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Re: Alone.. by saxwizard(m): 9:06am On Aug 19, 2016 |
princedami: Lol inshort the way the story dey go it will hard to tell its ending but me I knw the end of the story cos I don read am for my dream...but I no go talk am...I want mak una dey dark Viewing this topic: nobgill ( m), desire222( f), Khemhyte ( f ), Isabel2457 ( f), flashinglights ( f ), princedami and 1 guest come out of ghost mode all of una 1 Like |
Re: Alone.. by saxwizard(m): 9:08am On Aug 19, 2016 |
PamelB: yea mayb I got the spellings wrong. my night was fyn thanks for the update |
Re: Alone.. by princedami: 9:37am On Aug 19, 2016 |
saxwizard: Hahaha...in your dreams?. I lafta o .The beauty of the story is we not been able to predict it/the end and keep us longing for more . But looking at the story she's losing way too much of people that have good intentions for her..too much |
Re: Alone.. by SPDAZZY(f): 9:51am On Aug 19, 2016 |
Another heart break? Chai, maybe she will hook up with Ken now 1 Like |
Re: Alone.. by princedami: 10:19am On Aug 19, 2016 |
SPDAZZY: Then,... another heart break will occur. |
Re: Alone.. by SPDAZZY(f): 10:56am On Aug 19, 2016 |
princedami: My bad, I meant she might eventually be with Ken as in going steady not going under the sheets. |
Re: Alone.. by Ejemehn(m): 11:05am On Aug 19, 2016 |
SPDAZZY: Amanda will continue to be alone..... She'll develop thick skin and will prefer loneliness than be with people she'll love but will leave her. |
Re: Alone.. by FlordFlorez(m): 11:26am On Aug 19, 2016 |
[quote author=Ejemehn post=48615512] Amanda will continue to be alone..... She'll develop thick skin and will prefer loneliness than be with people she'll love but will leave her.[/yes, she's going to be alone. Jst as do title reads. It's gonna be painful for her.] Bt wait o, wetin con happen to dos two wey dis-flower her nah? |
Re: Alone.. by liztemi(f): 11:32am On Aug 19, 2016 |
Omg!!! not another loss na........ Feeling sorry for amanda |
Re: Alone.. by Nobody: 12:26pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Urhhh, Amanda sowie o....... PamelB, nice episode there. |
Re: Alone.. by Emmex0804(m): 12:55pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
see anoda gobe....amanda don suffer oooooo....i pray God see her through dis. |
Re: Alone.. by Twinkle004(f): 1:06pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I really feel 4 Amanda..what a pity |
Re: Alone.. by Princelegacylemoha(m): 2:12pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Poor girl Amanda |
Re: Alone.. by desire222(f): 2:21pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Ghost mode deactivated. Ride on. I'm in love with the story. |
Re: Alone.. by soulminister(m): 3:19pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
No.... No... No..... No...... Water don pass garri. This is no longer a curse. Village people are at work here. |
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 4:09pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I'm not used to posting stuffs at this time of the day but let's blame it on the free time. Your comments and thoughts are highly appreciated cos it got me laughing for a good number of minutes. You guys are the bomb. Never knew this story would go this far,thanks to saxwizard. So here comes another one........ I went home a different person. Enough is enough. Maybe I've being too naive and vulnerable but from today henceforth, I'll change. In fact,I've changed. No more men. I refused to mention what had happened to anybody even Kamsi. I'm not going to spoil her fun. I started going out,trying my best to socialise more with people that weren't just course mates. I registered into a driving school and that was how I started passing time,waiting for school to resume. I was in my room five days later when my phone rang. It was an unsaved number. I picked it and listened. Hillary: Bae. I hissed. I've refused picking his calls and now,he's calling with different numbers. Hillary: Bae,I'm sorry. Please forgive me. I wronged you,yes I really wronged you but please,for the sake of all we've shared,forgive me. Me: Is that all? He paused for a while so I continued. Me: For goodness sake,why my friend? Do you know Gospel is better than you? To think I trusted you and loved you with all my life? Jeez I can't believe I'm in this now. Hillary: C'mon bae,I'll do anything to make it right. Anything. Me: Fine. Alright. Anything right? Hillary: Yes. Anything. Me: Good. Kill yourself. I hung up and went back to my magazine. Nobody was going to kill me in this life. If I had survived at the Okoye's house,I'll survive anything. I was flipping through the pages of the magazine,muttering to myself when Gospel came in. Gospel: Hey. I looked up. He was looking calm and a bit happy so I relaxed. Me: Hi. He sat down beside me and rubbed his palm Gospel: You free to talk? Me: Yup. So long as its not those your normal bickering. He chuckled and oh yea,I was surprised. Gospel: I wanna apologise. Sincerely,I've being a pain in the a$$ and I'm sorry. I shouldn't have gone to certain extents but I dunno what happened to me. I'm not that kinda person. So I just wanna ask for your forgiveness. STUNNED is indeed a very big understatement to the way I felt at that moment. I opened my mouth to say something but nothing came out. He noticed my reaction and plastered a smile. Gospel; I knew that's how you were going to take it. I'm deeply sorry for everything. It's wrong that we're living in the same house yet we don't talk. I understand that we can't be together again but at least,bring me to heart just like you do with Ken and Kammy. Me: So you're jealous. Gospel: Of course. You run to them for explanations,you laugh and play with them and I'm the outcast. Its somehow dear. Me: And thus is not a plan to get something from me? Gospel: Oh please. I'm not that kinda person okay? I promise never to hurt you with my words or actions anymore. Hmmm. Today can't get any better. Me: Okay. We're good but under one condition. He rolled his eyes and clapped his palm. Gospel: Name it. Me; You'll make up for the lost times. You're taking me shopping and getting me another phone. We'll go out together till the vacation is over and that's next two weeks. Movies,lunch,dinner,window shopping,everything. Gospel: Hmmm. Why not make me your husband? It will be better that way Me: Your head. In or out? Gospel: Can I ever be out? Me: Good for you. We'll start tomorrow and better don't use this as a reason to try any rubbish with me cause I'll ply out your manhood. Gospel: Oops. That's scary. But I promise,I won't misuse my new opportunity. Me: Okay. Maybe I should just call Kamsi and tell her the good news. Gospel: She knows already. Me: Oh. So you had it all planned out? Gospel: Kinda. Me: Okay. Its alright. Gospel: And,the doctor called me this morning. Me: What doctor? Gospel: From comforter of the afflicted. I sat up immediately, my curiosity switch(like in smartestpopqueen s literature) active immediately. Me: What did he say? Gospel: Its good news actually. With the sperm samples collected from your body that day,those criminals has being caught. Me: What? How? After a year? But the police said they couldn't do anything about it since there was no evidence. Gospel: Yes,but thanks to the equipments that were shipped into the country from the US,the police and the doctor used your case to check if the instruments work and just like magic,it did. Me: Have they being arrested? Gospel: Just one of them. The other is late. But one thing is that,he's refused to speak up. Me: Hmmm. I thank God. I don't even want to see him. Gospel: If its necessary,you'll have to see him Me: Thank you. Till I'm called then 22 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Alone.. by Alighoda2(m): 4:23pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
nice one dear,keep it coming am enjoying every bit of this story |
Re: Alone.. by Nobody: 4:26pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
i hope gospel is not pretending sha. Nice work @ op. |
Re: Alone.. by Dinabella: 4:34pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
At the beginning this story looked like one of those nollywood movies but now, it's really making sense. For one, you are very timely in posting and that's what makes your story captivating. Nice story I must say... # first time to comment # # Ghost mode deactivated # |
Re: Alone.. by InestimableJoy(f): 4:46pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Interesting....... More Ink to your Pen Pamela...... |
Re: Alone.. by Mykel4God(m): 4:48pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I knew it I was about to say that I'm I the only one having this feeling that Gospel and Amanda should be together again Anyway, let's just fold arms and observe as events unfold |
Re: Alone.. by Mykel4God(m): 4:48pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I knew it I was about to say that I'm I the only one having this feeling that Gospel and Amanda should be together again? Anyway, let's just fold arms and observe as events unfold 2 Likes |
Re: Alone.. by callmeomotee33(f): 4:57pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Interesting More wisdom, knowledge and understanding pameIB Keep it up dear |
Re: Alone.. by remiseyi(m): 4:58pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Mykel4God:I've been rooting for them both anyway, in silence though. |
Re: Alone.. by desire222(f): 5:08pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
Well, since Rose is no longer in the picture, I will like Amanda and Ken to be together. 1 Like |
Re: Alone.. by PamelB(f): 5:17pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I was still in bed when I heard a honk outside. My alarm rang about three hours ago,yet,I was still in bed,tossing and hissing. I came out from my room and walked to the balcony to see who came in but surprisingly,there was a knock at the gate. Maybe it was a cab. The gateman opened the gate and Rose catwalked into the house. My blood started boiling and I knew she would get another dose from me before leaving the house. She didn't look up. She just walked past the other houses and walked in to Ken's apartment. This girl just dey find trouble. She go hear nwii today. I went back to my room and brushed up,took my bath and wore my usual bum pant and singlet,making sure to wear a tight fitting bra just in case another beating tournament was going to happen. I stepped out just as Gospel was about driving out. He honked for me and I went to say hi. Me: Morning. Gospel: Beautiful morning my dear. How was your night? Me: Grateful for life. Gospel: Thank God. I wanna go sort some things out in the office. I'll come back before lunch. Me: Yes please,we won't eat out. I'll cook for us. Gospel: Interesting. Can't wait. Me: Okay. See you then Gospel: Take care. He drove out and I smiled. Today is Monday and since Thursday,Gospel had done more than enough. He bought me a Tecno w4. Not like I needed it since I still had my BB passport,but I loved it all the same,along with the clothes,handbags,jewelries and a make up kit. He never went beyond his limit. Eh! Still doesn't mean I'm taking him back. I remembered my mission and turned,ready to make someone shiver. I stepped into Ken's apartment and there they were,she had her head on his laps and they were both laughing at something I didn't get. WOMEN. I cleared my throat and walked in further to the sitting room. An innocent Rose would remain in her position and yab me for trying to disturb them but today,she sprang up immediately and sat properly. Ken: Hey sis. Sit down. Me: Of course I won't stand. This was the first time I'm in the house since the other incident. Ken and I haven't spoken to each other except on Facebook where he'll comment my pictures and I'll reply. Surprisingly,he didn't look like anything was between us. He laughed at my dry joke and watched me sit. Me: Rosey,you didn't tell me you were coming. I wonder where our relationship is heading this days. Rose: I....uhm...I....I wanted to...I tried... Ken: What's that? When did it start? I smiled. Me: You don't know Rose always gets tensed whenever she's caught in the act. Rose gave me a pleading look but I wasn't stopping. Ken: What act? What? Me: Romance. Weren't you two getting all intimate before I walked in? Ken: Silly girl. Thought you were talking of something else. Me: Like? Ken: Let's forget it. Me: I didn't come down for breakfast. What do you have? Ken: Provisions. Make yourself comfortable with them. Me: Thanks. I stood up and walked to the dinning,leaving Rose with a wicked glance. I made a mixture of cornflakes and golden morn with a good quantity of milk and groundnuts. I sat down to enjoy my meal,staying as close as possible to hear whatever Rose would say and just two spoons into my big bowl,it happened. Rose: She should excuse us. She spoke more in a whisper but I heard right. I dumped my plate and went straight to her. Me: Hello? What did you just say? Ken: Amy calm down. Are you girls having a feud or something? Me: Bros wait. I want to be sure I heard clearly. I squatted just in front of Rose and cupped her chin with my hand. Me: Babe abeg repeat. Rose: See,I didn't mean it as an insult,don't misunderstand me. I just wanted to have a private discussion with him. Me: Private. Indeed. I stood up and dragged her up as well. Ken followed suit. Ken: Amanda you're embarrassing my girlfriend. If you two have issues,you can sort it out in a much better way than this This angered me even more. Me: Ask her. When she was sleeping with Lary,did it occur to her that he was my boyfriend? Did it occur to her that you were her boyfriend? And because I kept quiet,she's asking that I excuse you both. For what? Ken: What did you just say? Me: You heard right. Ken walked closer to Rose who was now shedding tears. Ken: Tell me,is it true? His voice was calm and loving but the veins appearing in his neck and arm was cleat evidence of his anger. Ken; Rose? Instead of answering,she picked her handbag and ran out of the house. Ken turned to me. Ken: How did you know? Me: I saw them. I'm sorry but... Ken: And why didn't you tell me? Me: I was ashamed. I had no face to tell you that Hillary has repeated what Gospel did. I couldn't. Ken: And you let me still be with her? Just to hide your sorrow? Me: I'm sorry Ken. I didn't mean to keep it a secret for long. And I thought she will tell you when you ask about the wounds she got. Ken: Oh! You did that? I nodded. Ken: She told me she was in an accident. I chuckled and stopped immediately. Me: I'm.... Ken: That Hillary needs to be taught a lesson for doing what he did. Look at you,nursing another heart break. Come here. And I went into his arms and he held me tight,promising not to let anyone hurt me again. So I let myself cry,to wash away my sorrows and open my heart for a new life..... 20 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Alone.. by Vidamia(m): 5:18pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
this story is really captivating......It make me want more....Ride on babe |
Re: Alone.. by Vidamia(m): 5:27pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
you are really making your idle time for us .....thanks for that.
i hope we no go be fasting for update by next week sha |
Re: Alone.. by callmeomotee33(f): 5:34pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
I dey feel you pameIB ... |
Re: Alone.. by princedami: 5:35pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
SPDAZZY: Maybe.. But dating one brother then the other??!! Arghh.. How does that sound? |
Re: Alone.. by callmeomotee33(f): 5:38pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
That is true oooo, pls PameIB wah do u av to say to this Vidamia: 1 Like |
Re: Alone.. by Nobody: 5:47pm On Aug 19, 2016 |
am pretty sure the next events will focus on ken and his new gf. |
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