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gottoboy:
I like it. Straight and precise, d o p e upon sey stress no much. Am encouraged now to shake off my dustiness too.

was in church last Sunday, assessing all the babes/ expecting fat ass sistas, my pen jetting up with rage/ Hope and Faith are too dry. . . I guess it’s all the same/ but I smiled as we were getting up to pray/ coz the pastor announced there’s “a huge Blessing on the way!”

richommie:
abeq..change ur signature


#YOLO

ELYMAXiimus:
the number of people participating is much. Hence 10 bars will be too much.
8bars should be enough!

GIYAZZ:
Ayt. . . Check this freestyle. Something like this:



Emancipate your mind, and witness this olympian rise/ The embodiment of physical valor, ultimate destruction defined/ Breathing violence, cruelty and propagating death/ I am Ares the only Olympian that's relevant/


Something like that.

GIYAZZ:
Impersonate them! Make it look like you're that god. Use your lines to fix in hyperboles, metaphors, puns, poetry related-schemes et al.

It's all about "bragging"

Those who got Hades, Zeus and Ares could kill this easily. Enough bragging right already.

danbrowndmf:
oga howfa?

dj5naira:
Yesterday.

You claim to be a musical genius but you gonna die young like Melchior Hoffman/
.....I will kill the Music in you after I'm done with your cells, tissues and eventually your 'Organ'/

you're a broke asss
bytch, my diabolical writtens are designed for pauper/




we're not equal, I'm a god on this ground,
you can call me a Landlord/

My skills like hammer landin', GBOON!/ I learnt from
harder goons/
I'm used to fightin' bare-chested, Ogun state governor
'll be providin' my armour soon

kr0ne:
Geoxpress, compare what you just posted with mine in terms of rhymes.

liricyst:
The act of rhyming shouldn't be judged on longer strings but rather on accuracy. If both parties being compared have a high degree of accurate rhyming, then you can use strings to separate them.

Geoxpress:
Elymax, nice verse.

Err, cautious and water do rhyme actually bt... Barely. Shoe stock and gudluck rhyme, but not perfectly. Then again, perfect rhyming sucks for me.


Read : "I'm cautious of this, so I put some water on it'

ELYMAXiimus:
cool.....
Then "jesus" also goes with;
freezes, eases, pizzas. Etc. Right?
so why did shady rhyme jesus with cleaver?

kr0ne:
Multi-syllabic? Em is good but not as perfect and as careful as Rakim in rhyming.

kr0ne:
Multi-syllabic? Em is good but not as perfect and as careful as Rakim in rhyming.

ELYMAXiimus:
hahaha. because i siad shady did it u're quick to say it's correct. If i said it was me who did it, i'm sure you would rebuke me.

He rhymed "cleaver" with "jesus"

isn't it d same as me rhyming "water" with "cautious"?
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@ jreyez.... Eminem is the king of sick multisyllabic rhyming. He can't be wrong. English is his native language.

ELYMAXiimus:
that's english, bro. I have repeatedly pronounced them out loud to myself, nd they sound alike in terms of vowels.


In "rap terms"? Go listen to shady.

He rhymed this in evil twin.


mess with a cleaver ... Register jesus....

GIYAZZ:
Is he?