, this is one of the best piece; one of the best piece? #Scratch that! ...This is the best piece I've ever read on NL. Miss Chumzy ooo, You are great! ...The last update got me laughing heels over head! I don't know what got me laughing doh but I can't help it.
lol, no go begin dey laff anyhow oo, make guys wey no get joy no tie u chain. 4 ds Buhari regime na u dey laff upandan?
Re: Red Ashes by Chumzypinky(f): 1:26pm On Dec 27, 2016
Empress101
Duchessxino (i dnt tink i've ever seen ur comment b4)
swankmee
gloria007
Re: Red Ashes by Winters22: 1:31pm On Dec 27, 2016
i know what u did
..
Angelinastto:
I must say your is hilarious. Me lykit! And am chioma too ooo
thanks for the dedication mam.
Re: Red Ashes by JDAdeshina: 1:33pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:
JDAdeshina

Just skim through this piece trying to have a general overview of what its all about.

Nice piece you've got. I've to start reading from the beginning page.. Hopefully, I'll catch up soon...

Thumbs up!
Re: Red Ashes by bolubennie(m): 1:39pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:

lol, no go begin dey laff anyhow oo, make guys wey no get joy no tie u chain. 4 ds Buhari regime na u dey laff upandan?
Ma'am, if 'em tie me chain eh? I go hold u responsible oo. .Cuz na u put laff for my small mouth oo
Re: Red Ashes by empress101(f): 1:48pm On Dec 27, 2016
kiss chumzypinky, wat a nice update. grin and funny too.. thumbs up.
Re: Red Ashes by adebriana(f): 2:08pm On Dec 27, 2016
Nice update ma'am. Jude is crazy, he wants to train a full grown man and instead of trying to make his son accept him, he's using force and even went as far as punching him. I'm glad that Chioma is finding out some things about Chuks.

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Re: Red Ashes by waliyarh01(f): 2:12pm On Dec 27, 2016
She has updated again!! Not that am complaining o just appreciating your good works, seriously you've given me a good reason for reading stories here again, don't lemme praise you much so you don't start to starve me with updates wink smiley

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Re: Red Ashes by cherpret: 2:16pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Eh? Mrs Cherpret?
hmmmmmmmm me I'm not Mrs o
Re: Red Ashes by swankmee(f): 2:32pm On Dec 27, 2016
I kinda feel for Nathan tho...... Jude deserves more punch from Nathan grin
Re: Red Ashes by Hundreddegrees(m): 3:44pm On Dec 27, 2016
This Kainene eh

This is the first time I'm beginning to like this Nathan of a boy grin
Re: Red Ashes by Angelinastto(f): 3:54pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:

Ar u kiddin me? U 2 Chioma?
lol... Just kidding sis. Am not ibo
thanks for the dedication
Re: Red Ashes by Angelinastto(f): 3:56pm On Dec 27, 2016
Winters22:
i know what u did ..thanks for the dedication mam.
sad
Winters22:
i know what u did ..thanks for the dedication mam.
what i did? Ion understand
Re: Red Ashes by Nobody: 4:24pm On Dec 27, 2016
Lolzzz. For me ooo...Nathan has every right to punch and blow his father,to pieces sef. After how many years without you...you just show up and start claiming jardon?...Mba'nu!
Kainene should please calm down biko. Don't blame your mum too much....cause i'm sure if she was in her shoes,she would do same. Let her just forgive her and stand by her.
Thanks for the mention Chumzypinky
#still following#
Re: Red Ashes by Winters22: 4:30pm On Dec 27, 2016
Angelinastto:
sad what i did? Ion understand
please dont mind me
Re: Red Ashes by duchessxino(f): 4:40pm On Dec 27, 2016
Chumzypinky:
Empress101

Duchessxino (i dnt tink i've ever seen ur comment b4)

swankmee

gloria007
really sorry about that, following bumper to bumper silently.....thumb up, compliment of the season

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