labaski: nice one,waiting for more

hmmm, wonderful fast reader..

chai.. Pls make i go drink +CuNU+

aytuns: Mr prince honestly your story is good but you are killing it with grammatical blunders. Atimes i just skip lines cos trying to understand what you've written makes my head hurt. At page 61, u've come a long way already and they say "practice makes perfection", by now you shouldnt be making mistakes that you have corrected of. And the mistakes plenty o, so dont even ask me to write them, cos we no go comot here today !

thanks man i appreciate your kind comments.
Errors are due to occure in the story but i promise to modify them soon.

Good editor, right?

360prince: amen!!
I de throwey saluts to you for everything o00o.

E no de easy to used walking stick, while tying

Hmmm u try no b smal. Prince na peck ebi lyk say dat peck don dey sweet u :p

Fire on Prince d boi

PrincessB1: Hmmm u try no b smal. Prince na peck ebi lyk say dat peck don dey sweet u :p

e dey really sweet me for body 00oo

very soon i go end this story

Prince prince prince, good work my baby.

Guys, if u c any mistake jus correct it in ur mind nd read on. D last tym i checked, prince is not a machine.

Beauty Jacobs: Guys, if u c any mistake jus correct it in ur mind nd read on. D last tym i checked, prince is not a machine.

thanks dear. Am really appreciating all your good works

My pals update comes up later.

Mak i try weda i go fit transfer money from pops fone

360prince:
Mak i try weda i go fit transfer money from pops fone

if he catch you

This is my first comment. My Guy Please just believe in yourself, if you dont believe in yourself no one will believe in you. I love your mysterious piece of work and i love the vibrant spirit you have. Keep it up. Continue rollin am following. I love ya Bro

Enoh o enoh

Jumizie13:
if he catch you

he don catch me sef and the money i no transfer

matson247: This is my first comment. My Guy Please just believe in yourself, if you dont believe in yourself no one will believe in you. I love your mysterious piece of work and i love the vibrant spirit you have. Keep it up. Continue rollin am following. I love ya Bro

thanks man, and thanks for your encouragement.

Beauty Jacobs: Enoh o enoh

not like dat baby....

I de wait for you to send me card

man prince,duo u dey try but abeg increase d number of ur upload(stories).na beg i d beg

giles14: man prince,duo u dey try but abeg increase d number of ur upload(stories).na beg i d beg

. Ok sir.
Am gonna give many updates, thanks for reading this story

Now i knw ur a big enoh

Beauty Jacobs: Now i knw ur a big enoh

am doing it for you

360prince: My pals update comes up later.

Mak i try weda i go fit transfer money from pops fone

hmmm,thief

360prince: e dey really sweet me for body 00oo

very soon i go end this story

Woooow kip it burning dearie

since have started this story have nt comment Anytin, nw is time for me to comment on it, bt u have to wait for my comment.

Omo i go confess oooooooooo, dis story reminds me of my own self aw i take bleep my landlord's daughter 4 skul............

Prince if wetin happen to my padi for this nairaland happen to this thread I will personally find you and break your leg. And hunt beauty

Òmò oba( PRINCE)....hope no quams....boiz dey wait patiently oh

Wats all this that am hearing abt some1 crying for updates. Nna na wa o! Omo prince biko update sometin make ppl read. This boys r crying here o!

finally i don meet una......Hope I didn't come late.??......oga Prince if you don't come n update I will send 1 black puppy (dog) and one big Python to wake u up.......*run comot and enters back sharply with one crate of kunu*

Omo. Boys de wait o! Do sometin

Prince u dey view and u no gree comment abi

Good evening pals...
Chai... I never knew ppl luv prince 00oo
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+ LABASKI: dear am not a thief oh. I just wanna mak you guys update now..
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+PRINCESS.B: wow! Abeg mak i carry matchet enter bush cut firewood to keep the fire burning
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+SANNI BOI: good evening sir. Thanks for commenting on my story and thanks for reading too. Since you intend commenting, i give you space
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+AJAXTEA: hmmmm, you are really confessing here and you are now exposed. Chai... You get mind o by fvckin your landlord's daughter.
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+USMANSPHIN: abeg anythin were happened to anybody here no be my fault.
if you break my legs, your head go surely de my hand
chai... You see that babe?. If you, i say if you dear touch her, hmmmm we go creat room for fighting
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+YBARHRZs: my main guy pls wait no more because update is coming..
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+PHILTRUM: lwkmd menn you get luck say you run hid for back sharperly with crat of kunu...
Thanks sir
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+NORKSES: menn let them cry for more and more as if na vampire them be " more blood, more blood"
and thanks for your pix. The toy the guard my story
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guy na now i just de think of eating since morning, but i go update first before eatin the food i kept since morning

LoaDING typiNg...

I am going to be honest with you..
The reason i havent being responding is because ive been offline...

Unto the main the topic, you dey disappoint me.. No be small.. Your last 5 updates are nothing to write home about, full of grammatical blunders, I actually skipped some parts because i was getting headache.. (I promised to be honest, sorry if its harsh)... Tot you would have changed, but it was really at an alarming rate.. (I felt like crying)...
Your story is good and interesting, the only problem is the errors.. I know nobody is perfect, but we should try to be...
Proof read your works before you release them...
Check for errors..
Make the dico a friend...

PRINCE, U just 4get me 4 back, it is unfair oooo anyway nice update but u should try 2 be updatin quickly... 1 luv