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If angels don't have freewill, then how did Satan turn bad. Did God create him bad?

Responding to Damsal:

Recently I stumbled accross a manga called dragonball and I found it's wacky childish humor really hilarious, which is why I tried to copy that style here. The idea, as I see it, is to make the story so ridiculously funny that people will be laughing rather than trying to analyse it or take it too seriously. MrMayor achieved that but maybe I have not.

- Is CeeCee incompetent? Yes. He's been in heaven for a long time, but he's never dealt with humans.

- Do angels have free will? Yes. Otherwise, how did Satan and his angels turn bad?

- Concerning his reference to child abuse, that's a plot hole. I can just remove that line.

- Is this story meant to stimulate your intellect? Absolutely not. It's meant to be ridiculous and funny!

- Could I make the story action-packed? That is my intention. If I'm failing at it, why don't you show me how?

Guys and girls, thanks so much for the encouragement.

I'm going to make money by self-publishing a photocomic based on the story. I hope you'll buy it.

I'm planning to modify certain aspects of the story to make it more suitable for deeply religious readers.

I'm also abandoning my desire to make the series equally enjoyable for ladies and men. After some research, I've concluded that this can't work since I'm male. Instead I'll focus on action and humor.

I'm working on the foundation of a long term story to be released in comic form. Once that is complete, I'll start hiring writers to add to the story and paying them reasonably well for it.

However, it will be nice if you can post the first chapter of your scripts so you can know how good they are! It will also be nice if you can give us an idea of how much Nigerian movie producers usually pay for scripts.