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THE FISHERMAN'S Tale(love Finds Broken) / Bottle Warriors(beer Parlour Night Tale)story By Youngzubi / BROKEN HEDGE By Toyin Taiwo (2) (3) (4)

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Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 12:47pm On Dec 16, 2016
tens4real:
even after toiling with adizas emotion using her to consul himself for lack of confidence to confront Bina knowing fully well dat he has no feelings for her... That is selfishness

Well... we all act selfishly sometimes...

Although, what he did was wrong... he actually thought he could forget Bina, date Adiza and move on.

But, in matters of the heart, things can get complicated.
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 12:50pm On Dec 16, 2016
CHAPTER EIGHT

He returned to the house and found Bina wide awake, seated on the bed and crying. He hurried to her side and pulled her close in a warm embrace.

“Bina darling, it is going to be all right.”

Lolly walked into the room and joined them on the bed. She felt sad that the girl was crying again. “I have asked the cook to prepare something for her to eat.”

Tjay released Bina and faced the elderly woman, “Okay.”

“Granny is something wrong with me?” Bina met her pale gaze.

“Heavens no!” Lolly took her by the hand.

“I think I am cursed or something,” tears streamed down her sad face.

Lolly shook her head, “No… no child.”

“Then what is wrong with me? Why do I keep hurting people? Why do I keep losing the people that I love? Why am I like this?” she looked around her, “Take my bedroom for example, why do I live like a pig?”

Tjay sighed heavily, he felt tongue-tied.

A tear rolled down the face of the aging woman. Her lips trembled in anxiety.

“Why can’t I keep a job for more than six months? Why do I get angry easily? Why do I behave like a street tout at times? Why?!” her voice echoed through the walls.

“Ibinabo,” he tried to caution her. He didn’t like the way she was talking to her grandmother.

“Stay out of this!” she pointed a warning finger at him.

Tjay pressed his lips together, in an attempt to seal the words threatening to spill out of him.

Lolly began to weep.

“Granny… what have you been hiding from me?” Bina confronted her.

Their gazes locked. Bina wasn’t moved by her tears. She had a nagging feeling that her predicament was more than the eyes could see.

Lolly glanced at Tjay, then back at her.

“You can speak in front of him. He is …” Bina looked at him, “He means more to me than…” she directed her gaze back to her grandmother,

“He is closer to me than my own blood.”

Lolly nodded with understanding. She wiped her wet face with the back of her hand, “Your parents…” she breathed out long and loud.

Bina and Tjay stared at her with concentrated attention.

“Your parents dropped you off at my place when you were just five years old and chased after money, power and fame.”

Bina swallowed hard and prepared herself mentally for the truth. She unconsciously reached out for Tjay’s hand and held it tight. He threw a quick glance at her.

“As you grew up, I begged them to take you back. They gave one excuse or the other. They were always travelling and they complained that they couldn’t drag you along. They just… they sent money regularly for your upkeep...” she stared at nothing in particular.

Bina’s brows knitted in a frown. Did her parents love her at all? Why did they abandon her? She remembered how she used to long for their visits, but, they never came. They just sent her regular gifts and toys and nothing more. She used to envy children who were living with their parents. Her grandma’s love and care helped to lessen the pain and it faded away over the years.

“They hurt a lot of people on their road to success, the richer they got, the worse they became. When you completed your Secondary School education, I convinced them to take you along, wherever they go, you go. After all, you are their only child,” Lolly took a deep breath.

Tjay placed a hand around her shoulder. He couldn’t imagine living without his parents.

“They had a plane crash en route Nigeria from Europe.”

She nodded with understanding. She could still remember the day her grandmother told her that she would be living with her parents after she completed her WAEC examination. She had been so happy. She told all her friends, neighbours and whoever cared to listen, but, the next news she heard was that her parents’ corpses were been flown into the country. She had been devastated and her grandmother had been inconsolable.

“The people your parents hurt while chasing money wanted their pound of flesh. Some of them traced this house and they… they said a lot of hateful things.”

Her hand flew to her mouth, “I am cursed,” Bina whispered, “I knew it, I knew it! I knew I wasn’t normal,” she began to cry again.

“Hey… come on,” Tjay tried to comfort her.

“You are not cursed,” Lolly tried to assure her, “God said in his word that the curse causeless shall not stand.”

“God,” she eyed the elderly woman and shook her head. She wasn’t really been close to God, although she had been brought up in the way of the Lord. She rarely went to church and had stopped reading the bible a long time ago. Will God listen to her now that she was in trouble?

Tjay squeezed her hand, “She is right. Regardless of what your parents might have done, as long as you are under the shadow of the Almighty God, no weapon fashioned against you shall prosper.”

She held his assuring stare.

“If you seek God and draw close to him, he will draw close to you and turn your life around,” his words encouraged her.

She dropped her gaze. It was possible that God could save, deliver and turn her into a new leaf. She was tired of the way things kept spiraling downwards in her life. It was time she surrendered every area of her life to her maker and watch him settle all that concerned her.

“Please pray with me,” Bina sniffled and looked from one to the other.

They nodded in agreement, held hands, bowed their heads and said a word of prayer in faith.

xxxxxx

He got down from the car and headed into the two storey building. He heard someone calling his name and he turned around. His brows creased in a frown when he saw her walking towards him. They have not spoken since the incident in his parent’s place. What does she want now?

“What are you doing here?” Eru looked her up and down.

“Please… please we need to talk,” her pleading stare remained on his emotionless face.

He snorted, “I have got nothing to say to you,” he started to walk away.

She hurried after him, “Please…”

He glanced at her, “Go home Bina. It is over between us,” he snapped.

“I can fix everything, just give me a chance,” she begged him.

He halted and faced her, “Fix what?”

“Us…”

“Us?” he stared back at her like she had lost her mind.

“We… we… we can start over. I am working on myself. I am changing,” she assured him.

He chuckled, “Good luck with that,” he unlocked the door to his flat, “You cannot fix this,” he shook his head, “This… we…” he pointed at her, then himself, “We are beyond fixing,” he walked in and slammed the door in her face.

Her eyes became blurred with hot stinging tears. She tried to swallow spittle, but, felt a hard lump in her throat. It was hard to believe that it was completely over between them. She thought he might be willing to give her a second chance. Now, she knew better. She had lost him forever.

xxxxxx

Tjay returned from work and met Adiza and her sister moving big bags into the boot of a taxi. Were they travelling? Was that why he didn’t see her at work that day? She had been avoiding him for the past two weeks, both at home and at work. He didn’t blame her. He had made a mess of things. He summed up the courage and walked up to her.

“Good evening,” he greeted both of them.

Adiza and her sister hissed and ignored him.

“Can I speak with you for a moment?” he approached Adiza.

“I am busy,” she eyed him and returned her attention to the bag she was trying to zip up.

“Adiza please.”

“Why don’t you leave me alone?!” she screamed at him. Her outburst caught him unawares.

“I am so sorry… I… I…” he stammered, the fury in her eyes made him speechless.

Adiza and her sister lifted a bag and pushed it into the pile in the boot. The driver closed it and got into the car. She hugged her sister and got into the back seat of the car.

“Where is she going?” he turned to her sister.

Adiza’s sister hissed and returned to her flat. Tjay watched the taxi leave and felt numbed all of a sudden. It dawned on him that his ex-girlfriend had just moved out.

xxxxxx

Bina lay naked in her room and wept. She cried out to God, her maker, her savior and her first love. She asked him to cleanse her from every curse and deliver her from her parents’ enemies. She asked God to turn her life around, help her change her attitude and relate with everyone in love, regardless of what they say or do to her. She re-dedicated her life to Jesus, prayed all through the night and fell asleep at mid-night.

xxxxxx

He got a call from Bina’s grandmother that morning. The woman was scared for her grandchild who had locked herself up in her room since the other night and had refused to open the door. He showered, got dressed and hurried to their place. He met Lolly standing outside Bina’s room.

“I got worried when she didn’t take her dinner last night. It is almost noon, I have knocked and knocked. No response. I just hope that… that she hasn’t done anything crazy,” the scared look in her eyes alarmed him.

“Bina!” he started to knock at the door, “Bina, are you in there?” his heart thundered against his chest.

“I have been looking for the spare key to her room since last night. I can’t remember specifically where I kept it.”

“Keep looking for it, I will keep knocking and hopefully get her attention.”

She nodded and hurried away.

“Bina, Bina!” he prayed within, hoping that she was all right.

xxxxxx

She opened her eyes and found herself on the cold floor. She must have fallen asleep while praying. She lifted herself up and staggered a bit. She heard the knocks on the door and wondered who it was. She looked around for something to cover her body. Her eyes settled on a wrapper lying on the bed. She picked it up and tied it around her curvaceous frame. She dragged her feet towards the door and unlocked it. She opened it and met her grandmother and childhood friend at the doorway.

“What?” her puzzled gaze observed them. They looked like frightened kittens.

Lolly pushed her way into the room and looked around her. The usual mess greeted her. Nothing seemed amiss. She sighed with relief.

Tjay followed. His eyes darted left, right, here and there. Nothing seemed unusual. He let out a loud breath.

“What is it?” her sleepy eyes scanned them. Why were they looking around her room as if they were searching for something?

“Why did you lock yourself up since last night?” her grandmother accused her.

It dawned on her that her grandma might have been worried about her, “I was… I needed to sort out some things with God,” she walked towards the bed and sat down at the edge.

“Why didn’t you respond when you heard me knocking last night?” Lolly eyed her.

“I am sorry. I didn’t hear you,” Bina met her worried stare.

She breathed out in relief, “I will tell Ekaette to bring you something to eat,” she turned around and strode out of the room. She thanked God
that her grandchild was okay.

Bina looked up at him, “Isn’t it too early to be paying visits?”

“Your grandma called me,” he eyed her.

“Your girlfriend will soon start to query you,” she looked him up and down. She didn’t want to be accused of monopolizing anyone’s man.

He sat beside her, “We broke up.”

“Waoh!” she stared back at him in shock, “Eru left me, Adiza left you. Now we are so single again.”

He got up immediately, “I have to go. I will check up on you later.”

“Why are you leaving? Are you doing anything at home?” she wished he would stay with her.

He shook his head. She pulled him by the hand and made him to sit back on the bed.

“Don’t go,” she cooed and wrapped her arms around him, “Please stay with me,” she needed her friend now more than ever.

The heat of her closeness penetrated into every cell in his body, making him tremble with emotion, “Let go…” his husky voice got her attention.

She released him and met his intense stare. It dawned on her that she had probably turned him on. Was he attracted to her? She knew he cared a lot about her and no matter what she said or did; he stood by her like a pillar of strength and encouragement. Was there any chance that he had grown in love with her over the years? She had grown fond of him and had nursed a crush on him when they first met fifteen years ago. She thought he felt the same way, but, he never asked her out. She concluded that he saw her like a sister and nothing more. What if he had fallen in love with her? Her heart missed a beat. If he had, why did he remain silent? Why didn’t he ask her out? What was she even thinking? She wasn’t even sure if he had feelings for her? She tried to clear her thoughts and looked away.

The housekeeper walked in carrying a tray of food. Ekaette greeted them and set the tray on the bed.

Tjay got up and headed out in a hurry, “I will see you later.”

She watched him leave and wondered if her line of thoughts were accurate.

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Re: Broken Bottle by pweetychyka(f): 12:57pm On Dec 16, 2016
BABZIENE:

Oh! You think that shewrites tjay was being nice?

Yea and considerate too....regardless of how bina treated him embarassed embarassed
Re: Broken Bottle by BABZIENE(m): 1:09pm On Dec 16, 2016
pweetychyka:


Yea and considerate too....regardless of how bina treated him embarassed embarassed
Don't you think Bina thinks of him as option B.like if it doesn't work out with her first option she can resort to him anytime knowing fully well that the ode will always wait for her to test run as many relationship as possible. Just like the ways of most ladies.
Re: Broken Bottle by pweetychyka(f): 1:47pm On Dec 16, 2016
BABZIENE:

Don't you think Bina thinks of him as option B.like if it doesn't work out with her first option she can resort to him anytime knowing fully well that the ode will always wait for her to test run as many relationship as possible. Just like the ways of most ladies.

In one way YES cheesy and in another NO angry!

Buh she messed up sha embarassed embarassed embarassed embarassed!

I wish Adiza can come back home to Tjay while Bina gets over herself and become a better woman so as to attract a better man to herself!

Thanks for the update ma'am @shewrites!
Hope ur family is doing great today...
Re: Broken Bottle by BABZIENE(m): 3:02pm On Dec 16, 2016
pweetychyka:


In one way YES cheesy and in another NO angry!

Buh she messed up sha embarassed embarassed embarassed embarassed!

I wish Adiza can come back home to Tjay while Bina gets over herself and become a better woman so as to attract a better man to herself!

Happy wishing .....but I sha know say that tjay must not marry that Sabrina girl

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Re: Broken Bottle by tens4real(m): 4:55pm On Dec 16, 2016
SheWrites:


Well... we all act selfishly sometimes...

Although, what he did was wrong... he actually thought he could forget Bina, date Adiza and move on.

But, in matters of the heart, things can get complicated.
matters of the heart... Am very guilty as well... Lord give me the confidence to tell my own bina

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Re: Broken Bottle by Chumzypinky(f): 5:39pm On Dec 16, 2016
SheWrites:


Yes love *winks* God blessed me with 2 lovely boys who are the combination of superman, batman plus captain america *smh* they are just 4 and 3yrs but the kind of activities they dive into, you will think a battalion lived with me.
Loll ma'am, i envy you. I just have three girls bt dey arent very stubborn, very quiet people. I've always wanted kids who would disturb me small. Loll

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Re: Broken Bottle by Chumzypinky(f): 5:40pm On Dec 16, 2016
SheWrites:


Yes love *winks* God blessed me with 2 lovely boys who are the combination of superman, batman plus captain america *smh* they are just 4 and 3yrs but the kind of activities they dive into, you will think a battalion lived with me.

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Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 5:54pm On Dec 16, 2016
Chumzypinky:

Loll ma'am, i envy you. I just have three girls bt dey arent very stubborn, very quiet people. I've always wanted kids who would disturb me small. Loll

Wow! Wow! Wow! 3 pretty girls. That's so adorable.
Re: Broken Bottle by Nmaglit: 5:54pm On Dec 16, 2016
Nice one
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 5:56pm On Dec 16, 2016
tens4real:
matters of the heart... Am very guilty as well... Lord give me the confidence to tell my own bina

Amen ooo!

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Re: Broken Bottle by Elkay3: 10:52pm On Dec 16, 2016
SheWrites:
@Elkay3... I write whenever they are asleep or watching cartoons.

Sometimes, I have to beg them in order to be able to type on the laptop.

Most times, I sneak to a quiet corner and write. But, once I am caught, I have to bail myself out by giving them pencils, biros and paper... Phew!

I have more time to write when they are in school, but, it's holiday season lol...

Why am I feeling like by your side there are two little laureates to replace Soyinka? I hope they have enough dosage of books?
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 10:59pm On Dec 16, 2016
Elkay3:


Why am I feeling like by your side there are two little laureates to replace Soyinka? I hope they have enough dosage of books?

Amen to that!

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Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 10:08am On Dec 17, 2016
Baddchristy:

Love can make one do stupid things and make some mumuish decision
The right thing to do is to just zero one's mind and harden one's heart
Name sake how come you are bad? I thought all 'Christy' are good girls *confused* .

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Re: Broken Bottle by tens4real(m): 10:21am On Dec 17, 2016
crislyn:

Name sake how come you are bad? I thought all 'Christy' are good girls *confused* .
Hmmm indeed all Christy are good
Don't let me start telling you about my ex.... Oh God!
Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 10:28am On Dec 17, 2016
tens4real:
Hmmm indeed all Christy are good
Don't let me start telling you about my ex.... Oh God!
Haba now...maybe she's Christine not Christiana hahahahaha. Oya tell me what she did let's know which is her name.
Re: Broken Bottle by queenitee(f): 10:56am On Dec 17, 2016
Hmmm
Re: Broken Bottle by Nobody: 11:26am On Dec 17, 2016
crislyn:

Name sake how come you are bad? I thought all 'Christy' are good girls *confused* .
I'm a good girl ma
I created this account when I was still a teenager and felt been bad is being cool,so I asked my little brother and we both came up with the mumu name, wish I can change it but I can't except if I create a new account
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 12:22pm On Dec 17, 2016
Baddchristy:

I'm a good girl ma
I created this account when I was still a teenager and felt been bad is being cool,so I asked my little brother and we both came up with the mumu name, wish I can change it but I can't except if I create a new account

Ehya... Kpele... Nndo... Tutey.

@all... CHAPTER FINALE loading...
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 12:27pm On Dec 17, 2016
Wish I can extend the story...

It's being quite a journey.

Thanks for sharing these beautiful moments with me.

The final chapter of Broken Bottle will be uploaded today... before lunch time is over *winks*

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Re: Broken Bottle by Shakyroh320(f): 12:34pm On Dec 17, 2016
The Lord is ur strenght
Re: Broken Bottle by Nwiboko26(f): 12:53pm On Dec 17, 2016
Yesss.datz y u r d boo
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 1:28pm On Dec 17, 2016
Chapter 9

This last chapter can be viewed on https://www.bambooks.io or get your own copy on www.okadabooks.com/user/serahiyare

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Re: Broken Bottle by tens4real(m): 2:19pm On Dec 17, 2016
crislyn:

Haba now...maybe she's Christine not Christiana hahahahaha. Oya tell me what she did let's know which is her name.
Well sweet heart... Her name is CHRISTIANA.... What she did
Abused my love and my trust by sleeping with a dude she had a history with, then trying to use the excuse that he came onto her and she just didn't know how to say no.

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Re: Broken Bottle by Elkay3: 2:45pm On Dec 17, 2016
Lemme jejely look for my lost friend some 15 years back (minus 15 how much of me is left?) and then profess my love to her!!!
I mean it's super lovely. You're a genius indeed!

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Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 2:54pm On Dec 17, 2016
Elkay3:
Lemme jejely look for my lost friend some 15 years back (minus 15 how much of me is left?) and then profess my love to her!!!
I mean it's super lovely. You're a genius indeed!

*hugs*

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Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 3:12pm On Dec 17, 2016
Nwiboko26:
Yesss.datz y u r d boo
Lol... *hugs*
Re: Broken Bottle by SheWrites(f): 3:18pm On Dec 17, 2016
Shakyroh320:
The Lord is ur strenght
Amen! Thanks sweerie *hugs*
Re: Broken Bottle by Shakyroh320(f): 3:22pm On Dec 17, 2016
thats why i like this gal ooo,smart and wise,tankx dear,grace to grace is ur real name
Re: Broken Bottle by Nmaglit: 4:22pm On Dec 17, 2016
I love this story soo much that I wish it would nt end.nice work shewrites
Re: Broken Bottle by crislyn(f): 4:53pm On Dec 17, 2016
tens4real:
Well sweet heart... Her name is CHRISTIANA.... What she did
Abused my love and my trust by sleeping with a dude she had a history with, then trying to use the excuse that he came onto her and she just didn't know how to say no.
My Heavenly Father! I'm so sorry dear. But I'm a good Christiana o and I was born December. *december born are loyal* *winks* Which month is she?

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