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Re: Alone.. by WebSurfer(m): 11:17pm On Sep 15, 2016
PamelB:
tankiu
i have been trying to get accross to you but no response,
Re: Alone.. by Nobody: 5:23pm On Sep 16, 2016
PamelB, I don't know how i got here but i thank the story gods for leading me here. I'm not even done with yr story but It's been a blast. more creativity to yr brain babe. Just do and write a published book... I WILL BUY
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 8:16am On Sep 17, 2016
WebSurfer:
i have been trying to get accross to you but no response,
am sorry dear but my email is currently offline at the moment. If you're on bbm, add me using this pin
5BFEBFBD
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 8:16am On Sep 17, 2016
swann:
PamelB, I don't know how i got here but i thank the story gods for leading me here. I'm not even done with yr story but It's been a blast. more creativity to yr brain babe. Just do and write a published book... I WILL BUY
tanx my darling
Re: Alone.. by Julietogbo(f): 5:29pm On Sep 19, 2016
Thank you for making me cry pamela nice story

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Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 9:22am On Sep 20, 2016
Julietogbo:
Thank you for making me cry pamela nice story
lol. tanx julie
Re: Alone.. by bim2: 5:44pm On Sep 20, 2016
I only stumbled on this lovely piece of work when I went into your profile for the update of the other piece on the romance section.
Am so glad I did,I cried hard at the beginning.
It was really a wonderful write up
More grease to your elbow
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 8:43pm On Sep 20, 2016
bim2:
I only stumbled on this lovely piece of work when I went into your profile for the update of the other piece on the romance section.
Am so glad I did,I cried hard at the beginning.
It was really a wonderful write up
More grease to your elbow
tanx my dear
Re: Alone.. by TheBlessedMAN: 12:24am On Sep 23, 2016
oya, make i cum farabale (calm down) read my wife's story wella.... Wife?... U've got my attention... And am nt collecting it bak, anytime soon
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 12:59pm On Sep 23, 2016
TheBlessedMAN:
oya, make i cum farabale (calm down) read my wife's story wella.... Wife?... U've got my attention... And am nt collecting it bak, anytime soon
oko mi. Tanx for your presence. I'll keep your attention with me
Re: Alone.. by yusufibrahim(m): 2:38pm On Sep 24, 2016
Wow well delivered wishing was here earlier wen the story started but all good still cause I was still abi to read it that I couldn't spare a minute to do anything else nice work I really love it more grace to u,,,,,,,
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 3:24pm On Sep 24, 2016
yusufibrahim:
Wow well delivered wishing was here earlier wen the story started but all good still cause I was still abi to read it that I couldn't spare a minute to do anything else nice work I really love it more grace to u,,,,,,,
thank you
Re: Alone.. by honourable356(m): 4:15pm On Sep 24, 2016
So this story actually happened in Nigeria? Enugu my state of origin to be blunt, huh?

For a moment, I thought it was a mixture of true life story and fiction... Especially two of my brothers dating the same lady at different time interval with each one of them very much aware of what is going on... And then one of the brother ends up marrying the other one ex..

However, anything is possible but I seriously thought that only white does this..

The emotional aspect of this story is top notch...

Pamela, right
It seem you are writing story for the first time..* I am guessing *.
But, this is..
Captivating...
Intriguing...
Emotional...
Entertaining...

Above all, I am impressed.

My people, the girl is good, really good.
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 5:51pm On Sep 24, 2016
honourable356:
So this story actually happened in Nigeria? Enugu my state of origin to be blunt, huh?

For a moment, I thought it was a mixture of true life story and fiction... Especially two of my brothers dating the same lady at different time interval with each one of them very much aware of what is going on... And then one of the brother ends up marrying the other one ex..

However, anything is possible but I seriously thought that only white does this..

The emotional aspect of this story is top notch...

Pamela, right
It seem you are writing story for the first time..* I am guessing *.
But, this is..
Captivating...
Intriguing...
Emotional...
Entertaining...

Above all, I am impressed.

My people, the girl is good, really good.


Thank u sir
Re: Alone.. by honourable356(m): 6:46pm On Sep 24, 2016
PamelB:
Thank u sir
you are welcome my dear. Have a great weekend
Re: Alone.. by TheBlessedMAN: 12:39pm On Sep 25, 2016
PamelB My sweetheart... Am just half way into diz great piece of urz...and I must say u ar really a genius.... I love u dearly
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 5:09pm On Sep 25, 2016
TheBlessedMAN:
PamelB My sweetheart... Am just half way into diz great piece of urz...and I must say u ar really a genius.... I love u dearly
tanx my husband

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Re: Alone.. by wonderfulchild: 10:57pm On Sep 25, 2016
waoooh! this is cool. I enjoyed ds story.
Re: Alone.. by charytea(f): 1:18am On Sep 26, 2016
PamelB, gal u re d bomb, i av been reading dis since yesterday nd just finished nw. Tnx alot. I enjoyed it. Pls 4 my sake update on Valley of shadow of Love, please bae.
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 7:35am On Sep 27, 2016
charytea:
PamelB, gal u re d bomb, i av been reading dis since yesterday nd just finished nw. Tnx alot. I enjoyed it. Pls 4 my sake update on Valley of shadow of Love, please bae.
I'm trying. things hasn't being a lot easy for me. thank you
Re: Alone.. by BlizzydoDo(f): 8:57am On Sep 27, 2016
Saw diz awesome work of yours yesterday, spent all day reading it....I must say its a top-notch.....gud job weldone
Re: Alone.. by wenzi: 9:43am On Sep 27, 2016
DEAR I ADMIRE YOUR GIFT... NICE STORY YOU HAVE THERE... I'D LIKE TO WORK WITH YOU.. CALL ME WHEN YOU SEE THIS ... THIS IS MY CONTACTS .. PHONE NUM.. 08181357579.. EMAIL... ECHEMWENZI@GMAIL.COM... ANTICIPATING TO HEAR FROM YOU... GOD BLESS YOUR HANDWORK.....
THIS PICTURE WILL AID YOUR STORY..

Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 1:15pm On Sep 28, 2016
wenzi:
DEAR I ADMIRE YOUR GIFT... NICE STORY YOU HAVE THERE... I'D LIKE TO WORK WITH YOU.. CALL ME WHEN YOU SEE THIS ... THIS IS MY CONTACTS .. PHONE NUM.. 08181357579.. EMAIL... ECHEMWENZI@GMAIL.COM... ANTICIPATING TO HEAR FROM YOU... GOD BLESS YOUR HANDWORK.....
THIS PICTURE WILL AID YOUR STORY..
tanx. I'll chat you up immediately
Re: Alone.. by henrieternal2016(m): 12:41pm On Oct 02, 2016
Baby Pam..... U're amazing. I'm not d type that usually make comments on social media post. But after reading '' in the valley of love'' and ''Alone'', i must say u're amazing. Put these ideas in books and market urself on a larger platform.

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Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 4:26pm On Oct 02, 2016
henrieternal2016:
Baby Pam..... U're amazing. I'm not d type that usually make comments on social media post. But after reading '' in the valley of love'' and ''Alone'', i must say u're amazing. Put these ideas in books and market urself on a larger platform.
working on it dear
Re: Alone.. by henrieternal2016(m): 7:57pm On Oct 02, 2016
Baby Pam! U ar d BOMB! I hv never spent such a huge amount of time reading anything like this online before.......... Pls dedicate an episode to me too............
Re: Alone.. by eyescue(m): 8:18am On Oct 03, 2016
PamelB:
A slap landed on my left cheek while I got a knock on my head from behind. "mummy,I swear,I didn't take the money. I haven't even swept your room this morning." She looked at me with scorn and had another reason why i would be dealt with. "Chy,go and call your father."she said to her daughter who was my age mate and had given me the knock on my head.

Chinenye ran into the house,leaving me alone with her mother who was my aunt. Nice one

My name is Chimamanda Okoye. I'm nineteen years old and just finished my waec. I don't know my real parents but I grew up with mummy Joy and daddy Alex. According to what I was told,daddy Alex was my mother's elder brother. They were the only children of their parents. My mother had died while giving birth to me three months after my father was buried. I grew up knowing Joy and Alex as my parents.

On the other hand,Chinenye and Chukwuebuka are the only children of mummy Joy and daddy Alex. They were twins. They're older than me with just two months. We three wrote waec together and were awaiting our results. Chukwuebuka left for Abuja immediately our exams finished. He was my best friend,my confidant and my saviour. Daddy Alex was also good to me but he was never around. It was from one country to the other and whenever he was around,mummy Joy tried her best to prove to him that I was worthless.


Alex: Amanda,why are you kneeling down? What did you do?

I quickly noted the frown forming on Chinenye's face. She had come out to the backyard with her father smiling sheepishly.

Joy: You won't ask me, your wife,why I'm punishing her eh daddy?

Alex: What did she do?

Joy: She stole my money.

Daddy looked at me and frowned. He came closer to me and squatted,daddy was a tall man.

Alex: Amanda,did you take your mother's money?

I shook my head as fresh tears fell from my eyes.

Alex: Speak my child and stop nodding. Learn to defend yourself.
He spoke in a very soft way that I wanted to pull him to me and hug him for loving me so much.

Me: Daddy,I didn't take the money. I haven't even gone into mummy's room this morning. I........

Joy: Shut up your mouth. I'm still talking about the money that you stole and you're drumming it into my ear that you've not swept my room this morning. What do I keep you in this house for?

Alex: And what will Chinenye be doing while she's working herself up in this house?

Chinenye: Daddy......

Alex: Shut up and get into the house. Make sure you've swept the entire rooms before I get back into that house.

Joy: Daddy leave this girl alone. How can she be suffering in her own father's house?

Alex: If sweeping the house is suffering,she should suffer. Now,get into that house now.

Chinenye ran into the house making noise like she was crying. She had never touched a broom since our childhood. I wanted to stop her and tell her to wait for me to do it but I caught daddy staring at me in a mean way.

Joy: Look how you overlooked this fool's mistake and carried it all out on my daughter. Nenye is still a child. She.....

Alex: Woman,don't provoke me anymore. You call that arrogant girl a child? If so,then Chimamanda is a child too. Why leave her to do all the work?

Joy: This is your house and Nenye is your child. If this bastard needs someone to pamper her,she should go and look for her late parents and live with them.

Mummy Joy meant to walk away but daddy slapped her and she fell on the ground.

Alex; You dare call my niece a bastard? Twenty one years ago,who was i? Who knew me in this country? Her father made me who I am. Her father restructured my life and that is why you even married me at the first place. This house belongs to Amanda because her mother willed everything to her,the money and every other thing you used in starting your business,it was from Amanda's money. Now,you call her a bastard. Is that how shameless you've become? I won't say this again,lay your hands on this girl just one more time and that will be the end of our marriage.

I knelt there and tried to think over all daddy was saying. The house was mine? I had money too? Then why did mummy Joy always refer to me as a wretched child who her parents left with nothing? I wanted to smile and dance around for joy but not now,not when my mummy was on the floor in pains.

Alex: Amanda,go and finish with whatever you're doing. Once I come back,you're leaving this house with me.


Mummy Joy left as soon as daddy left the house but while mummy came back later around 8:00pm,daddy never returned.
Re: Alone.. by kristalblaze(m): 8:21am On Oct 04, 2016
finally,the end, what a captivating story.....good work ma'am
Re: Alone.. by Angelinastto(f): 12:39pm On Oct 08, 2016
[color=#770077][/color] Was about starting my story when i came across your master piece. I got so involve that i forgot mine. You are incredibly good (hoping to get encouragement when i start mine)

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Re: Alone.. by AnonymousG: 8:54am On Oct 18, 2016
See story chai.
Re: Alone.. by akinkudin: 5:23pm On Oct 18, 2016
Just read your story PamelB and loved it! Nice one
Re: Alone.. by akinkudin: 5:23pm On Oct 18, 2016
Just read your story PamelB and loved it! Nice one

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