crislyn:

Yeahhhhhh we've got things in common. I grew up in Lagos too, schooled in your state and I also live in Abuja . I wee come and visit you.

Yipee! Let's hang out.

Princelegacylemoha:
For me She is the Best Is never easy to write stories and articles short But she Does She writes so good She creates realistic stories She keeps it coming perpetual You Good You Good Am not a lover of fictions But you made me love reading Thanks

Am touched, am honoured *holy-hug*

Nice story ma'am....very comprehensive and many lessons learnt.

GOD richly bless u with more wisdom and knowledge!

BTW, I read through ur other story "RAZOR TONGUE"... And I really loved the storyline buh there is something I don't understand about Martha n her neice{sheila}.. What led to the hatred n y sheila was very mean !
Really love her guts tho

pweetychyka:
Nice story ma'am....very comprehensive and many lessons learnt.

GOD richly bless u with more wisdom and knowledge!

BTW, I read through ur other story "RAZOR TONGUE"... And I really loved the storyline buh there is something I don't understand about Martha n her neice{sheila}.. What led to the hatred n y sheila was very mean !
Really love her guts tho

Sheila is an only child who is foul mouthed, doesn't like being cheated, ready to state her opinions, and her aunt, Martha felt she was spoilt and too brazen for her liking.

Their constant clashes led to offences which germinated into bitterness.

SheWrites:


Sheila is an only child who is foul mouthed, doesn't like being cheated, ready to state her opinions, and her aunt, Martha felt she was spoilt and too brazen for her liking.

Their constant clashes led to offences which germinated into bitterness.

Oh right...She wasn't a spoilt brat as the other family painted her then....
I so much love her guts

lovely lovey writeup, i love it, i had to come online n comment. pls will b xpecting more stories frm u, av read torn also, reading hrtstrngs now. kip up d good wrk. more ink to ur pen.

Lady, you are good... I must complement you on this fine effort... I look forward to more of your stories! More grace and regards to your family..

Megilicious:
lovely lovey writeup, i love it, i had to come online n comment. pls will b xpecting more stories frm u, av read torn also, reading hrtstrngs now. kip up d good wrk. more ink to ur pen.

Thaaannkss *hugs*

MightyFortress:
Lady, you are good... I must complement you on this fine effort... I look forward to more of your stories! More grace and regards to your family..

Amen. Thank you so much *winks*

SheWrites:


Yipee! Let's hang out.

Wow I'd totally love that....I'm in my village right now, when I get back next week then. which part of Abuja are you?

tens4real:
OK... Please don't be like her... She is really a good girl and I don't like good girls.. Winks

Ehn! OK mo ti gbo.

This is indeed one of the best stories I have seen in 2016. You know what I think? Let's make it a movie. Would really love to see it on screen. But I need to get ur approval first. Nice one gal!

crislyn:

Wow I'd totally love that....I'm in my village right now, when I get back next week then. which part of Abuja are you?

Jikwoyi. Mail me. iyareserah@gmail.com

draybanks:
This is indeed one of the best stories I have seen in 2016. You know what I think? Let's make it a movie. Would really love to see it on screen. But I need to get ur approval first. Nice one gal!

Thanks. Am interested. Mail me iyareserah@gmail.com

SheWrites:

Jikwoyi. Mail me. iyareserah@gmail.com

Alrt ma.

SheWrites:


Amen thanks!

I wrote those stories three, four years ago.

While you're busy Changing into the Christmas gears, lemme tickle your attention.
Earlier I was brooding over this Broken Bottle's saga, and it dawned on me that the curtain didn't actually fall at the right moment. If it did fall at all.
Correct me if I'm wrong, Bina's problem wasn't lack of who loves her, who to love or who would propose (8 times you told us). It was her attitude, her unlady-like touch of her environment, from unkempt room to elsewhere and everything else. Not neccessary to end with her choosing to consciously be neat and tidy, but since you chose to end on a happy note, I think a couple of sentences would have fix her problem up.
"Are you serious...Would you marry me?"
"Yes." He hugged her the more. " Absolutely! Next week or even sooner." she blushed. "On a simple condition." she reluctantly pull out of his hug. Her pink cheek slowly lose its glow as a crease appeared on her forehead, and Tjay looked deep into her searching eyes, knowing the one nagging attitude she must change....
Bla Bla blah until the curtain fall.

But correct me if I got it wrong.


NB: just before someone thinks I'm hating on this amazing writer, try look up at my opening sentence. If I brood over a writeup, that shows I loved it. Even you.

*hugs*

While you're busy Changing into the Christmas gears, lemme tickle your attention.
Earlier I was brooding over this Broken Bottle's saga, and it dawned on me that the curtain didn't actually fall at the right moment. If it did fall at all.
Correct me if I'm wrong, Bina's problem wasn't lack of who loves her, who to love or who would propose (8 times you told us). It was her attitude, her unlady-like touch of her environment, from unkempt room to elsewhere and everything else. Not neccessary to end with her choosing to consciously be neat and tidy, but since you chose to end on a happy note, I think a couple of sentences would have fix her problem up.
"Are you serious...Would you marry me?"
"Yes." He hugged her the more. " Absolutely! Next week or even sooner." she blushed. "On a simple condition." she reluctantly pull out of his hug. Her pink cheek slowly lose its glow as a crease appeared on her forehead, and Tjay looked deep into her searching eyes, knowing the one

Keep the hugs first...just say something.

Elkay3:
Keep the hugs first...just say something.

Bina prayed and believed that God will deliver her from herself.

Change is a gradual process and Tjay knows exactly what he is getting into.

SheWrites:


Bina prayed and believed that God will deliver her from herself.

Change is a gradual process and Tjay knows exactly what he is getting into.

You're right.

Its a pity we can't catch up with the story after the first post,page 1-3 is inaccessible.Just completing the story in my imaginations.It really pained me

radiance26:
Its a pity we can't catch up with the story after the first post,page 1-3 is inaccessible.Just completing the story in my imaginations.It really pained me

Aww... It's the network. Try again or read the story on www.facebook.com/serahiyare.stories.

You can also buy it at just N250 on www.okadabooks.com/store

You're DOPE!!! Shewrites; ur stories are Amazing. Keep 'em coming ma'am. Waiting for a new story.... Dnt 4get to mention me... I love you!

Megilicious:
lovely lovey writeup, i love it, i had to come online n comment. pls will b xpecting more stories frm u, av read torn also, reading hrtstrngs now. kip up d good wrk. more ink to ur pen.

Thank. Yooouuu

MhizDherbee:
You're DOPE!!! Shewrites; ur stories are Amazing.
Keep 'em coming ma'am.
Waiting for a new story....
Dnt 4get to mention me...
I love you!

Awww darling ...love. yah too

Sincerely This Is Lovely.

chiomajoshua:
Sincerely This Is Lovely.

thanks

nice story I doff my hat 4 u

Interesting story. More inspiration OP

Short and straight to the point. I love ds piece.. Dope. Weldone

Thanks everyone *hugs*

Morning everyone.

I know you enjoyed this story.

Get your own copy at okadabooks.com/search?term=BROKEN+BOTTLE

Or mail me at iyareserah@gmail.com and I will mail you the PDF format after payment.