Nice work. Thumbs up

I love evry bit of ur story,it is educating,intriguingly. More grace 2 ur strength..
Pls ooo we need more update

Awesome storyline pamelB.....really got me glued to my phone like kilode

More ororo to ur elbow and more inspirations to keep u going on....following the story bumper to bumper.
Buh still rooting for Gospel despite evrything fa

Nice theme Nice plot Nice style and structure Nice setting . . . . . Nice story, dear. Do be mindful of little errors

Awww.... Beautiful story!




Pamelb, please come and continue oo... I'm really loving this!

Every update was a hit "back 2 back"

I've never been this glued to my phone over a story like this before

Keep it coming.......we dey your back!

God forbid I miss the next update

saxwizard:
wow we are on fp...... congrats pamelb

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This is unarguably the best pice I have read on this auspicious platform. I have been glued to my phone since morning. You are such a talented writer dear @Pamela. More power to your elbow.thumbs up

Nice story PamelB.

Hardly read any story on this platform. But this......still looking for the best word to describe it. It's just beautiful.
Started reading this morning. Went to school, read a little and now I'm back and still on the matter.

Never read a story as beautiful as this on NL.

Keep it up.

where's d rest?

Hey na dis 1 dem dey call captivating,see as I jst carry my phone de find network 4 me 2 kontinue d tory.






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Am really intrigue wit dis piece 2 d point dat I feel all is happening 2 me.
May d data in ur phone neva dry ooo

Hey Pamel u made it!

PamelB:
you're welcome

Dear you don't know how this story is lifting the hopes of those passing through HELL on daily bases..
Please when are we see the rest of the story?

Am i late Btw make i register here.. op nyc one

PalmelB u too much I must confess

I luv everything about u and ur story pls keep it up dear

Wow PamelB you are such an intelligent story writer wish I could place a face to the writer. Keep it up. More greese to your elbow

Pls keep it coming....never found a story these interesting n full of suspense.God bless you dear

Interesting......keep it up Pamela

Interesting.... pamelB keep it up

I love this. It sometimes get me emotional. It almost made me cry to some extents. U are doing a beautiful job PamelB.

Nice one. Very captivating. keep it up.

welldone.

Such a good writer/story-teller. I admire u.

PamelB ,pls I can't wait to read d rest of d story. love ya good job it more dan a story but.a peice of literary work,thnx a lot I really appreciate it.

Wow!!

Pamelb I'd say that this is a wonderful piece, very brilliant of you. More power to your elbow.

I don't know why I saw this when it was already on the 8th page. That story on the 2nd page about her rape...chaii I feel sad and sorry for Amanda and angry with her aunty and her spoil brat. I pray they reap what they sow. As for gospel why is he like that, although the way he reasoned about her in the first place was wrong.

Saxwizard I love the way you have been encouraging from page 0. GGMUB. Bless you bro.

Pamelb You're doing a great job, I appreciate you for that, keep it up.

liztemi:
Awesome storyline pamelB.....really got me glued to my phone like kilode

More ororo to ur elbow and more inspirations to keep u going on....following the story bumper to bumper.
Buh still rooting for Gospel despite evrything fa

That story is captivating and written by a talented writer.

Btw @bold part why are you rooting for him?

1) If she were my sis I'd not advice her to go back to him even if he has something to prove.
2) If I were her I wouldn't go back to him even if he proves he loves me because he didn't trust me enough to hold a relationship. And you know in a relationship trust is needed. Trust takes more time to build and just seconds to destroy The trust in her has been dented. So??

Wat A Great Story Frm A Great Lady, I Started D Readn Dz Mrn Am Eager To Follow 2 End. Believe Me PamelB U've Done Well! Kisses!

PamelIB you recall what I told you from the start?

I'm saving my words to the last update
#GreatWork

temmiesexy:

Eniqurl:

Hi,
I hope you'll find this interesting while you wait for an update of mfyl.
Enjoy.

Thank God, finally, I know how to reply. I have been trying to do so to encourage u most especially when u wrote about not feeling encouraged. I'm in love with ur story and I encourage my group to read it too. Your story speaks of the struggle of an average female of our time. I & my group look forward to more. God bless u dear. If u av any story apart from this, I wanna know coz I don't know how to operate on this forum. I'm new.

princedami:


That story is captivating and written by a talented writer.

Btw @bold part why are you rooting for him?

1) If she were my sis I'd not advice her to go back to him even if he has something to prove.
2) If I were her I wouldn't go back to him even if he proves he loves me because he didn't trust me enough to hold a relationship. And you know in a relationship trust is needed. Trust takes more time to build and just seconds to destroy The trust in her has been dented. So??

My reasons re purely sentimental, that I agree to sha bt it's just in the context of the story......I just wished he could win her back

liztemi:

My reasons re purely sentimental, that I agree to sha bt it's just in the context of the story......I just wished he could win her back

Hmm.. Ok. If you say so.