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Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by jibs4lv(m): 4:24pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
Boyo fire on pls,I can't just wait to knw how d tin be for Obaagun ,part of my local government area council. 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 4:50pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
aprilwise:lolz.ma people |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by fahren(m): 5:58pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
You are spoiling these whole thing i hope you know, the suspense thing is irritating some of us 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 6:05pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
fahren:hmmm,am sorry sir,i will stop it, dont worry bro,just one or two episodes morr to conclude the story |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by remiseyi(m): 6:42pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
fahren: so where is the art when suspense isn't considered?? the best we can do is to encourage the writer to update consistently .... 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Olaide59(f): 7:06pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
please continue 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by abdulyaro66(m): 7:42pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
Boyo me don show ooo 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by DaStunz(m): 7:45pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
fahren:Ogbeni speak 4 ur self alone, not US. U think say 2 write dey easy? 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by jibs4lv(m): 9:13pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
[quote author=fahren post=48768884]You are spoiling these whole thing i hope you know, the suspense thing is irritating some of us[/quote I laugh u in Spanish,v u ever write a story before? I guess u dnt cox if u do,u ll knw dat writing story is nt a beans.Why dnt u encourage d dude on his work,pahaps a suspence story is an interesting story So get use to it Bro. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Nmaglit: 10:15pm On Aug 24, 2016 |
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Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 7:45am On Aug 25, 2016 |
good morning guys, As some of you know me ,i don't really like making my stories too long(you will notice that in the title) because i believe that at some point the reader will lose interest in the story, so i will be rounding up the story with the next two to three updates hopefully ,thank you for your understanding. pls expect a new update this evening because have got Cds to attend this morning . still thanking you all for following, God bless ya al |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by DaStunz(m): 7:49am On Aug 25, 2016 |
boyo123:datz kul. Which state u dey serve? 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 8:22am On Aug 25, 2016 |
DaStunz:na ondo state o |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by DaStunz(m): 10:33am On Aug 25, 2016 |
boyo123:Confirm..! Am batch B currently serving in Osun. All d same. Weldone 4 ur work. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 3:43pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
Olaide59:tanks dear |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 3:57pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
DaStunz:same here bro,batch B, cant wait for POP |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by detutu1: 4:07pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
boyo123: @boyo123 How are you doing? Have you registered as a writer on penpee.com yet? Please do so. Thank you. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by DaStunz(m): 7:50pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
boyo123:Yeah..! Bro. Oluwa is Invovled. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Opeoluwa99(f): 10:26pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
Since uncle boyo123 is viewing I guess he's abt to drop the bomb Lemme wait 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 10:50pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
detutu1: i have been trying to register but i dont know what is happening, i entered my details into the spaces provided but cant find where to submit it,so that it could be registered Opeoluwa99:lolz.i was sooo busy today , but i was able to write a small part let me.drop it tonight,i was thinking that i should probably make it longer by tomorrow morning 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 11:06pm On Aug 25, 2016 |
Episode 29 Dayo looked at his father and said " wait,was she a twin?" He asked in a confused tone Funmi had no idea of what they were talking about ,she didn't know his motive behind that question so she answered innocently "Yeah ,she was a twin,my mum was kehinde Rosalyn while her twin sister is the person dad his talking about,although she's late now" Dayo couldnt hide his joy as he shouted "Thank you God!," he shifted his gaze from funmi to his father then continued " but dad ,how come you didnt know that" His father collapsed into his chair " i am honestly speechless ,how come i didnt remember that,.......although she told me she was a twin but i never got to meet her twin sister because she was in lagos with her aunty while all that happened,......you see dayo,lets just thank God that its not what we were thinking" Funmi was wondering what that meant ,she also wondered why dayo shouted thank God ealier,she was curious to know what he meant by that so she leaned over towards him and whispered to his ear "What is going on?, does your dad have anyting with my family?" Dayo didnt know the answer to give ,he didnt know if he was to say that there isnt or there is,he grabbed her hand swizzed it and said to her "Funmi i dont know how to say this i swear" Funmi was scared as her voice was visibly shaking"what is it dayo,please tell me" Dayo looked at his father" dad i cant say it please i dont have the nerve to" Dayo's father looked at funmi ,took a deep breath and said" mary is dayo's mother" 6 Likes 1 Share |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Luckymay(f): 7:06am On Aug 26, 2016 |
Nah wa o . it's still a problem. Nigeria don't marry cousins talk more of one this close. Anyways let's see how dayo gets himself out of this mess. Btw boyo seems to be in love with the name "Dayo" 1 Like 1 Share |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Babprosper20(m): 7:22am On Aug 26, 2016 |
Boyo oh! Come and continue na 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Nmaglit: 9:44am On Aug 26, 2016 |
Bring it on bring it on I am ready we r ready in p square voice Boyo, boyo u r d BOSS 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 12:20pm On Aug 26, 2016 |
Luckymay:lolz,its true because its short and easier to type when writing, Babprosper20: Nmaglit:my people make una no vex i dey come abeg |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by FlordFlorez(m): 3:45pm On Aug 26, 2016 |
Cousins dy marry na. E no mean. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by rachealfst(f): 7:33pm On Aug 26, 2016 |
Nice story, thanks for sharing. God bless you 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by boyo123(m): 6:34am On Aug 27, 2016 |
Nmaglit this is the hardest episode for me,coming up with funm's reaction was not easy Episode 30 Funmi was shocked as she said "You mean ,aunty taiwo is dayo's mum, haaa am finished!" She shouted Dayo stood up from his chair,moved closer to her and tried to console her as She started crying,he was about to touch her when she shoved his hand away ,she stood up from the chair and ran for the door,immediately dayo ran after her , In few minutes they were both Out at the secretary post, she walked as fast as she could but dayo caught up with her,he grabbed her hand ,drew her back as she quickly fell into his open hands,he embraced her,and the stains of her tears covered his cloth, "Its ok baby,please calm down" dayo said But funmi wouldn't listen as she kept on crying loudly, the secretary hurriedly stood up from her chair to catch up with them,then she asked "What is the problem" Dayo was infuriated ,he took a stern look at the secretary and asked "Who called you here?" Highly embarrassed now the secretary turned around and made back for her chair, Funmi with tears in her eyes was struggling with dayo, " let me go,please let me go"she said in a shaky voice "Where are you going" dayo replied "Let me go please," she busted into another round of tears "Ok darling,but where do you want to go now" "Let me go home". Dayo took her to the car park ,he helped her into the car and drove,all through the drive home,she said nothing,it was obvious that she was lost in her own thought as she fixed her eyes on the road,she was practically looking sideways, because she didn't want to look at him. They got home about 30minutes later,funmi rushed out of the car,she didn't wait for him to park the car well when she ran into her house,dayo could not leave his car there, it would cause traffic along that road, or even an accident so he took his time to park well before making his way to the entrance of the house, But unfortunately for him,on getting to her door,he found out that it was locked,funmi had gone in and she bolted the door at the back " funmi come on don't do this now,come and open this door please" dayo called out to her. He thought funmi wasn't going to reply but surprisingly she said "No i cant.......,my life is ruined dayo....i just made the mistake my mum always prayed about" 4 Likes 2 Shares |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by YINKS89(m): 6:44am On Aug 27, 2016 |
wats wrng wif dis gurl nw ehn? 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by Nmaglit: 8:52am On Aug 27, 2016 |
And u did a perfect job here am so proud of YOU boyo123: 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by FlordFlorez(m): 9:54am On Aug 27, 2016 |
I jst hope she won't av a dirty thought of flushing do pregnancy. 1 Like |
Re: Fate And Fortune(a Short Story) by rachealfst(f): 11:14am On Aug 27, 2016 |
Eh ya,I really feel for her o, I know it's hard on dayo too. Well done and thanks for the update 1 Like 1 Share |
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