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Hey OP though your story line is encouraging and captivating
Please just try improve your writing method and choice of words
This writing seems like it's being written by a jss2 student
No pun intended buh please work on it
U still dey follow anyways

Nothing do you Frank25
We dey together
Just dey update us dey go

Dodo how far
Why you dey give us hot hot like this na
No wahala sha i dey love am
Big UPS

Ok we are getting there
But Frank25 the story is dope but your punch lines are too weak and immature

You've got to go deeper into the vocabulary world to make this a masterpiece

And lastly in one of your previous updates, your politicians were discussing and certain words which are not a trait of nigerian politicians were used

That's not nice buddy. .. anyways i know say you go work on dem
I dey with you, i no go anywhere

I dey follow bumper to bumper
More updates Biko nu

Bloody Alfred dey prey on mother and daughter na wa ooo
Wife dey cheat still dey divulge sensitive info about her husband to someone she's cheating with
That's deep and disheartening
Michael don suffer gan ooo

I'm not one too comment on a thread so early
Buh this OP is a thread that made me deviate from my belief
Thank you for this

This must be epic
Buh come oo...why be say most characters for nairaland stories now are akwa ibomites
OP let's go there

Okay Rosemary i want to list my complaints

1. Why do you have to put up something breathtaking as this

2. Now you're making me review my relationship with God

3. You got me wanting more of these

4. I really hope to get know you personally (albeit if allowed)

5. Where did you get this

I get plenty complaints oo buh make i hang boot for these ones first
I go continue later....I must appreciate you for these cos I'm kinda trying to retrace my steps GRACIAS

Yeah i wan collect front seat from those who don dey there already

I like these= like ke?? I love it man

Na my appetizer be this oo

Na wah ooo
Souloho jus dey do audience anyhow
Well we've got no choice but to wait

Nice piece you got here OP
Buh permit me to digress a little, the story started well and interesting
Seriously it got me glued....the first 1-3 chapters were amazing
Buh suddenly you deviated from the brief, intellectual and relatable convos to short and sometimes overly long boring convos
Please work on it
I love it though
Big ups to you Akwaowo
Meanwhile jullyrosy!! I sight you first lady of the thread

Nice plot
Buh you've got to improve on your wordings
Go check out Creeza's work and you'll understand what i mean

Booda dodoatirice!!!!
É gbinyanju gan
Been following these since when you started buh just waiting for it to end before commenting
Hustle sweet if you do am on a low
Buh at the same time "jejelaye"
Ibaré ogbeni dodoatirice
Thanks for these man
You got my attention on full voltage.

More off it please update on roll

Baba be like say you dey school for South South Anyways congratulations to you Now na steady update we dey wait for

Baba be like say you dey school for South South Anyways congratulations to you Now na steady update we dey wait for

Wetin dey happen now O.P
Hope you good? Please just drop a msg even if u no go drop update,make we know wetin dey go on
This your silence get as e be ooo...we dey wait to hear from you soon

Noblejohn i see you ooo
Thanks for the update
We dey wait for more

I love this
Damn the first chapters got me wanting more
Mbok op nomi updates ASAP

Mr ghost abeg try complete this one too
I'm with you all the way

Nicheey do come update us now
The thread make sense
Buh meanwhile try reduce the amount of O.T you dey put down or write them up in another way...if you're a real sailor,you go no say 48 lap for this platform plenty and e no good for illegal ears to know the words of the gods
Anyways I mount here ruggedly no update dey pass me by

Moura7
Wish you success oo
Me just dey hang boot recently for uni matter
The journey no easy...swears
On that note, we dey wait for you
But i for like sign for your shirt oo

So "ERIC ISSAC" is the other anyanwu?
Getting interesting...buh
Rapmike i dey vex and para together
Please make the updates longer
Waiting for next update....WE MOVE!!!

Ksenga must fall oo
Dat man Francis must be ruthless when it comes to dealing with betrayers
rapmike....been a while though