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Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Eneze1(f): 9:55am On May 06, 2013 |
VanTee20: EPISODE 8 (contd.) thank you so much dear, just reading this now, have been very busy, smiling to myself |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by FoxyUltimate(m): 11:25am On May 06, 2013 |
Eneze1: |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 11:44am On May 06, 2013 |
Eneze1:You are welcome. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 11:46am On May 06, 2013 |
Foxy_Ultimate:What? |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Eneze1(f): 12:20pm On May 06, 2013 |
Foxy_Ultimate: what happened? hope all is well? why are you |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by FoxyUltimate(m): 12:22pm On May 06, 2013 |
Eneze1: No updates.... |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Nobody: 12:24pm On May 06, 2013 |
Eneze1:must u quote everything? |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 12:33pm On May 06, 2013 |
Foxy_Ultimate:No vex. Na jamb tinz wey dey my mind now. I'll see if i can update today or maybe tomorrow |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 12:34pm On May 06, 2013 |
Damex333: must u quote everything?She wants you to have a re-read ni na. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by jiraiyas: 12:37pm On May 06, 2013 |
when r u posting? Nice story |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Eneze1(f): 3:55pm On May 06, 2013 |
Damex333: must u quote everything? must you quote me? |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 10:38pm On May 06, 2013 |
jiraiyas: when r u posting? Nice storyI'll be updating tomorrow. Thanks Sir. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Jiteshell(f): 9:32am On May 08, 2013 |
VanTee20:'tomorrow' has passed, where art thou? |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 3:02pm On May 09, 2013 |
EPISODE 9 Our ride from Casville to Austieres was smooth and fast, all thanks to the fleet-footed horses that pulled the carriages with blinding speed. I had enjoyed the ride mainly because I had shared a carriage with the stunning princess Enezina and we had talked about lots of things which I can't remember as I write this. Oddly enough, she sounded intelligent, not like that blockhead Elvira. When we got Austieres, the King told some of the earls to go put finishing touches to the preparation for the tournament. The remainder of the party went to the King's palace in the heart of the city to rest there before the tournament began. When I got to the room allotted to me, I quickly sat on the bed and busied myself reading the new scroll Fabianus had given me. ... Chei! See handwriting ooo... The calligraphy of the author was so poor that I couldn't stop squinting and sweating as I read through the pages of the scroll. 'Wo, I will look for someone to read it to me later jawe,' I said to myself as I dropped the scroll. I was just about closing my eyes to catch some sleep when two servants walked in to tell me that the tournament had begun. I stood from the bed and followed them to the amphitheater where the jousting (abi na jonzing ) would take place ****************************************************************************************** 'People of casville,' the King began 'we art gathered hither to watch this tournament organized in the honour of the saviour sent to us by the gods, the most excellent Athanasius.' At the mention of my name, the crowd went wild with shouts and chants. I stood from my seat and waved to the adoring crowd.' ...Dear God, forgive me... 'The Winner of this tournament will have the singular honour of kissing Athanasius's feet. Let the tournament begin,' the King pronounced to the battle ready knights. The tournament began!!! the knights, all of them dressed in armour and armed with shields, swords and lances (a kind of short spear) broke their ranks and started to strike hard blows on each other. I did not know whether to laugh or cry. These are just bunches of idi0ts fighting themselves to death over the right to kiss my damned feet. there is nothing interesting in this jor. 'Are these knights bloodless,' I asked my neighbour, when I noticed that most of them being struck by swords were falling without any sign of blood. Na Nollywood movie we dey watch? 'The armours art verily strong and the swords art blunt,' my paunchy, plump cheeked neighbour replied. At last the show of shame ended with a knight named Proctor emerging as the winner. As I stood up to return to my room, someone tapped me from behind and I spun round to see the smiling, youthful face of Fabianus. 'Athanasius, how far na? Did you enjoy the tournament?' he asked. 'Errm... Yes,' I lied in reply. He smiled, a knowing smile. He knew that I did not enjoy the tournament. `OK. I have brought these men for you,' he said, as seven muscular, tough looking men came to my view.`Their names are Dammexus, Stefanus, Brokotus, Anonimus, Neduzzus, Mutainus...' ' Wait o, what will do with them?' I cut in. 'They are the Knights of the realm. They will be helping you in your quest against Justus and his cohorts,' He explained. ... My helpers eh? This is the only good thing I've heard since I came here o... TO BE CONTINUED......... 1 Like |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Nobody: 3:35pm On May 09, 2013 |
Lmao. . . Very Nice... Keep it coming bro.. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 3:47pm On May 09, 2013 |
Br3nd4: Lmao. . . Very Nice... Keep it coming bro..Thanks my sister. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by JoBle(f): 3:49pm On May 09, 2013 |
I love this story,I really do. It's just that the updates are short and far apart which kinda makes it hard to really enjoy the story. If you could please do something about this. . . 1 Like |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 3:58pm On May 09, 2013 |
JoBlè: I love this story,I really do. It's just that the updates are short and far apart which kinda makes it hard to really enjoy the story. If you could please do something about this. . .I will do something about it, thanks a lot. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Nobody: 4:31pm On May 09, 2013 |
JoBlè: I love this story,I really do. It's just that the updates are short and far apart which kinda makes it hard to really enjoy the story. If you could please do something about this. . .don't mind dat guy jawe, dt guy don dey help them fight jonzing. Dont worry i will give you d opportunity 2 lips my feet. Or else i will tell stan 2 keep u there permanently. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 5:35pm On May 09, 2013 |
Damex333: don't mind dat guy jawe, dt guy don dey help them fight jonzing. Dont worry i will give you d opportunity 2 lips my feet. Or else i will tell stan 2 keep u there permanently.What are you saying na? You know say u be my knight o & I be your oga @ d apex. No fall my hands o, else I go zack you. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Marian17(f): 7:10pm On May 09, 2013 |
Nice one Van, keep it coming. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by LarrySun(m): 7:29pm On May 09, 2013 |
So much water has flowed through the bridge's underside. Weldone Van. Mods...frontpage please! |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by Mutaino7(m): 10:10pm On May 09, 2013 |
Where art thou oh mod. Whenceforth must this exquiste piece of art make front page. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 10:24pm On May 09, 2013 |
Larry-Sun:Thanks sir... Nice to have you back. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 10:27pm On May 09, 2013 |
Mutaino7: Where art thou oh mod. Whenceforth must this exquiste piece of art make front page.. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by purpinkx(m): 7:22pm On May 10, 2013 |
I'm not a mod but taking this to front page will put more pressure on you i.e more fans don't pray for that abeg your updates are far apart |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 9:14pm On May 10, 2013 |
purpinkx: I'm not a mod but taking this to front page will put more pressure on you i.e more fansE be like say I don offend you before o. What is wrong with having more fans eh? Well, I can withstand the pressure that comes with having more fans. My problem is just that I've been very very busy of late. I'll try to write and post an update tonight, or maybe tomorrow sha. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by oyestephen(m): 9:50pm On May 10, 2013 |
Please post tomorrow.....make it a birthday present |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 10:41pm On May 10, 2013 |
oyestephen: Please post tomorrow.....make it a birthday presentI'll do that. Happy birthday in advance my bro. |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by VanTee20(m): 5:04pm On May 11, 2013 |
EPISODE 9 Later in the evening, I laid silently on my bed as I fed my eyes with impudish delight on the scantily dressed girls in Stan's porn magazine. As I flipped through the pages of the magazine, I saw different shapes and sizes of girls, until I came to a page that was completely blank. ... What is this again o? There was something on this page before na... The hottest girl in the mag was the page on that page before. I remembered because I had dog-eared the page before. I was still trying to think of what could have wiped the picture of the girl off the page, when a face suddenly appeared on the erstwhile blankpage. It wasn't the model's face, It was Fabianus' face. 'Van, come to my room now, something has happened,' Fabianus said. 'Eh? Wha... What did you say?' He smiled, his same knowing smile. 'Just come quickly. I know you are surprised, Don't worry, I'll explain to you when you get here.' After saying that, his face disappeared from the page, while that of the girl returned. I quickly stood from the bed and started running to Fabianus' room. ... Kai! My eyes don see for dis Casville o(abi na Jazville ni)... ********** I got to Fabianus' room to see him staring at a piece of white cloth hung in the corner of the room. 'Van, come and see,' Fabianus said when he saw me. I moved closer and I saw clearly what he was watching; Five fully armed men walking through a dense forest. 'What is urgent about this film you are watching? Didn't you...' 'Relax jor. Who told you that this is a film?' he asked 'Do you see that bald man leading them? His name is Phoebus, he is Justus' brother.' 'Shey Justus the sorcerer?' I asked, although I knew the answer to my question already. 'Yes, and these men are going to Carzëf to steal the black sword of the gods. You know what that means, don't you?' 'Not exactly,' I replied. 'Justus knows that you have no power at all without that sword, that is why he sent these men to get it. If we don't act fast and they suceed in getting it, that means we're doomed. There is no way you can save us without that sword,' he explained. 'Ok. What do we do now?' I asked. 'We must ride to Carzëf immediately, those guys must not get there before we do. The Knights are already waiting for us, let's go.' He said and we dashed out of his room with blinding speed. ******** We (the Knights, Fabianus and I) rode out of Austieres with high speed towards Carzëf. 'Why don't you tell me more about that Justus? It seems there are lots of important things I need to know about him,' I said to Fabianus, as we rode past the steep mountain that served as the boundary between Austieres and Carzëf. 'That shows you still haven't read the scroll I gave you,' Fabianus reasoned. 'Errm... You are right, I've been too busy to read it,' I lied. He smiled softly. 'Busy with what? Porn ba?' he chided me. Before I could string words together to reply him, the carriages and the chariots we rode stopped. 'This is Cersvin Temple,' Fabianus said to me, as he pointed to the large, imposing building in front of us. 'The sword of the gods has been kept here for thousands of years. Let's go in.' We all rushed inside to see five dead bodies and a lot of blood of the floor. The bodies belonged to the men I had seen in the white cloth in Fabianus' room. 'Go and check if the sword is still in the sacred box,' Fabianus said to Damexus, one of the Knights. We all waited with bated breath as Damexus did his check. He came back to us with a sad look on his face. 'It's gone sir,' he informed Fabianus. ... Yawa don gas finally... 'Who the hell killed these men?' Stefanus asked rhetorically. 'I think we should be more concerned about who took the sword,' Brokotus countered. 'I did,' A thunderous voice above us said. To be continued... HAPPY BIRTHDAY OYESTEPHEN, LLNP, MHR |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by oyestephen(m): 6:29pm On May 11, 2013 |
Than you vantee......what a comedic birthday present....that place is really jazville |
Re: The Saviour I : The Adventures of Athanasius. by JoBle(f): 7:07pm On May 11, 2013 |
@oyestephen Happy Birthday!!! Wishing you a wonderful day. . .or whatever's left of the day. |
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