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Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 7:22pm On Oct 07, 2013 |
Winnie1950: I so love this story. God knows that i do but your updates are way too short. Sometimes when i click on this story i won't notice a new update (if there was any) unless i check very well because they are usually too small to be easily noticedI'm sorry you feel that way. I won't update until I have time to type much. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 7:41pm On Oct 07, 2013 |
zika1: I hv been a silent reader and I do love the story but have a lil issue wit ur updates. Most people will agree the updates are way 2 short. I understand U use ur fone 2 type bt dnt tink dat will really stop u 4rm making d story a bit lengthy. I also have a lil problem with the way the characters are bein xpressed. U can add a lil more life 2 it so it feels like we re watching and not reading e.g temilade's part. A lil witty tin @ least 4 some kinda relief. Well in all its a very interesting story and u can bet I'm wit you."A lil witty tin" I Wish I knew what that mean. This is kind of criticism I need. Thanks dear. This story is a unique one, a kind of positive strain on me because of It's Nothing like my past works. Therefore I don't like going into unnecessary details . like I told Winnie I will only update when I have time to update much. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by zika1(f): 8:46pm On Oct 07, 2013 |
Queen xstar: "A lil witty tin" I Wish I knew what that mean.wat I mean by the a "lil witty tin" is a lil funny stuff dat can relax us after reading through serious parts of the story. I actually mean LITTLE ooo nt 2 much so it doesn't get readers bored. And bout u posting wen u have time, we understand. Tnx 4 d great piece tho. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 9:33pm On Oct 07, 2013 |
zika1: wat I mean by the a "lil witty tin" is a lil funny stuff dat can relax us after reading through serious parts of the story. I actually mean LITTLE ooo nt 2 much so it doesn't get readers bored. And bout u posting wen u have time, we understand. Tnx 4 d great piece tho.Exhales and place palm under chin. Noted Sweetie. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 12:07pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
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Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 12:11pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
Another update comes later in the day. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Winnie1950(f): 2:08pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
Thanks for this beautiful update. But you should have made prince to pay for his sins. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 6:03pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
'Oh no! I typed and it wiped off. hmmmm … |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 6:21pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
Winnie1950: Thanks for this beautiful update. But you should have made prince to pay for his sins.Time will tell dear. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Nobody: 6:26pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
I love your story |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 6:56pm On Oct 11, 2013 |
IfeomaVanessa: I love your storyeeeya Sweetie, Thank u. 1 Like |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 8:28pm On Oct 12, 2013 |
Soo sowie …another update comes up on Monday |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by kinxen(f): 8:20pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
Queen xstar: Soo sowie …another update comes up on Monday Nd its monday last I checked...whrz our update na |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 10:44pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
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Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 10:52pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
kinxen:Right here Sweetheart. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by kinxen(f): 10:58pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
Queen xstar: Right here Sweetheart. Tnx dearie buh its short na..morrrreeeee!! |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 11:31pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
[/i] Does Jesus care when my heart is pained Too deeply for mirth and song; As the burdens press, and the cares distress, And the way grows weary and long? [/b] Temilade was seated on the bed with her back rested against the wall, staring into space oblivious of her surrounding. O Yes, He cares, I know he cares! His heart is touched with my grief; When the days are weary, the long nights dreary, I know by Savior cares. [b] Chidubem all cuddled on the rug, too exhausted to get warmth for his cold extremities, he stared blankly. .......[i] |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 11:42pm On Oct 14, 2013 |
I'm dozing typing, I'll will conclude tomorrow. using italics while typing, do I have to click on its icon before or after typing? |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 9:38am On Oct 15, 2013 |
[i][/i] Does Jesus care when my heart is pained Too deeply for mirth and song; As the burdens press, and the cares distress, And the way grows weary and long? Temilade was seated on the bed with her back rested against the wall, staring into space oblivious of her surrounding. O Yes, He cares, I know he cares! His heart is touched with my grief; When the days are weary, the long nights dreary, I know my Savior cares. Chidubem all cuddled on the rug, too exhausted to get warmth for his cold extremities, he stared blankly. Does Jesus care when my way is dark With a nameless dread and fear? As the daylight fades into deep night shades, Does he care enough to be near? Prince stared into space blankly, his eyes sore and swollen, and his body ache. Yet seated on the hospital floor, he cared less. Does Jesus care when I have tried and failed. To resist some temptation strong; When for my deep grief I find no relief, Tho' my tears flow all night long? Ini stood outside the door as she listen as her father sobbed and muttered some regret. Tears formed in her eyes, knowing there was still more to come that will make him heart broken. Does Jesus care when I have said goodbye . To the dearest on earth to me, And my sad heart aches till it nearly breaks, Is it aught to Him, does He see? Cynthia blinked severally, drowsy but couldn't sleep. Her mind void yet occupied. Her head on the soft pillow, basked in the warmth of the blanket, Eniola stared at white wall, lost in thought. O yes, He cares, I know He cares! His heart is touched with my grief; When the days are weary, the long nights dreary, I know my saviour cares. 2 Likes |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 12:23pm On Oct 18, 2013 |
I am under the weather, my sincere apologies for not updating. That I will do as soon as I can. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 3:45pm On Oct 18, 2013 |
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Re: Dotted Lines ... by Winnie1950(f): 3:58pm On Oct 18, 2013 |
Thanks for the update. I hope u won't leave us again? |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 7:41pm On Oct 18, 2013 |
Winnie1950: Thanks for the update. I hope u won't leave us again?Ooooorrh … I never did. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 10:11am On Oct 20, 2013 |
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Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 10:12am On Oct 20, 2013 |
Happy Sunday Dear readers. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by zika1(f): 9:12pm On Oct 22, 2013 |
Nice1. Didn't read 4 sometime cos I wnted d updates 2 be a lil lengthy b4 checking it. Nice one tho. Wen nxt re u updating? Pls I am begging 4 an update 2morow a lengthy pls as a bdai gift. Tnx in advance |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 7:42pm On Oct 23, 2013 |
zika1: Nice1. Didn't read 4 sometime cos I wnted d updates 2 be a lil lengthy b4 checking it. Nice one tho. Wen nxt re u updating? Pls I am begging 4 an update 2morow a lengthy pls as a bdai gift. Tnx in advanceOh Sweetheart, I Wish you a Happy Birthday and All God's best! I Wish I could update but am under the weather. I sincerely Wish you the best. send me my cake. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by zika1(f): 9:39am On Oct 26, 2013 |
Queen xstar: Oh Sweetheart, I Wish you a Happy Birthday and All God's best! I Wish I could update but am under the weather. I sincerely Wish you the best. send me my cake.tnx a million luvly! Been busy d whole week even on my own bdai. I do appreciate nd as 4 ur cake ermmmm mayb ermmm.... We will talk bout dat later |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 9:30am On Oct 27, 2013 |
zika1: tnx a million luvly! Been busy d whole week even on my own bdai. I do appreciate nd as 4 ur cake ermmmm mayb ermmm.... We will talk bout dat laterHmmmm … |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 10:47am On Oct 27, 2013 |
"Sex! Sex!! Sex!!! I met a boy of 16 and he said to me sex is my hobby." There was a short laugh and a silence . "Sex is marriage in the spiritual realm … for everyone you have sex with, you're married to that person. " Prince gasped. "Sex is also an exchange of spirit, you have sex with him or her, you give to the person and the person takes from you. No wonder Sex is a very sure weapon to destroy or ruin one's destiny regardless of who that person maybe. " Chidubem sighed. "Can you remember when you had your first sex …' There was a pause. "You bet you can whether it was good or bad.You easier to abstain when you've not had sex at all than when you've indulged. " Imaobong swallowed hard. Listen to the story of a young girl who had a great future until she met a street urchin who wouldn't give up on her until she gave to being friends with him, soon, he convinced her and they had sex. It wasn't long, she started pilfering, she couldn't help herself until she was caught. She could have being badly injured or killed, if not that people who knew her and her family intervened. They took her from one place to another until the truth was discovered and she was delivered. " 'Deliverance. ' Indifreke mused. Iniobong glanced at him before directing her attention back to the radio. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Winnie1950(f): 11:11am On Oct 27, 2013 |
Continue! Thanks 4 this update queens xtar. Waiting 4 more. |
Re: Dotted Lines ... by Queenxstar(f): 11:28am On Oct 27, 2013 |
"An author once wrote, sex is like a superglue between two people. when you leave a relationship and start another sexual relationship intimacy. The glue breaks and become used again. On and on it goes … the weaker the superglue becomes. With the earpiece still in her ears, Cynthia remembered what her mother had told. "Sex in marriage is beautiful my darling. It is a long lasting bond." Thirty years of marriage and they were still waxing strong. Her mum had told her she had kept herself till marriage and implored her to do so. Being the last child, she had still being in the house when others have left , she studied her parents and loved what she saw and that prompted to keep myself. She smiled, knowing that keeping herself had made her to forgive and forget what Chidubem did easily. She had mopped her flat while listening , now that they were on break, she decided to sit on a stool in the kitchen. God must love her specially, Temilade thought to herself. She knew if she had given herself to Emmanuel, she would have been more devastated. 'Thank you Jesus. ' She whispered. *** |
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