Thanks owner. And @slickest mehn you blew me off with d last piece, you are a genius. A living genius, now i will need d address to d house and other "the house" in d world, so i can avoid em. Thanks again @slickest
oga mynd helep us push ds thread go front page.

#shivers#

Damex333: Thanks owner. And @slickest mehn you blew me off with d last piece, you are a genius. A living genius, now i will need d address to d house and other "the house" in d world, so i can avoid em. Thanks again @slickest
oga mynd helep us push ds thread go front page.

Na myndd hide my post....I go call onayemi to pay him a warm visit

Slickest:
Na myndd hide my post....I go call onayemi to pay him a warm visit

Not me bro...it was the spambot

Mynd_44:
Not me bro...it was the spambot

Oga mi....help us push am go front page na!!!

Mynd_44:
Not me bro...it was the spambot

Oga Mynd dey fear Onayemi

Could dis be real, mehn Slickest u too much. This is extraordinary imagination. Your creativity cut edges. Keep it up bro.

Lesson to all: Value what you have when you still can, family inclusive

Bolt2011:

Oga Mynd dey fear Onayemi

Could dis be real, mehn Slickest u too much. This is extraordinary imagination. Your creativity cut edges. Keep it up bro.

Lesson to all: Value what you have when you still can, family inclusive

Nice one bro!!!!

Bravo, bravo.
Ur imagination and description of events are wonderful. Many times I felt I was actually there watching what was going on like a movie.
You will need to work on your grammar and spelling, but the concept is great.
Thanks most of all for completing the tale (the same can't be said for a lot of the other nairaland authors).

Please do me a favour and post the link to your next e-novel in this thread so I don't miss out on the action!

mamaaustin: Bravo, bravo.
Ur imagination and description of events are wonderful. Many times I felt I was actually there watching what was going on like a movie.
You will need to work on your grammar and spelling, but the concept is great.
Thanks most of all for completing the tale (the same can't be said for a lot of the other nairaland authors).

Please do me a favour and post the link to your next e-novel in this thread so I don't miss out on the action!

No qualms ma!!!!

@Slickest that's a welcom deviation from what appears to be a modus operanda of Lit. Section's most stories. Weldone!

The story got me from day 1...good work slickest! Can wait to have you on your next story.

*dancing azonto*.....*in wizkid's voice*slickiest GOD GO MEK U BIGGER O .....LOVE YA BRO

finally!thank GOD say no b real life tory...@slickest,weldone...ds ur first story wz grt.
patiently waitin for DEAD KNOCKIN*shivers*
kai!u too lyk horror.

Damex333: Thanks owner. And @slickest mehn you blew me off with d last piece, you are a genius. A living genius, now i will need d address to d house and other "the house" in d world, so i can avoid em. Thanks again @slickest
oga mynd helep us push ds thread go front page.

seconded..d story try no b small

Definitely a front page material..........slickest I fear u o

Ena just dey make pesin head dey swell.....
Thanx guyz...I really appreciate!!!!

Slickest astro gat one question 4 you,if u claim you are dead how come you dey on nairaland
Lovely story sha but .......no buts,u d bomb!!!

Sooooooo happy u made d front page

If I read dis much I would be in 4.9 nt 4.5 I am nt braging oOOOo

@Op you are a good writter i must commend. You could make a living out of it you know

Omo c gobe!!!

Dis had beta not b a joke because my elder sister(am reading d story loud) is already shouting Blood of Jesus...pls continue.......

d nysc gal part seems 2 b getin interesting.nw your suffering continues wit her

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[color=#000099][/color]. Quite an interestin write up.... Kip it up

Your imagination is hyper-fertile, Slick. However, you should work on your grammar. Learn to capitalize proper nouns like names of people, days of the week, etc, unless you're writing for fun, which is not very nice, considering how good you are!

Kudos! You remind me of Dean Koontz!

Foxy_Ultimate: I saw your update but I'm not gonna read it till the day breaks...

You know get mind ni?

WOW.... we made the front page.

Lol, this is something different... I hate scary stories tho, bur this was nice

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I have a very strong passion for literature,my brother kudos to u,you have a very rare literary gift that if developed will take u to where u never believe,working on your grammar is important though,wish u all the best.

quote author=Slickest]I'l update every night so it serves its purpose[/quote]

Really enjoyin it!!!!!!!!!!! Waitin 4 da nxt updatin