supernet4:
hmmmm, that was a beautiful piece may u continue to grow in knowledge, tanx for d entertainment. mention me in ur next story I really wanna follow it. Tanx again and good nite

Fembleez1:


Amen.

Wow!!! , I've never caught you viewing this piece and I'm so surprised. Thanks for following all through silently



I surely will mention you on my next story.


Good night and sleep well.

supernet4:
. u can't see me am really d ghost here. morning and av a beautiful and eventful wkend

Fembleez1:
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS



It is with joy I want to express my profound gratitude to the Almighty God for his knowledge, direction, guidance and blessings towards the completion of this story.

It wasn't easy to start and I've seen many writers with unfinished stories here, so am proud of what I have done even with little comments I got.

I want to thank my most honourable readers, you all stood by me till the end.

Kingphilip(m), thanks for gracing my first story, I'm so humble boss and ready to learn from you.

Dopeyomi and Shoyemiayodeji(m) for being my driving force. I know if it weren't for school hook-ups, you would have been here frequently with your comments and supports.


Supernet4(f) for following silently without a comment until you saw THE END. I'm grateful dearest.


Mistytohcute(f), the very first female to comment, thank you for your persistent yawning for updates and the words to drive me on, to work hard and I think it really has paid off.


Calmdove(f), I had planned cutting some part of this story and end it on page 5 or so when you invited people. I just had to continue so as not to disappoint you. I am so grateful dear.



Prettydiva89(f). The moment you were invited, you never seized to support and lift my spirit, brain and my pen. I don't know how to thank you enough dear. God bless you.


Missmossy(f) just came, read and fell in love with the story, you couldn't stop yawning for more. 'Ghen-ghen' she would say , LWKMD, thanks much dear.


Kingzpen(m) I'm so happy to have you with me on this one, I know when you've gone through the story at your leisure, you'll definitely point out my shortcomings and where I can improve, which I would be so humble to learn. Thanks boss.

MachineX(m) when you came and your first comment was 'Believe me when I say you are good'. I knew you were deceiving me and had wanted to pm you may be you were mocking my errors, but I sincerely wanna know may be the comment was 'indirect'. Lol . Thanks so much bro.



Tobilastik(m) I haven't forgotten what I promised you bro. You were first to comment. Thanks for the time you spent till the very end of this piece. I'm grateful boss.


ODUMAIYE(f) came and started 'hmmmm-hmmm-ing' lol. Thanks for enduring the suspense. I appreciate.


Oyinprince(m) baba. You are such a nice person. You never failed to drop a comment when required and it really edged me on to this very end. Thank you so much bro.

Usmanspihn(m). You were regular but If I had noticed you more than I did, I would have had more words to express my gratitude to you. I'm humble.


Seunviju(f) words can't express my gratitude for gracing my first story. Thanks much!.


Supsybaby(f) thanks for following this piece. I'm without pride saying a big thank you for taking your time to read from the first page to the recent. I appreciate your time dear.


Special mentions:- Kemtol, Kinwayne(m), segunflames(m), flakkydagirl, candy(f), zyzxx(m), tiffanyJ(f), teewais(m), Divepen(m), and toykathy

My Ghost /guest(s) readers, I say thanks for your anonymity(ies).


I'm grateful for your moral support, comments, likes and shares, and by other means you've all stood by me towards the successful completion of this story.


You guyz are simply the Best!!!.


May the Almighty God/Allah bless you all and grant you all your heart desires. Amen.



Thank you.

Tobilastik:


so the story don finish? ve been out of NL for days!!! I ll ve ti continue from where I stopped...hope u re not angry I did not follow ur story....school wahala

congrats...more power to ur elbow IJN

Fembleez1:
Have I really done that bad?. Not even a single comment after the story ended
Na wa o, may be I should give up writing

Fembleez1:
ACKNOWLEDGMENTS



It is with joy I want to express my profound gratitude to the Almighty God for his knowledge, direction, guidance and blessings towards the completion of this story.

It wasn't easy to start and I've seen many writers with unfinished stories here, so am proud of what I have done even with little comments I got.

I want to thank my most honourable readers, you all stood by me till the end.

Kingphilip(m), thanks for gracing my first story, I'm so humble boss and ready to learn from you.

Dopeyomi and Shoyemiayodeji(m) for being my driving force. I know if it weren't for school hook-ups, you would have been here frequently with your comments and supports.


Supernet4(f) for following silently without a comment until you saw THE END. I'm grateful dearest.


Mistytohcute(f), the very first female to comment, thank you for your persistent yawning for updates and the words to drive me on, to work hard and I think it really has paid off.


Calmdove(f), I had planned cutting some part of this story and end it on page 5 or so when you invited people. I just had to continue so as not to disappoint you. I am so grateful dear.



Prettydiva89(f). The moment you were invited, you never seized to support and lift my spirit, brain and my pen. I don't know how to thank you enough dear. God bless you.


Missmossy(f) just came, read and fell in love with the story, you couldn't stop yawning for more. 'Ghen-ghen' she would say , LWKMD, thanks much dear.


Kingzpen(m) I'm so happy to have you with me on this one, I know when you've gone through the story at your leisure, you'll definitely point out my shortcomings and where I can improve, which I would be so humble to learn. Thanks boss.

MachineX(m) when you came and your first comment was 'Believe me when I say you are good'. I knew you were deceiving me and had wanted to pm you may be you were mocking my errors, but I sincerely wanna know may be the comment was 'indirect'. Lol . Thanks so much bro.



Tobilastik(m) I haven't forgotten what I promised you bro. You were first to comment. Thanks for the time you spent till the very end of this piece. I'm grateful boss.


ODUMAIYE(f) came and started 'hmmmm-hmmm-ing' lol. Thanks for enduring the suspense. I appreciate.


Oyinprince(m) baba. You are such a nice person. You never failed to drop a comment when required and it really edged me on to this very end. Thank you so much bro.

Usmanspihn(m). You were regular but If I had noticed you more than I did, I would have had more words to express my gratitude to you. I'm humble.


Seunviju(f) words can't express my gratitude for gracing my first story. Thanks much!.


Supsybaby(f) thanks for following this piece. I'm without pride saying a big thank you for taking your time to read from the first page to the recent. I appreciate your time dear.


Special mentions:- Kemtol, Kinwayne(m), segunflames(m), flakkydagirl, candy(f), zyzxx(m), tiffanyJ(f), teewais(m), Divepen(m), and toykathy

My Ghost /guest(s) readers, I say thanks for your anonymity(ies).


I'm grateful for your moral support, comments, likes and shares, and by other means you've all stood by me towards the successful completion of this story.


You guyz are simply the Best!!!.


May the Almighty God/Allah bless you all and grant you all your heart desires. Amen.



Thank you.

mistytohcute:

i'm sorry i wasn't able to comment towards the end of the story, i was having some problems with my phone
thumbs up
more girlz to ur collection

Calmdove:
No oo u avn't done anytin bad... So happy dat the family where later united and general was also able 2 unite is family * i pray dat God will give u more knowledge to write more and more storys that will take u to great level

prettydiva89:
what a twist,its a great job.Thanks bro

Missmossy:
Such an enthralling conclusion, welldone Fembleez1. I enjoyed this story to the very end.

SegunFlames:
Congrats on the completion of your story Lord finnian!

supsybaby:
@op, thank u I really appreciate it. My phone has been bad for sometime nw and I use other people phone most of d time to read ur story cos I love it. U r good at wat u do dear, keep it up and don't forget to mention in ur next novel.

shoyemiayodeji:
i wan finish the story first before i begin to dey hype you.

Tobilastik:
just finished the story... I must commend u bro, u re good!
keep the ball rolling

Fembleez1:
How I wish I started this story the way I ended it. Been a lot of improvement and learning process for me.

Oyinprince:
Awesome story bro, just reading the completion now.

More ink to your pen

stuff46:
Ermh...

Were would i even start self? ( after spending a whooping 12hours to read this work, with work stress and other things ).

It's been a lovely ride here. I was pausing and suspending the day i would read this story but God made it for me to do it today, i think i would Thank Him for giving me the motivation to do that today.

Special thanks to my ba3 for not failing and also to etisalate for an error free time.

My observation
1. Some events look un-real and un-fictious. Ranging from the fiqht, (the torn clothes and the unclothedness. It would be a siqht to behold but haba; the unclothedness spoil show). Just check that part and see how you work on it.

2. The way the Rev. Sisters exposed the whole activity in church. Sounds unreal tho, i never fathom to behold such scene niether do i want any one to experience it. Na obodo naija , sum1 to clown another person in a short period of time was ridiculous.

3. Punctuation and sentence construction. I came across some point were you failed to utilize "a" and "an" well. And also wrong use of words and punctuation changed the meaning of some words.

My praises
1. I love the way the character are, they expose the realness of life. Many families experience them, (me not being an exception esp. that josephine, i pray make God expose 1woman like that )

2. Your time and megabyte wasted in updating even when the comments were not coming.

Nb: My views oh, nobody should counter me. Just read and talk about it on another day, as every body is entiled to his opinions.
Once again than you Fambeze